3.75 ★— Can you be more in love with the idea of a book than its actual execution? Because I fear that’s how Fallen City landed for me.
As someone who actually learned Latin and has an obsession with anything related to Greco-Roman mythology, this book hit the bullseye for my interests. For the first quarter of the story, I was waiting for it to truly grip me, to see what led to the fall of Isara, the fallen city that gives the book its name, and how Luca Matius and Maris Casperia, heirs of rival political families, came to love each other.
The book is told in dual POVs and across dual timelines, slowly unraveling the stories of Maris and Luca as they each prepare to take over their parents’ seats as magistrates. The setup for both the romance and the political drama is so strong(!), which is why I was surprised that the plot itself never hooked me.
Isara as a city, and its history, are fascinating. It’s clearly inspired by Ancient Rome and Greece, both in mythology and politics, but with an egalitarian twist. Women here can engage in the political process, become philosophers, and wield significant power. The many side characters are also interesting and layered, each with their own motivations and self-interests. This is why it’s such a shame that the two main characters, who start out so promising, end up feeling flat, and their romance even more so.
I think a lot of that comes down to the dual timelines. They make it hard to truly connect with or feel the progression of Luca and Maris’ relationship. I never really understood why they fell in love or how that depth of feeling developed. For a book set around a rebellion where romance plays a key role in the political turmoil, the emotional weight of a forbidden romance should hit. I should understand why these two are willing to risk everything for each other, especially when they start on opposing sides and are practically raised to see each other as enemies, but it never fully comes through. We get a meeting scene, a few brief conversations, and then suddenly we’re told they’re in love, without ever feeling that gradual progression into real romantic love. I kept waiting for those scenes in the flashback but never got them, and I think that ultimately the dual timeline structure limits their relationship and keeps it from reaching its potential.
The overall plot and setting, though, I really enjoyed. The magistrates, the political maneuvering, the philosophical debates, the rebellious female thinker who defies expectations... I loved all of that. The war scenes were intriguing as well and fun to read, even if the eventual reveal of the cause of the war felt a bit anticlimactic.
So, Fallen City definitely has its merits. Readers with a passion for the classical ancient world will probably get a kick out of it. If it’s grand, amazingly complex, and gut-wrenching romance you want, that might be a bit lacking here.
🎧 Audiobook Note
🎙️ Narration Style: Dual
This was a dual POV story, as I mentioned in my review, with a female and male narrator for Luca’s and Maris’ perspectives. I enjoyed the male narrator a lot more than the female narrator. Her tone didn’t quite match what I pictured for Maris, sounding a little immature for my taste, but she was otherwise solid. The dual narration style added to the immersion of the story and really increased my enjoyment!
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Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the ARC and to Macmillan Audio for the ALC.