dnf @ 60%
Why are all the new romance releases such flops? 😭
First off, I should have known better from the moment I read the premise, because that alone should have been my giant warning sign to run in the opposite direction. A singer-songwriter who can't write good lyrics decides the brilliant solution to her creative drought is to ask her ex-boyfriend to break her heart again so she can finally feel something deep enough to write about. Like, already, wtf is this supposed to be??? I should have just not opened the book after reading that blurb and moved on with my life, but unfortunately, I never listen to my gut instincts, and I really need to stop being so willing to give books a chance just because I see my mutuals loving it.
This author's books have been sitting on my tbr for ages because so many people have hyped up her writing style that I genuinely figured I was in for something great. Instead, I could not get into this writing style for the life of me, no matter how hard I tried or how many pages I forced myself through. I dnfed at around the 60% mark because continuing any further felt like pure self-inflicted TORTURE.
The dual timelines were an absolute disaster. I understand that second-chance romance is a difficult trope to execute well because you need to make readers care about both the past relationship and the present one, but these timelines were so poorly executed and so messily woven together that I wasn't invested in either of them. Even worse, we don't even know why there's this massive gap between the timelines or what actually caused the initial breakup in the first place, which seems like pretty crucial information for a second chance romance. I assume I would have found out eventually if I'd pushed through to the end, but what's the point of continuing when the characters are so deeply uninteresting that I can't bring myself to care? Their story was flat-out boring, and I genuinely did not care why or how they broke up or whether they'd get back together, and that's essentially a death sentence for a second-chance romance.
The fmc Paige's opening line tells us that the two things people know her for are her sisters and her best friend, so already right off the bat, we're not exactly getting a compelling introduction to our main character. And throughout the entire story, Paige never develops into anything more than a character who's completely defined by everyone around her.
We're told she's a songwriter and that her lyrics are aggressively terrible, which I understand is supposed to be the whole point—because if that didn't happen, then what would even be the point of the book? The author clearly wants us to see Paige as someone who's lacking depth and emotional experience, someone who desperately needs to grow and learn what real heartbreak feels like. But there's a massive difference between writing a genuinely flawed character who feels real and writing a character who's so insufferably ridiculous that you start questioning your own sanity for continuing to read about her.
I also have absolutely no words to describe the mmc because he was just so bland and forgettable. I don't even understand why these two supposedly deserve each other or why we're meant to root for them, because they're both incredibly boring with no discernible personality traits or chemistry whatsoever.
Don't let my thoughts stop you from reading this if you think you can look past a ridiculous plot, but for me, this entire experience gave me nothing but a massive headache.