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Road Rage Daddy
After nearly causing multiple car accidents when my power steering goes out, a driver with serious road rage chases me off the interstate. The towering cowboy looks ready to murder me with his bare hands until he realizes who I am.
It’s been seven years since I’ve seen my older brother’s ex-best friend—the only one who was ever nice to me growing up. It soon becomes clear, however, that his looks aren’t the only thing that’s changed when he tells me I need a Daddy’s firm hand after being so irresponsible with my safety.
Unfortunately for me, he doesn’t stop with just his hand…
Road Rage Daddy is a dark, spicy 17k-word romance novelette. All characters are 18+. Please read the Author’s Note at the beginning of the book.
It’s been seven years since I’ve seen my older brother’s ex-best friend—the only one who was ever nice to me growing up. It soon becomes clear, however, that his looks aren’t the only thing that’s changed when he tells me I need a Daddy’s firm hand after being so irresponsible with my safety.
Unfortunately for me, he doesn’t stop with just his hand…
Road Rage Daddy is a dark, spicy 17k-word romance novelette. All characters are 18+. Please read the Author’s Note at the beginning of the book.
61 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 7, 2024
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May Alder
33 books636 followersMay Alder would like to thank her life-long maladaptive daydreaming disorder and rampant #daddyissues for the storylines that have been brewing in her mind for years. Her need to turn them into something productive, a positive instead of a negative, has spurred her to write her stories and release them into the world.
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December 10, 2024
If trad wife fantasy & non con had a demented baby! Pure SMUT don’t even look for a plot! ⚠️
“I don’t want you to hurt yourself when Daddy’s trying to make you feel good.”
Absolutely ridiculous premise with mmc going full delusional immediately claiming fmc as his wife. Short novella honed in on Daddy kink & the elusive gentle non con fantasy AND DID IT WELL!! Bonkers but….pretty good 🤭
Also when that little girl chocked out her mom I legit started dying of laughter. Like….you go girl…I guess!
age gap 20f/30m
deranged mmc
brother’s (ex) best friend
virgin fmc
daddy kink realness
breeding kink
illegal strip search
kidnapping
non/dub con
found family
HEA
“I don’t want you to hurt yourself when Daddy’s trying to make you feel good.”
Absolutely ridiculous premise with mmc going full delusional immediately claiming fmc as his wife. Short novella honed in on Daddy kink & the elusive gentle non con fantasy AND DID IT WELL!! Bonkers but….pretty good 🤭
Also when that little girl chocked out her mom I legit started dying of laughter. Like….you go girl…I guess!
age gap 20f/30m
deranged mmc
brother’s (ex) best friend
virgin fmc
daddy kink realness
breeding kink
illegal strip search
kidnapping
non/dub con
found family
HEA
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December 9, 2024I...this was a ride. I chose not to give this one a rating.
Harley is heading back home to see if her lazy brother would help her, and she almost gets in a car accident because of her car and runs into her brothers ex best friend. Who is angry that she put herself in danger.
Now that all sounds wonderful 😊 but the way Emit Handled stuff was insane. He's a former cop so he pats her down and fingers her to see if she has a cell in her vagina which he knows she doesn't. He took her virginity with his fingers. He didn't know she didn't tell him. Lots of push away and name calling.
It was also a daddy kink book. Just by name. And drama with the brother and his wife.
Also, the author tossed in a secret child. The MMC didn't even know until the end. That the oldest child of his ex was his kid. There is no real plot for that.
No cheating, drama, sexy times, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-no
Cover-⭐️
Heat level- 🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Age gap (30 MMC / 20 FMC)
Daddy / baby (no age play)
Deranged MMC Kidnapping
N & D con
Parental domestic violence & negligence (no CSA)
No condom
Praise kink
Tiny Humiliation
Violence
Hea
Epilogue
Harley is heading back home to see if her lazy brother would help her, and she almost gets in a car accident because of her car and runs into her brothers ex best friend. Who is angry that she put herself in danger.
Now that all sounds wonderful 😊 but the way Emit Handled stuff was insane. He's a former cop so he pats her down and fingers her to see if she has a cell in her vagina which he knows she doesn't. He took her virginity with his fingers. He didn't know she didn't tell him. Lots of push away and name calling.
It was also a daddy kink book. Just by name. And drama with the brother and his wife.
Also, the author tossed in a secret child. The MMC didn't even know until the end. That the oldest child of his ex was his kid. There is no real plot for that.
No cheating, drama, sexy times, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-no
Cover-⭐️
Heat level- 🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Age gap (30 MMC / 20 FMC)
Daddy / baby (no age play)
Deranged MMC Kidnapping
N & D con
Parental domestic violence & negligence (no CSA)
No condom
Praise kink
Tiny Humiliation
Violence
Hea
Epilogue
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 13, 2024
4 stars
This is one of the funniest, unhinged cliterature offerings I’ve read in forever. 🤣
The title (Road Rage Daddy: A Dark Cheeky Novelette) is incredibly accurate, btw.
TW for dubcon, child neglect, and a whole bunch of other serious themes handled in an unhinged, unserious way.
This is one of the funniest, unhinged cliterature offerings I’ve read in forever. 🤣
The title (Road Rage Daddy: A Dark Cheeky Novelette) is incredibly accurate, btw.
TW for dubcon, child neglect, and a whole bunch of other serious themes handled in an unhinged, unserious way.
December 11, 2024
Was May Alder body snatched by BJ Alpha in the middle of writing this, only to be turned back to herself at the last minute?
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December 29, 2024
This was phucking insane. I lost count of how many times I kept saying “what the phuck” — yep that’s how insane this story was 😱🤣
January 14, 2025
Hello police? I need someone to be arrested ASAP.
Because what the fuck is he smoking? Who the fuck woo a girl like that?
Because what the fuck is he smoking? Who the fuck woo a girl like that?
May 14, 2025
wow cannot look away insane smut, bubba red neck violent love? story for Emit and Harley. Okay I get the river of dysfunction that runs deep but the cussing non consent and violence tarnished sensitive characters. beer bellies and w trash caricatures distract from true motives and human fragility. +++ but it was still compelling , sometimes funny and super smutty🥹🙂↔️😳
March 19, 2025
Dnfed at 36%. I didn’t even finished this because it was so bad 💀…I mean idk to me this whole thing felt like rape and nothing else, maybe I see things wrongness this wasn’t it.
December 13, 2024
The drama 😭.
April 1, 2026
“Road Rage Daddy” is the story of Harley and Emit.
Started as a smutty, dubcon brothers best friend romance but it took such a dark and violent turn, it was disconcerting.
Unsafe
1.5/5
Started as a smutty, dubcon brothers best friend romance but it took such a dark and violent turn, it was disconcerting.
Unsafe
1.5/5
July 30, 2026
Oohh check the CWs and TWs on this one, the MMC needs locking up 😬🤨. This is 61 pages of absolute carnage. Bloody hell. WTF 🫣😯. Onto the final one I go. This series is an experience for definite 😄😂
September 23, 2026
terrible
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December 15, 2024I give it a zero star… that’s all
March 18, 2025
Emit and Harley
August 6, 2025
Med burn
January 2, 2026
As the author notes - this is a dark hero and there is some dubcon/noncon. It’s a bit much in the plot convenience, not nearly as good as Back Seat Baby.
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December 9, 2024
This book was just a freaking roller coaster of emotions.
As always, it was very well written, and there was so much humor in it the first 20% have me laughing so hard.
But then there were also some difficult parts, and then at the end there was very loving and sweet tearjerker moments. It was just a chaotic circus of all kinds of different emotions, and I feel a bit dizzy from it.
As always, it was very well written, and there was so much humor in it the first 20% have me laughing so hard.
But then there were also some difficult parts, and then at the end there was very loving and sweet tearjerker moments. It was just a chaotic circus of all kinds of different emotions, and I feel a bit dizzy from it.
February 4, 2025
3.5 ⭐️ maybe … just for vibes idk 🤷♀️
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May 17, 2025Warning: Major Spoilers Ahead!! Proceed only if you wish to have this spoiled for you.
Road Rage Daddy was about 30-year-old Emit, a former cop who started his own security company, and 20-year-old Harley, a college student who had fallen on hard times.
This book contains sensitive content, including but not limited to the following tropes and themes, and is intended for an 18+ audience: Daddy/baby (no age play), Brother’s ex-best friend, Virgin FMC/Deranged MMC, Kidnapping /Non & Dubious con, No cheating between main characters, Parental domestic violence & negligence (no CSA).
I'm not going to review this like I have other books in the past. There's nothing good I can say about this...written piece of tripe. It started off with Harley's power steering going out on her car and nearly causing a multiple-vehicle crash, but she somehow managed to avoid it and get off the road. However, her troubles didn't end there because the next thing to happen was for a huge man to get in her face, screaming at her...until he recognized her. What happened then? He proceeded to tie her up with his belt and r*ped her until she passed out...and she was a virgin. She begged him to stop the entire time, but he refused, saying he was going to marry her and become her Daddy. This was from the guy who used to be the only one in her life who showed her any form of kindness. He abused her, then he kidnapped her by taking her to his home, where he proceeded to r*pe her again.
Harley eventually injured him, took his vehicle, and went to her brother's home. However, he soon followed, only for a plot twist to take place that ended up with him taking her back to his home where, you guessed it...he started to r*pe her again. No matter how many times she begged him to stop, he didn't. He even went so far as to try convincing her that she WANTED him to be rough, to hurt her, to force her, and to take her hard. Once he said all that, he forced her once again until she passed out a third time.
I refused to give this book any stars. It doesn't deserve them, nor does it deserve the title of "a book". I'm just sorry I read it.
Road Rage Daddy was about 30-year-old Emit, a former cop who started his own security company, and 20-year-old Harley, a college student who had fallen on hard times.
This book contains sensitive content, including but not limited to the following tropes and themes, and is intended for an 18+ audience: Daddy/baby (no age play), Brother’s ex-best friend, Virgin FMC/Deranged MMC, Kidnapping /Non & Dubious con, No cheating between main characters, Parental domestic violence & negligence (no CSA).
I'm not going to review this like I have other books in the past. There's nothing good I can say about this...written piece of tripe. It started off with Harley's power steering going out on her car and nearly causing a multiple-vehicle crash, but she somehow managed to avoid it and get off the road. However, her troubles didn't end there because the next thing to happen was for a huge man to get in her face, screaming at her...until he recognized her. What happened then? He proceeded to tie her up with his belt and r*ped her until she passed out...and she was a virgin. She begged him to stop the entire time, but he refused, saying he was going to marry her and become her Daddy. This was from the guy who used to be the only one in her life who showed her any form of kindness. He abused her, then he kidnapped her by taking her to his home, where he proceeded to r*pe her again.
Harley eventually injured him, took his vehicle, and went to her brother's home. However, he soon followed, only for a plot twist to take place that ended up with him taking her back to his home where, you guessed it...he started to r*pe her again. No matter how many times she begged him to stop, he didn't. He even went so far as to try convincing her that she WANTED him to be rough, to hurt her, to force her, and to take her hard. Once he said all that, he forced her once again until she passed out a third time.
I refused to give this book any stars. It doesn't deserve them, nor does it deserve the title of "a book". I'm just sorry I read it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 27, 2025
Only picked this up for a quick read . Cus I was in the mood to read alot of novellas - what I don’t like is rape ! This book is filled with it - dub con is fine sometimes. But this book was full on rape . Literally the fmc deserved better - mmc was fmcs brothers ex best friend . And his gf left mmc for her brother because he spent too much time with fmc ( when he was an adult ) and she was a teen) overall he’s 10 years older than her and known her since she’s a kid and somehow wants her .
What’s worse emit the mmc is an ex police officer - I already hate police romances . But omg the fact that this has a ex police office mmc that rapes the fmc adds more to why I hate police romances - can we stop
Having police romances + Books with Ex police men in - especially those where the mmc rapes the fmc ( it reinforces how I feel about police ) they terrify me and honestly I don’t like them:
The words young pussy 🤮🤮🤮 ( were said in this book )
This book is crazy honestly wdym the fmcs brother ends up having too many kids and then they abuse them . Like bro idek !!!! And then somehow emit and the fmc take them
Also for some reason she calls him daddy and not in a hot way - cus this book isn’t hot
I was warned he’d be a worse than Blake in the roommate book but honestly Blake was actually likable . Even if he was cumming in her panties without her knowing and doing so when She was asleep too . But emit is worse !! Blake was likable because tbh all I wanted was a horny book and it did the job even if Blake in that book would not be one of the good men ( he’s a bad one) the book itself was hot and enjoyable
What’s worse emit the mmc is an ex police officer - I already hate police romances . But omg the fact that this has a ex police office mmc that rapes the fmc adds more to why I hate police romances - can we stop
Having police romances + Books with Ex police men in - especially those where the mmc rapes the fmc ( it reinforces how I feel about police ) they terrify me and honestly I don’t like them:
The words young pussy 🤮🤮🤮 ( were said in this book )
This book is crazy honestly wdym the fmcs brother ends up having too many kids and then they abuse them . Like bro idek !!!! And then somehow emit and the fmc take them
Also for some reason she calls him daddy and not in a hot way - cus this book isn’t hot
I was warned he’d be a worse than Blake in the roommate book but honestly Blake was actually likable . Even if he was cumming in her panties without her knowing and doing so when She was asleep too . But emit is worse !! Blake was likable because tbh all I wanted was a horny book and it did the job even if Blake in that book would not be one of the good men ( he’s a bad one) the book itself was hot and enjoyable
August 8, 2026
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I wish I could give this a zero, but at the end of the day I wanted to pick up a short novella to read within the hour to keep me entertained... I can only truly blame myself. I don't even know where to go with this beyond the fact that there was no plot, the intimacy was horrible, and these people are all truly insane and each and every character of this short story needs to seek help immediately. I wouldn't recommend this to anyone and I say that as someone who is considerably open-minded when it comes to the books I read... I'm honestly glad I picked this up because it ensured that this author is most likely not for me while I was previously thinking of picking up Short on Rent after seeing it on social media, but not being able to find it anywhere to read it and I'm honestly going to take that all as a sign to steer clear. I hope this matched better for others!
I wish I could give this a zero, but at the end of the day I wanted to pick up a short novella to read within the hour to keep me entertained... I can only truly blame myself. I don't even know where to go with this beyond the fact that there was no plot, the intimacy was horrible, and these people are all truly insane and each and every character of this short story needs to seek help immediately. I wouldn't recommend this to anyone and I say that as someone who is considerably open-minded when it comes to the books I read... I'm honestly glad I picked this up because it ensured that this author is most likely not for me while I was previously thinking of picking up Short on Rent after seeing it on social media, but not being able to find it anywhere to read it and I'm honestly going to take that all as a sign to steer clear. I hope this matched better for others!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 11, 2026
2.5/5 ⭐ & 🌶️🌶️🌶️
I have thoughts on Road Rage Daddy- title alone lol.
This one was a wild ride, but it wasn't it❌
2.5⭐ for the drama was top-tier I fear- We have a deranged road rage cowboy who turns out to be the FMC’s brother’s ex-best friend. His ex-girlfriend dumped him for the FMC’s brother. The messiness? 10/10. This book was messy😭
Felt bad for FMC- she's broke, her power steering shit the bed, she pawned her phone for change- she's at her all time low.
Tropes:
🤠Brother’s Ex-Best Friend
🤠Revenge/Obsession
🤠Dark Romance
🤠Age Gap
While this was straight 🌶️ with a very small plot, the dubcon/non-con just gave me the ick- my opinion, I just didn't like it.
If you’re looking for an unhinged smut with a side of cowboy rage, this might be your thing, but it was a miss for my personal taste.
Also my take- I don't think this is categorized as a "cowboy romance" I've never read one of those yet- but the covers of actual cowboy romances don't fit this vibe🫣
I have thoughts on Road Rage Daddy- title alone lol.
This one was a wild ride, but it wasn't it❌
2.5⭐ for the drama was top-tier I fear- We have a deranged road rage cowboy who turns out to be the FMC’s brother’s ex-best friend. His ex-girlfriend dumped him for the FMC’s brother. The messiness? 10/10. This book was messy😭
Felt bad for FMC- she's broke, her power steering shit the bed, she pawned her phone for change- she's at her all time low.
Tropes:
🤠Brother’s Ex-Best Friend
🤠Revenge/Obsession
🤠Dark Romance
🤠Age Gap
While this was straight 🌶️ with a very small plot, the dubcon/non-con just gave me the ick- my opinion, I just didn't like it.
If you’re looking for an unhinged smut with a side of cowboy rage, this might be your thing, but it was a miss for my personal taste.
Also my take- I don't think this is categorized as a "cowboy romance" I've never read one of those yet- but the covers of actual cowboy romances don't fit this vibe🫣
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 11, 2026
STORY: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
SPICE: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
This was an absolute mess for me. I found that the first intimate scene between the MMC and the FMC was completely brutal. I was very uncomfortable with him "taking" the FMC against her will. Regardless of her POV saying that she found him handsome. He was completely unhinged and took her virginity simply because he felt like they were meant to be. Definitely was an non-con spicy scene and just didn't delivery IMO. Obviously his psychotic read of the situation does come to fruition, but getting there was messy. I found it sloppy and the storyline, overall, which included her brother's children to be unnecessary and strange.
This ultimately wasn't a win for and didn't really enjoy. The writing was flawed and lacked any depth to it. It was smutty and unhinged. If that is your jam, definitely give this a try. For me, I need a little more attention to the editing and more of a plot... even for my smut... which I absolutely love.
SPICE: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
This was an absolute mess for me. I found that the first intimate scene between the MMC and the FMC was completely brutal. I was very uncomfortable with him "taking" the FMC against her will. Regardless of her POV saying that she found him handsome. He was completely unhinged and took her virginity simply because he felt like they were meant to be. Definitely was an non-con spicy scene and just didn't delivery IMO. Obviously his psychotic read of the situation does come to fruition, but getting there was messy. I found it sloppy and the storyline, overall, which included her brother's children to be unnecessary and strange.
This ultimately wasn't a win for and didn't really enjoy. The writing was flawed and lacked any depth to it. It was smutty and unhinged. If that is your jam, definitely give this a try. For me, I need a little more attention to the editing and more of a plot... even for my smut... which I absolutely love.
October 24, 2026
HEA - Darker romance
Emit was her brother’s best friend, 10 years older than Harley. He was the only one who ever cared about her, spending time with her. When his girlfriend got jealous and hooks up with the brother, he no longer was around.
Harley loses power steering and cuts off a truck that follows as she makes her way onto a side road. When he asks if she has a death wish they realize they know each other.
When Emit sees the woman he knows she will be his, then realizes it is an adult Harley. It is a fast dub con ride from there. Harley’s body is willing.
They both get closure with her brother and his ex at the end, very satisfying to see them get what they deserve. The child neglect is not from Harley or Emit.
Emit was her brother’s best friend, 10 years older than Harley. He was the only one who ever cared about her, spending time with her. When his girlfriend got jealous and hooks up with the brother, he no longer was around.
Harley loses power steering and cuts off a truck that follows as she makes her way onto a side road. When he asks if she has a death wish they realize they know each other.
When Emit sees the woman he knows she will be his, then realizes it is an adult Harley. It is a fast dub con ride from there. Harley’s body is willing.
They both get closure with her brother and his ex at the end, very satisfying to see them get what they deserve. The child neglect is not from Harley or Emit.
December 12, 2024
Quickie Review: Out of the couple of books I have read in this series, this has definitely been my least favorite. I never felt any real feelings besides lust from the characters. I know it’s a very short story, but even then, there should have been some romance. And even with it being a short story, a lot does happen. It’s definitely packed full of everything but the romance. And check the triggers. While I don’t have any (that I know of) what happens in this one is bound to upset a few. I wanted to love it after completing going gaga over my last read by Alder, it just sadly didn’t happen. 3 Stars.
December 16, 2024
3 1/2 stars rounded up to 4....This one was good, but didn't quite have the same heat or intensity of May's other novelettes (which is what got me hooked on all of her books originally). Honestly I may have set my expectations too high because I adore all of her books and novelettes, and they are all solid 4 or 5 stars. So why the wishy washy review on this one? It could have been the dub-con, non-con? It could have been I just wasn't feeling the characters as much? Not sure. Still a solid read - especially if you like your men alpha, take charge and never ask permission. 🤣🤣
March 23, 2026
Rating: ☆☆☆
This series is genuinely batshit crazy. What even is this!?!?! This is one of the most wacky plot lines ever for such a short story. Also I love how he’s like “I’m a cop so I can get away with it but don’t necessarily like that” like ok yes self awareness that’s good! I guess. Also the Utah comments are so wild LOL.
Genre?: Erotica
POV: dual pov first person present tense
Plot: ☆☆
Pacing: ☆☆☆
H: ☆☆
h: ☆☆
Side characters: ☆
Ending: ☆☆☆
Spice: ☆☆☆
Chemistry: ☆☆☆
Kinks: daddy
Triggers: extremely dubious consent, sexual assault, child neglect
This series is genuinely batshit crazy. What even is this!?!?! This is one of the most wacky plot lines ever for such a short story. Also I love how he’s like “I’m a cop so I can get away with it but don’t necessarily like that” like ok yes self awareness that’s good! I guess. Also the Utah comments are so wild LOL.
Genre?: Erotica
POV: dual pov first person present tense
Plot: ☆☆
Pacing: ☆☆☆
H: ☆☆
h: ☆☆
Side characters: ☆
Ending: ☆☆☆
Spice: ☆☆☆
Chemistry: ☆☆☆
Kinks: daddy
Triggers: extremely dubious consent, sexual assault, child neglect
December 12, 2024
🌶️: 3,5
Holy raging anger 🤣🤣
Seriously this is CRAZYYY I LOOVVVEE THIS SOO MUCHH
The twisted derange MMC and knowing the FMC is as deranged as he is aaklkhhh 🤌🤌 PERFECTION!!!
BUT ooohh the poor soul of those kids 🥲🥲 fuck broke my heart for sure 😭😭😭
Over all AMAZING short novella!! ❤️❤️
Book contains:
- Child Abuse
- NON/DUB - CON
- CNC
- Age Gap
- Brothers ex Friend
- Size Difference
- Virgin FMC
- Obsessive Over the top MMC
- Restraint
🍑 HAPPY READING YALL!!! 🍑
Holy raging anger 🤣🤣
Seriously this is CRAZYYY I LOOVVVEE THIS SOO MUCHH
The twisted derange MMC and knowing the FMC is as deranged as he is aaklkhhh 🤌🤌 PERFECTION!!!
BUT ooohh the poor soul of those kids 🥲🥲 fuck broke my heart for sure 😭😭😭
Over all AMAZING short novella!! ❤️❤️
Book contains:
- Child Abuse
- NON/DUB - CON
- CNC
- Age Gap
- Brothers ex Friend
- Size Difference
- Virgin FMC
- Obsessive Over the top MMC
- Restraint
🍑 HAPPY READING YALL!!! 🍑
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