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Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys
Nestled in the foreboding backwoods of Virginia, Madame Eldridge's behavior program promotes only three official
Firstly, what happens here stays here.
Secondly, all eight steps must be completed, no ifs, ands, or buts.
Thirdly, each boy is referred to by his problem, not his name.
There is one unspoken don't enter the forbidden third floor bedroom which belonged to a boy who disappeared from the house eons ago.
The warning didn't stop Vandalize from breaking into the room, or Stealer from taking something. As the unruly boys discover bewitched artifacts with unusual abilities, they discreetly use them to complete Madame Eldridge's whimsical challenges. But magic always insists on a price to pay.
When Fibbsy happens upon an object that thrusts him back in time, he uncovers a long-buried secret about Madame Eldridge and the missing boy. But who would ever believe a liar? Bound by the house's enigmatic objects, Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret forge a friendship as they venture to unveil the truth behind the the Wayward Home for Unruly Boys; discovering along the way that the problems they were sent to the program to overcome are shrouded in a dark magic all their own.
Firstly, what happens here stays here.
Secondly, all eight steps must be completed, no ifs, ands, or buts.
Thirdly, each boy is referred to by his problem, not his name.
There is one unspoken don't enter the forbidden third floor bedroom which belonged to a boy who disappeared from the house eons ago.
The warning didn't stop Vandalize from breaking into the room, or Stealer from taking something. As the unruly boys discover bewitched artifacts with unusual abilities, they discreetly use them to complete Madame Eldridge's whimsical challenges. But magic always insists on a price to pay.
When Fibbsy happens upon an object that thrusts him back in time, he uncovers a long-buried secret about Madame Eldridge and the missing boy. But who would ever believe a liar? Bound by the house's enigmatic objects, Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret forge a friendship as they venture to unveil the truth behind the the Wayward Home for Unruly Boys; discovering along the way that the problems they were sent to the program to overcome are shrouded in a dark magic all their own.
- GenresFantasyYoung AdultMagic
346 pages, Paperback
Published March 18, 2025
About the author
Benjamin Ryan
8 books25 followersOnce upon a time, there was a military brat named Benjamin Ryan, who traveled the world and embraced every unique experience he encountered. Being the new kid in town wasn’t always easy, and as he struggled with weight issues, he also had to deal with the hardships of teasing, male friendship, and acceptance. But, he was determined to find his place in the world and used his love for writing to create adventures that would transport him to a different world, where he could see things from a new perspective.
Through his writing, Benjamin Ryan discovered his authentic self and found a way to inspire others. Armed with degrees in Art History, Education and World Religions, he became a New York City public Special Ed teacher, where he uses whimsy, creativity, and acceptance to inspire the youth of tomorrow. And thus, Benjamin Ryan was born—an author that embraces the power of storytelling to inspire and create change. With a deep understanding of the struggles that come with being different, Benjamin Ryan creates content that speaks to the heart and soul of their audience. He is active on twitter in the writing community (@BRClothwrites), hosting writing prompts, engaging with life’s unique perspectives, and inspiring others to create their truths.
Through his writing, Benjamin Ryan discovered his authentic self and found a way to inspire others. Armed with degrees in Art History, Education and World Religions, he became a New York City public Special Ed teacher, where he uses whimsy, creativity, and acceptance to inspire the youth of tomorrow. And thus, Benjamin Ryan was born—an author that embraces the power of storytelling to inspire and create change. With a deep understanding of the struggles that come with being different, Benjamin Ryan creates content that speaks to the heart and soul of their audience. He is active on twitter in the writing community (@BRClothwrites), hosting writing prompts, engaging with life’s unique perspectives, and inspiring others to create their truths.
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June 28, 2025
Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys by Benjamin Ryan
4.5/5 stars
MEWHFUB completely took me by surprise. I expected beforehand that I would love it. But Benjamin put so much emotion and character building in this one, that I completely fell wholeheartedly into the story.
The book starts with Elliot being sent to a Wayward Home for Unruly Boys because he cannot stop lying. He hates them for it. And when he arrives 9 other boys are there. The boys' phones get taken. And Madame Eldridge tells them that there are three core rules. 1, what happens here, stays here. 2, everybody must pass all 8 stages, if one fails, everybody fails. And 3, they have no names.
Elliot's new name is Fibbsy. The others are called Slob, Sassy, Stealer, Bully, Cheater, Defiance, Vandalize, Bummer and Secret.
Madame implores that they must tell her if they experience something peculiar. Another strict rule is that they are forbidden to go to the third floor. A boy named Peculiar went missing eons ago. She tells them his room is still intact and completely off limits.
The boys don't get along at first. They tease and taunt each other. And when they need to bunk up in pairs things get tense between them. And nobody seems to adhere to the rules the first night. Stealer steals something in the lost boys room and Fibbsy hears tudds and whispers and gets scared when shadows and smoke come after him.
Nobody believes him. But things quickly change and the stolen object might be magical. What truly happened to Peculiar? And who is Madame Eldridge, does she hide something or does she truly want to help the boys?
What I love most is that the steps they must complete in the program genuinely help the boys focus on their negative traits and try to overcome them and be more strong than the trait is. I loved seeing the boys grow and evolve. Some quicker than others.
Alliances are formed and quickly they discover things they never expected to find in this Wayward Home.
This book is such a brilliant mix of overcoming negative traits, finding out what true friendship is, finding out what trust is, opening your heart for others, never giving up and holding on to that what is most important.
My heart hopes that the bond the boys created between them is a forever kind of bond. I think I missed a tiny view into the future in the end. Now that I am thinking about it, maybe it's the first book in a series, I'm not sure. If so, then I understand that there is no view into the future. Not that a time jump should have been there. My soft heart just hoped for a tiny glimpse into the future.
One thing that I want to mention is that the book is labelled as a YA book. But for me it felt more like a middle grade book. I think even the older boys felt rather young as well. So personally I would put in the middle grade genre.
All in all a fantastic book and I am super grateful to have read it.
4.5 huge stars for this brilliant story.
4.5/5 stars
MEWHFUB completely took me by surprise. I expected beforehand that I would love it. But Benjamin put so much emotion and character building in this one, that I completely fell wholeheartedly into the story.
The book starts with Elliot being sent to a Wayward Home for Unruly Boys because he cannot stop lying. He hates them for it. And when he arrives 9 other boys are there. The boys' phones get taken. And Madame Eldridge tells them that there are three core rules. 1, what happens here, stays here. 2, everybody must pass all 8 stages, if one fails, everybody fails. And 3, they have no names.
Elliot's new name is Fibbsy. The others are called Slob, Sassy, Stealer, Bully, Cheater, Defiance, Vandalize, Bummer and Secret.
Madame implores that they must tell her if they experience something peculiar. Another strict rule is that they are forbidden to go to the third floor. A boy named Peculiar went missing eons ago. She tells them his room is still intact and completely off limits.
The boys don't get along at first. They tease and taunt each other. And when they need to bunk up in pairs things get tense between them. And nobody seems to adhere to the rules the first night. Stealer steals something in the lost boys room and Fibbsy hears tudds and whispers and gets scared when shadows and smoke come after him.
Nobody believes him. But things quickly change and the stolen object might be magical. What truly happened to Peculiar? And who is Madame Eldridge, does she hide something or does she truly want to help the boys?
What I love most is that the steps they must complete in the program genuinely help the boys focus on their negative traits and try to overcome them and be more strong than the trait is. I loved seeing the boys grow and evolve. Some quicker than others.
Alliances are formed and quickly they discover things they never expected to find in this Wayward Home.
This book is such a brilliant mix of overcoming negative traits, finding out what true friendship is, finding out what trust is, opening your heart for others, never giving up and holding on to that what is most important.
My heart hopes that the bond the boys created between them is a forever kind of bond. I think I missed a tiny view into the future in the end. Now that I am thinking about it, maybe it's the first book in a series, I'm not sure. If so, then I understand that there is no view into the future. Not that a time jump should have been there. My soft heart just hoped for a tiny glimpse into the future.
One thing that I want to mention is that the book is labelled as a YA book. But for me it felt more like a middle grade book. I think even the older boys felt rather young as well. So personally I would put in the middle grade genre.
All in all a fantastic book and I am super grateful to have read it.
4.5 huge stars for this brilliant story.
July 12, 2025
Thank you to BBNYA, The Write Reads, and the author for providing me with a free e-book in exchange for an honest review! All opinions contained within are my own.
Something I have been discovering about myself as a reader lately is that I love when you mix fantasy with mystery. The Tainted Cup was my favorite read of 2024 and that was a fantasy and murder mystery all wrapped into one glorious book. So when I read the synopsis for Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys, I had a feeling this was a book I could love!
This story follows a group of, you guessed it, unruly boys that have been shipped off to the mountains of Virginia to attend an eight step program to fix their behavior. As they arrive, they meet the titular Madame Eldridge, whom they quickly learn is a bit eccentric as she refers to the boys only as their worst traits. But there is something sinister lurking in this house and the boys must learn to work together if they want to survive this program!
This was a quick, fun read that delivered on the promised mystery! I loved the darker feel to this young adult novel and the journey the author took us on. It was a unique world firmly couched in our ordinary one and the lore swiftly pulled me in. I enjoyed the writing, the worldbuilding, and the colorful cast of characters! It was so intriguing following the boys as they tried to determine what, exactly, was happening in Madame Eldridge’s home. I will say the pacing did feel a bit rushed at times. I would have loved to linger in this bizarre place for a little longer, let the characters have a little more time to connect the dots, so that some of the plot points didn’t feel so convenient. I also felt like some of the themes/lessons were laid on a little thick at times. For the most part, though, this was a good time!
Overall, I think this is a great read if you’re looking for a mystery dipped in magic and I would be interested in seeing what else this author has in store!
Something I have been discovering about myself as a reader lately is that I love when you mix fantasy with mystery. The Tainted Cup was my favorite read of 2024 and that was a fantasy and murder mystery all wrapped into one glorious book. So when I read the synopsis for Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys, I had a feeling this was a book I could love!
This story follows a group of, you guessed it, unruly boys that have been shipped off to the mountains of Virginia to attend an eight step program to fix their behavior. As they arrive, they meet the titular Madame Eldridge, whom they quickly learn is a bit eccentric as she refers to the boys only as their worst traits. But there is something sinister lurking in this house and the boys must learn to work together if they want to survive this program!
This was a quick, fun read that delivered on the promised mystery! I loved the darker feel to this young adult novel and the journey the author took us on. It was a unique world firmly couched in our ordinary one and the lore swiftly pulled me in. I enjoyed the writing, the worldbuilding, and the colorful cast of characters! It was so intriguing following the boys as they tried to determine what, exactly, was happening in Madame Eldridge’s home. I will say the pacing did feel a bit rushed at times. I would have loved to linger in this bizarre place for a little longer, let the characters have a little more time to connect the dots, so that some of the plot points didn’t feel so convenient. I also felt like some of the themes/lessons were laid on a little thick at times. For the most part, though, this was a good time!
Overall, I think this is a great read if you’re looking for a mystery dipped in magic and I would be interested in seeing what else this author has in store!
March 19, 2025
This enchanting story follows a group of boys sent to a group home where they are named by the behavioral issues that seem to plague them. Together they work to solve a mystery and unravel secrets, with a bit of magical assistance. Although Madame Eldridge had a watchful eye, she is so caring and offers a bit of comic relief. The boys’ character arcs and their growth is amazing, and I really thought the found family aspect and nods to the importance’s of friendship was enduring.
Thanks to the author, Conquest Publishing and Story Origins for the eARC.
Thanks to the author, Conquest Publishing and Story Origins for the eARC.
December 1, 2025
I'm not sure what to make of this book.
The story was decent.
The plot was alright and original (I think, I don't know any other book similar to this).
But the writing...
Not sure if the writer doesn't know how to stay in one perspective (Spoiler: he doesn't) or if he wants to tell his story from all characters' POV and go for a sort of omniscient writer type of thing.
In a matter of a few sentence we hop from one character to another to the next one.
Also, we have Madame Eldridge (obviously) and we have ten unruly boys.
I know they have been described at the start of the book, but I couldn't tell you who's who. I believe there was an Asian boy who was glad to see another Asian boy and tried to bond with him, but I don't know which two of the ten boys they were.
And we only get to know them by the name Madame Eldrigde gave them, after the character trait they were send to her to be got rid of. At the start of the book we get to now Elliot and I think when he gets to the Wayward Home he is now Fibbsy, but again, I'm not sure.
Some writers use too much dialogue tags, resulting in a - he said, she said & he asked, she answered - kind of situation. With this book I found the writer sometimes using too few dialogue tags, which would lead to a conversation where halfway through you don't know who's saying what anymore. The writer also is very fond of letting a character speak, throw some info in-between maybe with a few other boys looking at him in a certain way, then another bit of dialogue ending with "he said" And you're left wondering, who? Who said that? Which he out of the ten was it?
Near the end of the book the focus was more on four of the boys and it got a little better. But only a little, because I still wondered sometimes who was talking. That's what you get with too much characters introduced all at once and nobody getting a good established persona, I guess.
All in all, not a great book, not a bad book either. It's okay.
We are left with some unanswered questions, which will (hopefully) be resolved in the next book.
I will have to wait and I see if I can bring myself to reading that.
The story was decent.
The plot was alright and original (I think, I don't know any other book similar to this).
But the writing...
Not sure if the writer doesn't know how to stay in one perspective (Spoiler: he doesn't) or if he wants to tell his story from all characters' POV and go for a sort of omniscient writer type of thing.
In a matter of a few sentence we hop from one character to another to the next one.
Also, we have Madame Eldridge (obviously) and we have ten unruly boys.
I know they have been described at the start of the book, but I couldn't tell you who's who. I believe there was an Asian boy who was glad to see another Asian boy and tried to bond with him, but I don't know which two of the ten boys they were.
And we only get to know them by the name Madame Eldrigde gave them, after the character trait they were send to her to be got rid of. At the start of the book we get to now Elliot and I think when he gets to the Wayward Home he is now Fibbsy, but again, I'm not sure.
Some writers use too much dialogue tags, resulting in a - he said, she said & he asked, she answered - kind of situation. With this book I found the writer sometimes using too few dialogue tags, which would lead to a conversation where halfway through you don't know who's saying what anymore. The writer also is very fond of letting a character speak, throw some info in-between maybe with a few other boys looking at him in a certain way, then another bit of dialogue ending with "he said" And you're left wondering, who? Who said that? Which he out of the ten was it?
Near the end of the book the focus was more on four of the boys and it got a little better. But only a little, because I still wondered sometimes who was talking. That's what you get with too much characters introduced all at once and nobody getting a good established persona, I guess.
All in all, not a great book, not a bad book either. It's okay.
We are left with some unanswered questions, which will (hopefully) be resolved in the next book.
I will have to wait and I see if I can bring myself to reading that.
March 6, 2024
A friend recommended Madame Eldridge to me, and I am so glad he did! Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys follows a group of boys sent to a home, run by Eldridge, for issues they each have. When they enter the home, they are named by those issues, like Cheater, Bully, etc. As the boys, in particular, Fibbsy, Slob, Defiance, and Secret, start to discover that Madame Eldridge's home may not be what it appears, they must work together to uncover the mystery they encounter.
Madame Eldridge was such an enjoyable read. I was enchanted from the first chapter, and my love of the story just kept growing, as I continued to read. The characters are all wonderful, and you really root for them throughout the whole story. This book is delightful, tense, and magical to read.
I really loved Benjamin Ryan's writing style and can not wait to read more of his writing.
If you like books about growing friendships, mystery, magic, and characters and a world that jumps off the page, this is a perfect read.
Madame Eldridge was such an enjoyable read. I was enchanted from the first chapter, and my love of the story just kept growing, as I continued to read. The characters are all wonderful, and you really root for them throughout the whole story. This book is delightful, tense, and magical to read.
I really loved Benjamin Ryan's writing style and can not wait to read more of his writing.
If you like books about growing friendships, mystery, magic, and characters and a world that jumps off the page, this is a perfect read.
September 25, 2023
An original concept and well executed. Good characters and twists. I definitely wish to know more about this world. The way the magic works was interesting, following the logic of the boys’ problems and the objects they find. I also enjoyed seeing the friendships develop. I was captured by the story and couldn’t stop reading. A few times I found that the word choice wasn’t the best, but the story carry me through.
The novel starts right away with a mystery, and we are given the clues to try and solve it. The build up did pay off. The extravagant dresses from Madame Eldridge were a fun detail as well as a clue about what would happen in the chapter. Many questions were answered at the end, but new ones were opened. I’ll await the next installment.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The novel starts right away with a mystery, and we are given the clues to try and solve it. The build up did pay off. The extravagant dresses from Madame Eldridge were a fun detail as well as a clue about what would happen in the chapter. Many questions were answered at the end, but new ones were opened. I’ll await the next installment.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
July 10, 2025
Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home For Unruly Boys begins with the arrival of the unruly boys to Madame Eldridge’s home, an old, eerie, but beautiful house that you could easily get lost in. Each of the children has a flaw, and have been sent to Madame Eldridge in the hope that she can stamp it out. Her reputation precedes her, and if anyone can change these children, it’s her. Upon entering the home, each of the boys is stripped of their identity, and given a name that relates to their flaw. That is who they are now, and who they will remain, until they can overcome their problems. But all is not as it seems within the house, and the boys are in more danger than they know.
I loved all of the characters, and their different qualities and traits. They all brought something unique to the story. Each having their own dominant trait, and trying to overcome the negative behaviours in their life was a very interesting premise. I think we could all find a trait within ourselves that we’d like to get rid of, and in that way I found the book to be quite relatable. I loved watching the characters grow, and the relationships between them develop throughout the book.
The twists along the way were totally unexpected, and the mystery element of the story was my favourite part. There was a darkness to this story that I hadn’t been expecting, but that I thoroughly enjoyed. I loved the way that the personal items of the previous occupant played such a big part in the story, it was unlike anything I have ever read before. The intensity builds throughout the book, and comes to a head in an exciting showdown, and a shocking ending. I’m hoping this isn’t the last we see of these characters.
This was the best book that I read for BBNYA 2024, and I’d go as far as to say that it is one of my favourite books that I’ve ever read for BBNYA, and I’ve been a panelist every year since it began! It is brilliantly written, and I urge everyone to pick up this book!
I loved all of the characters, and their different qualities and traits. They all brought something unique to the story. Each having their own dominant trait, and trying to overcome the negative behaviours in their life was a very interesting premise. I think we could all find a trait within ourselves that we’d like to get rid of, and in that way I found the book to be quite relatable. I loved watching the characters grow, and the relationships between them develop throughout the book.
The twists along the way were totally unexpected, and the mystery element of the story was my favourite part. There was a darkness to this story that I hadn’t been expecting, but that I thoroughly enjoyed. I loved the way that the personal items of the previous occupant played such a big part in the story, it was unlike anything I have ever read before. The intensity builds throughout the book, and comes to a head in an exciting showdown, and a shocking ending. I’m hoping this isn’t the last we see of these characters.
This was the best book that I read for BBNYA 2024, and I’d go as far as to say that it is one of my favourite books that I’ve ever read for BBNYA, and I’ve been a panelist every year since it began! It is brilliantly written, and I urge everyone to pick up this book!
February 20, 2024
A magical page-turner!
I was very pleased with this book. If I had had the time and opportunity, I could have probably read this in one or two sittings. There are so many twists and turns that I found myself shocked or surprised more than once, and I often am able to predict when reading a suspense or mystery!
If you like mystery, suspense, magic, you will enjoy this book! I bought it for my Kindle, but will buy another copy in paperback because I know my sons would enjoy it, too. I very much look forward to a sequel!
I was very pleased with this book. If I had had the time and opportunity, I could have probably read this in one or two sittings. There are so many twists and turns that I found myself shocked or surprised more than once, and I often am able to predict when reading a suspense or mystery!
If you like mystery, suspense, magic, you will enjoy this book! I bought it for my Kindle, but will buy another copy in paperback because I know my sons would enjoy it, too. I very much look forward to a sequel!
February 24, 2024
There are no slow moments in this book. Every page is exciting…full of mystery and of course secrets. You won’t want to put this book down.
July 13, 2025
Blurb
Deep in the heart of Virginia’s dense backwoods, the Wayward Home for Unruly Boys hides more than just troubled youth. Under Madame Eldridge’s watchful eye, three strict rules govern their behavior
1. What happens here stays here.
2. You must complete all eight steps—no exceptions allowed.
3. Forget your name; you’ll be known only by your problem.
But, there’s one unspoken rule that sends shivers down the boys' never enter the forbidden third-floor bedroom of the boy who vanished, leaving nothing behind but whispers.
When Vandalize and Stealer defy this warning, they uncover a treasure trove of bewitched artifacts, each with a strange and powerful ability. Using these relics, the boys tackle Madame Eldridge’s whimsical—and often bizarre—challenges, only to learn magic always demands its price.
Amidst the chaos, Fibbsy stumbles upon a peculiar object that sends him hurtling back in time, revealing an unfathomable truth about Madame Eldridge, the eerie town, and the missing boy’s fate. But who will trust the words of a liar?
Bound by the house’s darkest mysteries, Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret form an unlikely friendship as they race to unveil the shrouded secrets surrounding the Wayward Home. Together, they confront their deepest fears, uncovering that the real magic lies in facing their own personal demons—and each other.
Review
What is there not to like about this book, it had a bit of everything. Great characters, fantasy, magic, a bit of light horror, mystery, intrigue, secrets, and if this wasn’t enough this was very well written and kept me hooked throughout.
A group of boys arrive at the Wayward Home for Unruly boys to help them deal with their issues, and to depersonalise them they are all named after their problem. We see the story through the eyes of Fibbsy, which tells you all you need to know about his issue.
Through their time at the Wayward Home they have to work jointly through eight challenges set them by Madame Eldridge, which really allows you to get to know them and their traits. It is great to see their personal growth, and the developing relationships whilst they are at the Wayward Home.
However, all is not as it seems at the Home, and Fibbsy and his friends start to build up a picture of mysterious goings on that makes them doubt all that they see. Somehow they have to come together to see the bigger picture, and to find out what they can do to solve the mystery.
I feel this was very cleverly written by the author, and he really made the characters and events come to life. Forget this being a Young Adult book, this deserve a much wider audience. If you enjoy books that cover any of the elements mentioned above I’m sure you will really enjoy this book. I personally would like to know hat happens to them next, and I felt it left an opening for another book.
Book Info
Length: 290 Pages
Genre: Fantasy, Mystery
Age Category: Young Adult
Date Published: August 1, 2023
Amazon Link: https://a.co/d/2xhAZT8 (Canada) https://a.co/d/gy4ZbEk (USA) https://amzn.eu/d/6gb1kDI (UK)
Goodreads Link: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
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Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys was the 5th place finalist in BBNYA 2024!
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Author Bio
Once upon a time, there was a military brat named Benjamin Ryan, who traveled the world and embraced every unique experience he encountered. Being the new kid in town wasn’t always easy, and as he struggled with weight issues, he also had to deal with the hardships of teasing, male friendship, and acceptance. But, he was determined to find his place in the world and used his love for writing to create adventures that would transport him to a different world, where he could see things from a new perspective. Through his writing, Benjamin Ryan discovered his authentic self and found a way to inspire others. Armed with degrees in Art History, Education and World Religions, he became a New York City public Special Ed teacher, where he uses whimsy, creativity, and acceptance to inspire the youth of tomorrow. And thus, Benjamin Ryan was born—an author that embraces the power of storytelling to inspire and create change. With a deep understanding of the struggles that come with being different, Benjamin Ryan creates content that speaks to the heart and soul of their audience. He is active on twitter in the writing community (@BRClothwrites), hosting writing prompts, engaging with life’s unique perspectives, and inspiring others to create their truths.
Deep in the heart of Virginia’s dense backwoods, the Wayward Home for Unruly Boys hides more than just troubled youth. Under Madame Eldridge’s watchful eye, three strict rules govern their behavior
1. What happens here stays here.
2. You must complete all eight steps—no exceptions allowed.
3. Forget your name; you’ll be known only by your problem.
But, there’s one unspoken rule that sends shivers down the boys' never enter the forbidden third-floor bedroom of the boy who vanished, leaving nothing behind but whispers.
When Vandalize and Stealer defy this warning, they uncover a treasure trove of bewitched artifacts, each with a strange and powerful ability. Using these relics, the boys tackle Madame Eldridge’s whimsical—and often bizarre—challenges, only to learn magic always demands its price.
Amidst the chaos, Fibbsy stumbles upon a peculiar object that sends him hurtling back in time, revealing an unfathomable truth about Madame Eldridge, the eerie town, and the missing boy’s fate. But who will trust the words of a liar?
Bound by the house’s darkest mysteries, Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret form an unlikely friendship as they race to unveil the shrouded secrets surrounding the Wayward Home. Together, they confront their deepest fears, uncovering that the real magic lies in facing their own personal demons—and each other.
Review
What is there not to like about this book, it had a bit of everything. Great characters, fantasy, magic, a bit of light horror, mystery, intrigue, secrets, and if this wasn’t enough this was very well written and kept me hooked throughout.
A group of boys arrive at the Wayward Home for Unruly boys to help them deal with their issues, and to depersonalise them they are all named after their problem. We see the story through the eyes of Fibbsy, which tells you all you need to know about his issue.
Through their time at the Wayward Home they have to work jointly through eight challenges set them by Madame Eldridge, which really allows you to get to know them and their traits. It is great to see their personal growth, and the developing relationships whilst they are at the Wayward Home.
However, all is not as it seems at the Home, and Fibbsy and his friends start to build up a picture of mysterious goings on that makes them doubt all that they see. Somehow they have to come together to see the bigger picture, and to find out what they can do to solve the mystery.
I feel this was very cleverly written by the author, and he really made the characters and events come to life. Forget this being a Young Adult book, this deserve a much wider audience. If you enjoy books that cover any of the elements mentioned above I’m sure you will really enjoy this book. I personally would like to know hat happens to them next, and I felt it left an opening for another book.
Book Info
Length: 290 Pages
Genre: Fantasy, Mystery
Age Category: Young Adult
Date Published: August 1, 2023
Amazon Link: https://a.co/d/2xhAZT8 (Canada) https://a.co/d/gy4ZbEk (USA) https://amzn.eu/d/6gb1kDI (UK)
Goodreads Link: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...
The Story Graph Link:
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Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys was the 5th place finalist in BBNYA 2024!
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Author Bio
Once upon a time, there was a military brat named Benjamin Ryan, who traveled the world and embraced every unique experience he encountered. Being the new kid in town wasn’t always easy, and as he struggled with weight issues, he also had to deal with the hardships of teasing, male friendship, and acceptance. But, he was determined to find his place in the world and used his love for writing to create adventures that would transport him to a different world, where he could see things from a new perspective. Through his writing, Benjamin Ryan discovered his authentic self and found a way to inspire others. Armed with degrees in Art History, Education and World Religions, he became a New York City public Special Ed teacher, where he uses whimsy, creativity, and acceptance to inspire the youth of tomorrow. And thus, Benjamin Ryan was born—an author that embraces the power of storytelling to inspire and create change. With a deep understanding of the struggles that come with being different, Benjamin Ryan creates content that speaks to the heart and soul of their audience. He is active on twitter in the writing community (@BRClothwrites), hosting writing prompts, engaging with life’s unique perspectives, and inspiring others to create their truths.
May 11, 2024
BOOK REVIEW OF...
Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys
by Benjamin Ryan
A free, unsolicited, and spoiler-free review by Robert J. Tiess
Reviewed on May 10, 2024.
When Elliot, a boy who "loved to lie," gets dropped off by his parents at a home for unruly youths, he has no idea about the impending life-changing adventures ahead of him, for this is no ordinary reform school. “Headmistress” Madame Eldridge is no conventional teacher, and the curriculum to come is neither common nor comforting.
Once Madame Eldridge enters the tale, she wastes no moment, moving quickly to rename the boys and informing them they have arrived to be transformed. She christens Elliot as Fibbsy, and the other boys receive similarly descriptive nicknames based on their specific issues or vices, resulting in such jarring epithets as Stealer, Bully, Cheater, and Defiance.
As this increasingly urgent story unfolds, each boy must decide to embrace or confront the nature of his new name along with every new challenge posed by their eccentric educator. Soon enough, these boys must learn to devise solutions and collaborate if they are to unravel the many mysteries of this Victorian residence, as well as Madame Eldridge's enigmatic role, and the dubious motivations behind her increasingly daunting and cruel assignments, which spur the boys toward stranger and more dangerous conditions every day.
What the boys uncover, and how they do this, is the result of an extraordinary series of quests that run the gamut of fear and courage, natural and paranormal, future and past, innocence and maturity, appearance and reality. Their interlinked ventures, brisk dialogues, surreal surroundings, cryptic incidents, and magical happenings, help to drive this ambitious debut novel forward with much anticipation, little delay, and no maddening misdirection.
Madame Eldridge is consistently complex and captivating, always provoking reconsideration of her true intentions and alliances. All the characters are quite convincing, evolving, and pivotal to the plot. Through the boys’ collective wide-eyed curiosity—and their penchants for mischief, discovery, and disobedience—we witness much darker forces at work in the Wayward Home, and we find there are reasons behind the anomalous and ominous phenomena there.
But beyond each how lies a larger why (and sometimes a when or a who) that begs to be answered. Answers do arrive, though, often enough, new questions tag along, and there’s ever a sense of a deeper story looming around each bend, where nothing's accidental, everything and everyone is at risk, and anything may reveal a crucial truth.
CONCLUSION: 5 OUT OF 5 STARS. Highly recommended for fans of classic and contemporary fantasy, speculative fiction, magical realism, mystery, suspense, young adult literature, and adventurous tales. Ryan delivers on all the essentials of “good storytelling”—a persevering plot, compelling characterizations, creative conflicts, good pacing, spectacular settings, not to mention a unique style that reaches all the way down to the very purposeful chapter titles.
Scene by scene, the book is intensely illustrative. Between its fast-paced and dynamic character-driven narrative, its fantastically vivid visuals, and its cinematic sequences, this book (at least for this reviewer) suggests a considerable “book-to-screen” potential, either as a possible motion picture or a broader online streaming series.
Beyond that, admirable themes of friendship, cooperation, and tenacity—not giving up before seemingly impossible situations—ground this sorcerous storyline in a positive, youthful, and relatable humanity that allows us to care about these budding characters, their paths and choices, and their instincts to outgrow fears and embrace their truest selves (and each other) as they aspire to heroic feats and dare to escape the dismal and deathly realms of limitations.
Author website: www.BenjaminRyanBooks.com
Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys
by Benjamin Ryan
A free, unsolicited, and spoiler-free review by Robert J. Tiess
Reviewed on May 10, 2024.
When Elliot, a boy who "loved to lie," gets dropped off by his parents at a home for unruly youths, he has no idea about the impending life-changing adventures ahead of him, for this is no ordinary reform school. “Headmistress” Madame Eldridge is no conventional teacher, and the curriculum to come is neither common nor comforting.
Once Madame Eldridge enters the tale, she wastes no moment, moving quickly to rename the boys and informing them they have arrived to be transformed. She christens Elliot as Fibbsy, and the other boys receive similarly descriptive nicknames based on their specific issues or vices, resulting in such jarring epithets as Stealer, Bully, Cheater, and Defiance.
As this increasingly urgent story unfolds, each boy must decide to embrace or confront the nature of his new name along with every new challenge posed by their eccentric educator. Soon enough, these boys must learn to devise solutions and collaborate if they are to unravel the many mysteries of this Victorian residence, as well as Madame Eldridge's enigmatic role, and the dubious motivations behind her increasingly daunting and cruel assignments, which spur the boys toward stranger and more dangerous conditions every day.
What the boys uncover, and how they do this, is the result of an extraordinary series of quests that run the gamut of fear and courage, natural and paranormal, future and past, innocence and maturity, appearance and reality. Their interlinked ventures, brisk dialogues, surreal surroundings, cryptic incidents, and magical happenings, help to drive this ambitious debut novel forward with much anticipation, little delay, and no maddening misdirection.
Madame Eldridge is consistently complex and captivating, always provoking reconsideration of her true intentions and alliances. All the characters are quite convincing, evolving, and pivotal to the plot. Through the boys’ collective wide-eyed curiosity—and their penchants for mischief, discovery, and disobedience—we witness much darker forces at work in the Wayward Home, and we find there are reasons behind the anomalous and ominous phenomena there.
But beyond each how lies a larger why (and sometimes a when or a who) that begs to be answered. Answers do arrive, though, often enough, new questions tag along, and there’s ever a sense of a deeper story looming around each bend, where nothing's accidental, everything and everyone is at risk, and anything may reveal a crucial truth.
CONCLUSION: 5 OUT OF 5 STARS. Highly recommended for fans of classic and contemporary fantasy, speculative fiction, magical realism, mystery, suspense, young adult literature, and adventurous tales. Ryan delivers on all the essentials of “good storytelling”—a persevering plot, compelling characterizations, creative conflicts, good pacing, spectacular settings, not to mention a unique style that reaches all the way down to the very purposeful chapter titles.
Scene by scene, the book is intensely illustrative. Between its fast-paced and dynamic character-driven narrative, its fantastically vivid visuals, and its cinematic sequences, this book (at least for this reviewer) suggests a considerable “book-to-screen” potential, either as a possible motion picture or a broader online streaming series.
Beyond that, admirable themes of friendship, cooperation, and tenacity—not giving up before seemingly impossible situations—ground this sorcerous storyline in a positive, youthful, and relatable humanity that allows us to care about these budding characters, their paths and choices, and their instincts to outgrow fears and embrace their truest selves (and each other) as they aspire to heroic feats and dare to escape the dismal and deathly realms of limitations.
Author website: www.BenjaminRyanBooks.com
July 22, 2025
4.5
Book source ~ BBNYA
Ok, so one of the rules is to never go into a forbidden room. And you tell this to a bunch of boys who are already off the rails with their individual problems. And expect them to just…obey? Ahahahaha! Whew. That’s a good one Madame Eldridge. Of course some of the boys go in that room. What did she think? Or maybe she wanted them to go in there? Hmmm…no. I think she was very serious in her warnings. In any case, the whole week goes off the rails when a few of the boys discover secrets about that room and the person who lived there.
I wasn’t sure what to think when I started this book and discovered what a huge weirdo Madame Eldridge was. Wow. She would be a cool eccentric if there wasn’t something just so off about her. Then there’s the whole 3rd floor bedroom thing. And calling the boys by their problem. The strange tasks they have to do? What is going on here?!
The boys don’t disappoint with their behavior and they dig where they shouldn’t, finding out things that are confusing and dangerous. In the meantime, even though Madame Eldridge is super weird, the boys are learning to control their problems. So there is that at least. But there’s evil in the house and some of the boys are determined to figure it out.
The writing is top notch and the whole book comes to life. Great characters and a definite mystery to solve round it all out to make this book an entertaining read.
Book source ~ BBNYA
Ok, so one of the rules is to never go into a forbidden room. And you tell this to a bunch of boys who are already off the rails with their individual problems. And expect them to just…obey? Ahahahaha! Whew. That’s a good one Madame Eldridge. Of course some of the boys go in that room. What did she think? Or maybe she wanted them to go in there? Hmmm…no. I think she was very serious in her warnings. In any case, the whole week goes off the rails when a few of the boys discover secrets about that room and the person who lived there.
I wasn’t sure what to think when I started this book and discovered what a huge weirdo Madame Eldridge was. Wow. She would be a cool eccentric if there wasn’t something just so off about her. Then there’s the whole 3rd floor bedroom thing. And calling the boys by their problem. The strange tasks they have to do? What is going on here?!
The boys don’t disappoint with their behavior and they dig where they shouldn’t, finding out things that are confusing and dangerous. In the meantime, even though Madame Eldridge is super weird, the boys are learning to control their problems. So there is that at least. But there’s evil in the house and some of the boys are determined to figure it out.
The writing is top notch and the whole book comes to life. Great characters and a definite mystery to solve round it all out to make this book an entertaining read.
October 20, 2025
Where Magic Hides and Rules Bind: Benjamin Ryan’s Enchanting Tale.
Do you remember Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children? Benjamin Ryan’s Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is not exactly that kind of story, but there’s an unmistakable sense that magic, once buried beneath discipline and secrecy, is beginning to rise.
The novel is a compelling blend of haunting atmosphere, dark whimsy, and moral discovery. Set within a secluded and enigmatic institution, it draws readers into a world governed by rigid rules and unspoken fears, where every small act of defiance carries weight and wonder.
Ryan masterfully balances supernatural intrigue with deeply human insight, exploring identity, courage, and the fragile connections forged in unlikely places. The narrative thrums with tension, yet it allows flashes of humor, friendship, and emotional warmth to cut through the darkness.
His prose is sharp and evocative, each page alive with texture and rhythm, creating a space where the uncanny and the intimate coexist. Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is, at its heart, a meditation on transformation: how confronting fear and imperfection can become its own quiet form of magic.
And a special tribute must be paid to the book’s sartorial genius - Ryan’s descriptions of Madame Eldridge’s daily attire are nothing short of spectacular. If the author ever turns to fashion, he may well conquer that world too. A remarkable, imaginative success.
Do you remember Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children? Benjamin Ryan’s Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is not exactly that kind of story, but there’s an unmistakable sense that magic, once buried beneath discipline and secrecy, is beginning to rise.
The novel is a compelling blend of haunting atmosphere, dark whimsy, and moral discovery. Set within a secluded and enigmatic institution, it draws readers into a world governed by rigid rules and unspoken fears, where every small act of defiance carries weight and wonder.
Ryan masterfully balances supernatural intrigue with deeply human insight, exploring identity, courage, and the fragile connections forged in unlikely places. The narrative thrums with tension, yet it allows flashes of humor, friendship, and emotional warmth to cut through the darkness.
His prose is sharp and evocative, each page alive with texture and rhythm, creating a space where the uncanny and the intimate coexist. Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is, at its heart, a meditation on transformation: how confronting fear and imperfection can become its own quiet form of magic.
And a special tribute must be paid to the book’s sartorial genius - Ryan’s descriptions of Madame Eldridge’s daily attire are nothing short of spectacular. If the author ever turns to fashion, he may well conquer that world too. A remarkable, imaginative success.
March 18, 2025
This morality tale with a twist is excellent!! This will surely become a classic middle grade children's book. It is well written and the plot is fresh, imaginative and compelling.
The characters are well drawn but their intro was a little confusing as it went so quickly. Ethnic traits were described at the first dinner and the room choosing, but were not really ever referenced again. This sort of rang false, almost like a nod to DEI. I did become really attached to several during the book's progress. Secret was a favorite, and of course Fibbsy, the main protagonist. The others played their part in the two story arcs, the struggle against your bad habits and the quest to unravel the mysteries of the house, the disappearance of a boy years ago, and mysterious Madame Eldridge herself.
The book has plenty of twists and turns to keep you guessing, even at the end as a few new and intriguing questions are raised as the boys depart the house for their return to their families. I can't wait to read a sequel to this most enjoyable and intriguing tale. Definitely a must-read for kids in middle school!!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The characters are well drawn but their intro was a little confusing as it went so quickly. Ethnic traits were described at the first dinner and the room choosing, but were not really ever referenced again. This sort of rang false, almost like a nod to DEI. I did become really attached to several during the book's progress. Secret was a favorite, and of course Fibbsy, the main protagonist. The others played their part in the two story arcs, the struggle against your bad habits and the quest to unravel the mysteries of the house, the disappearance of a boy years ago, and mysterious Madame Eldridge herself.
The book has plenty of twists and turns to keep you guessing, even at the end as a few new and intriguing questions are raised as the boys depart the house for their return to their families. I can't wait to read a sequel to this most enjoyable and intriguing tale. Definitely a must-read for kids in middle school!!
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
October 8, 2024
MADAME ELDRIDGE’S WAYWARD HOME FOR UNRULY BOYS is a wonderful YA fantasy adventure with a powerful lesson or two along the way.
The remote home is a reform program for boys who have gotten in trouble. The students are referred to not by name, but by their problem—Fibbsy, Slob, Secret, Defiance, etc. Madam Eldridge is the program’s mysterious director who seeks to change the boys’ behavior, using techniques both curious and cruel.
But she’s not the only one with secrets in the sprawling home. Fibbsy discovers a hidden magical object that sends him back in time. It also unlocks a series of questions about Madam Eldridge, the program, and its previous students.
The mystery/adventure elements are a lot of fun. But along the way, the boys learn to trust each other and to see themselves as more than how others label them. Fibbsy and his friends may not be perfect angels, but they are a likable group of kids, and readers will find themselves rooting for them to succeed. Author Benjamin Ryan successfully pulls together a complex plot and nuanced characters into a novel begging for a sequel!
The remote home is a reform program for boys who have gotten in trouble. The students are referred to not by name, but by their problem—Fibbsy, Slob, Secret, Defiance, etc. Madam Eldridge is the program’s mysterious director who seeks to change the boys’ behavior, using techniques both curious and cruel.
But she’s not the only one with secrets in the sprawling home. Fibbsy discovers a hidden magical object that sends him back in time. It also unlocks a series of questions about Madam Eldridge, the program, and its previous students.
The mystery/adventure elements are a lot of fun. But along the way, the boys learn to trust each other and to see themselves as more than how others label them. Fibbsy and his friends may not be perfect angels, but they are a likable group of kids, and readers will find themselves rooting for them to succeed. Author Benjamin Ryan successfully pulls together a complex plot and nuanced characters into a novel begging for a sequel!
October 22, 2024
I saw this book advertised online and thought it looked interesting so went ahead and bought a paperback copy of it. When the book arrived I found that it was a really a wonderful book to hold, feeling both cozy and pleasant. The font was easy to read and made the book a delight.
The story flows beautifully and had me from the beginning. Ten 'unruly' boys are sent to a home that intends to change them into youngsters whose behaviour is appropriate in nice society. The boys have to work to become friends, and as they do they begin to see that their acting out is stopping them from being the person they really want to be. I enjoyed reading about their journey and enjoyed reading about Madame Eldgridge, her methods of working with the boys and her wardrobe. Until!...(Spoiler Alert here!) we discover that Madame Eldgridge is not Madame Eldridge at all but rather 'she' is a nasty villain who has trapped Madame in a cane. Knowing this now, after I've read the book, I see that I need to re-read this story with this information at hand. I'm sure the second read will be as interesting as the first was. And, happily, the author has told me that there will be a sequel.
The story flows beautifully and had me from the beginning. Ten 'unruly' boys are sent to a home that intends to change them into youngsters whose behaviour is appropriate in nice society. The boys have to work to become friends, and as they do they begin to see that their acting out is stopping them from being the person they really want to be. I enjoyed reading about their journey and enjoyed reading about Madame Eldgridge, her methods of working with the boys and her wardrobe. Until!...(Spoiler Alert here!) we discover that Madame Eldgridge is not Madame Eldridge at all but rather 'she' is a nasty villain who has trapped Madame in a cane. Knowing this now, after I've read the book, I see that I need to re-read this story with this information at hand. I'm sure the second read will be as interesting as the first was. And, happily, the author has told me that there will be a sequel.
August 26, 2024
I gave this a go on a whim after encountering the author on twitter. It's been a very long time since I last read a book for children, but I suspect they would enjoy this one lot. It's Nanny McPhee meets The Secret Seven, with plenty of original ideas and compelling pacing as well as the kind of moral lessons that would benefit a lot of 8-12 year olds.
Its greatest strength is the carefully controlled rate of exposition, with all the important details fed at just the right time, without ever appearing unrealisrically convenient. The mystery element plays fair with the reader too. I figured it out in good time. I suspect some children will and others won't, which is what you want.
There were a few little errors here and there that somehow slipped through the editing net, but not nearly enough to upset a child, nor lead one into bad habits. I had hoped for a closed ending to the story, and I think a lot of young readers would too as they'll be left with a fair few unaswered questions, but I suppose they would equally be eager to jump into a sequel, if one exists.
Its greatest strength is the carefully controlled rate of exposition, with all the important details fed at just the right time, without ever appearing unrealisrically convenient. The mystery element plays fair with the reader too. I figured it out in good time. I suspect some children will and others won't, which is what you want.
There were a few little errors here and there that somehow slipped through the editing net, but not nearly enough to upset a child, nor lead one into bad habits. I had hoped for a closed ending to the story, and I think a lot of young readers would too as they'll be left with a fair few unaswered questions, but I suppose they would equally be eager to jump into a sequel, if one exists.
December 20, 2024
This was such a fun book to read. It isn't very long, so finishing it only took me a couple of days. The plotline is something I haven't read before, and this is what pulled me to read it. In the first half of the book, you learn a lot about the boys, but there are definitely things happening to pull you right into the story. The second half of the book was even more happening, and I wanted to keep reading so I would know what was happening. The only reason why I am not giving it five stars is because I found it a bit too predictable for a Young Adult book, but this makes this perfect as a book for a kid who's only just starting to read Young Adult books.
I received an advance review copy for free, but my review and ratings are entirely my own.
Full review will be online on my blog at the 29th of december 2024
Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys by Benjamin Ryan — Sail Away!
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I received an advance review copy for free, but my review and ratings are entirely my own.
Full review will be online on my blog at the 29th of december 2024
Madame Eldridge’s Wayward Home for Unruly Boys by Benjamin Ryan — Sail Away!
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August 30, 2023
After watching an interview by this author where he advises the reader to be aware of the details in his novel in order to solve the story puzzle, my passion for mysteries was hooked. This book is so magical it is as if, upon reading the first page, an unseen force pulls the reader into the setting and keeps her/him glued in place until the very end. Details are sharp and mysterious, funny and sad, truthful and misleading. I was overwhelmed by Benjamin's ability to perfectly describe the clothing Madame Eldridge wore every time she entered a scene. If this author ever decides to no longer write, I believe he would have a fine career in haute couture. Character arcs are well developed with acceptable conclusions. Act two of this novel gives the reader great clues to help solve this mystery. For a debut fantasy novel, one would have to search hard to find one to surpass this one. Easy 5 stars.
September 2, 2023
This book I read as fast as I could, each page, each chapter willing me to go for just one more. It’s a fantastic storyline. Madame Eldridge—her clothes and food—what a character. It felt as though I were sitting with the kids, almost able to taste what they were eating, feeling what fears they were moving through, captivated by the mystery unfolding. This author masterfully weaves in details that the reader later stitches together and smiles at how subtly and perfectly such were presented, delivering that “Aha!” moment time and again. A book that people of any age can appreciate and chuckle and feel the world is better place for having read it. Although it has its dark parts (such as with Bully being well a bully), it also shows consequences + how all have the potential to stand up. I especially loved that last letter from “Madame Eldridge”, and felt that warm feeling when realization finally hits a reader. Highly recommend.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 8, 2024
This story will be a cult classic!
Madam Eldridge's Home for Unruly Boys is brilliant! Each of the characters is captivating, full of sass and defiance. We never know if someone will bully, steal, cheat, tell a fib, or if slobbery will cause a drift. However, one thing is sure: a secret will keep you on the edge of your seat. The boys encounter vandalism, and it's a bummer as they embark on an unexpected journey. The story is a peculiar tale that will keep you turning pages until you've figured it all out. Author Benjamin Ryan creates a whimsical world filled with thrilling suspense, giving the readers invaluable lessons in every word. It is thought-provoking and exciting fun. The plot twists will have you clutching your pearls. Each character is well-developed; the dialogue is phenomenal. I adore this story and will re-read it because it was so much fun. I highly recommend this masterfully written story, and I will keep watch for whatever Ryan publishes.
Madam Eldridge's Home for Unruly Boys is brilliant! Each of the characters is captivating, full of sass and defiance. We never know if someone will bully, steal, cheat, tell a fib, or if slobbery will cause a drift. However, one thing is sure: a secret will keep you on the edge of your seat. The boys encounter vandalism, and it's a bummer as they embark on an unexpected journey. The story is a peculiar tale that will keep you turning pages until you've figured it all out. Author Benjamin Ryan creates a whimsical world filled with thrilling suspense, giving the readers invaluable lessons in every word. It is thought-provoking and exciting fun. The plot twists will have you clutching your pearls. Each character is well-developed; the dialogue is phenomenal. I adore this story and will re-read it because it was so much fun. I highly recommend this masterfully written story, and I will keep watch for whatever Ryan publishes.
July 7, 2025
Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is an absolute gem of a book! It hooked me in from the very first page and didn't let go. It is a captivating and heartfelt novel that probably deserves to have finished even higher than it did in BBNYA (The Book Bloggers Novel of the year Award - where it was a finalist).
The story follows a group of misfit boys—Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret—as they navigate the mysteries of the enigmatic Wayward Home. Ryan masterfully weaves a tale of friendship, self-discovery, and confronting personal demons, all wrapped in a magical, slightly eerie atmosphere that keeps you hooked from start to finish.
The characters are richly developed, each with distinct quirks and struggles that make their journey relatable and deeply moving. The pacing is perfect, balancing moments of humor, suspense, and emotional depth, while the vivid prose brings the setting to life. I can't recommend this one enough!
The story follows a group of misfit boys—Fibbsy, Defiance, Slob, and Secret—as they navigate the mysteries of the enigmatic Wayward Home. Ryan masterfully weaves a tale of friendship, self-discovery, and confronting personal demons, all wrapped in a magical, slightly eerie atmosphere that keeps you hooked from start to finish.
The characters are richly developed, each with distinct quirks and struggles that make their journey relatable and deeply moving. The pacing is perfect, balancing moments of humor, suspense, and emotional depth, while the vivid prose brings the setting to life. I can't recommend this one enough!
April 2, 2024
I thought the book was okay. The story could have used a bit more tightening up as far as the editing was concerned. I found myself questioning what part of the country this book was supposedly set in because the tone and dialogue of the characters did not feel authentic to the natural speech patterns of teenagers from North America.
Ryan tells an intriguing story of 10 boys spending 8 days at a home for unruly boys. The story is told from the 3rd person omniscient perspective, and although I have read books written from this viewpoint, something about the way the narrative introduces this all-knowing perspective was slightly off-putting.
But all in all, if the author were to do another pass on the editing, I would not have any problem recommending this novel.
Ryan tells an intriguing story of 10 boys spending 8 days at a home for unruly boys. The story is told from the 3rd person omniscient perspective, and although I have read books written from this viewpoint, something about the way the narrative introduces this all-knowing perspective was slightly off-putting.
But all in all, if the author were to do another pass on the editing, I would not have any problem recommending this novel.
July 6, 2024
I first saw this novel on Twitter and had to check it out. It features a group of juvenile delinquents sent to Madame Eldridge's program to "cure" them. They are named by their "faults"--Fibbsy, Stealer, Slob, etc.--instead of by their proper names. It's a mystery, fantasy, time-travel, and humorous novel. If you like the magical items in "Harry Potter," you'll like this novel. If you like the juvenile delinquents in "Holes," you'll like this novel. Heck, if you liked "Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children," you'll like this. I read it in less than 24-hours and was hooked the whole time. The narration style of third person omniscient is done EXTREMELY WELL!!!
November 3, 2024
This is a fun, fantastical tale of innocence, growing up, and friendship. It's a coming-of-age story about facing your faults, overcoming them, and trusting others to do the same. It is whimsical and at times terrifying. It is written with a great deal of love, joy, and empathy for children dealing with things they don't necessarily understood. Children who are starved for friendship and whoa re endlessly curious. There is evil here and a whole lot of good. This is a wonderful story for all ages and one that should be celebrated.
Did it have to end on that cliffhanger though? I want to know what happens next!! That, in itself, is the mark of a great storyteller and a well-told story.
Did it have to end on that cliffhanger though? I want to know what happens next!! That, in itself, is the mark of a great storyteller and a well-told story.
July 11, 2025
Madame Eldridge's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys captivated me. It really did. Its heartwarming novel that deserves every bit of praise! The story weaves a perfect blend of mystery, humor, and heartfelt moments, set in the delightfully eccentric world of Madame Eldridge’s unconventional home. The author’s writing is both witty and poignant, he paints a vivid picture of the home’s quirky charm while exploring deeper themes of belonging and redemption. Each chapter unfolds with surprises that kept me hooked. I'd highly recommend it, one of the best indie books around and I'd love to see it get more exposure.
July 14, 2025
Another awesome novel discovered thanks to BBNYA and the Writereads!
This is such an emotional rollercoaster with really brilliant characters. Elliot, nicknamed Fibbsy for his compulsive lying, is sent to a mysterious Victorian house in Virginia’s backwoods to confront his flaws alongside other troubled boys like Stealer and Defiance. Madame Eldridge’s quirky yet sinister program, complete with bewitched artifacts and a forbidden third-floor room, sets the stage for a thrilling mystery. The fast-paced plot, rich with time-travel twists and magical realism, kept me hooked from start to finish!
This is such an emotional rollercoaster with really brilliant characters. Elliot, nicknamed Fibbsy for his compulsive lying, is sent to a mysterious Victorian house in Virginia’s backwoods to confront his flaws alongside other troubled boys like Stealer and Defiance. Madame Eldridge’s quirky yet sinister program, complete with bewitched artifacts and a forbidden third-floor room, sets the stage for a thrilling mystery. The fast-paced plot, rich with time-travel twists and magical realism, kept me hooked from start to finish!
August 9, 2023
Ben has woven an enthralling and magical world where nothing is quite like it seems. The plot is skilfully crafted with plenty of twists and turns that change your perspective just when you think you have everything figured out. It also has some moral values added in it that everyone benefits from and is based upon those who are not normally candidates for friendship dealing with their issues and learning to be friends, help and support each other to achieve a common goal.
I’ve loved reading this book and sincerely hope that there will be more to come.’
I’ve loved reading this book and sincerely hope that there will be more to come.’
December 5, 2024
Madame Eldrige's Wayward Home for Unruly Boys is a perfectly enjoyable story about a group of boys, each with his own specific problem, for which they are named after in the book (for instance Cheater, Defiance, Slob and Bully). Their goal is to work on their problem with the guidance of Madame Eldrige, but they are met with far more mysterious circumstances than they were expecting.
I very much enjoyed the experience that was this story, and am looking forward to any sequel that might be forthcoming in the future.
I very much enjoyed the experience that was this story, and am looking forward to any sequel that might be forthcoming in the future.
April 5, 2024
What a fun book! It reminds me of David Lubar's Hidden Talents.
Ten boys, sent to an isolated and mysterious mansion to be rehabilitated in one week, find that there is more going on than anyone knew. A bit of the supernatural, a lot of interesting characters, subterfuge, and one final revelation that screams there will be a sequel. The ten boys are authentic and their gradual change over one week are believable. The action is fast-paced and the story is compelling.
Ten boys, sent to an isolated and mysterious mansion to be rehabilitated in one week, find that there is more going on than anyone knew. A bit of the supernatural, a lot of interesting characters, subterfuge, and one final revelation that screams there will be a sequel. The ten boys are authentic and their gradual change over one week are believable. The action is fast-paced and the story is compelling.
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