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3.5* rounded up to 4*. This will be a review of Odd Spirits, published October 8th, 2024, from the perspective of someone who has also read Odd Spirits, published August 7th, 2018. There is a distinct difference between the two editions, though both share this singular Goodreads listing.
Odd Spirits 2.0 is a novella predating the events of Evocation, the first book in the Summoner's Circle series. It follows the young marriage of Rhys and Moira, two of our three characters from Evocation, as they deal with emotional and supernatural difficulties in their relationship, with David, the third character of Evocation, popping up to both help and hinder them simultaneously.
This novella is very character driven, despite being centered around a mystery plot, and features much more of Rhys and Moira than David. Moira and Rhys are having marital issues--- something is slinking around the house, rotting food and messing with the plumbing and giving Moira a great deal of anxiety, but neither of them are willing to admit that something might be wrong, trying their best to ignore both the emotional cracks in their relationship and the cracks in the foundation of their home.
We also get flashbacks to the first couple of times Moira met Rhys, where they fell in love and their first kiss, a headstrong, no-nonsense kind of country witch crossing paths with a strict, stringent pencil pusher magician. Though originally rocky, both Moira and Rhys fall quickly in love with each other and we see the result being their spur-of-the-moment marriage.
Though it is clear that both of these people love each other, I found myself consistently annoyed by the fact that they wouldn't talk to each other and actually didn't seem to *like* each other all that much. Rhys is a workaholic who ignores his wife until she literally barges into his office after being supernaturally attacked. Moira is confrontational in the extreme with Rhys's ex, but refuses to actually confront and speak to Rhys himself and gives the silent treatment and finds ways to avoid him. Both of them refuse to acknowledge that there is literally SO OBVIOUSLY some sort of malicious entity causing chaos in their lives, and it drove me nuts. I almost wish something bad had happened to one or both of them, to make them realize just how horribly they were handling the situation.
When David is invited to come and figure out what is haunting their home, Moira is combative and rude in the extreme, and David is just as cruel and egotistical as he is in Evocation. Rhys is, as usual, a mess and does the wrong thing several times, from fumbling all over his words when a photograph of him and David appears in their bedroom, to snapping at both of his paramores in front of the members of the magical society.
In the end, David is kicked out, after risking his life to try to help get to the bottom of things, and Moira and Rhys have their emotional explosion at each other. Their long-awaited overflow of communication shows just how little the two are really in tune with each other and how much they are blind to the realities of how the other feels. And this conversation leads to Rhys finally solving their supernatural entity mystery, and saving the day with Moira, saving their marriage and relationship in the process.
So, overall, not as good as Evocation. I think David has the kind of leading character energy that Rhys lacks in every way, and having too little of him in the book really hinders it when you know how closely entwined these three individuals are going to be. The frankly stupid communication issues between Rhys and Moira drove me up a wall and I disliked Rhys more than I already did by the ending.
To touch on the subject of the biphobia present in Odd Spirits 1.0--- where Moira is presented as a heteronormative-upholding country gal--- it is not present overtly in Odd Spirits 2.0. Here is the line from 1.0:
“God, fine! I don’t like that you’re bisexual. I never have.” She continues; “Go ahead, crucify me.” "But I can’t change the way I feel. I’m just so terrified you’re going to wake up one day and decide you don’t want me anymore, because there are certain things I just can’t give you…”
And further; "Where I grew up you were either one or the other, and I know you’ve tried to explain this to me, but I just don’t understand. And then you go off and spend all this time with these men and I’m not allowed to come, and then I realize that you’ve known David forever and that you two to go out…”
And finally; “...I just don’t like the way he treats you and I don’t like how much you let him get away with, and yeah, if I had my way you would never see him again and maybe that makes me a controlling hellbitch but...Rhys, are you listening to me?”
(After which point Rhys offers HER an apology). This is very clearly a character expressing common biphobic sentiments. Below I will share the dialogue that Odd Spirits 2.0 has for that same scene.
“I don’t know if we can do this, Rhys. We’re just different people, and no matter how hard we try, we can never seem to build real trust with each other. Maybe we should take a step back and reevaluate. I just… I don’t know. That’s it."
“Sometimes, I wonder what my life would be like if we hadn’t gotten married so young,” “I know that makes me wicked, and I wish I could just be a better wife. But there’s something wrong, inside me. I’m sorry it took me this long to tell you.”
“When I met you, I thought, there he is, that’s the person I’ve been waiting for. But I see you with David and the other guys from the Society and it’s like looking at a stranger. It’s like I don’t know you at all, and I wonder how well you know me, at the end of the day. There are parts of your inner world I just can’t access, and there are things about me you’ll never understand. I don’t know if love is enough to make up for that. I really hope it is, Rhys. I pray for that every day. But I just don’t know.”
So, Odd Spirits 2.0 clearly axed the plot line of Moira being biphobic in exchange for her being insecure and thinking she's wicked for having insecurities. I really just don't know if this is the way to change what was already problematic? My thoughts on this are muddled. But there are the exact quotations, laid out, since 2.0 has to share a review pool with 1.0.
Also, to speak on the quality of the book, I can see why it was re-edited beyond the removal of the biphobia. 1.0 was a mess of clunky descriptions, awkward dialogue, and careless references. It was definitely and clearly a labor of love by the author, but 2.0 shows just how much they have grown and improved as a writer. The prose is very pretty, the descriptions have much more Creepy Cozy Vibe™, and the dialogue has been worked over to sound more natural for the two protagonists. I would like to end off by sharing this final comparison;
From 1.0; "Rhys had shoved the book into a shoebox under his bed where he kept a pack of menthol Camels and a copy of Brokeback Mountain."
From 2.0; "Rhys had shoved the book into a shoebox on the top shelf of his closet where he kept a pack of menthol Camels and his beat-up Hellblazer comics."
If you know me you'll know that John Constantine is one of my favourite characters of all time and I clocked Evocation as having a Hellblazer vibe before I even got my claws on the ARC of it, and being proven right by the text itself is so nice. And the cherry on top is that the Hellblazer comics replace a copy of *BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN,* of all things. Thanks, Gibson. That made me laugh.
Overall, Odd Spirits 2.0 is a vast improvement in quality to the original, but still features some problems with the protagonists and characterization. While it is a good novella to pick up for the fall vibes, I would only recommend reading it if you read AND enjoyed Evocation.