Dude, you gotta let someone give your drafts a once over before you publish. The Savage Sage series is a great story and I look forward to every book that comes out. It could easily be right up there with The Primal Hunter series, but all the little grammar errors, the left out words, the notes from your rough drafts that don't get left in- it totally wrecks the overall quality. It's not even a big task, ya just need someone to give it proof read when you're done. I'm positive anyone of your fans, myself included, would be happy to oblige and do it just to get a chance to read the next book early.
This series is a perfect example of: keep it simple. There are certainly complex themes/characters/plots, but what makes this LITRPG so refreshing is it really is fairly simple. Zane isn’t playing 4D mental chess, he’s playing checkers and absolutely crushing it.
If you’re looking for something super impactful and world shattering, this is not the series for you. Want a series where the MC is just absolutely bodying his opponents in hand to hand combat with some fun slice of life along the way? This is for you!
I do think it’s beginning to suffer the same thing most LITRPGS suffer - the world expansion is a lot all at once and the decades long meditation montage continues. Good lord lol.
Finally.. Love the series but this one he finally added a deeper emotional later which I was waiting for.... Beautiful.. Highly recommend JD Glasscock Author of the Series Blood Brothers, Nocturne and Warborn
Zane has less intelligence with each book. The last book bothered me quite a bit when he did not keep up with the red pagoda and paid a price. This book has Zane so stupid that the original Hulk looks smart. I am done with this author.
Half of this book was as good as the previous installments. . .
. . .apologies to the author, but the rest was overly fanciful, to the point of incredulity, and truly gave demons too much uncharacteristic rationale and strategic ingenuity. We were a little disappointed. Demons are NOT known to be so humanistic. We do get the intent; however, a better probability regarding the demons' leadership in technical and battle sense would've sold that plot twist. They aren't patient or in possession of any of the virtuous characteristics either, to further support why we didn't favor the theme & events of the plotlines.
The author fashioned a fantastical world crisis that I couldn't get into, and which I spent thirty minutes max skimming as a result. Great detailing and imaginative concocting, but we kinda already had trouble swallowing the intimate scenes between R & Z. (Not intimacy so much as how corny Reina always appeared, repetitively). Anyway, Zane is amazing, and sells the series anyway. Three stars. This author is truly a creative savant.
Has the writing changed? No. Has the story changed? no. Has it become repetitive drivel? yes. The only thing semi, I do me semi interesting was Jin. But even that turned into more of the same.
Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level. Me smash. Me hurt. Me level.
Oh look! He smash. He hurt. He level.He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level. He smash. He hurt. He level.
At this point I'm willing to call a spade a spade. This is the most cynical, trend chasing series written by the most talentless author the litrpg genre has been cursed with.
The entirety of the combat is the same fight ad nauseum. The MC has the crap beaten out of him, the author overuses the word "broken" and claims "every bone in his body is broken" which doesn't make any sense physically, but whatever. Then the audience thinks he's done and does the "oh please mr hero stand up" routine, because there's always an audience, otherwise we'd think the fight is super lame actually, the author is talentless you'll recall. He can't actually write combat so we need to have the peanut gallery tell us it's super cool for real. Then the MC does some silly one shot thing and the book moves on after giving the MC meaningless powerups that won't change a single thing in the next fight.
Maybe this is a strange amount of vitriol to direct at a 5th book in a series, but I genuinely think this series is a cancer on the genre. Everything from the gobbledygook cultivation to the impeccably perfect girlfriend character the MC bones for levels is taken straight from the list of things wrong with LitRPG. If I wanted to prove to someone that literature is doomed, I would show them this series.
Picking this up on Audible was the right call... because I enjoy C J Gilliland and the price was right, also 'cause reading the last book had been awhile and I was more than happy to let Gilliland to reacquaint me to the characters and storyline. But still just over 200 pages into the story Christian J Gilliland hasn't been able to capture my attention. As Zane has powered himself off the pages and I've lost my ability to believe anything Zane is doing. He laughably fights without even challenging himself and powers-up anyway, Yawn! Zane is no longer a person, he's a characatur. Time will tell if I'll be able to power through this book... I can't, I just can't! I tried I really did! But no! DNF'd
Loved reading the continuation of Zane’s journey. I enjoy the writing style that sounds almost like a sports commentator. Also appreciate that despite how strong Zane is and that he always pulls through, it still takes a lot of effort and pain to get there. Excited for the next one!
Basically, if you like the first books, you'll love this one. Is more grind more power more growth. Zane is a force on to his own. In this book he keeps completing all of his laws and marching towards the next big milestone. Ultimately, though, it doesn't show on the stat sheet, he is a law unto himself.
Zane is an interesting MC and I really enjoy his adventures!
As reality prepares to assault this realm, Zane and the rest of Earth’s strongest prepare for the fight to protect their planet. Soon a Great War will begin again against the Monsters. Zane and friends all need to prepare and grow stronger. Follow along as Zane does that and so much more!
I miss the days of editors. Grammar and spelling errors. It’s not that hard to run a spell check and grammar check. They would have EASILY found the errors contained.
Okay story, lots of filler. Earlier books were much better than this one.
Yeah this one was really awesome! I love these books they are just great. I liked the places this story took me to and all the things Zane did! Start with book one and enjoy the journey!
Excellent book I love this series all characters and details are amazing I never feel the need to skim through even the slow parts are interesting I look forward to reading the next book
That was a great book, although i wish they would stop dragging us along for so many books… LOL. Seriously though, I look forward to seeing what they do next.
The book had a good beginning but just puffed up in filler. I don't get it it brought up some nonsense stuff filling it with tr dream reality and just skimmed past important parts of the book. Very disappointing
Your editing was absolutely atrocious. Wrong words, misspelled words, wrong punctuation. I like the story, but I would spend a little more time proof readind.
Very exciting battles, although I couldn’t help but feel like we’ve had a bit too many training montages in the past few books? That aside, it’s all you would expect from this series, with a good mixture of action, humour, and Zane being his usual larger-than-life self. I am certainly very hyped to read book 6.