Plot. Hero and heroine are high school sweethearts and together for two years. He dumps her because he feels he’s not good enough. He enrolls in the Army. She meets a nice guy and falls in love with him, gets married and has three kids with him. 15 years later she’s a widow and goes back to her hometown, where the hero lives. She found out her latest ONS hubby had a second family, complete with two kids. The hero now wants her back. He’s the pi who helps her discover the truth.
So, why the one star.
- the book is definitely rushed. There are loopholes, loose ends, inconsistencies.
- instead of taking care of those loose ends the author decided to focus on new and unnecessary drama: the heroine finds out her late hubby had another family with two kids, for the last ten years, but it stops there. Who is the ow, did she know he had another family? Do these people want to met her or their half sibling? Was there any mention of them in his will, and who had the inheritance. I mean, if you decide to write such a great twist, you cannot abandon it. Apparently the heroine was the only one not to know about his second family, all his friends and relative knew about it. The heroine doesn’t want to know anything else. So we don’t know anything more than the plain facts. Really? Instead, the author makes up a new drama with some ex high school guy that has become an alcoholic and kidnaps the heroine just because. Unnecessary and ott.
- loopholes. The heroine and the hero were a couple for two years, he dumps her and leaves her heartbroken. There’s no other mention of it. No flashback, no reconstruction of the scene, nothing, so we don’t know how it was, why he thought that, what he told her, how it really went.
- the reasons for the hero dumping the heroine were ridiculous. He didn’t think he was worthy of her. Apparently he thought he was worthy of plenty of ow though, since he , as a friend said, went through women as if they were handkerchiefs. His latest gf is still around and hoping he will take her back, when the heroine comes back.
- he never said he went away thinking to one day come back and marry the heroine. He let her go for good.
- the heroine had a marriage with three children, which I appreciate, and she loved her husband. I am very disappointed that the author couldn’t for once let the heroine, who was jilted by the hero, have a nice man who treated her well. She had to spoil it all and make him worse than a cheater. This is something that was not only unnecessary for the story but it made it all unbalanced. Since the heroine is the one wronged by the hero, she at least should have had some compensation in the form of a good husband. There’s no balance here, it’s all on the hero’s side. So no,I don’t accept it, stop this ugly double standard.
- the hero has had a very good life, as he well says, and here the author is the one to rain on her parade since all his friends and family kept telling the heroine that he only lived half a life, meaning he regretted what he did and never moved on. The hero himself tells the heroine that he was happy and had all he wanted, friends, relatives, job and he doesn’t say but we know, all the women he wanted. So it was even more wrong and unfair. He should at least have pined for the heroine but he didn’t, so it makes sense that he left the heroine because he didn’t want her, dot.
- the whole thing it’s me not you is never ever right and always leaves readers with a bittersweet taste. I don’t care if it was the hero who didn’t feel he was enough for the heroine, what matters is that he let her go.
- he never says he regretted losing her and wasting 20 years without her. Apparently he didn’t want to stay with her. This was also so very wrong. Do author really think that a reader can’t realize this kind of things? He never apologized for hurting her, never said, if I could go back I’d never do what I did, I realized very soon I made a mistake. No, nothing. So how are we supposed to believe he always loved her? Because he had a fuggin tattoo on his pecs? Really? Are we 12?
- so, basically, the hero enjoyed his life a lot, was happy, had a lot of women he enjoyed having sex with and spending date time with while the heroine now will have the honor of washing his dirty socks and cooking his meals, so how cannot we happy? Hurrah. Not. At least I have the meager satisfaction to know he doesn’t t have children with her and he will have to raise her three kids she had with another man one of whose is the copycat of his father. Little joys in life.