The Wilderness by Angela Flournoy
★★☆☆☆
Liminal, Muted, Weightless
“Just be good! Stop meditating on it”
The wilderness is often the space of lostness - where hope is deferred and the heart can grow sick. Flournoy’s The Wilderness introduces us to five women - Desiree, Danielle, Nakia, January, and Monique - and tells us they are friends. Over roughly twenty years, across both coasts of America, we see scattered moments from their lives. The storytelling feels sparse, elusive, slightly frustrating, and occasionally sparingly beautiful - like a wilderness experience itself. A little manna here and there, but rarely enough.
What I Loved
The first chapter, “You Can’t Pronounce It,” is extraordinary.
I almost wish it existed alone as its own short story. It’s worth the price of the entire book - genuinely Pulitzer-worthy. In it, we meet a young and exhausted Desiree leading her grandfather through Europe toward his planned death. The imagery is gorgeous. Flournoy does a very risky thing with characterization in this chapter - almost absurdist at times - yet it works. It sets a tone I wish the rest of the book sustained. And the way it ends, with Desiree falling into a surreal dream and waking up to her grandfather’s death while still on the journey to said planned death?… stunning.
I also appreciate the attempt to expand the canon of “women’s stories” and, more specifically, “sad girl lit fic.”
Writers like Coco Mellors (Blue Sisters), Ottessa Moshfegh (My Year of Rest and Relaxation), and recently Chimamanda Adichie (Dream Count) define this space - and it’s refreshing to see Black women, who are so often stereotyped as “mono-emotional,” enter that lineage. Wilderness doesn’t completely achieve this, but it gestures toward a version of it that could have been great.
There are tender, beautiful moments sprinkled throughout.
The LA vs. New York passage is one of the most striking in the book:
“She wants to tell him that sometimes sunshine can be cruel. That cloudy days are a reprieve, and the problem with LA, and maybe even the whole Southwest, is that inevitably the light breaks through, makes the day the same as all others, even when it has no right to such uniformity. Some days feel dark and the sky should allow for this, but it rarely does out there. She’d needed more empathetic weather, she wants to say. I love LA but I don’t like it very much, she wants to say.”
Lines like this reminded me why I kept going.
Where It Falters
Catching a Vibe
The mood shifts after chapter one are destabilizing. Also the mood shifts almost from chapter to chapter. Imagine watching Friends and suddenly Phoebe gets attacked by a vampire. That’s the kind of genre wobble happening here. I couldn’t tell if Flournoy wanted contemporary fiction or a more literary mode. And yes - genres exist for a reason. Also without spoilers - something happens to one of the main characters at the end that was just senseless. It felt unearned and didn’t contribute anything to the emotional arc or pathos of the story as a whole.
For a book about friendship, the friendship is almost entirely missing.
We never see these women meet for the first time. We never see how they formed their bond- what life events pushed them together? What the strength of their friendship was? We never also see that tested in drastic ways. Their relationship feels less like friends and more like sisters who low-key don’t like each other. Honestly, calling them sisters would’ve served the book better.
The time-jumping doesn’t help.
It made the story feel thin instead of layered. I recently read God of the Woods by Liz Moore-also heavy on time shifts - and while that one was annoying for other reasons, at least the device served the story. Here,it doesn’t.
The characters felt flat.
The men are one-dimensional - they show up only to receive judgment. They’re declared bad but rarely shown to be bad. And yes, we all know men ain’t shit, but literature still requires nuance so readers can reach that conclusion themselves.
The women don’t grow either. By the end, I genuinely wondered if I’d accidentally skipped chapters, because I had unanswered questions about multiple characters. Also I didn’t like how January, one of the more nuanced women seemed to be demonized by the other women.
Final Thoughts
I wanted to love Wilderness. Instead, I persevered through it. There are delights, but I honestly can’t think of anyone in my life who would enjoy it. The restrained prose doesn’t match what the book is trying to portray, and it tries to take on so much -social justice, assisted suicide, climate change, pornography, women’s bodies, food insecurity, depression, intimacy avoidance in relationships, homelessness, inequality -but never deeply explores any of it.
Liminal, muted, weightless captures the essence of this book for me because the story constantly drifts a lot in the in-between - between genres, timelines, and emotional arcs while never fully grounding me as a reader. Its tone is muted, with restrained prose and characters who rarely reveal depth or evolution, keeping the emotional register low. And despite the book’s ambitions and scattered themes, it all feels weightless, with events (including the ending) landing without impact or resonance.
In the end, The Wilderness feels dry, sparse, and arid - like an actual wilderness. A lot of calisthenics, but not much revelation. It did not say or do anything new.