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In Spite of All: A Love Unbroken: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
What if Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy had met years before their fateful encounter in Meryton?
At sixteen, Elizabeth encounters the young master of Pemberley, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Sparks fly between the two, and despite their youth, Darcy proposes marriage. However, misunderstandings tore their blossoming love apart, each believing the other abandoned them.
Years later, they meet once more at the Meryton assembly. Quickly realising that lies and deceit have kept them apart, Darcy and Elizabeth refuse to let anything stand between them again and elope to Scotland that very night.
The news of their elopement throws both families into turmoil. Can Elizabeth and Darcy withstand the fallout from their impulsive decision, or will the pressures of society and family tear them apart once more? Join them as they fight for their love, facing scandal, opposition, and the weight of past betrayals in this daring reimagining of their timeless romance.
At sixteen, Elizabeth encounters the young master of Pemberley, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Sparks fly between the two, and despite their youth, Darcy proposes marriage. However, misunderstandings tore their blossoming love apart, each believing the other abandoned them.
Years later, they meet once more at the Meryton assembly. Quickly realising that lies and deceit have kept them apart, Darcy and Elizabeth refuse to let anything stand between them again and elope to Scotland that very night.
The news of their elopement throws both families into turmoil. Can Elizabeth and Darcy withstand the fallout from their impulsive decision, or will the pressures of society and family tear them apart once more? Join them as they fight for their love, facing scandal, opposition, and the weight of past betrayals in this daring reimagining of their timeless romance.
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January 31, 2025
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars. I have read and enjoyed a number of this author's Pride and Prejudice Variations.
This story (in MHO) has two parts. In the first we have Elizabeth and Darcy finding each other at the Meryton Assembly, after an unexplained four year separation. They each lived those years still in love with each other and had become engaged all those years ago. They don't exchange placing blame but do elope that night. We then have quite the story as to who and why this separation happened. We also read of some attempts to disrupt their lives further.
As the story develops we now find ourselves reading about other family members and their roles, their lives and tragedies. Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock have major crisis. (I am not even going to hint at what those detail and their outcomes.) The Colonel has a major part. Jane and Bingley do not have their romance although it is again Netherfield at which Darcy was staying when he met Elizabeth at that assembly.
Mr. Bennet has some of the same characteristics but his role is not at all in support of his favorite daughter, much less any other member of his own family. Anne de Bourgh's part in the story was a delight to read. The other Bennet sisters have parts although not as in canon. And as usual the Gardiners are a support when trouble erupts.
ODC, after finally marrying, don't really have all those misunderstandings as in canon. We get to read of a close and romantic relationship there. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
This story (in MHO) has two parts. In the first we have Elizabeth and Darcy finding each other at the Meryton Assembly, after an unexplained four year separation. They each lived those years still in love with each other and had become engaged all those years ago. They don't exchange placing blame but do elope that night. We then have quite the story as to who and why this separation happened. We also read of some attempts to disrupt their lives further.
As the story develops we now find ourselves reading about other family members and their roles, their lives and tragedies. Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock have major crisis. (I am not even going to hint at what those detail and their outcomes.) The Colonel has a major part. Jane and Bingley do not have their romance although it is again Netherfield at which Darcy was staying when he met Elizabeth at that assembly.
Mr. Bennet has some of the same characteristics but his role is not at all in support of his favorite daughter, much less any other member of his own family. Anne de Bourgh's part in the story was a delight to read. The other Bennet sisters have parts although not as in canon. And as usual the Gardiners are a support when trouble erupts.
ODC, after finally marrying, don't really have all those misunderstandings as in canon. We get to read of a close and romantic relationship there. I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
March 17, 2025
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: Mature: There are several scenes with descriptions of a mature nature. Adult themes were discussed. Violence and the shocking death of several characters were described. There were kidnapping attempts, shots fired, coaches held up, murder, assault, and a bit of larceny with intent to defraud.
>>Angst Level: It was high at times, but help was always nearby.
>>Cover Art: When I first saw the cover, I was surprised at how young the models were. As I read, I discovered that the cover was an excellent choice- well done.
>>Source: ARC via Bookfunnel [1-1-25] I volunteered to leave a review. That is a long story at 52 chapters plus an epilogue. There were several HEA threads to follow, and each story was delightful. The villains were insidious and insane. What else would explain their evil machinations? Borrowed from KU 3-15-25: I have read this numerous times as it posted on the forums. [4.5 stars]
>>Trope: NSN Lord Matlock, Lady Catherine, and everyone… seriously, was no one a good person? Our dear couple had a hard time of it. Separated for several years due to lies, manipulation, greed, and outright cruelty, and yet, ODC still managed to get together. A different outcome for Jane and Anne de Bourgh.
I loved this story. I have read it numerous times and enjoy the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. They fell in love early and had to overcome a multitude of evil machinations thrown at them by their families. Darcy's entire family was horrible, bordering on insane. There was danger at every turn of the page. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth devise plans to circumvent their relatives was fun. I excluded Georgiana, Richard, and Anne de Bourgh. There were several threads to follow that led to a happy ever after for our couples. Jane managed to find happiness away from the Bingley siblings. Caroline made a huge blunder that was hilarious, and it squashed her aspirations for the higher circles.
>>Rating: Mature: There are several scenes with descriptions of a mature nature. Adult themes were discussed. Violence and the shocking death of several characters were described. There were kidnapping attempts, shots fired, coaches held up, murder, assault, and a bit of larceny with intent to defraud.
>>Angst Level: It was high at times, but help was always nearby.
>>Cover Art: When I first saw the cover, I was surprised at how young the models were. As I read, I discovered that the cover was an excellent choice- well done.
>>Source: ARC via Bookfunnel [1-1-25] I volunteered to leave a review. That is a long story at 52 chapters plus an epilogue. There were several HEA threads to follow, and each story was delightful. The villains were insidious and insane. What else would explain their evil machinations? Borrowed from KU 3-15-25: I have read this numerous times as it posted on the forums. [4.5 stars]
>>Trope: NSN Lord Matlock, Lady Catherine, and everyone… seriously, was no one a good person? Our dear couple had a hard time of it. Separated for several years due to lies, manipulation, greed, and outright cruelty, and yet, ODC still managed to get together. A different outcome for Jane and Anne de Bourgh.
I loved this story. I have read it numerous times and enjoy the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy. They fell in love early and had to overcome a multitude of evil machinations thrown at them by their families. Darcy's entire family was horrible, bordering on insane. There was danger at every turn of the page. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth devise plans to circumvent their relatives was fun. I excluded Georgiana, Richard, and Anne de Bourgh. There were several threads to follow that led to a happy ever after for our couples. Jane managed to find happiness away from the Bingley siblings. Caroline made a huge blunder that was hilarious, and it squashed her aspirations for the higher circles.
January 20, 2025
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At the Meryton Assembly, Elizabeth Bennet is shocked to meet Fitzwilliam Darcy (again) four years after he broke her heart. A few hours later, they elope!
By the beginning of Chapter two, they are on their way to Scotland.
A flashback shows Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam meeting in Derbyshire, falling in love and becoming betrothed. Surely, her father will approve such a good match?
Unfortunately, this Mr Bennet is secretive, devious and thoroughly unreasonable.
This book contains a labyrinthine plot, betrayal, threat of kidnapping, love and passion. It keeps you on the edge of your seat to the end.
Excellent!
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
At the Meryton Assembly, Elizabeth Bennet is shocked to meet Fitzwilliam Darcy (again) four years after he broke her heart. A few hours later, they elope!
By the beginning of Chapter two, they are on their way to Scotland.
A flashback shows Elizabeth and Fitzwilliam meeting in Derbyshire, falling in love and becoming betrothed. Surely, her father will approve such a good match?
Unfortunately, this Mr Bennet is secretive, devious and thoroughly unreasonable.
This book contains a labyrinthine plot, betrayal, threat of kidnapping, love and passion. It keeps you on the edge of your seat to the end.
Excellent!
I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
February 24, 2025
This was a captivating and well written Pride and Prejudice variation. I really enjoyed how uniquely refreshing this story was told. It was most entertaining and enjoyable. I highly recommend reading!
January 20, 2025
I was lucky enough to receive an ARC (Advanced Reader Copy) of this newest release by Melissa Anne and will happily leave a review.
This story starts out with Elizabeth and Darcy meeting 4 years prior to the Assembly Dance to the original Pride & Prejudice. They fell in love and became engaged at that time. They are both under the wrong impression of what broke them up, but they quickly discover the misunderstandings and elope.
The remaining part of the story is trying to figure out who and why they were separated and who they can truly trust in their lives.
This was a unique twist on the P&P variation and I really enjoyed the story. Congratulations on a job well done!
This story starts out with Elizabeth and Darcy meeting 4 years prior to the Assembly Dance to the original Pride & Prejudice. They fell in love and became engaged at that time. They are both under the wrong impression of what broke them up, but they quickly discover the misunderstandings and elope.
The remaining part of the story is trying to figure out who and why they were separated and who they can truly trust in their lives.
This was a unique twist on the P&P variation and I really enjoyed the story. Congratulations on a job well done!
January 21, 2025
This is a wonderful page-turner! I really enjoy stories where Darcy and Elizabeth get together early and battle any obstacles as a pair. This book swiftly clarifies the misunderstandings that have been keeping them apart, and they embark on their journey together. The story delves into the past to establish the background and context of ODC's relationship. With that history as a foundation, I was drawn into the search for the villains.
I received this book as an ARC and am writing this review voluntarily.
I received this book as an ARC and am writing this review voluntarily.
January 23, 2025
I was lucky enough to receive this book as an ARC from Melissa and I am happily leaving my review for her here.
I very much enjoy JAFF stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are married and of one mind working together to solve a mystery or stop people from destroying their marriage or the Darcy legacy.
This one was no exception.
It was a confusing start but once it got moving, it went.
There were a few repetitive parts but they were easily overlooked.
I enjoyed the use of Wickham as the "heavy" as well as Lady Catherine and Lord Fitzwilliam being so diabolical.
The interactions between Darcy and Fitzwilliam were just classic. The cousins were so well written that I enjoyed their parts most of all. Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions were pure romance and they were just so lovely to read.
I gave it the four stars for the confusing beginning and the repetitiveness of several parts. Other than that, this was a wonderful story.
I very much enjoy JAFF stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are married and of one mind working together to solve a mystery or stop people from destroying their marriage or the Darcy legacy.
This one was no exception.
It was a confusing start but once it got moving, it went.
There were a few repetitive parts but they were easily overlooked.
I enjoyed the use of Wickham as the "heavy" as well as Lady Catherine and Lord Fitzwilliam being so diabolical.
The interactions between Darcy and Fitzwilliam were just classic. The cousins were so well written that I enjoyed their parts most of all. Darcy and Elizabeth's interactions were pure romance and they were just so lovely to read.
I gave it the four stars for the confusing beginning and the repetitiveness of several parts. Other than that, this was a wonderful story.
January 28, 2025
In the summer of 1807 Elizabeth visits Lambton with her aunt Gardiner. There she encounters the young Master Darcy and his sister Georgiana. She quickly becomes friends with both but it is the gentleman that captures her heart. As he feels the same he asks his love for her hand in marriage at the end of her stay and is accepted.
Four years later Elizabeth is heartbroken because Darcy never arrived in Hertfordshire to ask for her father's permission to marry. When she unexpectedly encounters Darcy at an Assembly all feelings are immediately back. She learns that Darcy was told she was already engaged whereas her father told her that Darcy never came to ask for her hand. Darcy and Elizabeth decide that they will no-one ever again allow to come between them therefore they elope to Scotland immediately.
Their elopement creates a scandal, throwing both families in a turmoil. Will they defy the scandal or will their impulsive decision threaten their happiness? Or are there even greater machinations at work than they at first thought? And will they uncover this mystery?
The story was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I like her style of writing very much and this book is no exception. Like in most stories of hers Darcy and Elizabeth reach an early understanding and there is therefore much page time for them together. It also means that Darcy and Elizabeth face and fight all obstacles together because, fortunately, the events and situations they face aren’t able to come between them. I really liked the shared love between them and that they are able to give each other the strength to face all this. I enjoyed their little gestures of comfort that were often described in the book (for example holding the other’s hand or putting a hand on the other’s arm for support). That showed a deep, selfless love.
I very much enjoyed the prominent role that Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne de Bourg have in this variation and that they are on Darcy and Elizabeth's side to face the scandal. Both are an essential support. I really love that both get their happily ever after and better their situation in life immensely after everything is resolved. That’s so well deserved.
I particularly like the transformation of some members of the Bennet household, especially Mrs Bennet is more likeable at the end of the book because she becomes more refined throughout it. A development I really enjoyed because it also shows the loving and caring mother she can be (and maybe always was in her own particular way).
There are some villains in the story. Some are well known, others are more unexpected, some are only scheming, others are really bad. I will not tell much because the discovery of the villains and their machinations and motives is a very big part of the story. But I like the outcome and the strength all those develop who fight with Darcy and Elizabeth. Fortunately, in the end the bad ones get what they deserve and the good ones are content/have their happily ever after.
If you like to know what kept Darcy and Elizabeth apart, what makes them elope and how they face the scandal that follows you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Four years later Elizabeth is heartbroken because Darcy never arrived in Hertfordshire to ask for her father's permission to marry. When she unexpectedly encounters Darcy at an Assembly all feelings are immediately back. She learns that Darcy was told she was already engaged whereas her father told her that Darcy never came to ask for her hand. Darcy and Elizabeth decide that they will no-one ever again allow to come between them therefore they elope to Scotland immediately.
Their elopement creates a scandal, throwing both families in a turmoil. Will they defy the scandal or will their impulsive decision threaten their happiness? Or are there even greater machinations at work than they at first thought? And will they uncover this mystery?
The story was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I like her style of writing very much and this book is no exception. Like in most stories of hers Darcy and Elizabeth reach an early understanding and there is therefore much page time for them together. It also means that Darcy and Elizabeth face and fight all obstacles together because, fortunately, the events and situations they face aren’t able to come between them. I really liked the shared love between them and that they are able to give each other the strength to face all this. I enjoyed their little gestures of comfort that were often described in the book (for example holding the other’s hand or putting a hand on the other’s arm for support). That showed a deep, selfless love.
I very much enjoyed the prominent role that Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne de Bourg have in this variation and that they are on Darcy and Elizabeth's side to face the scandal. Both are an essential support. I really love that both get their happily ever after and better their situation in life immensely after everything is resolved. That’s so well deserved.
I particularly like the transformation of some members of the Bennet household, especially Mrs Bennet is more likeable at the end of the book because she becomes more refined throughout it. A development I really enjoyed because it also shows the loving and caring mother she can be (and maybe always was in her own particular way).
There are some villains in the story. Some are well known, others are more unexpected, some are only scheming, others are really bad. I will not tell much because the discovery of the villains and their machinations and motives is a very big part of the story. But I like the outcome and the strength all those develop who fight with Darcy and Elizabeth. Fortunately, in the end the bad ones get what they deserve and the good ones are content/have their happily ever after.
If you like to know what kept Darcy and Elizabeth apart, what makes them elope and how they face the scandal that follows you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 20, 2025
I like this book! I’m finished reading “In Spite of All: A Love Unbroken” for the second time before writing this review. After reading over this review, I realized that I had left out the foundation of the changes in this book from the original P&P – I guess simply because they seemed so natural and the rest of the book flowed from them. What were they? Elizabeth went with her Uncle and Aunt Gardiner as a sixteen-year-old to visit Lambton and meets Georgiana in a bookstore there. Georgiana is impressed with Elizabeth and invites her to Pemberley, where she meets Darcy. Darcy is comfortable in Lambton and at Pemberley, and it shows in his relationship with Elizabeth and the Gardiners. Things flow along very well from there until disaster strikes, from the most unexpected direction (read the book). Years pass, but love perseveres.
Bingley still leases Netherfield, and Darcy comes to help him learn to manage an estate, but he doesn’t stay more than a few hours after meeting Elizabeth again. Whose hopes are destroyed by this and whose are fulfilled? Read the book to find out!
What comes to mind first of all about this book is how the characters talk with each other. Amazing! Good, insightful and realistic conversations as well. Even Mrs. Bennet gets in on the act (in what I think is a realistic manner – backslidings and all), though Mr. Bennet doesn’t join in.
Being an author allows you to make up interesting characters, and this certainly does. Mr. Bennet has been changed, though his character isn’t all that different, just different circumstances effecting different results. The Earl of Matlock was a nasty surprise. Lady Catherine was…Lady Catherine, perhaps on steroids.
A bit of a spoiler, but I also appreciated how the author tastefully described the sexual relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth. She shows their commitment and joy in each other. I don’t need a blow-by-blow description, and thankfully the author doesn’t provide one.
I could go on, but I recommend that you just read the book yourself. You’ll be surprised throughout it all, and all ends well.
Bingley still leases Netherfield, and Darcy comes to help him learn to manage an estate, but he doesn’t stay more than a few hours after meeting Elizabeth again. Whose hopes are destroyed by this and whose are fulfilled? Read the book to find out!
What comes to mind first of all about this book is how the characters talk with each other. Amazing! Good, insightful and realistic conversations as well. Even Mrs. Bennet gets in on the act (in what I think is a realistic manner – backslidings and all), though Mr. Bennet doesn’t join in.
Being an author allows you to make up interesting characters, and this certainly does. Mr. Bennet has been changed, though his character isn’t all that different, just different circumstances effecting different results. The Earl of Matlock was a nasty surprise. Lady Catherine was…Lady Catherine, perhaps on steroids.
A bit of a spoiler, but I also appreciated how the author tastefully described the sexual relationship of Darcy and Elizabeth. She shows their commitment and joy in each other. I don’t need a blow-by-blow description, and thankfully the author doesn’t provide one.
I could go on, but I recommend that you just read the book yourself. You’ll be surprised throughout it all, and all ends well.
October 20, 2025
A best by both author and narrator.
I think this may be my favourite of Melissa Anne’s stories so far. I have always loved variations where Darcy and Elizabeth meet when they’re younger, and this one creates a different twist that is paired with an intrigue. Their early affection feels so genuine, and once they reunite, they realise how they were deceived. Their decision to elope is daring and something not often seen for ODC in a variation. I was hooked.
There’s plenty of drama and danger, but from the beginning they face it all together, and since they trust one another completely, the usual endless misunderstandings are avoided. The villains are properly dreadful, and their eventual comeuppance is most satisfying.
Benjamin Fife’s performance is one of his best, I think, though his tendency toward breathiness and the occasional plosive distracts me. I also noted a few instances of incorrect words—a ‘him’ when it should have been a ‘her,’ for example. Still, his character performances are perfectly executed.
The editing could be tightened in places, but I thought the story itself more than made up for it. There are some passionate scenes, but they never cross the line into explicitness.
This one’s a winner, and one I’ll happily return to.
Recommend.
I think this may be my favourite of Melissa Anne’s stories so far. I have always loved variations where Darcy and Elizabeth meet when they’re younger, and this one creates a different twist that is paired with an intrigue. Their early affection feels so genuine, and once they reunite, they realise how they were deceived. Their decision to elope is daring and something not often seen for ODC in a variation. I was hooked.
There’s plenty of drama and danger, but from the beginning they face it all together, and since they trust one another completely, the usual endless misunderstandings are avoided. The villains are properly dreadful, and their eventual comeuppance is most satisfying.
Benjamin Fife’s performance is one of his best, I think, though his tendency toward breathiness and the occasional plosive distracts me. I also noted a few instances of incorrect words—a ‘him’ when it should have been a ‘her,’ for example. Still, his character performances are perfectly executed.
The editing could be tightened in places, but I thought the story itself more than made up for it. There are some passionate scenes, but they never cross the line into explicitness.
This one’s a winner, and one I’ll happily return to.
Recommend.
February 28, 2025
Wonderful!
Fast paced almost from the beginning, after a sweet interlude. Full of intrigue and deception from almost every one in their world, our beloved couple grows together in every sense. I will read it again!
Fast paced almost from the beginning, after a sweet interlude. Full of intrigue and deception from almost every one in their world, our beloved couple grows together in every sense. I will read it again!
January 14, 2025
4.25*
Loved the premise of this one. This is my second read (the first being the draft version). I always love a bad Mr Bennet story and I was not let down. ODC was, as always in MA's stories, lovely with all the angst coming from external sources. Those being villains with OTT plots and schemes and lots of melodrama. It was a lot of fun.
Loved the premise of this one. This is my second read (the first being the draft version). I always love a bad Mr Bennet story and I was not let down. ODC was, as always in MA's stories, lovely with all the angst coming from external sources. Those being villains with OTT plots and schemes and lots of melodrama. It was a lot of fun.
January 11, 2025
This refreshing take on a classic truly delights. I loved how the characters collaborated throughout the book, facing challenges side by side. It made their journey together all the more engaging and enjoyable. An enjoyable read for me!
I received a complimentary copy, all the thoughts and opinions expressed are mine.
I received a complimentary copy, all the thoughts and opinions expressed are mine.
July 17, 2025
Darcy elopes but with good reason
I had the privilege of being able to beta read for this story and then borrowed it on KU when it came out to read the final version.
I enjoy stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are able to talk and come together earlier than canon and are stronger because of that. This story fits that scenario. As with most of Melissa Anne’s stories this one keeps your attention and has you wondering what is around the next corner.
Pride is a major factor with many characters and drives the plot & actions; we get to witness the consequences that come from it.
The story opens up at the Meryton Assembly but what others don’t know is that Elizabeth and Darcy are known to each other. They met, fell in love and were engaged 4 years prior. Both were left heartbroken when Elizabeth didn’t think he showed up to ask her father for permission. Darcy did show up, twice, but Mr Bennet said she was engaged and then on her wedding trip. The mystery is why he said this and why her father changed in his attitude towards her and even cut off the Gardiner family. During the years apart both Elizabeth and Darcy remained true to each other. Elizabeth and Darcy were able to talk privately at the assembly to realize that they were being kept apart by others and decided to take their future into their own hands by eloping. To keep their plan secret they set things into motion to give them the advantage.
The transition between current events and four years ago was smooth and well done and are able to enjoy watching them fall for each other.
Things I loved: what Darcy said to Miss Bingley at the assembly when she was grabbing his arm! Enjoyed Jane’s backbone when talking with her parents and ends up married to someone other than Bingley. Mrs Bennet starts to become self-aware and acknowledges she needs to change, this is a long process for her. Cousins Col Fitzwilliam and Anne play major roles in the mystery of why Darcy and Elizabeth were kept apart and why those forces continue to make havoc for all of them. Loved the steadfast commitment and devotion that Darcy and Elizabeth have for each other.
Yes, I will read this again.
I had the privilege of being able to beta read for this story and then borrowed it on KU when it came out to read the final version.
I enjoy stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are able to talk and come together earlier than canon and are stronger because of that. This story fits that scenario. As with most of Melissa Anne’s stories this one keeps your attention and has you wondering what is around the next corner.
Pride is a major factor with many characters and drives the plot & actions; we get to witness the consequences that come from it.
The story opens up at the Meryton Assembly but what others don’t know is that Elizabeth and Darcy are known to each other. They met, fell in love and were engaged 4 years prior. Both were left heartbroken when Elizabeth didn’t think he showed up to ask her father for permission. Darcy did show up, twice, but Mr Bennet said she was engaged and then on her wedding trip. The mystery is why he said this and why her father changed in his attitude towards her and even cut off the Gardiner family. During the years apart both Elizabeth and Darcy remained true to each other. Elizabeth and Darcy were able to talk privately at the assembly to realize that they were being kept apart by others and decided to take their future into their own hands by eloping. To keep their plan secret they set things into motion to give them the advantage.
The transition between current events and four years ago was smooth and well done and are able to enjoy watching them fall for each other.
Things I loved: what Darcy said to Miss Bingley at the assembly when she was grabbing his arm! Enjoyed Jane’s backbone when talking with her parents and ends up married to someone other than Bingley. Mrs Bennet starts to become self-aware and acknowledges she needs to change, this is a long process for her. Cousins Col Fitzwilliam and Anne play major roles in the mystery of why Darcy and Elizabeth were kept apart and why those forces continue to make havoc for all of them. Loved the steadfast commitment and devotion that Darcy and Elizabeth have for each other.
Yes, I will read this again.
March 2, 2025
2.5 stars
How I detest when the epilogue is almost as long as the novel itself. Especially when said novel dragged and dragged and …
How I detest when the epilogue is almost as long as the novel itself. Especially when said novel dragged and dragged and …
January 24, 2025
There are villians galore in this P&P variation, but ODC make a formidable team. Darcy and Elizabeth meet early when Elizabeth is 16 when her Gardiner relations bring her to Derbyshire with them. Over a 3-month visit Elizabeth meets the Darcy siblings and soon Darcy and Elizabeth are in love. They reach an understanding and Elizabeth returns home expecting Darcy to approach her father soon. Instead years go by and not only does Darcy not come for her but her father cuts off all relations with the Gardiners. Elizabeth can only mourn, but never forget, the young man to whom she gave her heart and who then broke it.
Then Netherfield Park is let and the visitors come to the Meryton assembly. Elizabeth is shocked to encounter Darcy there and Darcy is shocked to discover that Elizabeth is…unmarried??!! What could have happened to separate the young lovers in such a way and how will they respond? What happens when they discover who (and it is many!) kept them apart for so many years and why? Will their love prevail or will they fall to the machinations of those who have schemed to keep them apart?
This is a poignant tale of the strength of love and true devotion and what ODC will do to be together in spite of all who try to keep them apart.
Then Netherfield Park is let and the visitors come to the Meryton assembly. Elizabeth is shocked to encounter Darcy there and Darcy is shocked to discover that Elizabeth is…unmarried??!! What could have happened to separate the young lovers in such a way and how will they respond? What happens when they discover who (and it is many!) kept them apart for so many years and why? Will their love prevail or will they fall to the machinations of those who have schemed to keep them apart?
This is a poignant tale of the strength of love and true devotion and what ODC will do to be together in spite of all who try to keep them apart.
March 2, 2025
The first part (the elopement) was great. But after ODC marry, and their problems are mostly resolved, an entirely new story arc begins that focuses on the Earl of Matlock and Lady Catherine.
The new story arc was drawn out, boring, and difficult to suspend disbelief. I started skimming and focusing on just the dialogue as I lost all interest in the story. The fact that the editing was terrible didn’t help matters.
The beginning, with the elopement, was 5-stars. The second half and many editing/proofreading failures merited 1-star. Thus, 3-stars. Read through KU.
The new story arc was drawn out, boring, and difficult to suspend disbelief. I started skimming and focusing on just the dialogue as I lost all interest in the story. The fact that the editing was terrible didn’t help matters.
The beginning, with the elopement, was 5-stars. The second half and many editing/proofreading failures merited 1-star. Thus, 3-stars. Read through KU.
April 28, 2025
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. What if Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy had met years before their fateful encounter in Meryton?
At sixteen, Elizabeth encounters the young master of Pemberley, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Sparks fly between the two, and despite their youth, Darcy proposes marriage. However, misunderstandings tore their blossoming love apart, each believing the other abandoned them. Years later, they meet once more at the Meryton assembly. Quickly realising that lies and deceit have kept them apart, Darcy and Elizabeth refuse to let anything stand between them again and elope to Scotland that very night. The news of their elopement throws both families into turmoil. Can Elizabeth and Darcy withstand the fallout from their impulsive decision, or will the pressures of society and family tear them apart once more? Join them as they fight for their love, facing scandal, opposition, and the weight of past betrayals in this daring reimagining of their timeless romance. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. What if Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy had met years before their fateful encounter in Meryton?
At sixteen, Elizabeth encounters the young master of Pemberley, Fitzwilliam Darcy. Sparks fly between the two, and despite their youth, Darcy proposes marriage. However, misunderstandings tore their blossoming love apart, each believing the other abandoned them. Years later, they meet once more at the Meryton assembly. Quickly realising that lies and deceit have kept them apart, Darcy and Elizabeth refuse to let anything stand between them again and elope to Scotland that very night. The news of their elopement throws both families into turmoil. Can Elizabeth and Darcy withstand the fallout from their impulsive decision, or will the pressures of society and family tear them apart once more? Join them as they fight for their love, facing scandal, opposition, and the weight of past betrayals in this daring reimagining of their timeless romance. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
January 13, 2025
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
I believe, this now my favorite story by Melissa Anne.
Elizabeth and Darcy meet already when Elizabeth is only 16 and visiting Lambton with Mrs Gardiner. They are there over the summer. Initially she becomes friends with Georgina and spends time with Darcy through her. They fall in love and Darcy proposes. He is to come to Longbourn to get permission from Mr Bennet. However Mr Bennet has his own selfish reason to discourage the marriage. So he denies Darcy his permission and tells Elizabeth that Darcy never showed up.
Years later when Mr Bingley rents Netherfield Darcy comes along to discover what happened to Elizabeth. They meet at the assembly and discover that they were both betrayed by Mr Bennet. So they decide, that the only way to be sure they can be together is to elope. They leave the assembly and heads to Scotland. So they are finally married with Coronel as a witness. Then they have to figure out, why they were kept apart and who is trying to kidnap Elizabeth.
I will not reveal more, but I recommend you join the ride and find out.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review
I believe, this now my favorite story by Melissa Anne.
Elizabeth and Darcy meet already when Elizabeth is only 16 and visiting Lambton with Mrs Gardiner. They are there over the summer. Initially she becomes friends with Georgina and spends time with Darcy through her. They fall in love and Darcy proposes. He is to come to Longbourn to get permission from Mr Bennet. However Mr Bennet has his own selfish reason to discourage the marriage. So he denies Darcy his permission and tells Elizabeth that Darcy never showed up.
Years later when Mr Bingley rents Netherfield Darcy comes along to discover what happened to Elizabeth. They meet at the assembly and discover that they were both betrayed by Mr Bennet. So they decide, that the only way to be sure they can be together is to elope. They leave the assembly and heads to Scotland. So they are finally married with Coronel as a witness. Then they have to figure out, why they were kept apart and who is trying to kidnap Elizabeth.
I will not reveal more, but I recommend you join the ride and find out.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review
January 26, 2025
Overcoming Family manipulation
This variation began in Maryton (sp) and had flashbacks. This allowed the action to flow. You had both Darcy and Elizabeth’s memories.
This had layers of mystery and deception.
Spoilers
They marry quickly and Lady Catherine attempts to manipulate beginning with Georgianna and than attempts at kidnapping.
Collins and Bennett to their distaste end up managing Longbourn together. The twist is Mrs Bennett. While she changes it is a subtle change. Jane and Bingley are not a hea. Which I feel Bingley never did deserve Jane.
There were many surprises and a little too many villains. However I could not stop reading this variation. I enjoyed Darcy not giving up and demonstrating trust and respect. I adore how Elizabeth is a faithful daughter but not stubborn or stupid. When presented with facts she does NOT close her eyes and matters worse.
This is one I pray becomes an audio book and I hope the author chooses between Harry Frost, Stevie Zimmerman, Lilian or Elizabeth ( can’t remember their last names).
I highly recommend this variation for all ages.
This variation began in Maryton (sp) and had flashbacks. This allowed the action to flow. You had both Darcy and Elizabeth’s memories.
This had layers of mystery and deception.
Spoilers
They marry quickly and Lady Catherine attempts to manipulate beginning with Georgianna and than attempts at kidnapping.
Collins and Bennett to their distaste end up managing Longbourn together. The twist is Mrs Bennett. While she changes it is a subtle change. Jane and Bingley are not a hea. Which I feel Bingley never did deserve Jane.
There were many surprises and a little too many villains. However I could not stop reading this variation. I enjoyed Darcy not giving up and demonstrating trust and respect. I adore how Elizabeth is a faithful daughter but not stubborn or stupid. When presented with facts she does NOT close her eyes and matters worse.
This is one I pray becomes an audio book and I hope the author chooses between Harry Frost, Stevie Zimmerman, Lilian or Elizabeth ( can’t remember their last names).
I highly recommend this variation for all ages.
August 9, 2025
I read and listened in combination to In Spite of All. This was an interesting variation with a very entertaining read by Benjamin Fife.
Despite falling in love and reaching an understanding in Derbyshire when Elizabeth is 16, a conspiracy separates Darcy and Elizabeth, with neither believing they can ever be together. However, when Bingley leases Netherfield, the two meet again and take things into their own hands to prevent their separation. They believe they have created a scandal that could harm their families. However the conspirators that separated them have several greater scandals brewing. Darcy and Elizabeth, although now happily married, find themselves in danger amidst the chaos created by members of both of their families. They seek answers.
I enjoy stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are happy together, yet face external challenges and even threats. Some of the usual suspects bring about danger, but we have a few more family members causing issues. This had enough drama to keep me interested.
Recommended.
Despite falling in love and reaching an understanding in Derbyshire when Elizabeth is 16, a conspiracy separates Darcy and Elizabeth, with neither believing they can ever be together. However, when Bingley leases Netherfield, the two meet again and take things into their own hands to prevent their separation. They believe they have created a scandal that could harm their families. However the conspirators that separated them have several greater scandals brewing. Darcy and Elizabeth, although now happily married, find themselves in danger amidst the chaos created by members of both of their families. They seek answers.
I enjoy stories where Darcy and Elizabeth are happy together, yet face external challenges and even threats. Some of the usual suspects bring about danger, but we have a few more family members causing issues. This had enough drama to keep me interested.
Recommended.
January 22, 2025
Melissa Anne did a wonderful job in this story of Darcy and Elizabeth having reunited after having met years earlier in Lambton and being friends first then more. They were in a courtship before Elizabeth left and planned more though due to subterfuge of not a few people with their own ends in mind they met again thinking they were already married to others. This is where the past is revealed, and they were both most cruelly misled. A grasping Miss Bingley is helpful for once when helping our beloved couple to abscond to their destiny, and no real chase takes place to begin with, though there are several letters to explain what has happened to lead to the previous behavior of some people. It was good to see the wrongs of the past brought to right and you could feel engaged with this story. It was heartbreaking at points though redeeming and I would happily recommend it. I did receive a free copy and would also purchase.
January 20, 2025
I received an advanced copy of this book. All comments are my own opinions.
I really enjoyed this story. It was lovely to see Elizabeth and Darcy come together and not have any misunderstandings, but know that they loved each other and had been kept apart by external forces. I loved the exchanges between Darcy and his cousin Richard Fitzwilliam. I also enjoyed the mystery of who was at the source of the external obstacles between Darcy and Elizabeth. Even though that was not much of a mystery, I liked how there were additional layers that were revealed throughout the book. It was good to see Anne portrayed as someone with a will of her own.
There was some repetition in the book and a few typos, but overall this was a very enjoyable read, with a loving focus on our couple, some interesting side stories and without terrible angst.
I really enjoyed this story. It was lovely to see Elizabeth and Darcy come together and not have any misunderstandings, but know that they loved each other and had been kept apart by external forces. I loved the exchanges between Darcy and his cousin Richard Fitzwilliam. I also enjoyed the mystery of who was at the source of the external obstacles between Darcy and Elizabeth. Even though that was not much of a mystery, I liked how there were additional layers that were revealed throughout the book. It was good to see Anne portrayed as someone with a will of her own.
There was some repetition in the book and a few typos, but overall this was a very enjoyable read, with a loving focus on our couple, some interesting side stories and without terrible angst.
January 25, 2025
Starts with a bang
No slow start here; ODC are on their way to Scotland after having lost contact with each other through the machinations of those who see them as a threat or an opportunity. The villains are particularly villainous and devious to the detriment of our couple’s peace and happiness. Several characters are particularly well written. Anne is more determined than she’s usually credited with being. I love how she comes to be married and what she does for her cousin. Mrs Bennet improves, but is still very Mrs B. Her attempt to play mistress of Pemberley during Elizabeth’s absence and Mrs Reynolds’ equally determined resistance is very entertaining. Mr Bennet and Mr Collins driving one another crazy at Longbourn is quite fitting for both. I always enjoy Melissa Anne’s tales, but this one may be my favorite to date.
No slow start here; ODC are on their way to Scotland after having lost contact with each other through the machinations of those who see them as a threat or an opportunity. The villains are particularly villainous and devious to the detriment of our couple’s peace and happiness. Several characters are particularly well written. Anne is more determined than she’s usually credited with being. I love how she comes to be married and what she does for her cousin. Mrs Bennet improves, but is still very Mrs B. Her attempt to play mistress of Pemberley during Elizabeth’s absence and Mrs Reynolds’ equally determined resistance is very entertaining. Mr Bennet and Mr Collins driving one another crazy at Longbourn is quite fitting for both. I always enjoy Melissa Anne’s tales, but this one may be my favorite to date.
January 8, 2025
Family happens
I liked this story about a quite young Elizabeth and a young Darcy staying true to their feelings for each other in spite of fate that kept them apart for years. Fate in the form of family…. I dislike deceit and cruelty, but without these ideas of the authoress this well-crafted story would not have been written 😁
In my opinion there were several passages unnecessarily repeated, but perhaps they were meant to remind or emphasize them? But they should not prevent from reading this book, accompanying Elizabeth and Darcy confronting extremely challenging obstacles. And as you might guess: in spite of all, their strength grew and their love stayed unbroken 💞
I got a copy in advance and read it with pleasure!
I liked this story about a quite young Elizabeth and a young Darcy staying true to their feelings for each other in spite of fate that kept them apart for years. Fate in the form of family…. I dislike deceit and cruelty, but without these ideas of the authoress this well-crafted story would not have been written 😁
In my opinion there were several passages unnecessarily repeated, but perhaps they were meant to remind or emphasize them? But they should not prevent from reading this book, accompanying Elizabeth and Darcy confronting extremely challenging obstacles. And as you might guess: in spite of all, their strength grew and their love stayed unbroken 💞
I got a copy in advance and read it with pleasure!
January 11, 2025
This was a very sweet story with lots of tension and villains. Elizabeth and Darcy are just like I want them to be: loving, loyal, strong, compassionate, sweet and supporting. I loved their meeting when Elizabeth were only 16, and how they never let go of the love they shared.
There are several villains that are making a lot of problems. They are dealt with in different ways, all through the story. I think it all worked out fine.
An Elopement is normally not something I think E&D would have done. But in this setting it is a rational decision and I would not have changed that.
If you love a story where Elizabeth and Darcy gets together early on, and then fight "the World" together. Then this story is very much for you!
I loved every moment of reading it!
There are several villains that are making a lot of problems. They are dealt with in different ways, all through the story. I think it all worked out fine.
An Elopement is normally not something I think E&D would have done. But in this setting it is a rational decision and I would not have changed that.
If you love a story where Elizabeth and Darcy gets together early on, and then fight "the World" together. Then this story is very much for you!
I loved every moment of reading it!
January 21, 2025
I received an advanced copy for free and am leaving this review voluntarily. This is one of the best Pride and Prejudice variations I've read so far. First of all, there's quite a lot going on which kept my interest. Also, I like the way the author developed the lesser-known characters from the original book and introduced some interesting new ones. I didn't agree with one or two of the re-imagined couples but that didn't detract from my enjoyment of the book. There is some violence, and the author seemed to have a one-track mind when it came to finding a way to clear the path to true love, but again not enough to detract from my enjoyment. I look forward to reading other variations by this author. In fact, I've already downloaded my next one.
January 27, 2025
Melissa Anne’s newest novel is a wonderful and compelling read. If you enjoy Pride and Prejudice variations where Darcy and Elizabeth get together early and work together to overcome challenges, you will love this book. In Spite of All: A Love Unbroken grabs the reader almost from the first page. The plot is well crafted, compelling and flows smoothly through its various twists and turns. Our dear couple face many hurdles. All the characters are well drawn and act according to their underlying motivations and priorities as they are swept along by events. I feel privileged to have been able to read an advanced readers copy as well as the published version. I really enjoyed this book, and I think you will too.
January 31, 2025
So Much Love
I always enjoy when ODC marry early in the book and fight together against all their enemies and grow stronger as a couple because of their trials. This book definitely checked all those boxes. The love between Elizabeth and Darcy is so strong and endearing that you can’t help but yearn for everyone to have a love like that.
Melissa Anne this is another wonderful novel! I can’t wait to read what you come out with next. I have been a fan of your work since you started writing and eagerly await your newsletter to see what you are working on next. This lovely story will be added to my favorites list for reading again in the future.
I always enjoy when ODC marry early in the book and fight together against all their enemies and grow stronger as a couple because of their trials. This book definitely checked all those boxes. The love between Elizabeth and Darcy is so strong and endearing that you can’t help but yearn for everyone to have a love like that.
Melissa Anne this is another wonderful novel! I can’t wait to read what you come out with next. I have been a fan of your work since you started writing and eagerly await your newsletter to see what you are working on next. This lovely story will be added to my favorites list for reading again in the future.
January 26, 2025
In Spite of All: A Love Unbroken is very entertaining. I know some say it has mistakes, and agree, but I did not find that they detracted from the overall content.
This book made me not like Mr. Bennet, nor Lady C or Matlock oh and Wickham. I did feel compassion for Darcy, Elizabeth and the Colonel. Mrs. Bennet kept trying, but it was difficult at times. Collins is just Collins.
E's sisters are either wonderful or redeemable. Nice action and kept my interest.
Received a free arc but this did not sway my opinions.
This book made me not like Mr. Bennet, nor Lady C or Matlock oh and Wickham. I did feel compassion for Darcy, Elizabeth and the Colonel. Mrs. Bennet kept trying, but it was difficult at times. Collins is just Collins.
E's sisters are either wonderful or redeemable. Nice action and kept my interest.
Received a free arc but this did not sway my opinions.
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