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Mark of the Fool 10
After gaining epic power and knowledge, Alex Roth will confront Uldar’s legacy and face the Ravener once and for all.
A cycle of victory and horror: the pride of the Kingdom of Thameland.
That is the Ravener’s cycle.
Over years of study, Alex Roth is finally an archwizard, has overcome the Mark of the Fool, and empowered his friends and companions. Yet their foe is the mightiest they have faced yet: the Ravener itself, now freed from thousands of years of chains and returned to its full strength.
Alex will need to call on all his magic, all his bonds, his wits, his strategy and his resources to not only destroy the Ravener, but to shatter the cycle that has chained his kingdom since time immemorial.
And Alex plans to destroy the hell out of it.
The epic finale of the Best-Selling series. Finish your fantastical journey into a coming-of-age magic academy fantasy with a weak-to-strong progression into power, deepening mystery, a setting inspired by D&D, detailed world building and magical science, action, comedy, slice-of-life, and GameLit elements.
A cycle of victory and horror: the pride of the Kingdom of Thameland.
That is the Ravener’s cycle.
Over years of study, Alex Roth is finally an archwizard, has overcome the Mark of the Fool, and empowered his friends and companions. Yet their foe is the mightiest they have faced yet: the Ravener itself, now freed from thousands of years of chains and returned to its full strength.
Alex will need to call on all his magic, all his bonds, his wits, his strategy and his resources to not only destroy the Ravener, but to shatter the cycle that has chained his kingdom since time immemorial.
And Alex plans to destroy the hell out of it.
The epic finale of the Best-Selling series. Finish your fantastical journey into a coming-of-age magic academy fantasy with a weak-to-strong progression into power, deepening mystery, a setting inspired by D&D, detailed world building and magical science, action, comedy, slice-of-life, and GameLit elements.
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First published July 30, 2025
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August 16, 2025
I hope others will enjoy this final book more than I did
Sadly this ending left me flat. Tldr summary, he final book just had way too many overdone victory laps... waaay too many. I had greatly enjoyed the series up until this final book. I'm sure it's incredibly hard to figure out how to end a series and you have to make some choices. Semi spoilers ahead btw. The choices made here focused on giving every good guy character a happy ending and their own unique and detailed victory lap. The major characters got several victory laps of multiple flavors, ranging from graduations to financial success to relationship success to immense power in dozens of ways. Perhaps over 30% of this book was detailing the great outcomes and satisfactions that were well deserved. It just was too much for me, but others might appreciate that the author decided to give happy endings in detail to every good guy no matter how big or small the character. But the result was the narrative around conflicts and the final battles felt relatively thin, particularly when the few remaining bad guys were given very two-dimensional almost boringly predictable behavior and reactions. There were no shades of grey in the bad guys or the good guys. The story basically was at the good guys whomped the bad guys "like they deserved.". And the main protagonist Alex ultimately could do no wrong and all of the superest, biggest, baddest power ups you could possibly imagine all naturally became his to wield. Everybody loves him, he's the hero of heroes, he gets the girl, he gets him immortality, he gets more powerful magic than anybody ever before, gets adulation of strangers and communities and neighbors and all his friends... Just too much perfect world stuff going on. At least I enjoyed the series prior to this book, and that's saying something significant. It had great whimsy, with a fun balance between tension and self doubts and characters who weren't purely black or white, good or evil. And like I said I hope other people enjoyed this final book despite it not being my particular cup of tea. I look forward to trying other series from the same author
Sadly this ending left me flat. Tldr summary, he final book just had way too many overdone victory laps... waaay too many. I had greatly enjoyed the series up until this final book. I'm sure it's incredibly hard to figure out how to end a series and you have to make some choices. Semi spoilers ahead btw. The choices made here focused on giving every good guy character a happy ending and their own unique and detailed victory lap. The major characters got several victory laps of multiple flavors, ranging from graduations to financial success to relationship success to immense power in dozens of ways. Perhaps over 30% of this book was detailing the great outcomes and satisfactions that were well deserved. It just was too much for me, but others might appreciate that the author decided to give happy endings in detail to every good guy no matter how big or small the character. But the result was the narrative around conflicts and the final battles felt relatively thin, particularly when the few remaining bad guys were given very two-dimensional almost boringly predictable behavior and reactions. There were no shades of grey in the bad guys or the good guys. The story basically was at the good guys whomped the bad guys "like they deserved.". And the main protagonist Alex ultimately could do no wrong and all of the superest, biggest, baddest power ups you could possibly imagine all naturally became his to wield. Everybody loves him, he's the hero of heroes, he gets the girl, he gets him immortality, he gets more powerful magic than anybody ever before, gets adulation of strangers and communities and neighbors and all his friends... Just too much perfect world stuff going on. At least I enjoyed the series prior to this book, and that's saying something significant. It had great whimsy, with a fun balance between tension and self doubts and characters who weren't purely black or white, good or evil. And like I said I hope other people enjoyed this final book despite it not being my particular cup of tea. I look forward to trying other series from the same author
August 11, 2025
This was like a million pages of one singular neverending battle from every possible perspective, Alex becoming the ultimate OP god-being mid battle of course, and then a wrapup so long and thorough that I wanted to Irish goodbye my Kindle. I'm basically giving a pity star because I enjoyed the rest of the series, but oh my GOSH it just never wanted to end.
September 5, 2025
A Good Volume, a Terrible Finale!
Overall Impression
This volume could have worked as a standalone book in the series, but as the finale? Absolutely not. It starts with too many slice-of-life elements that lack any real buildup, making the whole thing feel like a poorly timed joke. While I've followed the series from book one and enjoyed certain aspects along the way, this entry has very few redeeming qualities, especially as the conclusion. It's not my favorite in the series by any means, and the flaws here overshadow the good parts.
Buildup and Pacing
The beginning drags with non-essential everyday scenes that fail to set up the stakes properly. Then, out of nowhere, a full-blown war erupts from what seems like a random training montage. Revelations pile on, leading to more battles, but the pacing feels rushed and badly lined from that point onward.
The War and Battles
The writing of the war is truly terrible, especially when compared to well-handled conflicts in other web novels like Mother of Learning, Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, and Shadow Slave. Wars are chaotic and devastating by nature, and the prose should reflect that – here, it doesn't. The focus zooms in too tightly on individual characters, making the broader devastation feel mentioned in passing rather than immersive. There's little description of dead bodies or real loss; it just happens and ends with a few lines acknowledging the aftermath. The author seems too attached to named characters to let them die meaningfully, and the whole conflict comes across as one that wants to wrap up quickly without telling a proper story of war. Characters don't feel like they're truly fighting in a grim, high-stakes battle – everything is skipped or ignored to simplify the path to the end.
Characters and Development
Unfortunately, the focus on myriad individuals doesn't help because most of them aren't interesting enough to carry the weight. We don't care deeply about their fates, which undermines what could have been a strength. That said, Baelin stands out as the best character in this book and all of the series.
The spells cast by so-called arch-wizards are disappointingly boring, lacking creativity or excitement.
The stronger characters rave about the battle's greatness before it begins, but it doesn't show in the writing or the application of stakes, don't get me wrong there are great spells against monsters but the environment is mentioned in passing, people are mentioned, never really this makes the world feel very very dead.
Nostalgia and Melancholy
The book attempts to evoke nostalgia and melancholy, but it fails spectacularly. These moments feel forced and pointed out explicitly, like:
"Hey, remember when they couldn't even wound this beast? Now look at them, so overpowered that stakes feel meaningless."
Or:
"See, he just talked to this character and asked for forgiveness, but life doesn't work like that, how sad, given what happened in book X."
Paragraphs like these are littered throughout, coming off as heavy-handed rather than emotional.
Power-Ups and Stakes
Power-ups in this volume are a mixed bag – some interesting, others boring – and there's simply too much development of new abilities crammed in. I dislike characters pulling powers out of nowhere during the final battle; I prefer a clear final form versus final form setup for hero and villain. Here, it's just one escalation after another, with characters permanently buffed at every turn to make the war easier. This erodes any sense of real stakes or tension.
Romance and Other Elements
The romance, which I already disliked, is sidelined as if the main character suddenly forgot he was in love. It's a small mercy, but it highlights how underdeveloped certain threads are.
Conclusion and Rating
I'm not pleased with this book at all. If you've read any novel with a sensibly written war, you won't like this one, the characters act like they're in a scripted skirmish rather than a chaotic conflict. At first, I considered four stars out of habit, hating to rate low. As I reflected, it dropped to three, then two, because the last battle, and the war as a whole is poorly executed rubbish. Two stars it is.
Overall Impression
This volume could have worked as a standalone book in the series, but as the finale? Absolutely not. It starts with too many slice-of-life elements that lack any real buildup, making the whole thing feel like a poorly timed joke. While I've followed the series from book one and enjoyed certain aspects along the way, this entry has very few redeeming qualities, especially as the conclusion. It's not my favorite in the series by any means, and the flaws here overshadow the good parts.
Buildup and Pacing
The beginning drags with non-essential everyday scenes that fail to set up the stakes properly. Then, out of nowhere, a full-blown war erupts from what seems like a random training montage. Revelations pile on, leading to more battles, but the pacing feels rushed and badly lined from that point onward.
The War and Battles
The writing of the war is truly terrible, especially when compared to well-handled conflicts in other web novels like Mother of Learning, Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, and Shadow Slave. Wars are chaotic and devastating by nature, and the prose should reflect that – here, it doesn't. The focus zooms in too tightly on individual characters, making the broader devastation feel mentioned in passing rather than immersive. There's little description of dead bodies or real loss; it just happens and ends with a few lines acknowledging the aftermath. The author seems too attached to named characters to let them die meaningfully, and the whole conflict comes across as one that wants to wrap up quickly without telling a proper story of war. Characters don't feel like they're truly fighting in a grim, high-stakes battle – everything is skipped or ignored to simplify the path to the end.
Characters and Development
Unfortunately, the focus on myriad individuals doesn't help because most of them aren't interesting enough to carry the weight. We don't care deeply about their fates, which undermines what could have been a strength. That said, Baelin stands out as the best character in this book and all of the series.
The spells cast by so-called arch-wizards are disappointingly boring, lacking creativity or excitement.
The stronger characters rave about the battle's greatness before it begins, but it doesn't show in the writing or the application of stakes, don't get me wrong there are great spells against monsters but the environment is mentioned in passing, people are mentioned, never really this makes the world feel very very dead.
Nostalgia and Melancholy
The book attempts to evoke nostalgia and melancholy, but it fails spectacularly. These moments feel forced and pointed out explicitly, like:
"Hey, remember when they couldn't even wound this beast? Now look at them, so overpowered that stakes feel meaningless."
Or:
"See, he just talked to this character and asked for forgiveness, but life doesn't work like that, how sad, given what happened in book X."
Paragraphs like these are littered throughout, coming off as heavy-handed rather than emotional.
Power-Ups and Stakes
Power-ups in this volume are a mixed bag – some interesting, others boring – and there's simply too much development of new abilities crammed in. I dislike characters pulling powers out of nowhere during the final battle; I prefer a clear final form versus final form setup for hero and villain. Here, it's just one escalation after another, with characters permanently buffed at every turn to make the war easier. This erodes any sense of real stakes or tension.
Romance and Other Elements
The romance, which I already disliked, is sidelined as if the main character suddenly forgot he was in love. It's a small mercy, but it highlights how underdeveloped certain threads are.
Conclusion and Rating
I'm not pleased with this book at all. If you've read any novel with a sensibly written war, you won't like this one, the characters act like they're in a scripted skirmish rather than a chaotic conflict. At first, I considered four stars out of habit, hating to rate low. As I reflected, it dropped to three, then two, because the last battle, and the war as a whole is poorly executed rubbish. Two stars it is.
August 15, 2025
"Sometimes we want to see something finished... but don't want it to end at the same time."
This was pretty much everything I wanted in a series finale. Anyone who follows my reviews, especially my booktube channel, knows that I am pretty much exclusively an audiobook listener. I typically listen to around 120 audiobooks a year but only read 3 novellas. Furthermore, Travis Balder is one of my favorite narrators and I love his narration of the first 9 novels in the series. However, when this book dropped, I couldn't wait for the audiobook and read all 950 pages in 8 days. That's some sort of a record for me, and it was well worth it!
The book starts off with a little bit of the calm before the storm. Wrapping things up and getting everything ready before the big battle, because once that battle begins... it's pretty much non stop action for 600 pages. And I loved it! The back and forth battle on not one, not two, not three, not four but at least six different fronts was simply amazing!
You do lose a little bit of character interactions because of all the action, and some characters that were staples for much of the series had to take a bit more of a backseat because other characters (such as the Ravener) needed more time. There is also some cheesy interactions, but that's a staple of the series and part of its charm.
When all is said and done, Mark of the Fool has cemented itself as one of my top 5 favorite completed series. I highly recommend it, especially to anyone that liked Mother of Learning or Cradle.
This was pretty much everything I wanted in a series finale. Anyone who follows my reviews, especially my booktube channel, knows that I am pretty much exclusively an audiobook listener. I typically listen to around 120 audiobooks a year but only read 3 novellas. Furthermore, Travis Balder is one of my favorite narrators and I love his narration of the first 9 novels in the series. However, when this book dropped, I couldn't wait for the audiobook and read all 950 pages in 8 days. That's some sort of a record for me, and it was well worth it!
The book starts off with a little bit of the calm before the storm. Wrapping things up and getting everything ready before the big battle, because once that battle begins... it's pretty much non stop action for 600 pages. And I loved it! The back and forth battle on not one, not two, not three, not four but at least six different fronts was simply amazing!
You do lose a little bit of character interactions because of all the action, and some characters that were staples for much of the series had to take a bit more of a backseat because other characters (such as the Ravener) needed more time. There is also some cheesy interactions, but that's a staple of the series and part of its charm.
When all is said and done, Mark of the Fool has cemented itself as one of my top 5 favorite completed series. I highly recommend it, especially to anyone that liked Mother of Learning or Cradle.
October 4, 2025
Rating 5.0 stars (series)
Well, that's a wrap. This has been a very good series. This one was a bit long and the battles took forever, but I am happy in how the series turned out.
Well, that's a wrap. This has been a very good series. This one was a bit long and the battles took forever, but I am happy in how the series turned out.
August 11, 2025
Ten books later, and I’m not ready to say goodbye.
What a ride this series has been. Mark of the Fool 10 closes the journey in a way that feels both satisfying and earned, tying off long-running threads while staying true to Alex’s growth from awkward, underestimated student with the mark of the fool to a respected general who shapes the fate of realms. The stakes have never been higher, with Alex and his allies facing odds set by an actual god. Yet through it all, Alex and his allies never lose their resolve to see it through.
J.M. Clarke keeps the pacing tight, weaving action, strategy, and magic into a finale that doesn’t just rely on spectacle but delivers payoffs for character arcs we’ve been following since book one. It’s also worth celebrating that this comes from a Black author in the genre—a voice that’s brought fresh perspective and left a lasting mark.
If you’ve been here from the start, this is the kind of send-off that makes you want to flip back to book one and experience the whole thing all over again.
PS, I wouldn’t mind seeing a spin-off series either. Maybe following his sister on her own path, or Alex journeying to different worlds. There’s plenty of potential for new adventures in this universe.
What a ride this series has been. Mark of the Fool 10 closes the journey in a way that feels both satisfying and earned, tying off long-running threads while staying true to Alex’s growth from awkward, underestimated student with the mark of the fool to a respected general who shapes the fate of realms. The stakes have never been higher, with Alex and his allies facing odds set by an actual god. Yet through it all, Alex and his allies never lose their resolve to see it through.
J.M. Clarke keeps the pacing tight, weaving action, strategy, and magic into a finale that doesn’t just rely on spectacle but delivers payoffs for character arcs we’ve been following since book one. It’s also worth celebrating that this comes from a Black author in the genre—a voice that’s brought fresh perspective and left a lasting mark.
If you’ve been here from the start, this is the kind of send-off that makes you want to flip back to book one and experience the whole thing all over again.
PS, I wouldn’t mind seeing a spin-off series either. Maybe following his sister on her own path, or Alex journeying to different worlds. There’s plenty of potential for new adventures in this universe.
August 10, 2025
Resorted to the webnovel rather than wait for this to come out.
I consumed this 10 book series in about 10 days. It's got a lot of the charm I wish for in more YA series. The protagonists are easy to root for - they're good people who are good to others. The author wants the adventure to be fun, and to that end, their world building pulls in more hijinks (vs introducing in cliched ethical quandaries that make the plot a chore).
The author's ease with the lightness of their novel shines through in other pleasing ways. There's none of that tiresome inclusion of darker events that come off as little more than a way to pretend the entire writing is grittier and more real than it is. Clarke's darker events are consistent drivers of advancing the story making it smooth as he goes in and out of them.
There are definitely swaths of the series that come off as unappealing filler, but as the series keeps coming back to more compelling narrative and those stretches are easy to skim through without getting lost, it's a bit easier to stomach.
I consumed this 10 book series in about 10 days. It's got a lot of the charm I wish for in more YA series. The protagonists are easy to root for - they're good people who are good to others. The author wants the adventure to be fun, and to that end, their world building pulls in more hijinks (vs introducing in cliched ethical quandaries that make the plot a chore).
The author's ease with the lightness of their novel shines through in other pleasing ways. There's none of that tiresome inclusion of darker events that come off as little more than a way to pretend the entire writing is grittier and more real than it is. Clarke's darker events are consistent drivers of advancing the story making it smooth as he goes in and out of them.
There are definitely swaths of the series that come off as unappealing filler, but as the series keeps coming back to more compelling narrative and those stretches are easy to skim through without getting lost, it's a bit easier to stomach.
February 22, 2025
A+
Loved pretty much everything about this book. And the ending was done spectacularly.
I would a sequel series with Alex in it and it'll likely happen, but I assume he'll be a minor character then.
The MP finally got the FP which made me happy.
I really enjoyed how the magic in these books worked. Though I wish that the MP had more time being OP, my pain was assuaged by him being a total badass in the final battle.
Overall, I would very much recommend this series to anyone who enjoys lit-rpg. It has much to enjoy.
Loved pretty much everything about this book. And the ending was done spectacularly.
I would a sequel series with Alex in it and it'll likely happen, but I assume he'll be a minor character then.
The MP finally got the FP which made me happy.
I really enjoyed how the magic in these books worked. Though I wish that the MP had more time being OP, my pain was assuaged by him being a total badass in the final battle.
Overall, I would very much recommend this series to anyone who enjoys lit-rpg. It has much to enjoy.
August 7, 2025
finally
A bit too interested ‘i’ dotting and ‘t’ crossing for my taste. Also repetitive, in that some chapters started with a summary of the previous one—necessary for a serial, but annoying in book form.
But it’s over, and I think it was worth the time.
A bit too interested ‘i’ dotting and ‘t’ crossing for my taste. Also repetitive, in that some chapters started with a summary of the previous one—necessary for a serial, but annoying in book form.
But it’s over, and I think it was worth the time.
January 26, 2026
What a disappointing ending. This book shouldn’t have been 1,000 pages - at least a third of the book could’ve been cut out with no loss to the story. There was just too much reminiscing and rehashing. It was a problem in past books but in none more than this one. The story also just wouldn’t end and it felt like fluff and filler I had to wade through in order to reach the end.
It was great to see the characters’ stories come to an end and to have all the loose ends wrapped up.
——-Spoilers below——-
Nobody dies!? Seriously, not a single important character dies. The characters aren’t challenged and just win everything? Alex is completely overpowered, loses nothing, and has no problems. The last battle was repetitive and never truly felt stressful or like there were high stakes. I remember being so stressed during book 1 when they entered the Cave of the Traveller and the stakes felt high. This one fell flat.
Also, Isolde and Cedric don’t seem compatible in the slightest. At best, she has a crush on him because of his sincerity, muscles, and red hair. Their relationship doesn’t have staying power.
It was great to see the characters’ stories come to an end and to have all the loose ends wrapped up.
——-Spoilers below——-
Nobody dies!? Seriously, not a single important character dies. The characters aren’t challenged and just win everything? Alex is completely overpowered, loses nothing, and has no problems. The last battle was repetitive and never truly felt stressful or like there were high stakes. I remember being so stressed during book 1 when they entered the Cave of the Traveller and the stakes felt high. This one fell flat.
Also, Isolde and Cedric don’t seem compatible in the slightest. At best, she has a crush on him because of his sincerity, muscles, and red hair. Their relationship doesn’t have staying power.
September 18, 2025
A glorious end
This book really got us into the climactic battle early and kept us in the trouble! From 30% on was final battles, and it made it so hard to put the book down. Then a nice beautiful bow to wrap it all up and say goodbye? Love it.
This book really got us into the climactic battle early and kept us in the trouble! From 30% on was final battles, and it made it so hard to put the book down. Then a nice beautiful bow to wrap it all up and say goodbye? Love it.
September 1, 2025
What a fun summer journey to complete. All 10 books kept me immersed in this fantasy world. I am replete. Satisfied with the story and time spent.
November 15, 2025
If I could give it ten out of five stars I would
August 6, 2025
I’m not crying, you are
What a ride, from Alex gaining the mark of the fool, to him becoming the general, I have laughed at Alex’s bad jokes, cried during his setbacks, and shouted in triumph at all his victories. And now it’s over, what a thrilling, satisfying conclusion to this series. Thank you Mr. Clarke for creating such an amazing universe, thank you for writing Mark of the Fool.
What a ride, from Alex gaining the mark of the fool, to him becoming the general, I have laughed at Alex’s bad jokes, cried during his setbacks, and shouted in triumph at all his victories. And now it’s over, what a thrilling, satisfying conclusion to this series. Thank you Mr. Clarke for creating such an amazing universe, thank you for writing Mark of the Fool.
August 5, 2025
Great ending.
Sad to see this series end. Hopefully we will see another based 1000 years in the future for more proper wizard shenanigans.
Sad to see this series end. Hopefully we will see another based 1000 years in the future for more proper wizard shenanigans.
August 12, 2025
Good end to the series
Wrapping up a series is never easy, but i think the author did a decent job here.
This book had way too many grammatical mistakes to garner more than a 3-star review.
Wrapping up a series is never easy, but i think the author did a decent job here.
This book had way too many grammatical mistakes to garner more than a 3-star review.
August 5, 2025
Finally over
Definitely glad it's over. Started out amazing and just lost steam around book 6. Only kept reading to see how it ended. Last book was basicly "Alex wiggles his eyebrows and everything dies" no struggle, no, suspense, just OP MC doing litterly anything and everything he wants to including f'n cloning himself b/c it's fits the plot.
Definitely glad it's over. Started out amazing and just lost steam around book 6. Only kept reading to see how it ended. Last book was basicly "Alex wiggles his eyebrows and everything dies" no struggle, no, suspense, just OP MC doing litterly anything and everything he wants to including f'n cloning himself b/c it's fits the plot.
August 18, 2025
Obviously I'm a fan of the series since this is book 10.... and I was excited when I saw that this final installment would be nearly 1000 pages. Unfortunately, it felt more like a slog than a thrilling conclusion. The story itself was fine, but the book felt so bloated and overwritten that I ended up skimming a lot of it. I think the author was trying to fill it with nostalgia, and for some reason, really wanted us to dig into the characters' future plans -- but there was so much of that, and it was so slow and boring that it watered down the book to the point where I kept putting it down. I think a 450 page version would have been great.
Every character from the series was featured, but they did very little to advance the story and seemed like they didn't need to be there. Alex pretty much did everything that mattered. And since they sort of felt shoehorned into the story just so they'd be present, they felt like caricatures of themselves (does Baelin really need to include "proper wizard" in every sentence?).
It wasn't all negative. The traveler was funny in this one, and there were some clever parts. It certainly wasn't a terrible book, and let's be real, it's hard to keep a series going this long without it feeling pointless. Kudos for brining it to a satisfying conclusion. I'm excited to see what the author comes up with next, they clearly have a lot of skill and creativity.
Every character from the series was featured, but they did very little to advance the story and seemed like they didn't need to be there. Alex pretty much did everything that mattered. And since they sort of felt shoehorned into the story just so they'd be present, they felt like caricatures of themselves (does Baelin really need to include "proper wizard" in every sentence?).
It wasn't all negative. The traveler was funny in this one, and there were some clever parts. It certainly wasn't a terrible book, and let's be real, it's hard to keep a series going this long without it feeling pointless. Kudos for brining it to a satisfying conclusion. I'm excited to see what the author comes up with next, they clearly have a lot of skill and creativity.
September 24, 2025
Fun series.
December 11, 2025
Well, that's the series. In terms of LitRPG/Progression Fantasy, I'd say this is solidly the second best I've read. That's not a matter of comparison, just personal enjoyment. Even then, the consistency in Mark of the Fool was unmatched.
Never did I feel like the plot was moving too slowly or quickly. The characters stayed true to themselves, with good character development thrown in as well. It's kinda funny to see Alex slowly turning into Baelin. On top of all that, the story was just fun! Great twists, great reveals, fun side-plots, great power progression, and a really-well put-together magical system.
But who cares about all that analyzing for a Goodreads review? When I look back on another of the best LitRPG series, Dungeon Crawler Carl, I remember the tragically difficult-to-understand setting of Book 4 (the trains). I cringe thinking back on the card battle system in Book 8 and how horrifyingly intricate (and frankly, boring) it was. When I look back on He Who Fights With Monsters, which I consider to be the best LitRPG series written to date, I think of the UTTERLY HORRIFIC CHOICE the author made with Jason going where he went in book 4 (no spoilers!).
But when I think of Mark of the Fool? I just remember a good story. At no point was there some egregious choice by the author that ruined a book (or multiple. looking at you, Shirtaloon) for me. The first few books may have been slow, I agree with those opinions, but I genuinely can't recall a moment where the writings of the author, J.M Clarke, frustrated me to the point of slowing my reading. That did happen with both DCC and HWFWM, though.
I really, really enjoyed this series. This is exactly what I was looking for when I went searching for new, solid Prog Fantasy series after reading DCC and HWFWM. So, if you like LitRPG, give it a shot! I doubt you'll regret it.
Never did I feel like the plot was moving too slowly or quickly. The characters stayed true to themselves, with good character development thrown in as well. It's kinda funny to see Alex slowly turning into Baelin. On top of all that, the story was just fun! Great twists, great reveals, fun side-plots, great power progression, and a really-well put-together magical system.
But who cares about all that analyzing for a Goodreads review? When I look back on another of the best LitRPG series, Dungeon Crawler Carl, I remember the tragically difficult-to-understand setting of Book 4 (the trains). I cringe thinking back on the card battle system in Book 8 and how horrifyingly intricate (and frankly, boring) it was. When I look back on He Who Fights With Monsters, which I consider to be the best LitRPG series written to date, I think of the UTTERLY HORRIFIC CHOICE the author made with Jason going where he went in book 4 (no spoilers!).
But when I think of Mark of the Fool? I just remember a good story. At no point was there some egregious choice by the author that ruined a book (or multiple. looking at you, Shirtaloon) for me. The first few books may have been slow, I agree with those opinions, but I genuinely can't recall a moment where the writings of the author, J.M Clarke, frustrated me to the point of slowing my reading. That did happen with both DCC and HWFWM, though.
I really, really enjoyed this series. This is exactly what I was looking for when I went searching for new, solid Prog Fantasy series after reading DCC and HWFWM. So, if you like LitRPG, give it a shot! I doubt you'll regret it.
December 16, 2025
Great series
A fine conclusion to a great series.
Non specific spoilers ahead.
Only a handful of minor typos (e.g. "Aelx" instead of Alex).
For a book that's listed at 1k pages with the vast majority of it's content centered on the final fight for Thaneland, this book does a fine job of tying up loose ends and giving closure. I especially appreciated the little throw backs (several all the way from book 1).
That said, it's almost too neat. Too clean. All the good guys get their absolute best ending, all the bad guys get their worst ending. Hurrah? It doesn't even feel like a real fight as the heroes are never taxed, never run out of mana or stamina, there aren't really even any close calls. Off screen, normal soldiers survive the apocalypse (on their own, then with help, then repeat). It feels like the mundane people should not have had a chance against what is described as an endless horde of creatures designed to eliminate all life... this should have been the most stressful & risky arc of the series but it felt like the heroes didn't even struggle (yes the ranked up and put in a lot of effort before the finale, but the Ravener has experience with Heroes at their full potential and still never lost).
I wish the excess divine energy went to Hannah to cap off Hobb's warning.
I also disagree with the assessment that Hannah would have saved Uldar if he'd worked with mortals because he was supposedly long dead by the time she was chosen even with his best effort to extend his life.
All in all, I liked the characters, I liked the story, I enjoyed every book. I will certainly be looking into this author's other works going forward.
A fine conclusion to a great series.
Non specific spoilers ahead.
Only a handful of minor typos (e.g. "Aelx" instead of Alex).
For a book that's listed at 1k pages with the vast majority of it's content centered on the final fight for Thaneland, this book does a fine job of tying up loose ends and giving closure. I especially appreciated the little throw backs (several all the way from book 1).
That said, it's almost too neat. Too clean. All the good guys get their absolute best ending, all the bad guys get their worst ending. Hurrah? It doesn't even feel like a real fight as the heroes are never taxed, never run out of mana or stamina, there aren't really even any close calls. Off screen, normal soldiers survive the apocalypse (on their own, then with help, then repeat). It feels like the mundane people should not have had a chance against what is described as an endless horde of creatures designed to eliminate all life... this should have been the most stressful & risky arc of the series but it felt like the heroes didn't even struggle (yes the ranked up and put in a lot of effort before the finale, but the Ravener has experience with Heroes at their full potential and still never lost).
I wish the excess divine energy went to Hannah to cap off Hobb's warning.
I also disagree with the assessment that Hannah would have saved Uldar if he'd worked with mortals because he was supposedly long dead by the time she was chosen even with his best effort to extend his life.
All in all, I liked the characters, I liked the story, I enjoyed every book. I will certainly be looking into this author's other works going forward.
August 14, 2025
this was one of my least favorites. *the* battle takes about 75% of the whole book!. and there's lots of twitchs lol. they seem so almighty, i wonder how did they ever win anything before!
overall: i really liked this. i liked the way Magic works, the circuits, and the divinity - and i think ulnar's actions are very real!
i also like Alex and his development. being a fool and separated from the others.
what i did not like:
some dialogs are bad and lazy. in the middle of the battle they all take turns speaking the obvious and always using titles and such.
it is YA - but they are teens speaking of marriage and forever after, and even those who live together only sometimes kiss... no mention of anything else - it is hinted they waited until marriage...
also they get crazy powerful in just a couple of months. i know, its a progression fantasy... still, a bit overkill.
my main issue is the pacing and inconsistecy. in some books there's lot of school (love it), in others its not even mentioned. its just 3 years, i would love some more spreading of the learning? some books heavyly talk about some caracthers that almost don't appear in others. it should be revised - a lot. a whole book about some games in the vacations, another where there's no school, the hell trip that never ended with some side caracthers, a single fight taking 3 quarters of the book...
and although i liked the secondary caracthers, i must say in the end i still got lost between thunder and khalik!
but still, i very much enjoyed this saga and devoured everybook!!
overall: i really liked this. i liked the way Magic works, the circuits, and the divinity - and i think ulnar's actions are very real!
i also like Alex and his development. being a fool and separated from the others.
what i did not like:
some dialogs are bad and lazy. in the middle of the battle they all take turns speaking the obvious and always using titles and such.
it is YA - but they are teens speaking of marriage and forever after, and even those who live together only sometimes kiss... no mention of anything else - it is hinted they waited until marriage...
also they get crazy powerful in just a couple of months. i know, its a progression fantasy... still, a bit overkill.
my main issue is the pacing and inconsistecy. in some books there's lot of school (love it), in others its not even mentioned. its just 3 years, i would love some more spreading of the learning? some books heavyly talk about some caracthers that almost don't appear in others. it should be revised - a lot. a whole book about some games in the vacations, another where there's no school, the hell trip that never ended with some side caracthers, a single fight taking 3 quarters of the book...
and although i liked the secondary caracthers, i must say in the end i still got lost between thunder and khalik!
but still, i very much enjoyed this saga and devoured everybook!!
September 19, 2025
The problem of creating a long series of great storytelling, is that the reader becomes so focused in the saga created that if the whole series is already completed, then most probably the reader is continuously immersed in the story without breaks and reads through them in a single sitting. You might think this is totally beneficial for the author, a confirmation of their work. The answer is NO.
I was so focused on finding out what's next that I did not even have time to post a single review or comment. Of course I will copy paste this review under the first book for other first time readers, but the author is still missing out on eight other reviews, if this series had been above average but not that great, because then it would have probably kept me engaged and forced me to rant about all the problems, rather than being speechless and just summing up with great world building, super story telling, engaging character interaction, really good character build up.
I am shit at positive criticism as you might have realized, so to bring up my strength constructive feedback on what could have been better - why is there no bonus chapter of 10 years later, of 100 years later? ;D
Oh and the mark of the General seems really overpowered especially compared to the other heroes? Especially once it's unlocked. But still wow, a great progression fantasy, where ingenuity and intellect is utilised to fight and circumvent godly restrictions. A hero who through the power of friendship (muffled laughter) overcomes all odds and has the possibility to keep going.
I was so focused on finding out what's next that I did not even have time to post a single review or comment. Of course I will copy paste this review under the first book for other first time readers, but the author is still missing out on eight other reviews, if this series had been above average but not that great, because then it would have probably kept me engaged and forced me to rant about all the problems, rather than being speechless and just summing up with great world building, super story telling, engaging character interaction, really good character build up.
I am shit at positive criticism as you might have realized, so to bring up my strength constructive feedback on what could have been better - why is there no bonus chapter of 10 years later, of 100 years later? ;D
Oh and the mark of the General seems really overpowered especially compared to the other heroes? Especially once it's unlocked. But still wow, a great progression fantasy, where ingenuity and intellect is utilised to fight and circumvent godly restrictions. A hero who through the power of friendship (muffled laughter) overcomes all odds and has the possibility to keep going.
November 5, 2025
⭐ 2/5 stars
Spoiler Warning
Great series, disappointing finale.
I’ve absolutely loved this series up until now. The first nine books were a joy to read — full of heart, struggle, and that satisfying sense of growth as Alex kept pushing past his limits. Watching him face impossible odds and somehow come out on top was genuinely inspiring.
The final book, however, left me disappointed. It promised what I had been waiting for — Alex without restraints — but instead of feeling powerful and earned, it turned him into an all-powerful Superman. The sense of danger and tension that made the earlier books so captivating is gone. Everything feels too easy, too safe, and a bit too PG-13 for a story that once felt so intense.
It also felt unnecessarily long; at least a third of it could have been trimmed without losing anything meaningful. For the first time in this series, I found myself reading just to finish — not because I couldn’t wait to see what happened next. If this had been the first book, I probably wouldn’t have continued the series.
In summary: a finale full of effortless victories and little real risk for the heroes. The series was fantastic right up until this last installment, which unfortunately dropped the ball. Still, I’ll remember the earlier books fondly for what they achieved.
Perhaps, perhaps not. :)
Spoiler Warning
Great series, disappointing finale.
I’ve absolutely loved this series up until now. The first nine books were a joy to read — full of heart, struggle, and that satisfying sense of growth as Alex kept pushing past his limits. Watching him face impossible odds and somehow come out on top was genuinely inspiring.
The final book, however, left me disappointed. It promised what I had been waiting for — Alex without restraints — but instead of feeling powerful and earned, it turned him into an all-powerful Superman. The sense of danger and tension that made the earlier books so captivating is gone. Everything feels too easy, too safe, and a bit too PG-13 for a story that once felt so intense.
It also felt unnecessarily long; at least a third of it could have been trimmed without losing anything meaningful. For the first time in this series, I found myself reading just to finish — not because I couldn’t wait to see what happened next. If this had been the first book, I probably wouldn’t have continued the series.
In summary: a finale full of effortless victories and little real risk for the heroes. The series was fantastic right up until this last installment, which unfortunately dropped the ball. Still, I’ll remember the earlier books fondly for what they achieved.
Perhaps, perhaps not. :)
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 1, 2025
This book was a magnificent ending to a truly epic tale. I would give it 6 stars if I could.
It had plenty of callbacks and closure to so many different threads and characters throughout the entire saga but they didn't feel like just cameo drop-ins. It was (as the whole series is) rigorous and thorough without ever feeling tedious. It had a suitably epic final battle that actually lived up to the buildup over the course of the entire series which I didn't think would be possible. I was expecting a situation where power-creep just turned it into a big slug-fest but was so pleasantly wrong. All of the wits, planning, preparation, and connections that had been built up over the entire series got their time to shine and it didn't feel forced. They felt genuinely useful and needed. With all that, it still kept great pacing with a good balance of nostalgia and action, closure and combat. There were plenty of beautiful, moving moments of reflection carefully woven in with the action along with other climactic events that had also been built up over the series just like the final battle.
It felt like a truly satisfying conclusion to the series,
This is, in my opinion, a master class on how to end a series well.
It had plenty of callbacks and closure to so many different threads and characters throughout the entire saga but they didn't feel like just cameo drop-ins. It was (as the whole series is) rigorous and thorough without ever feeling tedious. It had a suitably epic final battle that actually lived up to the buildup over the course of the entire series which I didn't think would be possible. I was expecting a situation where power-creep just turned it into a big slug-fest but was so pleasantly wrong. All of the wits, planning, preparation, and connections that had been built up over the entire series got their time to shine and it didn't feel forced. They felt genuinely useful and needed. With all that, it still kept great pacing with a good balance of nostalgia and action, closure and combat. There were plenty of beautiful, moving moments of reflection carefully woven in with the action along with other climactic events that had also been built up over the series just like the final battle.
It felt like a truly satisfying conclusion to the series,
This is, in my opinion, a master class on how to end a series well.
September 20, 2025
I am amazed and appalled that such a fine series in the rpg genre could have such an abysmal ending. If the book had ended when the story ended, all would have been fine. A nice conclusion to the General/Fool overcoming all of his opponents in creative ways. Unfortunately, the book continued for a good many pages after the story ended. So we had the conclusion, but then the author just couldn't say goodbye to the characters he had invested in for the past ten books. He remembered, he reminisced, he wandered, he dallied. He did everything but bring the story to an end. And by the time he got done writing, the reader was already long gone - you know, clear back when the story was actually finished.
October 10, 2025
A beautiful end
This book made me so happy! Like my cheeks hurt because I've been smiling too long/hard. Clarke's writing has always been stellar, but the culmination and interweaving with past books, was so seamless; along with flash backs of how Alex's journey began, every thing came full circle beautifully. I laughed, I cried, and I literally stood up and started cheering (I'm willing to bet you'll know exactly why once you read it too) it was that wonderful! I'm so very glad a took a chance on this book and genre when it was recommended via Kindle. And I know this sounds cliché, but it truly has been a pleasure and a joy to read.
This book made me so happy! Like my cheeks hurt because I've been smiling too long/hard. Clarke's writing has always been stellar, but the culmination and interweaving with past books, was so seamless; along with flash backs of how Alex's journey began, every thing came full circle beautifully. I laughed, I cried, and I literally stood up and started cheering (I'm willing to bet you'll know exactly why once you read it too) it was that wonderful! I'm so very glad a took a chance on this book and genre when it was recommended via Kindle. And I know this sounds cliché, but it truly has been a pleasure and a joy to read.
August 15, 2025
I just finished Book 10 and found it to be a wholly satisfying conclusion to the journey that the author has taken us on. A couple of thoughts:
1) I thought it would be tough to get back into the swing of things after a many months break from finishing Book 9 until now, but found that a few pages in and it felt like slipping into a familiar, comfortable pair of shoes.
2) I like how the author kept Alex humble. In too many series, the MC becomes a bore once they've ascended. For example, I love Wheel of Time, but find Rand to be a bit of a bore once he fully embraces being the Dragon Reborn. Right up to the final pages of Mark of the Fool, Alex continues to be a normal person that you'd enjoy spending time with.
3) Asmaldestre the Unmaker is a total badass and deserves her own book.
1) I thought it would be tough to get back into the swing of things after a many months break from finishing Book 9 until now, but found that a few pages in and it felt like slipping into a familiar, comfortable pair of shoes.
2) I like how the author kept Alex humble. In too many series, the MC becomes a bore once they've ascended. For example, I love Wheel of Time, but find Rand to be a bit of a bore once he fully embraces being the Dragon Reborn. Right up to the final pages of Mark of the Fool, Alex continues to be a normal person that you'd enjoy spending time with.
3) Asmaldestre the Unmaker is a total badass and deserves her own book.
August 2, 2025
Great Finale
The series is an absolute blast. It is filled with fun characters, great pacing, and plot. All the dots are connected by the book's end, and I appreciate the attention to detail on all the odd storylines.
Frankly, my sole objection to the series is that too much goes right for Alex, but when I am honest with myself, I realize that I want the best for Alex. Really enjoyed the series. Thanks!
The series is an absolute blast. It is filled with fun characters, great pacing, and plot. All the dots are connected by the book's end, and I appreciate the attention to detail on all the odd storylines.
Frankly, my sole objection to the series is that too much goes right for Alex, but when I am honest with myself, I realize that I want the best for Alex. Really enjoyed the series. Thanks!
August 3, 2025
The last book sticks the landing
Over the course of 10 books Alex Roth has grown from baker to fool to student to general to archwizard and his friends have grown with him. Now comes the endgame, the battle with the Ravener for the fate of his kingdom and his friends. This final battle doesn't disappoint in the slightest. Everything works, the ending fits and the fate of all is decided. Get out and pick this up to finish the tale of the Fool.
Over the course of 10 books Alex Roth has grown from baker to fool to student to general to archwizard and his friends have grown with him. Now comes the endgame, the battle with the Ravener for the fate of his kingdom and his friends. This final battle doesn't disappoint in the slightest. Everything works, the ending fits and the fate of all is decided. Get out and pick this up to finish the tale of the Fool.
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