The Fire of the Sun

by audreyii_fic, Mera Naam Joker

Sequel to The Movement of the Earth. Bella finds the cost of joining the supernatural world may be higher than she can pay.

Available To Read On: LiveJournal, AO3 and FFn.

Genres: Fan Fiction

329 pages, ebook

Published January 23, 2011

Reviews

[Sabreen NourAldin · Rating 5 out of 5]

I didn't expect to cry; but I sobbed.

I technically loved this more than the first one, Audrey is more confident here, exploring more techniques in writing and having her own style away from the original series. I loved that we kept the original structure of the different POVs, getting Sam's POV was brilliant, I love him so much, seeing how it is inside an Alpha head was a beautiful / hectic experience. I believe that the system of the wolf pack thought process that the writer created is one of the most genius things I ever read. The story was well developed, logical and entertaining, it had everything I wanted, and other things I never wanted -sobs-. I disagree with some of the choices towards the end but oh well.

It took me three days to stop talking to myself out loud about the ending, but here we are I guess.

Also, protect Jacob Black at all costs thank you very much.

[Brenna MacKay · Rating 3 out of 5]

I knew I wouldn’t enjoy this as much as the first book, but I’d still say it was a pretty enjoyable read!

3 stars seems too harsh, realistically it’s more of a 3.5. It would have been 4 stars but then the author kind of lost the plot and suddently it was ‘Jasper was evil all along 😈🙊👹’ and then Alice was all of a sudden crazy?? I know this is a fan fiction but it didn’t *feel* like a fan fiction up until that point.

Also making me read Sam’s pov for HALF THE DAMN BOOK just to kill him off? And Carslile? AND CHARLIE?!?! And also Quil… I wasn’t *as* upset about him but I feel bad not mentioning him…

Overall, it was good but I don’t think that I will re-read like I will the first one!

[Stephanie · Rating 4 out of 5]

VERY realistic way it would have went down if Jacob and Bella ended up together.
I can honestly see both sides of the coin.
I would add that I am very happy with how the Twilight series actually ended though lol
This book was a realistic Jacob/Bella BUT... I could not be happy with everyone who was lost. :(
Honestly made me cry. The author hit so many home runs its crazy.
If you are looking for a good rendition of what actually would have happened if Jacob and Bella would have been the end all, definitely read this.

[Sierra Codeluppi · Rating 3 out of 5]

At first I was convinced that this is how it would have went down but I feel like there were too many random plot wholes that I feel weren’t resolved. Firstly the Alice and Jasper plot line really felt like it came out of nowhere. Secondly, I feel like she just got over Edward so quickly which I feel needed some more tough conversations. Also I just needed a tiny bit of spice. I also left feeling confused about Paul 🤷🏻‍♀️ but in the same sense I did finish this in one day so it definitely was enjoyable

[sara ⋆ ˚｡⋆౨ৎ˚ · Rating 5 out of 5]

This and MotE were AMAZING. Ate these stories up so quickly!

[Tena · Rating 4 out of 5]

fuck this book and fuck the author for making me sob like a baby at 11 pm

Still team Edward btw. At least for the original series. But damn...

[froggy · Rating 3 out of 5]

such a cute light read!!

[Noe · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.85

[Cayenned · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was so good. I cried. Hard. Fuck you H.E.A. there was barely a H.E.A. I crieddddd. Ugh. Go read it. Edweird haters UNITE.

[Ana · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.75⭐️

[K A · Rating 5 out of 5]

I feel the same as my review of the first book…absolutely adore! Canon in my head! Jacob and Bella forever!

[Madi Sperry · Rating 4 out of 5]

Was this as good as other fanfiction I’ve read in the Harry Potter world? No, but it was still a really fun read and I might have been inspired to reread twilight!! It’s been like 15 years!!

[Kealy Cassidy · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was so much better than Break Dawn oh my god!!!

[Vix · Rating 4 out of 5]

my second fav twilight fanfic ever (hint hint)

[Jadrienne Hurt · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is how it should have ended.

[Lunathi · Rating 3 out of 5]

Really liked the first part, the switching POV but… I don’t know… I didn’t really like the twists at the end ? Everything actually. About the Cullens and Jacob. Still loved the writing and the first part so I gave a 3 out of 5.