I’m honestly so frustrated after finishing this book. Hideaway started off decent the first 100 pages were interesting enough to pull me in. The writing wasn’t bad at first, the setup had potential, and I thought maybe, just maybe, this would turn into something really engaging. Spoiler: it didn’t.
Somewhere after that first chunk, everything completely fell apart. The story lost all direction, the characters stopped making sense, and whatever tension or emotional pull it started with just evaporated. It felt like the author threw the plot out the window and decided to rely on poorly written “smut” to carry the story and even that was terrible.
If this is supposed to be a dark romance, it’s honestly a shameful attempt at one. There’s no real darkness, no psychological depth, no reason behind anything that happens. It’s just uncomfortable and awkward. The smut scenes were so poorly written they actually made me cringe repetitive, emotionless, and totally lacking any chemistry between the characters. I couldn’t buy into their “connection” for a second.
Caden, the supposed dark, brooding male lead, was a flat, unconvincing mess. He’s not mysterious he’s just dull. And Kara? She started out promising, but the more I read, the less consistent her character became. She goes from strong and self-aware to a complete cliché by the end. Nothing about their relationship felt believable or earned.
By the time I reached the final chapters, I was skimming just to be done. The pacing was all over the place, the dialogue felt forced, and the story tried to take itself seriously when it hadn’t done the work to earn any real emotion. It’s one of those books that starts with potential and then slowly crumbles until you’re just annoyed you spent the time reading it.
The only reason I’m giving it two stars instead of one is because that opening section did have something going for it a flicker of intrigue that made me want to keep reading. But after that? It’s just bad.
In short: poorly written, badly paced, no chemistry, terrible smut, and a plot that makes less sense the longer you think about it. If you’re looking for a good dark romance, look somewhere else. This isn’t it.