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Destiny #1
The Unknown Sun
Her tragic past shaped her. Their present joined them in a journey about love, loss, truth, and lies. Skyfall’s future is at stake as a revolution grows in the shadows. All will be lost unless Moira finds the last immortals left in the world…The Unknown Sun. Seventeen-year-old Moira is haunted by the accidents that claimed her family. When she is attacked by a strange boy who seems to know something about her past, Moira fears death will come for her a third time. Saved by twins Airi and Bel, she is taken to their world and safety. Or so they thought. Their world is dying and the Immortals who had protected it have been missing since the last Great War. Armed with a mysterious talisman and tales of magic and intrigue, Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins' dead mother, Tanari, that will hopefully tell them how to find and free the Immortals known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved. Deeper, darker, secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution for power threatens their quest and the boy who tried to destroy Moira on Earth hunts her, determined to seek revenge for Tanari’s choices.
If you loved reading Phillip Pullman or Madeleine L'Engle, The Unknown Sun is your next read! Love, loss, truth, lies, and destiny are only a small part of the puzzle that has spanned millennia...Download The Unknown Sun and join their adventure today!
If you loved reading Phillip Pullman or Madeleine L'Engle, The Unknown Sun is your next read! Love, loss, truth, lies, and destiny are only a small part of the puzzle that has spanned millennia...Download The Unknown Sun and join their adventure today!
227 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 29, 2014
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About the author
Cheryl S. Mackey
9 books21 followersI live in Southern California with my adorable hubby and 2 sons. I am a Document Specialist with a mortgage company during the day and a writer during the night!
I have a MFA in Creative Writing and enjoy games, reading and, of course, writing. I grow tall bearded irises and avidly listen to trailer music by groups like Audiomachine, Two Steps from Hell, and Future World Music. I currently have a flash fiction story published online at The Prompt Magazine.
My favorite genre to write and read is YA Fantasy closely followed by YA Paranormal and I would love to dabble in Steam Punk and Dystopian.
I have been writing for myself since I was 13 and using my mother's dinosaur of a typewriter (it was from the fifties I think!) and my father's special resume paper (without his knowledge). Those stories are long gone, but my brain never sleeps without coming up with new ideas. I am also a notoriously SLOW writer because I stress out and OCD over every word, freak out, then redo it. Rinse and repeat and you have why it takes me a year to do a draft.
I have a MFA in Creative Writing and enjoy games, reading and, of course, writing. I grow tall bearded irises and avidly listen to trailer music by groups like Audiomachine, Two Steps from Hell, and Future World Music. I currently have a flash fiction story published online at The Prompt Magazine.
My favorite genre to write and read is YA Fantasy closely followed by YA Paranormal and I would love to dabble in Steam Punk and Dystopian.
I have been writing for myself since I was 13 and using my mother's dinosaur of a typewriter (it was from the fifties I think!) and my father's special resume paper (without his knowledge). Those stories are long gone, but my brain never sleeps without coming up with new ideas. I am also a notoriously SLOW writer because I stress out and OCD over every word, freak out, then redo it. Rinse and repeat and you have why it takes me a year to do a draft.
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July 24, 2015
**** 4 Cranky Stars ****
I was instantly hooked on this book. Unknown Sun is written from the point of view of the main character, Moira, a high school student with many physical and mental scars due to a plane crash and car crash.
The author captures the way a girl would feel if she was forgotten by a parent, made fun of in school and felt ugly. She would wish to be invisible and would want to hide behind her bangs.
The author really made me feel for Moira. She has been through so much: the death of her siblings and her mom, a father who seems too reticent with her and a school filled with mean girls.
Moira is rescued from that world by a twist of fate after an evil boy beats her almost to death. I love that this event changes her from an invisible girl into a human that must save the world. I am unsure if Moira is pulled into another dimension or transported to another planet at first.
Moira shares the role of defender of the universe with two very unusual characters. They are winged characters of great beauty. There is the hunky tall warrior, Bel, and his sister, Airi, a tall thin woman with great survival skills that anyone would envy.
I like that Moira feels helpless at first and clings to Bel and Airi but as the plot of develops she becomes empowered. The king of the land and Bel and Airi’s father has a rival for the throne who is evil. There is a battle for the throne which seems to start because Moira arrives and is the supposed savior prophesied in their mythology.
The mother of Bel and Airi was not a winged creature like them but was the one who set the wheels in motion to save the land and have Moira fulfill her destiny. The three must first find the mother’s diary and then free the four gods that have been imprisoned while avoiding the wrath of their uncle who wants to be king.
I was taken in by the battle scenes and the mysteries solved by the three as well as the courage of Moira. For a young girl she showed tenacity and skills beyond her earthly years.
The book ends with the readers wanting to know more about the characters and how they will recover and move forward. I have to say this is an excellent story for girls that need to be empowered. It was a book I read in two days because I just couldn’t wait to see how Moira, Bel and Airi dealt with their fates and I loved the new world and wanted to learn more about it.
Great book would recommend it to young readers of about thirteen and up.
November 2, 2014
Both the cover and the concept caught my eye for this one, and it's an intriguing start to a series.
A little science fiction, a little urban fantasy, but definitely epic fantasy, as it looks to be an ongoing saga in the style of David and Leigh Eddings.
Given Moira's tragic background, it's no surprise that she has so little confidence or strength, as she'd be using all she has just to cope with the loss of most of her family. Yet she does gain a little, as her powers develop under the light of the Unknown Sun.
It'll be interesting to see where this series goes - and whether Moira ever returns to her ordinary life on Earth, for her life will never be the same again.
A little science fiction, a little urban fantasy, but definitely epic fantasy, as it looks to be an ongoing saga in the style of David and Leigh Eddings.
Given Moira's tragic background, it's no surprise that she has so little confidence or strength, as she'd be using all she has just to cope with the loss of most of her family. Yet she does gain a little, as her powers develop under the light of the Unknown Sun.
It'll be interesting to see where this series goes - and whether Moira ever returns to her ordinary life on Earth, for her life will never be the same again.
February 5, 2015
Moira is different, in school she is an outcast, the girl who cheated death, twice. She is also the scarred girl, inside and out and her past haunts her. Why was she still alive when her family is now gone? She should have died, but Fate or perhaps another being seems to think she needs to live, but why? What on Earth could this damaged girl be needed for? Or does the answer lie within the question? Perhaps she is needed in another world and perhaps someone is willing to stop at nothing to assure that she never gets there. When an attacker seems to know too much about her dark past, her time may be up on Earth as he goes for the kill, and that’s when two winged warriors come to her aid and fly her off to their dying world of Skyfall…and our adventure begins.
The gods protecting Skyfall have vanished long ago and only a hidden, powerful journal contains the answers to save this world. A prophecy tells of a savior who will bring back the gods and save Skyfall. Is Moira that savior? Will she be able to complete the mission with the help of Airi and Belamar, her winged saviors and heirs to throne? Has someone reached through time and space to fulfill Moira’s true destiny? Will she find the missing gods known as the Four and convince them to save Skyfall or will another angry and more powerful god stand in their way? Where are the missing gods collectively named The Unknown Sun?
The quest will not be easy, danger and treachery are all around these three and the shrouded mysteries they unveil may be all that saves them. Will it be enough?
Uniquely dark, wickedly mysterious and filled with characters from another world and time, The Unknown Sun by Cheryl S. Mackey is young adult fantasy with the author’s own spin on fate, destiny and bravery with just a touch of romance carefully wedged in. A human girl who has been the bullied victim, expected to become a hero actually has to grow into her role and be helped by both of her winged saviors. Moira is so out of her element, yet hopeful at finally finding her “place” in the world, but she is untrained, untested. Airi is a beautiful, confident warrior with great instincts and talents. Her twin, Belamar becomes the romantic interest, wings and all, foretold to be Moira’s protector, their chemistry is tentative and youthful.
Ms. Mackey has provided a world filled with history and detail that is so vivid, it becomes alive in itself. There is tension, insecurity, battles and personal trials to overcome, but never once did I lose sight of the plot or the mission. Knowing how to bring reality to fantasy is a gift that Cheryl Mackey displays to great effect, from the simple day to day actions to the great build up at the end. Wonderfully written, well-paced and intriguing, there is never a dull moment or snag in her words as she invites us to use our imaginations to gain entrance into Skyfall’s world.
I was a part of this story, watching each scene unfold and each character grow at their own pace, fantasy or not, these characters were living and breathing beings!
I received this copy from Cheryl S. Mackey in exchange for my honest review.
Series - The Destiny Series - Book 1
Publication Date: April 29, 2014
Publisher: Cheryl S. Mackey
ISBN: 1499352158
Genre: Fantasy
Print Length: 340 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Reviewed for: http://tometender.blogspot.com
The gods protecting Skyfall have vanished long ago and only a hidden, powerful journal contains the answers to save this world. A prophecy tells of a savior who will bring back the gods and save Skyfall. Is Moira that savior? Will she be able to complete the mission with the help of Airi and Belamar, her winged saviors and heirs to throne? Has someone reached through time and space to fulfill Moira’s true destiny? Will she find the missing gods known as the Four and convince them to save Skyfall or will another angry and more powerful god stand in their way? Where are the missing gods collectively named The Unknown Sun?
The quest will not be easy, danger and treachery are all around these three and the shrouded mysteries they unveil may be all that saves them. Will it be enough?
Uniquely dark, wickedly mysterious and filled with characters from another world and time, The Unknown Sun by Cheryl S. Mackey is young adult fantasy with the author’s own spin on fate, destiny and bravery with just a touch of romance carefully wedged in. A human girl who has been the bullied victim, expected to become a hero actually has to grow into her role and be helped by both of her winged saviors. Moira is so out of her element, yet hopeful at finally finding her “place” in the world, but she is untrained, untested. Airi is a beautiful, confident warrior with great instincts and talents. Her twin, Belamar becomes the romantic interest, wings and all, foretold to be Moira’s protector, their chemistry is tentative and youthful.
Ms. Mackey has provided a world filled with history and detail that is so vivid, it becomes alive in itself. There is tension, insecurity, battles and personal trials to overcome, but never once did I lose sight of the plot or the mission. Knowing how to bring reality to fantasy is a gift that Cheryl Mackey displays to great effect, from the simple day to day actions to the great build up at the end. Wonderfully written, well-paced and intriguing, there is never a dull moment or snag in her words as she invites us to use our imaginations to gain entrance into Skyfall’s world.
I was a part of this story, watching each scene unfold and each character grow at their own pace, fantasy or not, these characters were living and breathing beings!
I received this copy from Cheryl S. Mackey in exchange for my honest review.
Series - The Destiny Series - Book 1
Publication Date: April 29, 2014
Publisher: Cheryl S. Mackey
ISBN: 1499352158
Genre: Fantasy
Print Length: 340 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
Reviewed for: http://tometender.blogspot.com
July 1, 2015
The Unknown Sun by Cheryl S. Mackey tells the story of Moira, a teenage girl with a troubled past. Throughout her life, nearly everyone she has loved as died in one accident or another. Moira feels like she should have died too and can't fathom why everyone around her dies while she remains alive. When Moira is attacked by an unknown assailant and finds herself in a strange new world, she soon realizes that her survival may have more behind it than simple fate. Moira must find her place in this new world and fulfill her destiny.
The Good
The enjoyed the general idea behind this book and the world that it takes place in. I did not realize that Moira was a human girl from our Earth when I read the blurb. I had hoped this book would take place in an interesting fantasy world. Quickly enough it became apparent that Moira wouldn't be on Earth for long and my wish for an interesting world came true. The world that Moira visits in The Unknown Sun is on a different planet than Earth but it has deep connections to humans. A long, long time ago, three races of people lived on this planet. After much war and conflict, the humans of the planet escaped to a new home, that being our Earth. There are still artifacts left behind on this planet that resemble structures on Earth and it's clear to see how the people from our world and theirs are one in the same.
The world itself is full of magic and interesting characters. The main race of people whom we encounter are winged people, very similar to humans but larger, with wings and the ability to fly. They live in a medieval sort of society and their world is rather narrow, without a great deal of technology or exploration. There is also magic in this world, though it is long forgotten, for the most part. There were once beings of great power living in the land but all that is left of them are a few old statues that worked as portals in the distant past.
The idea of humans coming to Earth from another planet and having an entire history behind them that we have forgotten in the present day is highly interesting. I enjoyed finding out bits and pieces of how and why the humans left their home and made it to Earth.
The Bad
Unfortunately, I did have some big issues with this book. Namely, the characters themselves and the pacing of the book. First of all, there wasn't as much depth to the characters as I would have liked. Moira is a sensitive and shy girl who doesn't think she is worthy of anything good. This in and of itself is not an issue, as it gives her somewhere to grow, but she doesn't develop a self esteem very well throughout the book. She goes from being whiny, sad and conflicted for the majority of the book to a leader within the blink of an eye. It didn't seem realistic at all.
Moira also falls in love instantly with the first guy she sees when she wakes up on the new planet. He is infatuated with her as well and, by the end of the book, Moira has fallen into his arms and relied on his touch so many times that I wanted to gag. I don't have an issue with romance, but the development from strangers to lifelong love was far too quick. In general, all of the relationships felt insincere to me, from the sister and brother relationship of two of the main characters to the familial relationships introduced halfway through. Nothing felt realistic at all.
The pacing of the plot was also an issue for me. There were a lot of great action scenes and suspenseful moments but they were all done so quickly that they went by too fast. Every key plot point flew by, to the extent that the book felt rushed and shallow. I would have preferred more time to be spent fleshing out the storyline, adding in key details and allowing the plot to mature on its own.
The Verdict
Overall, I was disappointed in this book. That said, it wasn't terrible, it was an easy read, and it did have some positive aspects. If you think the idea of the plot sounds intriguing enough to grab your attention, maybe you should try it out!
The Good
The enjoyed the general idea behind this book and the world that it takes place in. I did not realize that Moira was a human girl from our Earth when I read the blurb. I had hoped this book would take place in an interesting fantasy world. Quickly enough it became apparent that Moira wouldn't be on Earth for long and my wish for an interesting world came true. The world that Moira visits in The Unknown Sun is on a different planet than Earth but it has deep connections to humans. A long, long time ago, three races of people lived on this planet. After much war and conflict, the humans of the planet escaped to a new home, that being our Earth. There are still artifacts left behind on this planet that resemble structures on Earth and it's clear to see how the people from our world and theirs are one in the same.
The world itself is full of magic and interesting characters. The main race of people whom we encounter are winged people, very similar to humans but larger, with wings and the ability to fly. They live in a medieval sort of society and their world is rather narrow, without a great deal of technology or exploration. There is also magic in this world, though it is long forgotten, for the most part. There were once beings of great power living in the land but all that is left of them are a few old statues that worked as portals in the distant past.
The idea of humans coming to Earth from another planet and having an entire history behind them that we have forgotten in the present day is highly interesting. I enjoyed finding out bits and pieces of how and why the humans left their home and made it to Earth.
The Bad
Unfortunately, I did have some big issues with this book. Namely, the characters themselves and the pacing of the book. First of all, there wasn't as much depth to the characters as I would have liked. Moira is a sensitive and shy girl who doesn't think she is worthy of anything good. This in and of itself is not an issue, as it gives her somewhere to grow, but she doesn't develop a self esteem very well throughout the book. She goes from being whiny, sad and conflicted for the majority of the book to a leader within the blink of an eye. It didn't seem realistic at all.
Moira also falls in love instantly with the first guy she sees when she wakes up on the new planet. He is infatuated with her as well and, by the end of the book, Moira has fallen into his arms and relied on his touch so many times that I wanted to gag. I don't have an issue with romance, but the development from strangers to lifelong love was far too quick. In general, all of the relationships felt insincere to me, from the sister and brother relationship of two of the main characters to the familial relationships introduced halfway through. Nothing felt realistic at all.
The pacing of the plot was also an issue for me. There were a lot of great action scenes and suspenseful moments but they were all done so quickly that they went by too fast. Every key plot point flew by, to the extent that the book felt rushed and shallow. I would have preferred more time to be spent fleshing out the storyline, adding in key details and allowing the plot to mature on its own.
The Verdict
Overall, I was disappointed in this book. That said, it wasn't terrible, it was an easy read, and it did have some positive aspects. If you think the idea of the plot sounds intriguing enough to grab your attention, maybe you should try it out!
January 31, 2015
Story idea= 4! Actual way it's written out... a bit less.I hover between a 2.5 and a 3. Here are the reasons why. (Bad to good)
There were a few sentences that could have been smoothed over. I think 3 or 4 even threw me out of the story and I had to reread them a few times before moving on.
I got a bit tired of all the gasping. People gasp in this book ALL the time.
Also I was a little bothered at how everything is so over the top... However, then I would just remind myself that it was a fantasy book and I would get back into the story again.
I LOVED that it was clean on the romance side. I Loved visualizing the world Moira goes to and the people she encounters. I am excited to read more of the series and find out how much farther and deeper Tanari's plan goes. I'm eager to find out who Moira really is... but I have a guess. I'm probably wrong so I don't want to post it. I like that the reader finds out information as the main characters do. At first I just wanted the author to tell me what in the world was going on and then I grew to understand the talent in her style.
Here is the summary as found on Amazon.
"Seventeen-year-old Moira is haunted by the accidents that claimed her parents and sisters. When a strange boy who seems to know too much about her past attacks her, Moira fears death will come for her a third time. She is rescued by twins Airi and Belamar, the winged heirs to the throne in Skyfall, and taken to safety in their world.
But Skyfall is dying, and the gods who had created and protected Airi and Belamar's world have been missing since the Great War. Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins' deceased mother, Tanari, that tells of a prophecy that must be fulfilled to find the gods known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved.
Deeper, darker, secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution threatens their quest and the boy who tried to destroy Moira on Earth hunts them. Tanari knew more than she had let on, and within her journal a story is more than it seems, the past foretells the future, and a far-reaching plan is unveiled.
Why did Tanari reach across time and space to entrust a simple human girl with saving Skyfall? Who are the mysterious “Four” mentioned in the journal? And why does another god want her, and The Unknown Sun, dead? "
I think it's amazing people come up with these ideas and then turn them into books to share with others. So far I'm just an idea person... maybe one day I'll be an author.
There were a few sentences that could have been smoothed over. I think 3 or 4 even threw me out of the story and I had to reread them a few times before moving on.
I got a bit tired of all the gasping. People gasp in this book ALL the time.
Also I was a little bothered at how everything is so over the top... However, then I would just remind myself that it was a fantasy book and I would get back into the story again.
I LOVED that it was clean on the romance side. I Loved visualizing the world Moira goes to and the people she encounters. I am excited to read more of the series and find out how much farther and deeper Tanari's plan goes. I'm eager to find out who Moira really is... but I have a guess. I'm probably wrong so I don't want to post it. I like that the reader finds out information as the main characters do. At first I just wanted the author to tell me what in the world was going on and then I grew to understand the talent in her style.
Here is the summary as found on Amazon.
"Seventeen-year-old Moira is haunted by the accidents that claimed her parents and sisters. When a strange boy who seems to know too much about her past attacks her, Moira fears death will come for her a third time. She is rescued by twins Airi and Belamar, the winged heirs to the throne in Skyfall, and taken to safety in their world.
But Skyfall is dying, and the gods who had created and protected Airi and Belamar's world have been missing since the Great War. Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins' deceased mother, Tanari, that tells of a prophecy that must be fulfilled to find the gods known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved.
Deeper, darker, secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution threatens their quest and the boy who tried to destroy Moira on Earth hunts them. Tanari knew more than she had let on, and within her journal a story is more than it seems, the past foretells the future, and a far-reaching plan is unveiled.
Why did Tanari reach across time and space to entrust a simple human girl with saving Skyfall? Who are the mysterious “Four” mentioned in the journal? And why does another god want her, and The Unknown Sun, dead? "
I think it's amazing people come up with these ideas and then turn them into books to share with others. So far I'm just an idea person... maybe one day I'll be an author.
July 22, 2014
Book Review originally published here: http://www.iheartreading.net/book-tou...
The Unknown Sun is an interesting YA Fantasy novella that offers solid writing, an easy-to-relate to heroine, an intriguing cast of secondary characters, and plenty of plot twists. The book starts by introducing us to seventeen-year-old Moira, who lost her parents and sisters in several freak accidents. She gets attacked by a strange boy who seems to know way more about her past than she does. Twin brothers Airi and Belamar rescue Moira, and take her to the safety of their own world, Skyfall.
Skyfall is dying, and the gods who created the world, are missing. Moira must help the twins find a journal left behind by their mother to find out about the prophecy to save Skyfall.
The plot is fast-paced, and I was surprised by the originality and creativity author Cheryl S. Mackey offered throughout the book. I enjoyed seeing the character’s change and develop. Belamar was easily my favorite character of the bunch, but Moira was a close second.
I would recommend this book to all fans of YA Fantasy looking for something different and unique.
The Unknown Sun is an interesting YA Fantasy novella that offers solid writing, an easy-to-relate to heroine, an intriguing cast of secondary characters, and plenty of plot twists. The book starts by introducing us to seventeen-year-old Moira, who lost her parents and sisters in several freak accidents. She gets attacked by a strange boy who seems to know way more about her past than she does. Twin brothers Airi and Belamar rescue Moira, and take her to the safety of their own world, Skyfall.
Skyfall is dying, and the gods who created the world, are missing. Moira must help the twins find a journal left behind by their mother to find out about the prophecy to save Skyfall.
The plot is fast-paced, and I was surprised by the originality and creativity author Cheryl S. Mackey offered throughout the book. I enjoyed seeing the character’s change and develop. Belamar was easily my favorite character of the bunch, but Moira was a close second.
I would recommend this book to all fans of YA Fantasy looking for something different and unique.
June 5, 2014
*This Book Was Given To Me By The Author In Exchange For An Honest Review*
I can't quite put my finger on what stopped this from being an outstanding read for me. The characters are detailed well and are fairly original, the world is well described and fully thought out, but something didn't quite work.
This is a well written fantasy novel with a story that moves at a fairly decent pace. There is a generous amount of action, in fact all the elements that really should have made it a page turner.
I think it just has to be a disconnect between the author's style and myself although even now I fail to see where it is.
I would still recommend Fantasy lovers check this book out. I think there are a huge number of readers out there that would become firm fans. Sadly I was just not one of them.
3 1/2 out of 5 stars from me (Rounded up to 4 as per my protocol)
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I can't quite put my finger on what stopped this from being an outstanding read for me. The characters are detailed well and are fairly original, the world is well described and fully thought out, but something didn't quite work.
This is a well written fantasy novel with a story that moves at a fairly decent pace. There is a generous amount of action, in fact all the elements that really should have made it a page turner.
I think it just has to be a disconnect between the author's style and myself although even now I fail to see where it is.
I would still recommend Fantasy lovers check this book out. I think there are a huge number of readers out there that would become firm fans. Sadly I was just not one of them.
3 1/2 out of 5 stars from me (Rounded up to 4 as per my protocol)
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August 14, 2015
This was very interesting for me. I liked all the characters but I found this book a little harder to believe. Weird, I know since it is fantasy. Moira I think was my favorite character. I guess some books hit me better than others. I did enjoy the story and I would read more from this author I just think this book could've grabbed me and pulled me in more than what it did. * I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review*
July 19, 2014
Transported through a magic portal, Moira finds herself in Skyfall, where she just happens to be the Chosen One.
I will admit that I was not too impressed with main character Moira. She starts off at school, where she is destined to play the victim. She is bullied and would rather just accept it and pout about it on her own rather than do something about it. When she gets to Skyfall, she is just another dumb girl in need of rescuing. She obviously has the hots for Belamar from their first meeting, and he for her as well. This tired old love story is predictable and unoriginal. Have her fall for a gargoyle. I don’t care, just don’t have the two main character’s fall in love. It’s been done a million times, and I would love to see something original for once.
In contrast, character Airi is a strong woman. She is a warrior, she has a past of her own, and her character had more depth than any of the others. Surpassing the main character in her range of emotions and actions, I connected with her far more than any other. Her brother Belamar struck me as your typical muscle-bound meat head who is just there to protect the weak girl. I’d love to read more about Airi and leave out the other two.
The world of Skyfall has a rich history and has been developed quite well by the author. It is an interesting place, complete with sibling rivalry for the throne. I always appreciate a good villain, and this tale does not disappoint in that respect. There are nicely written histories for the characters, which added greatly to their depth, even the ones I didn’t care for much.
The action scenes are quite nicely written, but they are too short and too few for my personal taste. The action is slowed down by minor details such as cooking potatoes and fixing one’s hair. There are also far too many adjectives in some places. For example: “whisper-thin golden brown velvet gown”. I would have preferred a lot more action because the author keeps those scenes to the point rather than being overly wordy and descriptive.
I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
I will admit that I was not too impressed with main character Moira. She starts off at school, where she is destined to play the victim. She is bullied and would rather just accept it and pout about it on her own rather than do something about it. When she gets to Skyfall, she is just another dumb girl in need of rescuing. She obviously has the hots for Belamar from their first meeting, and he for her as well. This tired old love story is predictable and unoriginal. Have her fall for a gargoyle. I don’t care, just don’t have the two main character’s fall in love. It’s been done a million times, and I would love to see something original for once.
In contrast, character Airi is a strong woman. She is a warrior, she has a past of her own, and her character had more depth than any of the others. Surpassing the main character in her range of emotions and actions, I connected with her far more than any other. Her brother Belamar struck me as your typical muscle-bound meat head who is just there to protect the weak girl. I’d love to read more about Airi and leave out the other two.
The world of Skyfall has a rich history and has been developed quite well by the author. It is an interesting place, complete with sibling rivalry for the throne. I always appreciate a good villain, and this tale does not disappoint in that respect. There are nicely written histories for the characters, which added greatly to their depth, even the ones I didn’t care for much.
The action scenes are quite nicely written, but they are too short and too few for my personal taste. The action is slowed down by minor details such as cooking potatoes and fixing one’s hair. There are also far too many adjectives in some places. For example: “whisper-thin golden brown velvet gown”. I would have preferred a lot more action because the author keeps those scenes to the point rather than being overly wordy and descriptive.
I was given a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
June 11, 2014
First off, let me say that Young Adult is usually not my genre. And, in the past, when I’ve read Young Adult with a female narrator, I’ve usually wanted to throttle said character. I am happy to report that despite both of these things having been my track record, neither were true here and I actually enjoyed 'The Unknown Sun' quite a bit! (I.E., I did not want to smack Moira for being a twit, so this is a big plus for me.)
My primary complaint is that it moved too fast through a lot of it, for my tastes. I like stories that move quickly and don’t linger too long before getting to the action, but this one jumped in a little too fast. I wanted more time to get to know our characters before all the Big Dramatic Stuff rushed at them.
However, it wasn’t SO fast that I wasn’t able to get into them at all. The character development early on was just enough to keep me with them and on their side until later when my appreciation for them really set in. Would I have liked more development earlier on? Yes. Did the lack of more keep me from liking it? No.
Moira I liked, although better as we went along. Bel and Airi were just the type of characters I love, however, so I was with them right from the start. I also like the emotional set up to the group of the three.
Although I know there’s more stories to come in the over all story, I still feel like the story told in this one needed more to it to be told fully. (Like I was saying about character development earlier.) And yet, just the same, it wasn’t enough to pull me away from enjoying it on the whole.
I really liked The Four. The wings in relation to emotion was very cool, too. Overall, I really liked the world created as well. This had a lot of little things working for it that I really liked.
Plus, I have to note that after reading the book so I knew the significance, the cover is very cool.
I am interested to see what happens in the next book. I can’t give it a raving 5, but it’s a solid 4 Fireballs.
My primary complaint is that it moved too fast through a lot of it, for my tastes. I like stories that move quickly and don’t linger too long before getting to the action, but this one jumped in a little too fast. I wanted more time to get to know our characters before all the Big Dramatic Stuff rushed at them.
However, it wasn’t SO fast that I wasn’t able to get into them at all. The character development early on was just enough to keep me with them and on their side until later when my appreciation for them really set in. Would I have liked more development earlier on? Yes. Did the lack of more keep me from liking it? No.
Moira I liked, although better as we went along. Bel and Airi were just the type of characters I love, however, so I was with them right from the start. I also like the emotional set up to the group of the three.
Although I know there’s more stories to come in the over all story, I still feel like the story told in this one needed more to it to be told fully. (Like I was saying about character development earlier.) And yet, just the same, it wasn’t enough to pull me away from enjoying it on the whole.
I really liked The Four. The wings in relation to emotion was very cool, too. Overall, I really liked the world created as well. This had a lot of little things working for it that I really liked.
Plus, I have to note that after reading the book so I knew the significance, the cover is very cool.
I am interested to see what happens in the next book. I can’t give it a raving 5, but it’s a solid 4 Fireballs.
August 12, 2014
When the author contacted me about the possibility of a review, I took one look at the cover and fell in love. The artwork gives us a sense of both fragility and power, and the design whispers a promise of secrets and mystery.
Yep. I loved the cover.
Mackey gave herself a tough job: She created a girl that was horribly, severely, emotionally broken... then set about the task of healing those wounds. Not only that, but Moira had the future of an entire world on her shoulders. Not an easy task.
How does a person emotionally recover from not one, but two near death experiences that took away the people they love most? And how does a person learn to love again without fearing another heartbreak?
In Moira's case, it took traveling all the way to another world in order to make this happen. Her companionship with Skylanders Airi and Bel gave her the strength necessary to transform herself. This friendship was strong, and romance blossomed between Moira and Bel.
Mackey did have a tendency to use a bit too much of the passive voice, and quite a few adverbs were sprinkled throughout the story. This caused it to lose energy at some points. At around 60% through the ebook, however, Mackey picks up the pace with stronger word choices. The energy picks up and The Unknown Sun becomes truly engrossing.
I was particularly interested in Airi.
She wasn't the standard female friend. She was strong, determined, and she kicked some serious butt! Airi had what I would call the leadership within this group of friends. I found her to be quite an admirable character. I'd like to see more of her in a future ebook.
(This is a truncation of my full review, posted to Undiscovered Tomes.)
Yep. I loved the cover.
Mackey gave herself a tough job: She created a girl that was horribly, severely, emotionally broken... then set about the task of healing those wounds. Not only that, but Moira had the future of an entire world on her shoulders. Not an easy task.
How does a person emotionally recover from not one, but two near death experiences that took away the people they love most? And how does a person learn to love again without fearing another heartbreak?
In Moira's case, it took traveling all the way to another world in order to make this happen. Her companionship with Skylanders Airi and Bel gave her the strength necessary to transform herself. This friendship was strong, and romance blossomed between Moira and Bel.
Mackey did have a tendency to use a bit too much of the passive voice, and quite a few adverbs were sprinkled throughout the story. This caused it to lose energy at some points. At around 60% through the ebook, however, Mackey picks up the pace with stronger word choices. The energy picks up and The Unknown Sun becomes truly engrossing.
I was particularly interested in Airi.
She wasn't the standard female friend. She was strong, determined, and she kicked some serious butt! Airi had what I would call the leadership within this group of friends. I found her to be quite an admirable character. I'd like to see more of her in a future ebook.
(This is a truncation of my full review, posted to Undiscovered Tomes.)
February 1, 2015
An Unknown Sun May Be Setting or Rising
Seventeen-year-old Moira wants to disappear. She's experienced more grief and loss during her life than most people. Her sisters and her parents died in horrific accidents. She doesn't know why she alone was saved.
When mysterious young man attacks Moira when she's home alone during a storm, she's afraid her luck has finally run out. She's teetering at the abyss of death when unexpected rescuers swoop in and carry her to safety.
"Dying.
"The word sinks like a stone in my chest and I choke on a ragged exhale. Belamar’s hands gently trail across my face, brushing my heavy hair aside. Unveiled, I feel exposed, naked, as if there is nothing between me, and the hole in my heart. Aching sorrow punches me in the chest, and everything tilts.
"Death and I are never apart, even here across the universe."
Cheryl Mackey's The Unknown Sun (The Destiny Series Book 1) is classified as Young Adult. However, the excellent writing, well-defined characters, and wonderful story is appealing to all ages.
Seventeen-year-old Moira wants to disappear. She's experienced more grief and loss during her life than most people. Her sisters and her parents died in horrific accidents. She doesn't know why she alone was saved.
When mysterious young man attacks Moira when she's home alone during a storm, she's afraid her luck has finally run out. She's teetering at the abyss of death when unexpected rescuers swoop in and carry her to safety.
"Dying.
"The word sinks like a stone in my chest and I choke on a ragged exhale. Belamar’s hands gently trail across my face, brushing my heavy hair aside. Unveiled, I feel exposed, naked, as if there is nothing between me, and the hole in my heart. Aching sorrow punches me in the chest, and everything tilts.
"Death and I are never apart, even here across the universe."
Cheryl Mackey's The Unknown Sun (The Destiny Series Book 1) is classified as Young Adult. However, the excellent writing, well-defined characters, and wonderful story is appealing to all ages.
February 10, 2015
Great writing. Amazing world.
This is such a well-written book. Fantasy isn't usually my genre of choice, but this cover really drew me in and piqued my interest. The writing is so clear and precise, that this world--its sights, sounds, and people--unfolded before my eyes like a painting.
My only complaints are minor. Certain phrases were used a lot, like people licked their lips too many times. The word enigmatic was used to describe eyes/expressions very often. I, personally, did not feel much of a love connection between Bel and Moira. Emotions seemed to run high throughout the story. Everyone cried a lot, so much that it stopped affecting my own emotions. It was like, oh, they're crying again, NBD. I felt sorta heartless by my lack of emotional response after a while.
But still, very strong writing. This world built by the author is absolutely incredible. I will definitely recommend this to my friends who love fantasy.
This is such a well-written book. Fantasy isn't usually my genre of choice, but this cover really drew me in and piqued my interest. The writing is so clear and precise, that this world--its sights, sounds, and people--unfolded before my eyes like a painting.
My only complaints are minor. Certain phrases were used a lot, like people licked their lips too many times. The word enigmatic was used to describe eyes/expressions very often. I, personally, did not feel much of a love connection between Bel and Moira. Emotions seemed to run high throughout the story. Everyone cried a lot, so much that it stopped affecting my own emotions. It was like, oh, they're crying again, NBD. I felt sorta heartless by my lack of emotional response after a while.
But still, very strong writing. This world built by the author is absolutely incredible. I will definitely recommend this to my friends who love fantasy.
February 27, 2020
What I liked most about this fantasy novel was the glittering and extensive worldbuilding. The author created an intriguing universe that I very much enjoyed reading about. Moira starts off living a life of tragedy and drudgery, only to be swept away by a love interest and thrust into a mission she doesn't quite believe she can accomplish. A few times, I wanted Moira to act with a bit more agency, but given her life up until the events at this book, I can see why she felt so helpless. A recommended read for those that like fantasy in a modern setting.
April 27, 2016
This was a wonderful ya story. It throws you into a whole new world but gives you insight to humans also I loved the way the characters grew and became who they are meant to be. A story about a young girl who has been through far more than most and still finds a place in the world even if it's not the one she thought it would be.
June 9, 2014
The Unknown Sun is a wonderfully original fantasy adventure. Mackey is an author that has a great eye for detail and writes like a master. I highly recommend this for any fantasy fan.
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See my full review at http://indiebookreviewer.blogspot.com
November 9, 2022
A fascinating fantasy story. Moira is having a difficult time with all that has happened. There have been accidents happening in her family. When will this stop, can she change anything. I can’t wait for the next book.
September 13, 2022
An ARC was provided me by the author, so here is my honest review of the book :)
Can I start off by saying I absolutely adore the cover! Great art, truly pulls you into wanting to read that book.
Furthermore about the story I'd like to say I liked it for a 3.5 stars, as I started reading faster the further the story developed. We’re following Moira, basically going on an adventure with Bel and Airi. The world of Skyfall will die, unless Moira finds the lost immortals.
At first I couldn’t quite feel it with the character of Moira. She felt a bit too weak to me, but it made sense given her background. I also thought the adorable feelings came on a bit too quick.
All in all entertaining, getting better along the way, but not yet entirely my cup of tea.
Can I start off by saying I absolutely adore the cover! Great art, truly pulls you into wanting to read that book.
Furthermore about the story I'd like to say I liked it for a 3.5 stars, as I started reading faster the further the story developed. We’re following Moira, basically going on an adventure with Bel and Airi. The world of Skyfall will die, unless Moira finds the lost immortals.
At first I couldn’t quite feel it with the character of Moira. She felt a bit too weak to me, but it made sense given her background. I also thought the adorable feelings came on a bit too quick.
All in all entertaining, getting better along the way, but not yet entirely my cup of tea.
November 5, 2022
I've got an ARC copy of the book and here's my honest review
First off it wasn't entirely my cup of tea.
I what I loved: the world building, loved the other world with its history of the three races living there and turned to war that the humans left the planet for Earth and magic just a memory. It had some great battle scenes and great tie-in to her prequel series.
Now what I didn't like: the pacing-there were great scenes but far in between, interrupted by sequences that were slugging. Then there's the insta-love between Moira and Bel. Their relationship just felt rushed for me. There's lots descriptions of his well muscled body which got jarring at some point.
All in all it was a nice read that just missing a little bit of polish.
First off it wasn't entirely my cup of tea.
I what I loved: the world building, loved the other world with its history of the three races living there and turned to war that the humans left the planet for Earth and magic just a memory. It had some great battle scenes and great tie-in to her prequel series.
Now what I didn't like: the pacing-there were great scenes but far in between, interrupted by sequences that were slugging. Then there's the insta-love between Moira and Bel. Their relationship just felt rushed for me. There's lots descriptions of his well muscled body which got jarring at some point.
All in all it was a nice read that just missing a little bit of polish.
September 25, 2022
I really liked this story. The characters are great and the world building is impressive. It's not easy to create a whole other world, its history, and two languages.
All the characters change and grow, although Moira stays a bit too weepy and anxiety-ridden for my taste. I almost cried during the battle; Moira found so much strength, it was beautiful. The losses were very sad, but it was needed for our characters to change. My only complaint is I'd like to know why the rebels retreated because it was unexpected and sudden.
I definitely recommend this book and look forward to reading the next!
All the characters change and grow, although Moira stays a bit too weepy and anxiety-ridden for my taste. I almost cried during the battle; Moira found so much strength, it was beautiful. The losses were very sad, but it was needed for our characters to change. My only complaint is I'd like to know why the rebels retreated because it was unexpected and sudden.
I definitely recommend this book and look forward to reading the next!
November 2, 2022
Gray eyes to weather the storms of life
This poor gal sure has been through a lot in her life. And then…to be harassed/assaulted by some strange guy talkin’ trash to her about something & someone with whom she is totally clueless. And then…to be portalled off into time AND space. And then…
Fave quote:
‘Death and I are never apart, even here across the universe.’
Sage advice from the author:
When you find a path, just belt out “The Yellow Brick Road”.
Is the quest to find The Unknown Sun successful? Does the green-eyed boy get this revenge? Guess we’ll find out in the next book…
This poor gal sure has been through a lot in her life. And then…to be harassed/assaulted by some strange guy talkin’ trash to her about something & someone with whom she is totally clueless. And then…to be portalled off into time AND space. And then…
Fave quote:
‘Death and I are never apart, even here across the universe.’
Sage advice from the author:
When you find a path, just belt out “The Yellow Brick Road”.
Is the quest to find The Unknown Sun successful? Does the green-eyed boy get this revenge? Guess we’ll find out in the next book…
June 3, 2020
Fascinating fantasy world
This book is set in another world with a human girl at its center. Years ago, after a war that they couldnt win, the humans fled to earth. Moira has suffered more than any normal human should so when shes attacked in her own home she isnt really surprised. Being saved by winged people is surprising.
The descriptions in this book are very well done. It brings the world and its characters to life. I was sucked right in while reading it and really enjoyed it. It starts off with a bang, just the way i like it.
This book is set in another world with a human girl at its center. Years ago, after a war that they couldnt win, the humans fled to earth. Moira has suffered more than any normal human should so when shes attacked in her own home she isnt really surprised. Being saved by winged people is surprising.
The descriptions in this book are very well done. It brings the world and its characters to life. I was sucked right in while reading it and really enjoyed it. It starts off with a bang, just the way i like it.
March 29, 2024
I had a great time reading this!
This took me back to my teenage years watching fantasy TV shows and becoming obsessed with the characters.
The main character is GREAT. In YA fantasy, the heroine is often a bit of a cipher, existing just as a means of having things explained to the reader. I LOVE Moira! She reminds me of how I was as a teen, insecure, struggling with trauma, desperate to belong. Her character arc is so satisfying, and you really become invested in her growth. She’s awesome!
I cannot wait to read the next book in the series!
This took me back to my teenage years watching fantasy TV shows and becoming obsessed with the characters.
The main character is GREAT. In YA fantasy, the heroine is often a bit of a cipher, existing just as a means of having things explained to the reader. I LOVE Moira! She reminds me of how I was as a teen, insecure, struggling with trauma, desperate to belong. Her character arc is so satisfying, and you really become invested in her growth. She’s awesome!
I cannot wait to read the next book in the series!
September 6, 2022
Received as a review copy, this is an honest review. A gorgeous, expansive adventure with subtly-laced, realistically flawed characters you can't stop] thinking about a you root for the them to find a place in the vast world. The author's passion and creativity is clearly there on every single page a the heroic quest is gritty and memorable and get it's just the beginning. Highly recommended.
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September 26, 2022Really interesting start to a series. Worth the read if you enjoy otherworlds and races of beings.
February 1, 2023
This turned out to be an entertaining book, written well enough to hold my interest throughout.
March 24, 2023
This is such a well-written book with such rich world-building and well developed characters and story line. I really enjoyed the MC and her journey
November 26, 2015
*I was provided a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review. I am not compensated for my honest opinion.*
With scars on the inside and outside from accidents that took her family’s lives and should have taken hers—twice—seventeen-year-old Moira hides from the world and tries to stay invisible. When a strange boy attacks her, Moira fears the third time will finally be the end of her life. Instead of dying, Moira is saved by twins Airi and Belamar and taken to their world. Moira innately feels she can trust the winged twins, who are heirs to the throne of Skyfall, a world that is dying and that the three will need to save.
The Immortals who once protected Skyfall have been missing for centuries. Bel, Airi, and Moira are sent on a quest to find the twins’ mother’s diary, which provides information on how to find the Immortals and who is behind all the chaos. Once a nobody teenager, Moira now finds herself with powers beyond even the Immortals and courage she didn’t know she was capable of. The three need to journey into dangerous territory to restore the statues that will release the Immortals and then figure out how to restore Skyfall to its former glory.
The Unknown Sun is a young adult fantasy novel that builds on the foundation laid out in the novella The Immortals: Part One: Shadows & Starstone. Although the two works go together, you do not have to read The Immortals in order to understand The Unknown Sun. Enough background information is provided to make the novel feel like a standalone book. That said, the story doesn’t end at the conclusion of The Unknown Sun. The quest Moira, Bel, and Airi are on is not finished. I am not typically a fan of cliffhanger endings, so I was happy to find this story did not end on a cliffhanger. Although the quest will continue in the next book, there was a satisfying ending to The Unknown Sun. The author found a good place to stop one story before the novel moved into the “way too long” category. Are there unresolved issues? Of course. But there was enough resolution to leave me feeling satisfied when I was done.
As for the story, it had me hooked right from the beginning. There is plenty of action and quite a bit of mystery as the plot moves along. The main character goes through a good deal of growth—from a teenage nobody hiding behind her hair to stay invisible to a brave leader standing up for what she believes is right.
There is also a little bit of romance and a lot of friendship. When Moira meets Belamar and Airi, the beautiful winged twins who saved her on Earth, she knows she can trust them. The three develop a close friendship, which is something Moira has never had before. She’d lay down her life for either one of them, and they would do the same for her. Bel and Moira have a draw between them, and Bel’s protectiveness of Moira made me swoon many times. The author accomplished this bond with minimal fuss—little actions like Bel using his wings or body to protect Moira, or making a bed of furs for her so she’d be comfortable, or just a comforting arm around her shoulders. This is definitely a young adult romance. It’s clean and simple, and friendship is the primary focus.
The descriptions of the characters were spot-on, providing a good visual for the different types of people. I could easily picture each scene, to the point where this book read more like a movie going through my head. My only complaint would be that at times it felt overly descriptive and somewhat distracting. Some of it could have been cut down to have a cleaner read.
There were also quite a few grammatical errors, but thankfully not enough to draw me out of the plot. It definitely held my attention from beginning to end.
Overall, this was a very enjoyable story. I look forward to the next book in the series and finishing the quest with Moira, Bel, and Airi.
For more of my reviews, please visit https://rachlawrencebooks.wordpress.com/.
With scars on the inside and outside from accidents that took her family’s lives and should have taken hers—twice—seventeen-year-old Moira hides from the world and tries to stay invisible. When a strange boy attacks her, Moira fears the third time will finally be the end of her life. Instead of dying, Moira is saved by twins Airi and Belamar and taken to their world. Moira innately feels she can trust the winged twins, who are heirs to the throne of Skyfall, a world that is dying and that the three will need to save.
The Immortals who once protected Skyfall have been missing for centuries. Bel, Airi, and Moira are sent on a quest to find the twins’ mother’s diary, which provides information on how to find the Immortals and who is behind all the chaos. Once a nobody teenager, Moira now finds herself with powers beyond even the Immortals and courage she didn’t know she was capable of. The three need to journey into dangerous territory to restore the statues that will release the Immortals and then figure out how to restore Skyfall to its former glory.
The Unknown Sun is a young adult fantasy novel that builds on the foundation laid out in the novella The Immortals: Part One: Shadows & Starstone. Although the two works go together, you do not have to read The Immortals in order to understand The Unknown Sun. Enough background information is provided to make the novel feel like a standalone book. That said, the story doesn’t end at the conclusion of The Unknown Sun. The quest Moira, Bel, and Airi are on is not finished. I am not typically a fan of cliffhanger endings, so I was happy to find this story did not end on a cliffhanger. Although the quest will continue in the next book, there was a satisfying ending to The Unknown Sun. The author found a good place to stop one story before the novel moved into the “way too long” category. Are there unresolved issues? Of course. But there was enough resolution to leave me feeling satisfied when I was done.
As for the story, it had me hooked right from the beginning. There is plenty of action and quite a bit of mystery as the plot moves along. The main character goes through a good deal of growth—from a teenage nobody hiding behind her hair to stay invisible to a brave leader standing up for what she believes is right.
There is also a little bit of romance and a lot of friendship. When Moira meets Belamar and Airi, the beautiful winged twins who saved her on Earth, she knows she can trust them. The three develop a close friendship, which is something Moira has never had before. She’d lay down her life for either one of them, and they would do the same for her. Bel and Moira have a draw between them, and Bel’s protectiveness of Moira made me swoon many times. The author accomplished this bond with minimal fuss—little actions like Bel using his wings or body to protect Moira, or making a bed of furs for her so she’d be comfortable, or just a comforting arm around her shoulders. This is definitely a young adult romance. It’s clean and simple, and friendship is the primary focus.
The descriptions of the characters were spot-on, providing a good visual for the different types of people. I could easily picture each scene, to the point where this book read more like a movie going through my head. My only complaint would be that at times it felt overly descriptive and somewhat distracting. Some of it could have been cut down to have a cleaner read.
There were also quite a few grammatical errors, but thankfully not enough to draw me out of the plot. It definitely held my attention from beginning to end.
Overall, this was a very enjoyable story. I look forward to the next book in the series and finishing the quest with Moira, Bel, and Airi.
For more of my reviews, please visit https://rachlawrencebooks.wordpress.com/.
May 10, 2021
So, quite a long blurb again which gives you a little overview of what’s in store so I’m not going to tire you by going through it for the second time. The first thing to mention is the cover; it definitely caught my eye when I did my research into the book and thought it looked really intriguing which was a little exciting. In terms of the characterisation I thought that Moira was really pleasingly written. So often in fantasy books the main characters take the changes to their life in one foul swoop but here Moira was clearly stressed and constantly re-evaluating what was going on. Questioning everything around her it felt like a genuine reaction to the sudden change in direction of her life as a whole. I enjoyed seeing Moira grow throughout and really develop as a character. In terms of the fantasy feel I found the world that Mackey created utterly picturesque and I really enjoyed the descriptions of the winged people. The unfamiliar language used throughout and the use of hyphenated names was a clever addition and helped to make it all feel the more real.
The writing style is overall strong and well put together. The descriptions throughout are really evocative of the fantasy genre as a whole and it helps to transport you to this new world.
“The gritty sandstone dirt shifted and sank beneath the weapon, leaving a carpet of green in the exact same shape as its shadow. Tiny vines coiled and waited for their orders. Emaranthe inhaled deeply. Ghostly flames licked and curled from her staff up her arm to her shoulders and over her body. The fire writhed and twisted, nearly invisible, until her entire body was sheathed in a layer of living flame.”
The plot moves with pace and agility despite the descriptions used and the quest-like feel is all very fantasy like so readers of this genre will feel right at home I am sure.
The only real complain other than a couple of editing wobbles was the overly frequent describing of, as another reviewer puts it, ‘physical responses.’ There are a lot of breathless moments where our main character is struggling for breath and having trouble with her legs caving beneath her. I understand that it’s a traumatic experience for such a young girl but I think it could have been reigned in a little because it jars slightly with the strength that we can see is building in Moira. Less is sometimes more, and when it really needs to be that intense it will make those moments all the more powerful.
Overall I would definitely recommend this to fantasy readers and readers who are new or exploring the fantasy genre as a whole. Having a general dislike of the fantasy genre as a whole (sorry) for me to suggest reading one means a great deal. I think the age group for this book is perfect for me, late teens early twenties but I think it could be enjoyed by all because it does have the formula for a fantasy read. A lovely little book and one I am happy to have read.
*I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review*
The writing style is overall strong and well put together. The descriptions throughout are really evocative of the fantasy genre as a whole and it helps to transport you to this new world.
“The gritty sandstone dirt shifted and sank beneath the weapon, leaving a carpet of green in the exact same shape as its shadow. Tiny vines coiled and waited for their orders. Emaranthe inhaled deeply. Ghostly flames licked and curled from her staff up her arm to her shoulders and over her body. The fire writhed and twisted, nearly invisible, until her entire body was sheathed in a layer of living flame.”
The plot moves with pace and agility despite the descriptions used and the quest-like feel is all very fantasy like so readers of this genre will feel right at home I am sure.
The only real complain other than a couple of editing wobbles was the overly frequent describing of, as another reviewer puts it, ‘physical responses.’ There are a lot of breathless moments where our main character is struggling for breath and having trouble with her legs caving beneath her. I understand that it’s a traumatic experience for such a young girl but I think it could have been reigned in a little because it jars slightly with the strength that we can see is building in Moira. Less is sometimes more, and when it really needs to be that intense it will make those moments all the more powerful.
Overall I would definitely recommend this to fantasy readers and readers who are new or exploring the fantasy genre as a whole. Having a general dislike of the fantasy genre as a whole (sorry) for me to suggest reading one means a great deal. I think the age group for this book is perfect for me, late teens early twenties but I think it could be enjoyed by all because it does have the formula for a fantasy read. A lovely little book and one I am happy to have read.
*I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review*
April 25, 2015
I discovered The Unknown Sun by Cheryl Mackey through one of my Facebook groups. Intrigued by the cover and I decided I had to read it. Read on to discover my thoughts!
Synopsis (from the author): Seventeen-year-old Moira is haunted by the accidents that claimed her parents and sisters. When a strange boy who seems to know too much about her past attacks her, Moira fears death will come for her a third time. She is rescued by twins Airi and Belamar, the winged heirs to the throne in Skyfall, and taken to safety in their world.
But Skyfall is dying, and the Immortals who had protected Airi and Belamar's world have been missing since the Great War. Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins' deceased mother, Tanari, that tells of a prophecy that must be fulfilled to free the Immortals known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved.
Deeper, darker, secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution threatens their quest and the boy who tried to destroy Moira on Earth hunts them. Tanari knew more than she had let on, and within her journal a story is more than it seems, the past foretells the future, and a far-reaching plan is unveiled.
Why did Tanari reach across time and space to entrust a simple human girl with saving Skyfall? Who are the mysterious “Four” mentioned in the journal? And why does another Immortal want her, and The Unknown Sun, dead?
What I liked: Besides the cover, the story was amazing. I thought at first that the story was going to involve angels when Bel and his sister Aira swoop in to save Moira from an attack. However, I was pleasantly surprised when it turned out differently. Not that I have anything against angels, but they seem to be an overused character in recent times. Anyway, Moira and the twins flee Earth and arrive in Skyfall where they have to undertake a quest to save Skyfall. The characters are memorable, with a tragic past, and an unknown future. The plot was good, with enough twists and turns to keep me interested. All said, excellent read.
What I didn’t like: The story dragged for me in a few spots, especially where Moira kept being embarrassed by the closeness of Bel. Other than that, not much to dislike.
Overall impression: This was an excellent read. I enjoyed the story, characters, and concept. I would recommend it to anyone who reads fantasy and likes a dash of romance with it!
My rating: 5 Stars
Synopsis (from the author): Seventeen-year-old Moira is haunted by the accidents that claimed her parents and sisters. When a strange boy who seems to know too much about her past attacks her, Moira fears death will come for her a third time. She is rescued by twins Airi and Belamar, the winged heirs to the throne in Skyfall, and taken to safety in their world.
But Skyfall is dying, and the Immortals who had protected Airi and Belamar's world have been missing since the Great War. Moira, Airi, and Belamar must find a journal left by the twins' deceased mother, Tanari, that tells of a prophecy that must be fulfilled to free the Immortals known as The Unknown Sun so that Skyfall can be saved.
Deeper, darker, secrets unravel around the three friends as a revolution threatens their quest and the boy who tried to destroy Moira on Earth hunts them. Tanari knew more than she had let on, and within her journal a story is more than it seems, the past foretells the future, and a far-reaching plan is unveiled.
Why did Tanari reach across time and space to entrust a simple human girl with saving Skyfall? Who are the mysterious “Four” mentioned in the journal? And why does another Immortal want her, and The Unknown Sun, dead?
What I liked: Besides the cover, the story was amazing. I thought at first that the story was going to involve angels when Bel and his sister Aira swoop in to save Moira from an attack. However, I was pleasantly surprised when it turned out differently. Not that I have anything against angels, but they seem to be an overused character in recent times. Anyway, Moira and the twins flee Earth and arrive in Skyfall where they have to undertake a quest to save Skyfall. The characters are memorable, with a tragic past, and an unknown future. The plot was good, with enough twists and turns to keep me interested. All said, excellent read.
What I didn’t like: The story dragged for me in a few spots, especially where Moira kept being embarrassed by the closeness of Bel. Other than that, not much to dislike.
Overall impression: This was an excellent read. I enjoyed the story, characters, and concept. I would recommend it to anyone who reads fantasy and likes a dash of romance with it!
My rating: 5 Stars
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