*I got this ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
“A good Rake is hard to find” is the 1st book in the “Lord of Anarchy” series by Manda Collins.
First of all I don’t understand why everybody on Goodreads seems to love this book, I found it – mostly – downright boring and quite bumpy.
Leonora Collins, a stubborn bluestocking and popular female poem writer, is mourning the death of her brother Johnny who participated in races arranged by the “Lord of Anarchy”, a Regency kind of bike gang but only with racing carriages. She knows that the death hasn’t been an accident because he was a first class driver and his carriage was stolen and couldn’t be processed.
In any case she was, five years ago, engaged to Freddy, a younger son of an earl. She broke it off back then and he was sent, by his parents, to the continent because he drowned himself in alcohol day by day. She never got him a reason, just broke it off.
Next to that Freddy was one of the best friends of Johnny and when she reaches the point to investigate her brother’s point, she meets with Freddy and asks him for help. Very, very quickly he comes up with a plan – a faux pas betrothal, him becoming a member of the “Lord of Anarchy” club, because his cousin Gerard runs it, and attend club meetings.
And very soon they attend the first gathering of the club and start to investigate …
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Where shall I start? There are many things that just don’t go smoothly in my opinion. First of all Freddy’s brother, from whom he borrows the curricle is in the country side because his wife is about to give birth. Suddenly so said sister-in-law is in London to meet Leonora with Freddy’s mom to visit her. Why on earth should she, highly pregnant, travel back to London to meet Freddy’s betrothed?
Secondly, when they sleep together for the first time, Freddy doesn’t know about Leonora’s past and he tells her that it may hurt. But he doesn’t give a damn that she is no virgin anymore which is kind of interesting because I don’t get why. Men always, in each and every novel, cared about it. He just penetrates her without speaking about pregnancy first or anything connected to them being intimate. It doesn’t make any sense in my opinion.
Third the whole thing about being barren. Leonora is confronted with a pregnant woman (sister-in-law) asking her about a poem she wrote about a mourning mother and her angle baby; a baby’s gravestone etc. and the reader knows for quite some time, that she had a baby once. But for most of the story I thought she had a stillborn child because she thought about the perfect little hands etc. but when she finally – after like a million pages – tells Freddy about it, she tells him about a miscarriage that happened pretty early in her pregnancy. She couldn’t have known the gender of the baby and all those things if it really happened in that early stage. And why is she barren? I mean if you put things like that into a storyline than you should, in my opinion, tell the reader the reasons.
And towards the end were too many people involved, storylines that just didn’t round the story up but leave it kind of unfinished. Plus the end comes quite suddenly compared to the rest of the story which is kind of a rigmarole. There is bet planned that never goes through etc. and it feels like the writer wanted to make the story more complex but didn’t manage to wrap all ends up before she had written too many pages. The last 10% seemed to hurry the story.
Next to all that – the romance scenes are passionless. They have sex in her house when her father could come into the room every second and she doesn’t care. She is independent and a bluestocking but they do not even lock the door. Why should a young woman who doesn’t want to marry at all do things like that?
All in all there are inconsistences in my opinion that make the basic story, which I liked kind of, pretty shallow. There is no passion between the characters, too many storylines that do not really end up together in a realistic way and I even got kind of bored over the chapters from time to time.
Additionally I have to say that the title of the book doesn't fit the story in my opinion.
So … I give it: 2** stars.