2,5 "blurred lines" stars
After some consideration, I have to admit I still don't find it any satisfying then I was at stage one when I wrote "this is a messed up ruckus...i dont even know where to start...it makes no sense to me right now"
First of all, i need to state clear that I find the writing good and solid, I however, found the story in this novella lacking on the basic theme of storytelling, It sounded appealing in the blurb, giving away a little bit of a mystery and angst BUT this story turned out to be anything but.
I didn't really like the characters, made no relations nor connections with them...
So the H is an actress and model, living with her boyfrend of three years, but she doesn't feel anything more for him other than convenience and the benefit for her career image. She's in fact in a lust/desire kinda relationship with her step-brother. So when she comes to his birthday party, she finds him masturbating to her picture and she indulges in to her own arousal and desire. BUT they are caught in the middle of sex by her step-brother's friends, more precisely 5 of them, all of them being in lust with our heroine.
and what they do, is they blackmail her to destroy her image and career, by giving away the "secret" - her sex relations to her step-bro, if she doesn't make them quiet in the only way acceptable to them...and well, I don't need to write it down for you to get the point right?!
and then what transpires out of it is a gangbang, threesomes, even MM, you name it...all being conducted from the point when she first agrees to one thing, but then they want more, she first says "no" but then realizes that she likes it and then well, she enjoys it even more... now, that oart for me, was a little bit tricky and I didn't find it neither pleasurable or sustainable, or justifyable...
what I disliked even more, was the neverending to an ending...there's no ending...well, at least not the one I would like to know to conclude the story with or even better, to somehow explain, or make clear the events that happened to our heroine, or maybe even find the "meaning" or "purpose" to it all, other than being just a part of a huge fuckin orgy...
don't get me wrong, if an orgy takes place in the book, my, oh my, I have no objections....but I really think that the orgy itself can't hold the substance of the story without having some sort of explainatory, meaningful introduction, premise, culmination and conclusion...otherwise, it could have been just a sequence from a porn movie.
But as I said, the writing is good, therefore I am not being a bitch either.
***Copy provided by the author in exchange for an honest review***