I have to say, I am glad that I got this as an arc so that I did not have to spend my own money on it. I didn’t realise this was written by the Emily Rath of ‘Pucking Around’ until it was too late, and realising it was written by a romance author did explain a fair few things.
We follow Siiri and Aina in two separate but linked stories based on Finnish folklore. An evil demon arrives to take Siiri to the land of the dead, but Aina ends up sacrificing herself instead to protect her best friend. Siiri immediately embarks on a quest to find the lost shaman, Väinämöinen, and convince him to help her travel to and from Tuonela herself and rescue Aina. Meanwhile, Aina finds herself the hostage of Tuonetar, forced to watch her newly found friends get tortured and killed by the evil Witch Queen and her cronies, while desperately trying to find a way to restore balance to Tuonela.
Initially, I was hoping that a folklore-inspired story set in Finland in winter would have some gorgeous prose. Who doesn’t like reading about a snowy forest and the aurora borealis and the old gods? Wrong. From page 1 this was not going to happen. Despite reading the entire book I don’t have a concrete idea of what a single character looks like, nor Finland itself, nor Tuonela. Any mention of any physical descriptors is fleeting and I don’t even get a sense of it being cold - which is insane given it is set in Finnish winter. Tuonela is supposed to have no light so I am left wondering how on earth anyone is supposed to be able to see. Is everyone squiting all the time? Is there some low level glow emanating from the air itself that allows everyone to see? There are 2 thrones - what do they look like? I know we have gold and silver but I need more. Tall? Cushions? What are the arms like? Are they together on a dais? Give me MORE.
Rath also falls victim to the trap of taking a dual POV story and feeling the need to end every single chapter on a cliffhanger. Every semi-important or revealing conversation is interrupted and the air of forced mystery very quickly makes for a dull read. The two voices of Siiri and Aina are also very much the same and so it did always take a second to realise it’d switched despite them being in wildly different places.
The characters also have an odd propensity to speak to animals and truly believe that these animals can understand and communicate back. This may be some Finnish reverence for bears or mythological animals that I don’t understand and hasn’t been communicated well but it just feels a little odd to watch happen time and time again.
Siiri and Aina also seem to fall victim to the gal-palification that plagues many sapphic relationships, but more overt. The way these two women talk about each other, and the things that they are prepared to do for each other and the way other people view them as a pair (a love interest becomes extremely jealous of their attachment to each other as if there is a romantic aspect), screams gay. Yet the narrative seems to shy away from admitting that. They /literally/ went to hell and back for each other. They both admit their souls are tied together, they agree to be joint mothers to this child. Hell they even kiss, and share a bed every night, but no no no they’re just besties. They just love each other platonically bro. I am all for female friendship and I will scream from the rooftops that love does not have to be romantic, but this is written like a sapphic relationship that some christian priest went through and edited to be straight - even throw in a husband and hetero sex scene to be sure - without realising which parts of it were actually the moments of these girls truly loving each other.
And, finally, saving the biggest complaint for last - Rath’s treatment of indigenous people and women. These are two incredibly marginalised groups that at the time when Christian missionaries were coming to Scandinavia were routinely killed.
This is set around the time when Christian missionaries were coming to Scandinavia to preach, and if we have learned nothing from the witch trials of the 1600s, women and indigenous people were not treated kindly by these people. They were denounced as witches and then tortured and killed in their hundreds. And yet, Rath has, for some unknown reason, chosen to take this time period, and make every adult woman that we meet evil, make the single member of the Sámi present, coincidentally a woman, also evil, and every god that we really meet is a goddess (bar one), and is also, you guessed it, evil. The evil women are not just your regular antagonists, they are caricatures of villains. The way they speak and the way they taunt is giving a poorly written disney villain written by a man who’s wife has just left him for being an overgrown child, who keeps saying ‘the divorce came out of nowhere!!’. Every woman we meet is evil, and every woman we meet is a witch to the point that evil and witch and woman become all but synonymous, which feels like a poor-taste choice to make, especially for such a time period.
I was toying with giving it 3 stars, as 2 felt rather mean for someone’s first foray into fantasy, but I could not find a good thing to say about the book itself. I like the idea. That is where my compliments start and end.