An ancient grudge has kept humans and the magical races of Arcanis at odds for centuries. The Arcane Crucible, a legendary series of trials that occurs every 25 years, offers a chance for peace.
A Haunted Warrior
Elyria Lightbreaker, once a celebrated fae war hero, is a shadow of her former self. Drowning in grief after losing the man she loved to the previous Crucible, now she must rise to stop his sister from falling to the same fate.
A Vengeful Knight
Hardened by loss and fueled by hate, Cedric Thorne's lifelong goal to conquer the Crucible on humanity's behalf is finally within reach. The only problem? Getting through the trials alive means working with Elyria-the very fae he blames for his parents' deaths.
An Unwinnable Challenge
With alliances fragile as spun glass and betrayal lurking at every turn, Elyria and Cedric must navigate deadly trials that test their strength, spirit, and magic... as well as their increasingly complex feelings for each other.
This is the Arcane Crucible.
Smoke and Scar is the first book in Shattered Crown, an epic romantic fantasy series that follows our heroes Elyria and Cedric through deadly trials, dark magic, and shocking betrayals as they attempt to undo the wrongs of the past and heal their broken land.
This slow burn, enemies-to-lovers story is perfect for fans of epic world-building, a diverse cast of characters, elemental magic, tension, and plentiful banter. This book will appeal to fans of plot-heavy, character-driven fantasy with a heavy dose of romance, and authors like Carissa Broadbent, Raven Kennedy, Leigh Bardugo, Penn Cole, and Sarah J. Maas.
Gretchen Powell Fox spent her childhood in far-off places—figuratively and literally. She grew up with her nose buried in books and her feet on foreign soil. Both, she found, were essential in forming her deep fascination with stories.
Now, she crafts fantastical and futuristic worlds—along with the fiery heroines destined to change them for the better.
Her creative process involves copious amounts of Sour Patch Kids and sleeping fitfully. Her many interests include Taylor Swift, polka dots, reading fantasy novels, and playing the ukulele.
She lives in Northern Virginia with her husband and two wild, wonderful children.
If you tell me a book is Lord of the Rings meets Serpent & the Wings of Night but she's the immortal, shadow mommy and he's the human who needs saving then I will be reading it.
What. A. Ride. Romantasy is one of my favorite genres, and the more I read the pickier I’ve gotten about which series get me excited to read and which feel like a slog to get through-and Smoke and Scar (book 1 of the Shattered Crown series) was absolutely un-put-downable. It has everything that I love-trials with super high stakes, world building that is *just enough* without feeling tedious, complex, morally grey main characters, and well-fleshed out side characters that leave you wanting to know more. Gretchen Powell Fox clearly knows how to develop a well-paced plot while investing the reader in the stakes of the MCs. This book has zero spice, but plenty of well-deserved yearning, and while I always appreciate 🌶️ I found I didn’t miss it at all while furiously speed-reading to find out what happens. I cannot wait for the next book, out later this year! Fingers crossed I’ll get to be on the ARC team for that too 😍
What to Expect: ➼ Fae FMC x Human Knight MMC ➼ Deadly Trials ➼ Slow Burn ➼ Found Family ➼ “Who did this to you?” ➼ Forced Proximity ➼ Elemental Magic ➼ Enemies-to-Lovers ➼ Duet Narration ➼ Third Person POV
I absolutely loved this book! Don’t get me wrong, I love the morally gray heroes, but these two were so refreshingly wholesome and “good”. The FMC claims to have made her fair share of mistakes in her long life, but both her and the MMC’s moral compasses seemed to point due North. They were the type of people who would put themselves in harms way to protect others and do what was right. They started as enemies but that didn’t stop them from stepping in and saving each other over and over. They seemed destined to play a part in righting an ancient wrong, but they faced many obstacles and twists along the way. Some details were surprising and others were predictable, but all of it was written well!
So many books do enemies-to-lovers, but there was something really powerful about watching him overcome his prejudices towards her in real time. He was a good person who saw himself as a hero of his people and had been conditioned to believe that she was the enemy. But when her actions and responses went against his worldview and expectations, he didn’t go ten toes down and hold to his belief that she was evil, instead he began to collect new information and allowed his perception of her to be altered. How much better would the world be if we were all more open to allowing our world view to shift when we encounter new information? People seem to be much more likely to lean into hate these days than to look for common ground. Perhaps I was drawing too many real life parallels with this one, but I can’t seem to help myself these days.
If you need your books to have spice, this one may not be your favorite, but I loved it! This was easily one of the best books I’ve read this year! The ending set the stage for a fantastic book two and I‘ll be first in line to read it!
Thank you to the author, Simon Marverick, and Libro.FM for the ALC in exchange for an honest review.
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Pre-read: I wasn’t sure which book to start today, but then Libro.FM came in clutch with a gifted copy of this ALC! Incredibly excited for this one!!
I’m also celebrating 2 milestones on my Bookstagram today. 🎉🥳🎂🤗 Today is my 1 year Bookstaversary and last night I hit 10K followers! 😱 Here’s the link just in case you want to check it out or show some love. 🥰
❥- I don’t know why but, I am SO shocked by how much I really liked this. I’m DYING to read Splintered Kingdom after this! I can be honest and say that with how weird things have been in the past two years with what’s being published, I do find myself weary of indie authors. But Gretchen Powell Fox? I assure you Smoke And Scar would go double platinum if it just had more widespread exposure. I might actually be the most critical with adult fantasy in particular because I find the genre to be the most lackluster these days but with small criticisms aside, I can’t put into words how much I truly enjoyed this.
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❥- Honestly I’m in love with the dynamic of Ellyria and Cedric and here’s why. This author wasn’t afraid to flip the script. Imagine most romantic duos being Flynn Rider and Rapunzel, and in this story The Fae warrior Ellyria is Flynn Rider and Sir knight Cedric Thorne is Rapunzel LMAO. Crazy right?! But GOD it works SO well. Don’t get me wrong of course I enjoy the guy saving the girl but the girl saving the guy is slightly better. DONT SHOOT THE MESSENGER! ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ. It’s banter, it’s playful, it’s everything you need it to be without too much happening too soon between them. And them starting off as natural born enemies but also having that natural pull towards each other from the very beginning was a normal but good touch. I think I liked it more here because Ellyria and Cedric didn’t even show actual displays of hate towards each other regardless of how much bad history existed between their people or Cedric’s own personal vendetta.
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❥- I think another few big reasons I enjoyed this book so much is because there’s plenty of representation for LGBTQIA+ as well as different pronouns and i’m always down with inclusivity. Being Bisexual myself, I really love when I get to read a Bi (or pan perhaps?) Female lead. (yes I was also thirsting for Ellyria the whole time but don’t tell anyone okay?) I also liked how the trials all represented something important. Without being open to unity there was just no way anyone would be worthy of the crown let alone make it through to even see it. They represented both personal struggles in our champions as well as struggles amongst their own people and I think it was nice having the unlikely gang form together for survival despite some obvious obstacles.
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❥- I think my biggest criticisms for this book and why i didn’t rate it higher is just that I feel like this would be SO much better if the book was longer. I find the fast pace movement of the story to be fine but I feel like the world that’s presented is so much deeper and I genuinely would’ve liked a bit more world building, on the fae, celestial, and mana magic. As well as the war, and more depth on what lead up to it. When the writing is good (which it clearly is here) I don’t mind more details at all. This is subjective because I know some people think certain detailing is “pointless” but I really like fully immersing myself into fantasy and at times I felt that way while reading this but other times not as much. I usually expect fast paced out of YA fantasy and adult fantasy tends to be longer and more drawn out and that’s my default expectation and prefer it that way if i’m honest. But I think this critique also just shows how much I really liked the story when i’m wishing it was longer LOL.
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❥- I need you to read, love, laugh this book immediately. Not only are you supporting a smaller author but um hello? This is your chance to experience a new world and a new journey so why not? Of course i’m going to tell you to read it. Why wouldn’t I? I won’t steer you in the wrong direction don’t worry. During a time where a reading slump or below average novels are few and far in between, you need this book in your life. ˘͈ᵕ˘͈⸝*
With epic trials, powerful world-building, a badass older heroine with wings, and an MMC with pure Disney Prince energy, Smoke & Scar crackles with magic and heart. A fast-paced and fun romantasy read!
TROPES / VIBES
Fae vs. Humans White knight MMC with Disney Prince / Captain America vibes Badass, take no shit FMC with wings Age gap / she’s 200+ Elemental magic / earth magic SHE’S the Shadow Daddy Pantheon of deities LOTR Fellowship vibes Very slow burn (no steam in Book 1)
FAVORITE QUOTES
She swallowed, grimacing as she forced the too-large bite down her gullet. “I said, ‘Can I help you?’ ” “Ah,” said the knight, dragging his eyes from where they tracked the bob of Elyria’s throat with rapt attention. A flush threatened in her cheeks. “Well, yes, in fact,” he said. “You’re blocking the bacon.” “There’s bacon?” Elyria’s voice jumped an octave as she whirled back to the table and grabbed the entire platter of glistening meat. The salty scent wafted into her nostrils and her mouth flooded. Cedric coughed once more, and Elyria thought this time he might be covering a laugh. “May I?” he tried again, reaching for a slice. Elyria tightened her hold on the platter and shuffled back a step. “Stars above, woman,” he shook his head with a sigh. “You cannot possibly think yourself capable of eating that entire thing.” Elyria’s skin prickled with challenge. “I thought it was made clear yesterday that you have no idea what I’m capable of.” She didn’t understand the emotion that flashed across Cedric’s face in response.
The shadows didn’t define her. She defined them. Tell us who you are, demanded the darkness. Tears blurred her vision. Her voice strengthened. “I am Elyria Lightbreaker. The Revenant. And I may have been left broken, but I am not so easily shattered.”
His eyes widened as he took in Elyria, prowling toward him like a wraith sent by Noctis himself. She wasn’t just wielding her shadows. She was shadow. And she was pissed.
“One simple truth,” said Cedric, his voice thick. “If you believe nothing else in this world, Elyria Lightbreaker, trust what I say next.”
She’s crying. For me. I wish she wouldn’t. But she’s so fucking beautiful, even when she cries.
“Did Aurelia happen to say anything about how we would be able to leave this place?” “Oh, yes.” Elyria placed a hand on her hip. “She wrote down instructions, in fact. Numbered them. She was absolutely, one-hundred-percent crystal-clear and not cryptic or ambiguous at all.”
Wow. This. Book. I had the absolute privilege of getting to read Smoke and Scar in its beta form, and I will truly never be the same. The way this book brought me to laughter, gasps, squeals and tears can not be matched. If you need a book that is going to make you truly FEEL emotions and get absolutely attached to the characters... you better pick this up in March. The way I was brought through Elyria's grief and Cedric's fight was just breathtaking. I am so jealous of every reader who gets to experience this story for the first time. Also!!! The side characters are the BEST omg I am obsessed with Nox, I can't wait for you to meet them!
I have a video on my instagram @lilbookgoblin of a compilation of reaction videos that I sent to Gretchen while reading, where I am brought to literal tears, if you need more proof as to why you have to read this as soon as it comes out.
I don't want to share any big details regarding the plot because it's early, but here are the tropes: Slowest of slow burns Found family SHE’S the shadow daddy Stroonnnggg enemies to reluctant allies to lovers HIGH FREAKING STAKES The obsession I have for Elyria && Cedric is problematic at this point.
Just add it to your want to read, it's worth every second. I have such a love hate relationship with beta reading because I absolutely got it first, but I have to wait the longest for book two 😂🫠
5/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Smoke & Scar Author: Gretchen Powell Fox
I’m not sure if it was just my mood, but I was really into this one. September was a stressful month and I needed the escape into a fantasy world, and this book gave me exactly that. The story follows Elyria, a once-celebrated fae war hero who lost her lover in the Arcane Crucible, a brutal series of trials meant to keep peace. When the trials return, she is determined to stop her late lover’s sister from competing. Then we meet Cedric, a knight sworn against her people, who ends up working alongside her in the competition despite being her enemy. This is a super slow burn romantasy, but I loved Elyria as a main character and was hooked by the plot almost immediately. The audiobook narration was great and kept me fully immersed. My book club read this in September, and not everyone loved it as much as I did, but I had such a fun time with it. Also… the cover is stunning. If you like slow burn romance mixed with magical trials, definitely give this a try.
This feels like a sooooolid 4.5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💫 to me! I had a lot of fun reading this & it had some really solid twists & turns that had me like “ohhh?” — plot, tropes, pros, & cons below 👇🏼
& THANK YOU to the author for sharing an ARC with me for my honest review in return.
PLOT & TROPES Elyria — famed war hero of the fae & war criminal to the humans — is no longer fighting the war of 250 years ago that shaped the realm. These days she fights her mental battle, dealing with her trauma with all the good stuff like sex, drinking, & general avoidance. This doesn’t go great for her in a few ways, but things take a turn for the worse when her dead ex boyfriend’s sister decides to enter herself into the deadly trials of the Crucible, which is the reason she has a dead ex boyfriend in the first place. This book has: - deadly trials - he’s a broody warrior, she’s the snarky warrior - humans, fae, dwarves, & more - shadow mommy & shadow powers - found family - betrayals - gods, prophecies, & lore - slowwwww burn - no spice but lots of tension
PROS - Elyria, the FMC, is literally a gem. She’s so entertaining & she’s SMART. - Cedric our MMC, is so good & broody — he’s really Chaol-coded in that he learned something & has to come to face the fact what he learned likely isn’t 100% accurate. - Some genuinely good twists I did NOT expect! - Really fun sound family, you really love them all. Obsessed with Thraigg who is basically Gimli & I’m here for it. - I think the games & trials were done really well done & descriptive I really saw our characters in them. I liked the variation of them, & you felt in danger pretty much any moment. - Couple moments tugged on ye olde heart strings.
MIDS - Not a con yet since this is only book 1 in a projected trilogy but I’d like to understand more about Varyth.
CONS - None really? Maybe my only complaint is I’d like some more romance but admittedly that’s selfish to ask while our characters are legit in deadly trials. But maybe a couple more of those stolen moments would have really had me feral for them though.
Smoke and Scar (Shattered Crown #1) by Gretchen Powell Fox Book Blurb: An ancient grudge has kept humans and the magical races of Arcanis at odds for centuries. The Arcane Crucible, a legendary series of trials that occurs every 25 years, offers a chance for peace.
Rating: ***** Feels: Challenged, Amazed, Stunned, Triumphant Style: Romantasy , Fantasy Romance , Fantasy, High Fantasy First published March 11 2025: 468 pages
This is the kind of read that just pulled me in from the start. Deadly trials , a continent divided , bitterness bubbling up between factions and magic overflowing. Did I mention a cute winged fairy who saves the knight ! Love it !!! I adored the banter between Elyria and Cedric which just kept getting better. The trials had some pretty tense moments and sometimes I wasn’t sure who to root for. I really loved the world building and flash back scenes which built on the lore. The found family aspect of the book is sooo fun with some truely amazing side characters. Totally fell for quite a few of these characters and can’t wait to continue their story !!!
Favorite Quote: "I am Elyria Lightbreaker. The Revenant. And I may have been left broken, but I am not so easily shattered."
This book has: Enemies to reluctant allies to lovers Slow Burn Forced Proximity Deadly Trials She saves him Cool magic system Found family Hers and his POV
omg?! it's release day???? honestly, still a little bit in shock that it's finally here and that Smoke and Scar is officially out in the world for all to read! it probably sounds cliche as heyyyyyll but this is truly the book of my heart and i am SO excited for you all to hopefully fall just as much in love with elyria and cedric as i am.
About the book: Haunted fae hero Elyria Lightbreaker forges an unlikely alliance with the human knight who hates her to conquer a series of legendary trials—navigating merciless rivals, deadly challenges, and their inexplicable pull toward each other—as a world-changing power lies within reach.
If you like the sound of:
🏰 epic romantic high fantasy ⚔️ hers & his dual pov 🧚🏼♀️ deadly trials ✨ unique two-sided magic system 🥷🏻 *she’s* the shadow daddy 🤺 enemies-to-*very* reluctant allies-to-lovers ❤️🔥 the slowest slow burn 🗡️ *she* saves *him* 💜 found family 🩹 he sees her scars 😏 anastasia and dimitri-level banter 👑 lotr x the serpent and the wings of night
then I think you’re probably gonna like this ☺️
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Elyria is introduced and within two pages I knew she was a heavy drinker with serious baggage. She’s got wings, powers, a tragic backstory, and somehow everyone either fears her or hates her. I was intrigued. I was ready. And then Cedric showed up.
Cedric. Is. So. Boring. He’s mad at Elyria for killing his family, which of course she didn’t do, but he decides to go on a dramatic revenge tour anyway. His chapters dragged. Every time I saw his name, my brain took a nap.
The plot moves through some magical trials that are clearly meant to be intense and suspenseful, but I couldn’t stop wondering when something new would actually happen. The pacing kept looping and the story felt like it was stalling for time. Hello goblet of fire budget remake?
There’s also a dead ex-boyfriend who might not be dead (but kind of is?), and I was about to throw the book across the room if it turned into a love triangle. Thankfully it didn’t, but the evil possession type twist was so chaotic I had to reread it just to be sure I understood what was happening.
Now for the “romance”: there was one kiss. One. After all that tension. After everything they went through. Just a single, dramatic kiss and then Cedric dies. And then he comes back and they go their separate ways like nothing happened. I’m sorry what kind of emotional payoff was that?
Honestly, the concept was cool, Elyria had real potential, and I did like how they started sticking up for each other. But it didn’t go far enough. The pacing was messy, the stakes kept getting reset, and the ending didn’t leave me eager for more
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Okay, so I have a swirl of thoughts upon finishing the book.
First, everything I thought was done well:
- Fairly well written prose (rare for this genre sadly) - Strong female protagonist - Multiple well written female characters (also rare for this genre) - World-building and unique magic system - The relationship between Elyria and Kit
Somethings that fell flat for me: - The male protagonist seemed one note throughout - The book was more plot driven rather than character driven and felt like we just went from one point to another without exploring motivations which left me quite uninvested - The pacing - when the characters faced major challenges, they were resolved so quickly that there were seemingly no ramifications.
Overall, I also think I’m a more skeptical reader than most so others may find it easier to suspend disbelief and get hooked.
This book gave major Celaena and Chaol vibes in the best way. Cedric, our handsome human knight, and Elyria, the immortal, battle-hardened, and hilariously badass fae warrior, made such a fun duo. Elyria absolutely stole the show: competent, sharp, and effortlessly powerful. I was hooked from her very first POV chapter; she’s fierce but layered, and I loved every moment with her.
The plot was fantastic, especially the trials — one of the most refreshing takes on a well-worn trope I’ve read. It starts a bit slow, but once it takes off, it flies. My only gripe? Cedric’s “damsel in distress” moments got a little repetitive, but honestly, the twists and pacing made up for it.
Unpredictable, fast-paced, and filled with heart, this quickly became a favorite trial-based fantasy!
edit 11/03: Just a friendly reminder that today is the release day!!
4.5/5 I’ll be honest, the first 20% made me think I wouldn’t be able to finish this book. However, soon after I couldn’t put the book down (even though it took me 5 days to read it, but I was sick all that time and couldn’t even get to reading lmao), so maybe it was a me problem.
It was such a great story. Quite simple magic system but it was interesting and effective at the same time. I love the idea of sharing/merging magic with other people. Adored that there were so many races of characters and that they actually had to work together (UNITY) to get through each trial of the Crucible. It simply wouldn’t work without them helping each other. Thanks to that, the characters discover their people and one of my favourite tropes makes appearance, namely found family. I have to say I predicted the ending during reading, I didn’t like THAT person and knew there was something wrong with them.
I enjoyed the idea of reversing the typical roles of main characters. Because Gretchen gave us the most amazing Shadow Mommy (Elyria) who is 261 years old (REVERSED AGE GAP HAD ME SCREAMING) and saves our MMC a few times. Cedric is 28 years old and saves the FMC too, he was great as well. I loved loved loved how they actually helped each other with healing from the events from their pasts!!! This is so amazing. The romance is very slow burn, there wasn’t a lot of it in this book and I just know there will be more coming in the future. The small things happening between them were better than everything!! I mean, holding hands??? supporting each other??? yes!!! Give me even more of that. And when they finally kissed? Ohmygod, a chef’s kiss!
„Right now, in this moment, he was a man who knew without a doubt that the woman at his side was meant to do this. That he was meant to do it with her.”
I also NEED to mention the details of the book. The cover is gorgeous (so are the art you may find on Gretchen’s instagram). Please, pay attention to those small illustrations entering every chapter. I realised they’re changing too far into the book lmao. Chapters have titles, which is the thing I don’t really like in the books, but here they were suitable and made me laugh sometimes.
Thank you Gretchen for sending me the ARC. It was such a pleasure to be one of the first to read your newest book! I can’t wait to read next part of this series.
______________________________ I've got the arc!!! And I'm so so so excited to read this one!
do the pictures work? lmao its my first time with pics here (okay, they do but there were some difficulties)
First and foremost, what a refreshing change to have the FMC be the ancient, strong “shadow daddy” (Shadow MOMMY).
If you’re looking for a slowwwwwwwee burn (🐢🔥), a traditional gender-role flip where the FMC is the baddie and the MMC is the “damsel in distress” - my friend look no further!
Did I mention the FMC has wings? That GPF requisitioned the most BEAUTIFUL character art that is all on her Instagram? How about that the sequel is coming in only a few months???
I can’t wait to read Splintered Kingdom! 🤩 (who am I kidding, I’m literally reading it now because I signed up to ARC read and GPF took pity on me and picked me because she’s a lovely purple-haired Queen 🫶🏼🥹)
Notable Tropes ——
🧚♂️ Shadow Mommy ⚔️ Enemies-to-reluctant-allies-to-lovers 🧚♂️ Slow Burn 🐢🔥 ⚔️ Forced Proximity 🧚♂️ Deadly Trials ⚔️ “Who Did This To You?” 🧚♂️ She saves him (a lot) ⚔️ Queer Representation
Thank you to Scarlett Press for the gifted eARC and the opportunity to read the traditionally published & re-edited version of Gretchen Powell Fox’s trad debut! @scarlettpress.us
Sabéis eso de que un fanart puede hacerte querer leer un libro? Pues eso mismo me paso con este. Y la verdad, que me ha encantado!
Elyria es una guerrera hada de miles de años, Cedric es un joven guerrero. Ambos deben enfrentarse a unas pruebas mortales junto a otros participantes y del que solo uno puede salir vencedor.
Acción, aventuras, traiciones, pruebas por superar y un toque de romance.
Maybe it’s a case of “it’s not you it’s me”? I’ve been so far gone in my Calloway girls and I needed to read this for a romantasy break and my book club.
I wanted to LOVE IT. But I just kinda liked it? I thought the MMC was weak (I get that was kinda the point, but dude wasn’t even swoonworthy) and just one dimensional. He just added NOTHING to the story. Elle was alrighttttt but give me Aelin any day. I felt like it didn’t hold my attention and it wasn’t like until 70 percent where I felt semi invested in the plot.
That all being said, it wasn’t a painful read. The other characters I really did love (shout out to Nox and Thraig or however tf you spell it) and I’m semi curious to see where it goes so maybe I’ll read the next one?
This book is a huge reminder to how FUN reading can and SHOULD BE. Everything Gretchen promised while marketing this book, she delivered!!
Elyria is everything. And more. And then some.
just when you thought Gretchen was done... she wasn't.. found myself picking my jaw up off the floor several times!!! how she got me to LOVE so many characters is beyond me. but wow. Bravo 👏🏽 I am literally just finished and am still in SHOCK.
Has anyone read this and also felt mad the whole time? Because I feel crazy.
I want to start out by saying I was really excited for this book and that even carried through for like a quarter through. The premise is fun: a bit of typical role reversal where we have a human mmc and a badass fae shadow-wielding fmc. Super interesting, right?
Well it was until I felt like I was missing key background, plot, character development the ENTIRE time. I actually searched this book up multiple times to check that it was the first in the series (it is). You are thrown into this really cool world with NO information and, guess what, the characters seem to know everything so you don't even get to learn with them. There are moments where they explain things (mostly to the human, duh) but it was always so out of left field that I didn't even want to know.
I just took it down a star, btw. Because I really almost didn't finish it! If this wasn't for book club, I don't know if I would have which is crazy because I did love the story and the characters.. the execution just wasn't my style I guess.
I guess one thing I can expand on a bit goes back to the whole "no information" thing. So one aspect I really liked was that the fmc had a first love who she thought to have died (yeah I was well aware he didn't, called that asap). Honestly, I wanted THEIR story half of the time and thought that there could have been a really neat love triangle situation there (which I usually hate so that's saying a lot). But no, he was suddenly some evil character that she killed cause he tried to absolutely murder his little sister... and then had redemption as he's dying? Whatever. My point is: she talked so highly of her previous relationship that the love story between the fmc and the mmc just wasn't believable to me. Enemies to lovers is great.. but not when you are constantly flipping from one extreme of, honestly, being a bigot, to oh my god I love her she's the only thing that matters to me.
The rest of my thoughts are jumbled and quick so here: - Cedric is a little bitch and you know what? He did die to many times. - Overall lack of knowledge/buildup/indulgence - There were some great "gotcha" moments that originally had me giving 3 stars because again, the story was good - When the mmc and fmc beat the shit out of each other towards the end.. that scene was my favorite so what does that say - Highlighted a line from Cyren saying he was my favorite and then he fucking died so that was rude and also mean - Thraigg is Danny Devito in my mind
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Let us talk about "Smoke and Scar" by Gretchen Powell Fox.
“I don’t see through you… I just see you.”
I'd been wanting to read this since I first saw this on Instagram, and automatically preordered the book. It sold me at trials, deception, an older FMC (hundreds of years older!), a knight, and the slowest of slow burns I think I've seen yet!
We are introduced to Elyria Lightbreaker, a famous Fae warrior who has in the past twenty five years, sludges her way through her time, drinking, singing, and not caring much for her life. When word comes out that Arcane Crucible is to begin again, she's tossed back into the darkest of days when all the feelings of the man she once loved, is now front and center again - only in the form of his sister, who has signed up to avenge her brother.
“I am Elyria Lightbreaker. The Revenant. And I may have been left broken, but I am not so easily shattered.”
And Cedric, the human knight who above all wants to join the Crucible for his fellow humankind, to gain the crown so humans can gain the magic potential they so deserve. Yet, things are not as they seem for our fellow knight - he's going to have to do things that are unexpected of him - all for unity and the chance to hold the crown.
"Tits up Ric. You're a champion of the realm."
The tension is tensioning, the fights are dramatic, and the characters are pitted against each other in ways that we even wonder if they can join together to survive. I ate this book up with every bit of my soul - words exploding in my head of images of an immense, magical world. This book was magic.
✨ Hurt Him and Die ✨ Shadow Mommy ✨ Slowest of Slow Burn ✨ Found Family ✨ Enemies to Lovers ✨ Social Injustice ✨ Trials and Games
Favorite quotes: “Peace is an illusion. The world was born in chaos and in chaos it shall end.”
“Why do men do anything? Because they have something to prove. Because they have someone to prove it to. Because they want to. Because they can.”
“She was the birth and death of every star, the darkness born in shadow. She was life and she was light.”
I loved the role reversal – she is the powerful fae warrior who is haunted by memories of the war and cares only about protecting her friend. He is a human warrior who has trained his entire life to conquer the deadly trials and win a magic crown that he believes will be the salvation of his kingdom. This story was full of adventure. I loved all of the trials and the side characters. There were multiple plot twists that actually surprised me, which is hard to do. This is a must-read if you love adventure, powerful heroines, epic quests and deadly trials!
A magic system that's easy to understand, a strong, sassy FMC that wields SHADOWS (a shadow mommy, if you will) and a cliffhanger that will have you REELING at the end!!!
But really, there are so many characters to fall in love with and fun (though gruesome) trials that keep you on your toes.
Thank you to Gretchen Powell Fox and her team for allowing me to be an ARC reader for this novel! I can't wait to continue reading this series!
How can I even begin to describe the best book I've read all year?
Do not go into this book thinking it's your typical romantasy book. It is an epic romantic fantasy with high-stakes trials, enemies to reluctant allies, and elemental magic. There are so many tropes flipped around (she's older and she's the fae shadow mommy) and the main characters don't even kiss until chapter 50 (and there are only 58 chapters)!
Elyria Lightbreaker is a 250-year-old fae who lost her love (Evander) in the previous Arcane Crucible, a series of deadly trials that grants one winner the Crown of Concord and the opportunity to unite the kingdoms. The next Arcane Crucible is coming up and Evander's sister, Kit, wants to win and find out what really happened to her brother. Despite her efforts to deter Kit from entering, Elyria finds herself in the Arcane Crucible to protect Kit from danger and to help Kit win the crown. Once there, they meet Sir Cedric Thorne, a 27-year-old human knight, along with a cast of amazing side characters. Together, they fight through each trial...barely escaping at times.
I absolutely adored the found family in this book - our secondary cast of characters are just as important as the main characters. This book felt like a D&D campaign come to life with so much betrayal, murder, violence, and secrets. I immediately started Splintered Kingdom and I cannot wait to see where this story goes!!!
(4.25/5) She's the bada**, fae shadow mommy and he's the human knight that she keeps rescuing over and over again?! Absolutely yes.
💜 Epic romantic fantasy 💜 3rd person POV 💜 Enemies to reluctant allies 💜 High-stakes trials 💜 Elemental magic 💜 She's the fae, he's the human
Spice rating: 🫑 (SLOW 🔥)
This book is so underhyped. It was the combination of the phenomenal fan art and my friend Amanda that convinced me to read this romantasy, and I'm SO glad I did.
Elyria is THAT girl. I love that she's flips the usual romantasy dynamic—she's the powerful fae constantly saving the human. Cedric, meanwhile, is going through it in this book. He definitely has a complex about being rescued, but I love him nonetheless. The tension and banter between these two is *chefs kiss*
Gretchen Powell Fox has marketed this book as being perfect for fans who love Anastasia, Lord of the Rings, and Pride and Prejudice and I agree with these comparisons for the vibes! The trials were interesting, the found family was well done, and I like how Gretchen Powell Fox chose to develop our main characters throughout the story.
My main reasons I didn't give this the full five stars is due to the pacing and first half of the book (I also listened to the audiobook and immersive read when I wasn't in my card which may have played a part in this experience). It took until around the 50% mark for me to be hooked, but once I was I cruised through the rest. Maybe I'll bump up my rating after reading book 2 that just came out.
I can't wait to see where this story goes next, especially after that ending!