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The Crimson Fire
Gods walk among men, but the empire they have forged is on the brink of collapse.
As whispers of rebellion grow louder, Ensin Andik uncovers a sinister plot that threatens the very foundation of the divine reign. Every discovery pulls him deeper into a dangerous web, forcing him to confront truths that could shatter his unshakeable loyalty.
On the other side, Eshfen , a ruthless rebel with a cunning mind and a thirst for chaos, stokes the flames of dissent. He sows doubt in the hearts of the people, challenging the gods' right to rule and sparking a dangerous game of shadows that could bring down empires.
Caught between loyalty and self-discovery, Shadi , a young noblewoman, grapples with the weight of family honor and the desire for independence. With her fiercely devoted bodyguard, Darjin , by her side, Shadi must navigate the treacherous waters of loyalty, love, and betrayal, where every choice could be their last.
As destinies intertwine and alliances shift, these four must face the gods themselves — or watch the world they know crumble to ashes.
In THE CRIMSON FIRE, loyalties will be tested, truths will be unmasked, and power will be up for grabs. Will the gods’ reign endure, or is the age of mortals ready to rise?
THE CRIMSON FIRE is a sweeping tale of rebellion, sacrifice, and the unrelenting clash between power and destiny. Packed with gripping political intrigue, high-stakes action, and unforgettable characters, it’s a saga that will ignite your imagination and keep you turning pages late into the night.
As whispers of rebellion grow louder, Ensin Andik uncovers a sinister plot that threatens the very foundation of the divine reign. Every discovery pulls him deeper into a dangerous web, forcing him to confront truths that could shatter his unshakeable loyalty.
On the other side, Eshfen , a ruthless rebel with a cunning mind and a thirst for chaos, stokes the flames of dissent. He sows doubt in the hearts of the people, challenging the gods' right to rule and sparking a dangerous game of shadows that could bring down empires.
Caught between loyalty and self-discovery, Shadi , a young noblewoman, grapples with the weight of family honor and the desire for independence. With her fiercely devoted bodyguard, Darjin , by her side, Shadi must navigate the treacherous waters of loyalty, love, and betrayal, where every choice could be their last.
As destinies intertwine and alliances shift, these four must face the gods themselves — or watch the world they know crumble to ashes.
In THE CRIMSON FIRE, loyalties will be tested, truths will be unmasked, and power will be up for grabs. Will the gods’ reign endure, or is the age of mortals ready to rise?
THE CRIMSON FIRE is a sweeping tale of rebellion, sacrifice, and the unrelenting clash between power and destiny. Packed with gripping political intrigue, high-stakes action, and unforgettable characters, it’s a saga that will ignite your imagination and keep you turning pages late into the night.
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First published April 29, 2025
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April 14, 2025
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3.5 stars (rounded up)
In The Crimson Fire, Abel Montero weaves an impressively ambitious tale of political intrigue, rebellion, self-discovery, and divine conflict that burns with promise and potential. It boldly takes the concept of ‘slow-burn epic’ to a whole new level, and those who show faith, patience and trust will be greatly rewarded (with some possible emotional distress and damage) by the end.
Look, as soon as I saw the words ‘gods walk among men’, I was SOLD (okay, and that fire cover might have been a selling factor as well). See, I am always a sucker for some wicked divine meddling, and The Crimson Fire delivers that in spades. We are transported into a breathtakingly epic fantasy world inspired by ancient Sumerian legends, where the gods have reigned undisputed for centuries, until now. The sparks of rebellion have been lit, civil war is close to breaking out, and the fate of the empire has fallen into the hands of a ruthless rebel with a penchant for chaos, a devoutly loyal servant to the Empire, and a troubled young noblewoman and her fiercely protective bodyguard; four mere mortals whose lives are all inextricably intertwined, whether they realise it or not.
Now, while I was instantly enamoured with Montero’s rich imagination, immersive world building, and evocative storytelling, it took me probably about half of the book before I started to feel grounded and engaged. See, similarly to Gourav Mohanty’s Sons of Darkness, The Crimson Fire is not your typical multi-POV epic with evenly rotating POVs. Instead, this book is divided up into 6 distinct parts, of which the first three each introduce one of the POV characters one at a time before leaving them completely behind and moving onto the next one. To me, this almost made it feel like we had a couple false starts, and I found myself desperately looking for any type of tension or main conflict to get me hooked into the narrative.
But then, BUT THEN!, we hit Part 4, and things just went batshit crazy in the best way possible. Somewhere along the way I started to pick up on the red threads weaving this entire magnificent tapestry together, and soon I found myself in awe of Montero’s boldly unique storytelling skills. Before I knew it, I was completely invested in these characters’ lives, and I absolutely loved going through this entire wild emotional rollercoaster with them.
For me, the ladies absolutely stole the show in The Crimson Fire, and I loved that the majority of the pagecount was dedicated to the perspectives of the young noblewoman Shadi and her enigmatic yet fiercely loyal bodyguard Darjin (my favourite, I would die for Darjin). Their intense inner conflicts, both torn between duty and desire, had me absolutely glued to the page, and their storylines contained the most satisfying character growth (go Shadi!!) and the most emotionally engaging character dynamics for me; not only between the two of them, but also between Shadi and her controlling mother, and between Darjin and the mysterious Tamer who she goes off on a high-stakes mission with.
Meanwhile, the rebel Eshfen and the Ensin Andik occasionally weave in and out of the narrative and pull at the strings in the background. While I never got very invested in them simply due to the limited time we got to spend with them, I found them both intriguing in their own right and I loved seeing how their (diabolical) actions caused huge ripple effects throughout the entire world in the most unexpected ways (looking at you, Eshfen).
And the more I read on, the more I realised that the scope of this story was truly beyond anything I could ever have imagined. The way that Montero slowly peeled back the layers of this world and these characters was so satisfying to me, and I was deeply fascinated by the intersectionality of the politics, religion, technology and magic in the world of Kenjir. And then add to that the wonderfully evocative prose, which just brought this sumptuous and aesthetically pleasing world to life before my eyes. Seriously, I would never have guessed that English isn’t Montero’s first language if I didn’t know, and I honestly think his beautifully immersive wordsmithery is on a level that most native English writers can only wish to reach.
Ultimately, the highs more than outweighed the lows for me, and I am not kidding when I say that I read the entire second half of this novel in one day. The ending was absolute fire (pun very much intended), leaving me equal parts shocked, satisfied, and utterly excited for the next instalment in the Memories of Kenjir saga. If you like your fantasy sweepingly epic, deliberately slow-burn, and filled with morally ambiguous characters who contain multitudes, then I can’t recommend The Crimson Fire highly enough.
Thank you to the author for providing me with an eARC in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. The Crimson Fire is scheduled for release on April 29th, 2025.
3.5 stars (rounded up)
In The Crimson Fire, Abel Montero weaves an impressively ambitious tale of political intrigue, rebellion, self-discovery, and divine conflict that burns with promise and potential. It boldly takes the concept of ‘slow-burn epic’ to a whole new level, and those who show faith, patience and trust will be greatly rewarded (with some possible emotional distress and damage) by the end.
Look, as soon as I saw the words ‘gods walk among men’, I was SOLD (okay, and that fire cover might have been a selling factor as well). See, I am always a sucker for some wicked divine meddling, and The Crimson Fire delivers that in spades. We are transported into a breathtakingly epic fantasy world inspired by ancient Sumerian legends, where the gods have reigned undisputed for centuries, until now. The sparks of rebellion have been lit, civil war is close to breaking out, and the fate of the empire has fallen into the hands of a ruthless rebel with a penchant for chaos, a devoutly loyal servant to the Empire, and a troubled young noblewoman and her fiercely protective bodyguard; four mere mortals whose lives are all inextricably intertwined, whether they realise it or not.
Now, while I was instantly enamoured with Montero’s rich imagination, immersive world building, and evocative storytelling, it took me probably about half of the book before I started to feel grounded and engaged. See, similarly to Gourav Mohanty’s Sons of Darkness, The Crimson Fire is not your typical multi-POV epic with evenly rotating POVs. Instead, this book is divided up into 6 distinct parts, of which the first three each introduce one of the POV characters one at a time before leaving them completely behind and moving onto the next one. To me, this almost made it feel like we had a couple false starts, and I found myself desperately looking for any type of tension or main conflict to get me hooked into the narrative.
But then, BUT THEN!, we hit Part 4, and things just went batshit crazy in the best way possible. Somewhere along the way I started to pick up on the red threads weaving this entire magnificent tapestry together, and soon I found myself in awe of Montero’s boldly unique storytelling skills. Before I knew it, I was completely invested in these characters’ lives, and I absolutely loved going through this entire wild emotional rollercoaster with them.
For me, the ladies absolutely stole the show in The Crimson Fire, and I loved that the majority of the pagecount was dedicated to the perspectives of the young noblewoman Shadi and her enigmatic yet fiercely loyal bodyguard Darjin (my favourite, I would die for Darjin). Their intense inner conflicts, both torn between duty and desire, had me absolutely glued to the page, and their storylines contained the most satisfying character growth (go Shadi!!) and the most emotionally engaging character dynamics for me; not only between the two of them, but also between Shadi and her controlling mother, and between Darjin and the mysterious Tamer who she goes off on a high-stakes mission with.
Meanwhile, the rebel Eshfen and the Ensin Andik occasionally weave in and out of the narrative and pull at the strings in the background. While I never got very invested in them simply due to the limited time we got to spend with them, I found them both intriguing in their own right and I loved seeing how their (diabolical) actions caused huge ripple effects throughout the entire world in the most unexpected ways (looking at you, Eshfen).
And the more I read on, the more I realised that the scope of this story was truly beyond anything I could ever have imagined. The way that Montero slowly peeled back the layers of this world and these characters was so satisfying to me, and I was deeply fascinated by the intersectionality of the politics, religion, technology and magic in the world of Kenjir. And then add to that the wonderfully evocative prose, which just brought this sumptuous and aesthetically pleasing world to life before my eyes. Seriously, I would never have guessed that English isn’t Montero’s first language if I didn’t know, and I honestly think his beautifully immersive wordsmithery is on a level that most native English writers can only wish to reach.
Ultimately, the highs more than outweighed the lows for me, and I am not kidding when I say that I read the entire second half of this novel in one day. The ending was absolute fire (pun very much intended), leaving me equal parts shocked, satisfied, and utterly excited for the next instalment in the Memories of Kenjir saga. If you like your fantasy sweepingly epic, deliberately slow-burn, and filled with morally ambiguous characters who contain multitudes, then I can’t recommend The Crimson Fire highly enough.
Thank you to the author for providing me with an eARC in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. The Crimson Fire is scheduled for release on April 29th, 2025.
March 30, 2025
Disclaimer: I received an eARC from the author with the simple request to make an unbiased review.
First and foremost, this book rocks.
I found myself gripped from the very beginning. You could feel everything was related, and I kept rummaging for bits I read that stuck with me throughout.
The book's contents are even better than the gorgeous cover.
For moments, it felt like a love letter to the Agatha Christie mysteries, with Ensin Andik being our Hercule Poirot [sans legendary mustache].
The prose has beautifully high points, including scathing commentary on the world, both ours and theirs. [So be warned if you're not ready to question some issues. I personally loved it because I firmly believe that reading and writing books are revolutionary acts]
There are other moments when the prose shines with the simple beauty of incredible sceneries, where the author's love for the aesthetical is shown throughout.
The world is fully fleshed, even when you feel the influences from our own world, you feel the love Abel put here to make it his own.
The characters are one of the highest points in this book [that's full of high points], all of them feel unique, with entire personalities, full of fears, certainties and passions. Abel and I will have words if something happens to Shadi, she deserves some peace and quiet to read her books!
The Crimson Fire has many layers inside, and peeling them as you go is incredibly satisfying. You reach the end, and you're still unsure who the "bad guys" are, and you can clearly tell that's by design. A testament to Abel's skills.
This is a slow burn where you find boiling points and others where everything is at a low simmer. The ending, though!? I am not spoiling it, I will urge you to go and get this book as soon as possible!
First and foremost, this book rocks.
I found myself gripped from the very beginning. You could feel everything was related, and I kept rummaging for bits I read that stuck with me throughout.
The book's contents are even better than the gorgeous cover.
For moments, it felt like a love letter to the Agatha Christie mysteries, with Ensin Andik being our Hercule Poirot [sans legendary mustache].
The prose has beautifully high points, including scathing commentary on the world, both ours and theirs. [So be warned if you're not ready to question some issues. I personally loved it because I firmly believe that reading and writing books are revolutionary acts]
There are other moments when the prose shines with the simple beauty of incredible sceneries, where the author's love for the aesthetical is shown throughout.
The world is fully fleshed, even when you feel the influences from our own world, you feel the love Abel put here to make it his own.
The characters are one of the highest points in this book [that's full of high points], all of them feel unique, with entire personalities, full of fears, certainties and passions. Abel and I will have words if something happens to Shadi, she deserves some peace and quiet to read her books!
The Crimson Fire has many layers inside, and peeling them as you go is incredibly satisfying. You reach the end, and you're still unsure who the "bad guys" are, and you can clearly tell that's by design. A testament to Abel's skills.
This is a slow burn where you find boiling points and others where everything is at a low simmer. The ending, though!? I am not spoiling it, I will urge you to go and get this book as soon as possible!
February 21, 2025
I received an eARC from the author in exchange for an unbiased review.
I'm the first to admit I'm much less of a fantasy fan than a science-fiction one, but this one grabbed me in the first chapter and didn't let go. I've read doorstopper epic fantasies and while this is longer than some of the classics it didn't feel like it outstayed its welcome. I read the whole thing in a little over a week. The prose is good - not great - and I know that the author is a non-native English speaker so I'll give him some grace in this area. But if I were to list any negatives about the book it'd be here; there's some infodumps and clunky sentences but nothing that detracts from the story itself.
But the characters, the setting, and most importantly the plot are all amazing. There's multiple POV characters but all of them are interesting and well-rounded, there's no "wanting to get back to a different perspective" that I sometimes find in sweeping epic fantasy novels. The world is original and well-detailed, carefully constructed so that it adds to the story rather than subtracts from it. And the plot - while never boring - slowly rises in stakes and tension until the spellbinding conclusion, which ends the main threads of this book well while setting up for future sequels.
I've been reading a lot of great indie books lately and this is as good as any of them - an easy 5 stars. Go check it out!
I'm the first to admit I'm much less of a fantasy fan than a science-fiction one, but this one grabbed me in the first chapter and didn't let go. I've read doorstopper epic fantasies and while this is longer than some of the classics it didn't feel like it outstayed its welcome. I read the whole thing in a little over a week. The prose is good - not great - and I know that the author is a non-native English speaker so I'll give him some grace in this area. But if I were to list any negatives about the book it'd be here; there's some infodumps and clunky sentences but nothing that detracts from the story itself.
But the characters, the setting, and most importantly the plot are all amazing. There's multiple POV characters but all of them are interesting and well-rounded, there's no "wanting to get back to a different perspective" that I sometimes find in sweeping epic fantasy novels. The world is original and well-detailed, carefully constructed so that it adds to the story rather than subtracts from it. And the plot - while never boring - slowly rises in stakes and tension until the spellbinding conclusion, which ends the main threads of this book well while setting up for future sequels.
I've been reading a lot of great indie books lately and this is as good as any of them - an easy 5 stars. Go check it out!
April 10, 2025
For what he did was important. His actions would soon change Kenjir. Forever.
4.5/5
*ARC review*
NOTE: ARC was provided in exchange of an honest review.
Abel Montero created world where magic and politics are mixed in an amazing combination.
Complex characters with different backgrounds greet us on the pages, characters are watching the unfolding tragedy and the fall of the empire from different angles. Characters who provide unique perspectives and opinions on the upcoming events.
What can connect a guard, a lady, a rebel and a high-ranking military man? And let me answer you: the fall of the world.
But let’s talk about our eyes in this world.
Eshfen a rebel who is a fanatic. And who is on a mission to stole some ancient artifact and start the ending of the world.
It’s time to cover the whole world in ashes.
Shadi is girl of noble origin with troubles in family. She is terrified of the future planned for her, but she will do anything to please her loved ones, even sacrifice her future and dreams. Is Shadi just a pawn in grand scheme? Or she can change the outcome?
Darjin is Shadi‘s bodyguard. This woman will protect her lady from any harm, even of the price is her life or lives of countless others. Can anyone stop her? Can she stop the tragedy?
And Andik our high ranking soldier who is dragged into the conflict and who desperately needs to find answers before it’s too late. What will he find? Can those secrets shake the whole world?
Abel has thrown Gods, magic, politics, intriguing characters and ideas into simmering cauldron and prepared great, fast paced, captivating debut story. Story which I devoured in couple of days and i want more, i need to know more. What happened with our main characters? What will happen after all those small breadcrumbs left in interludes?
This book is leaving us with great aftertaste full of curiosity and wonder.
4.5/5
*ARC review*
NOTE: ARC was provided in exchange of an honest review.
Abel Montero created world where magic and politics are mixed in an amazing combination.
Complex characters with different backgrounds greet us on the pages, characters are watching the unfolding tragedy and the fall of the empire from different angles. Characters who provide unique perspectives and opinions on the upcoming events.
What can connect a guard, a lady, a rebel and a high-ranking military man? And let me answer you: the fall of the world.
But let’s talk about our eyes in this world.
Eshfen a rebel who is a fanatic. And who is on a mission to stole some ancient artifact and start the ending of the world.
It’s time to cover the whole world in ashes.
Shadi is girl of noble origin with troubles in family. She is terrified of the future planned for her, but she will do anything to please her loved ones, even sacrifice her future and dreams. Is Shadi just a pawn in grand scheme? Or she can change the outcome?
Darjin is Shadi‘s bodyguard. This woman will protect her lady from any harm, even of the price is her life or lives of countless others. Can anyone stop her? Can she stop the tragedy?
And Andik our high ranking soldier who is dragged into the conflict and who desperately needs to find answers before it’s too late. What will he find? Can those secrets shake the whole world?
Abel has thrown Gods, magic, politics, intriguing characters and ideas into simmering cauldron and prepared great, fast paced, captivating debut story. Story which I devoured in couple of days and i want more, i need to know more. What happened with our main characters? What will happen after all those small breadcrumbs left in interludes?
This book is leaving us with great aftertaste full of curiosity and wonder.
May 4, 2025
From the start you can tell that The Crimson Fire is written with all the thoughtfulness and care that you'd expect from Abel Montero. Following his youtube channel, I've always been impressed by his reviews, insights, and attention to detail-that is all present here.
There's four POVs that you follow and I really enjoyed the character work. My favorite is probably the relationship between Shadi and Darjin, but there's not a dragging POV here. Other than a slow burn, the one thing that I think may trip people up most is the unorthodox story structure, but trust me it's worth getting through to see Abel's threads all converge.
After finishing, my initial reaction was that I wanted more. 411 pages easily could've been 600 and I'd be ok with that. The ending Interludes set this series up for greatness and I can't wait to read more.
7.92/10
4.5/5 ⭐️
There's four POVs that you follow and I really enjoyed the character work. My favorite is probably the relationship between Shadi and Darjin, but there's not a dragging POV here. Other than a slow burn, the one thing that I think may trip people up most is the unorthodox story structure, but trust me it's worth getting through to see Abel's threads all converge.
After finishing, my initial reaction was that I wanted more. 411 pages easily could've been 600 and I'd be ok with that. The ending Interludes set this series up for greatness and I can't wait to read more.
7.92/10
4.5/5 ⭐️
April 14, 2025
3.5 rounded up! full RTC today/tomorrow
April 30, 2025
The Crimson Fire opens with a punch and I mean that literally and narratively. The first two parts (there are 6 parts in the novel) set the tone, sharp and fast, and I was immediately in. I’ve seen some reviews say the story starts a little slow and takes time to pick up, but honestly? I never felt that. The pacing worked for me right from the beginning.
This is Abel Montero’s debut novel, and that fact alone is kind of wild. It’s dense in all the right ways. Layered, political, morally tangled and yet still very readable. The prose flows easily, which is great because whew, there are a lot of names. Especially in Part 2, my tired brain kept whispering, who are you again? There are so many people! A small index or dramatis personae might’ve saved me a few headaches. That said, even when I forgot who was whose cousin or captain, I could still follow what mattered. The writing is clear enough to guide you through the fog.
We follow four main PoVs throughout, but they come with varying degrees of narrative weight. The core of the story rests with Shadi, a noble teenage girl, and her guard (her dagger), Darjin. And let me just say; I was rooting for Shadi almost instantly. She’s sharp, layered, and gets under your skin in the best way. The other two PoVs are Eshfen, a rebel zealot, and Ensin Andik, a detective on his tail. None of these perspectives feel like filler—they all bring something distinct to the table.
The side characters are also well-drawn. They are not just extras in the background. Everyone feels like a whole person. Complete with fears, loyalties, contradictions. The cast is large, but never hollow.
Emotionally, though, I sometimes felt at arm’s length. These characters are logical, often ruthlessly so. That works thematically, and for the kind of world they’re in, but it also meant I didn’t feel as much as I wanted to. Shadi gives us glimpses of vulnerability, but overall, emotion plays second fiddle to reasoning.
And THEN around the 55–60% mark, everything clicks into place. The pace ramps up, threads tighten, and the payoff starts to land. By that point, there wasn’t a single PoV I didn’t want to follow. There’s no filler here. No wasted chapters, no throwaway scenes. Just story momentum all the way down. For a 420-page book, it’s impressively tight. Every scene pulls its weight.
In the end, The Crimson Fire sets the stage for a story with massive scope, rich politics, and characters who feel like they’re only just beginning. It is a strong, confident and ambitious debut. I’m absolutely reading the next one.
Thank you to the author for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review
This is Abel Montero’s debut novel, and that fact alone is kind of wild. It’s dense in all the right ways. Layered, political, morally tangled and yet still very readable. The prose flows easily, which is great because whew, there are a lot of names. Especially in Part 2, my tired brain kept whispering, who are you again? There are so many people! A small index or dramatis personae might’ve saved me a few headaches. That said, even when I forgot who was whose cousin or captain, I could still follow what mattered. The writing is clear enough to guide you through the fog.
We follow four main PoVs throughout, but they come with varying degrees of narrative weight. The core of the story rests with Shadi, a noble teenage girl, and her guard (her dagger), Darjin. And let me just say; I was rooting for Shadi almost instantly. She’s sharp, layered, and gets under your skin in the best way. The other two PoVs are Eshfen, a rebel zealot, and Ensin Andik, a detective on his tail. None of these perspectives feel like filler—they all bring something distinct to the table.
The side characters are also well-drawn. They are not just extras in the background. Everyone feels like a whole person. Complete with fears, loyalties, contradictions. The cast is large, but never hollow.
Emotionally, though, I sometimes felt at arm’s length. These characters are logical, often ruthlessly so. That works thematically, and for the kind of world they’re in, but it also meant I didn’t feel as much as I wanted to. Shadi gives us glimpses of vulnerability, but overall, emotion plays second fiddle to reasoning.
And THEN around the 55–60% mark, everything clicks into place. The pace ramps up, threads tighten, and the payoff starts to land. By that point, there wasn’t a single PoV I didn’t want to follow. There’s no filler here. No wasted chapters, no throwaway scenes. Just story momentum all the way down. For a 420-page book, it’s impressively tight. Every scene pulls its weight.
In the end, The Crimson Fire sets the stage for a story with massive scope, rich politics, and characters who feel like they’re only just beginning. It is a strong, confident and ambitious debut. I’m absolutely reading the next one.
Thank you to the author for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review
April 9, 2025
The debut novel from Abel Montero. I enjoy Abel’s YouTube Channel and really looked forward to reading this eARC when he offered. He did not disappoint! Well written with wonderful world building, fantastic characters, an intriguing storyline, and excellent pacing - the last 30% had me pushing onward late into the night to find out what was going to happen! I loved the multiple POVs - three main POVs with one additional ‘part time’ - and I really enjoyed the way the story unfolded. At first, it felt a little clunky, but the POVs started coming together about midway and the story telling got tighter as the events unfold, making it read like an action-thriller by the end of the book. I look forward to reading more entries in the ‘Memories of Kenjir’ and highly recommend every fantasy reader pick up this one when it releases on April 30!!
April 25, 2025
3.5 rounded up
Trust the process on this one my friends!
What starts out as a slow burn crescendos into madness in the best possible way.
This multi POV epic fantasy takes us on a tale of Gods among us, intricate family politics and a cliffhanger to boot!
Looking forward to see what Abel has in store for us next!
Trust the process on this one my friends!
What starts out as a slow burn crescendos into madness in the best possible way.
This multi POV epic fantasy takes us on a tale of Gods among us, intricate family politics and a cliffhanger to boot!
Looking forward to see what Abel has in store for us next!
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Release date in two days! I pre-ordered for 99 pennies.
Release date in two days! I pre-ordered for 99 pennies.
June 19, 2025
I am going to need book 2 asap... I really enjoyed this book from start to finish....eagerly awaiting the sequel
April 29, 2025
First, WOW!! The way this book wrapped up has me in a stunned state. Now that I have that off my chest, let’s get down to it, shall we?
To start, we are introduced to a character, Eshfen, who is on a clandestine mission, for whom we have yet to learn of. The tension that exudes through the writing keeps the reader engaged from the start, and the sort of religious zeal with which Eshfen commands the two young soldiers who have accompanied him is chilling. It’s a stark look at what happens when people let passion overtake reason.
Enter two main characters, a young woman, Shad Jan Hura, the daughter of “Lugalen” Leoben Jan Hura, who is basically a governor of the fortress under his stewardship, and the deadly bodyguard loyal to the Jan Hura family, Darjin, also known as The Dagger, as one in her profession is called.
Shadi is a bit of a dreamer, who has been sheltered and raised under the firm, often cruel, hand of her mother. Never quite as good as her older brother, in the eyes of this cold hearted matriarch. She is quite innocent in the ways of the world around her, as their society frowns on young women being out and about, unless accompanied by guards. She’s basically been groomed to become the bride, a Consort, of one of the Master’s Champions. The Masters are gods who rule this realm of Kenjir, the Champions their offspring from the mortal consort.
But there is a threat that is the undercurrent of this story. Strange disappearances, a deadly drug which renders a person’s freewill utterly gone. I cannot express enough how well Mr. Montero brings this feeling of dread to the weaving of the threads that are coming together. From seemingly disparate places and people, such as the highest ranking clerics, to the lowest of laborers. They all are being pulled into this deadly plot. I also felt that at no point did the story, or any of its plots, lose their focus. Each plot point, chapter, or bit of dialogue was purposeful. It moved the story forward and kept me saying “Just one more chapter” later into the night than I wanted. I have puffy eyes because of you, Abel!
One of the things I enjoyed, except when it made me exclaim, “NOOOOOOOOO!!!!”, is that the characters are not safe. It’s not a fairy tale in any sense of the word, unless you want to liken it to Grimm’s. There are plenty of brutal fights, whether with swords or fists, and the author is not shy about describing exactly what has just happened. I personally think it gives the story a more realistic depiction of these events. It’s not pretty, it’s brutal, and this is impactful.
The plot culminates in a spectacular fashion, sadly for a few of those we have gotten to know along the way. The wrap up is one that just caused me a great deal of angst, because I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, RIGHT NOW. On that note I will leave you with this; please, do yourself and Mr. Montero a favor, and buy this book. It deserves all the love!
May 10, 2025
Some books are interesting, some books are clever and some are just a great read.
This is one of them.
From the killer opening sentence I knew that this was going to be good and I was not disappointed. Adventure, mystery, intrigue and action with real characters that find themselves in believable situations with challenges and consequences that did not just capture my attention, they had me needing to keep reading.
I really do not want to spoil this book for anyone, so I am going to stay away from specifics.
The characters are excellent. I keep finding myself saying believable and that needs to be emphasised. How often have you read a book and thought that a character was, well, off? That they do, say, or think something that just seems strange?
There is none of that here.
The characters are true and I felt connected with them, fearing with them and feeling for them through the poignant moments of their lives.
The different sections of the book are separate stories and I found myself reluctant to move from one to the other as I wanted to continue the journey with the characters that I had just met. However, they were fleeting regrets as I quickly found myself invested in new characters and their tales. I happily found unexpected twists and turns. Rich and emotive character backgrounds and events that I did not see coming, which made the book deeper and the story even more compelling.
This will feel a slow burn at first, and it is, but because Abel is building something truly epic. When everything came together at the end I was hungry for more.
The stage is set for a mighty and epic tale rich with lore, mysticism and deep characters.
Jump into this one. You will not be disappointed.
This is one of them.
From the killer opening sentence I knew that this was going to be good and I was not disappointed. Adventure, mystery, intrigue and action with real characters that find themselves in believable situations with challenges and consequences that did not just capture my attention, they had me needing to keep reading.
I really do not want to spoil this book for anyone, so I am going to stay away from specifics.
The characters are excellent. I keep finding myself saying believable and that needs to be emphasised. How often have you read a book and thought that a character was, well, off? That they do, say, or think something that just seems strange?
There is none of that here.
The characters are true and I felt connected with them, fearing with them and feeling for them through the poignant moments of their lives.
The different sections of the book are separate stories and I found myself reluctant to move from one to the other as I wanted to continue the journey with the characters that I had just met. However, they were fleeting regrets as I quickly found myself invested in new characters and their tales. I happily found unexpected twists and turns. Rich and emotive character backgrounds and events that I did not see coming, which made the book deeper and the story even more compelling.
This will feel a slow burn at first, and it is, but because Abel is building something truly epic. When everything came together at the end I was hungry for more.
The stage is set for a mighty and epic tale rich with lore, mysticism and deep characters.
Jump into this one. You will not be disappointed.
March 28, 2025
I really enjoyed The Crimson Fire by Abel Montero, but it just didn't hold my attention quite enough for me to really fall in love with it.
I started reading the first book in his Memories of Kenjir series almost a month ago and blazed through the first quarter of the book. The beginning was tight and flowed really well. Somewhere in the middle of the book, I had to stop for a while and it just took me a bit to get back into it. I don't want to say it slogged in the middle, but there wasn't as much to keep me going. But, I powered through the rough patch and I'm super glad I did.
The final quarter of the book really amped up the action and the tension, as Montero clearly has his eye on expanding the lore of the series in future sequels. I really liked our main characters, Shadi and his protector Darjin, otherwise known as The Dagger, and in fact, I think Darjin's backstory might be the best part of the entire book. As the final act played out, I honestly wasn't sure where it was all heading and that made it all the better. And as we head towards a second book at some point, I'll be looking forward to re-reading The Crimson Fire with fresh eyes at that point.
I received an advanced reader copy from the author, but my opinions are my own.
I started reading the first book in his Memories of Kenjir series almost a month ago and blazed through the first quarter of the book. The beginning was tight and flowed really well. Somewhere in the middle of the book, I had to stop for a while and it just took me a bit to get back into it. I don't want to say it slogged in the middle, but there wasn't as much to keep me going. But, I powered through the rough patch and I'm super glad I did.
The final quarter of the book really amped up the action and the tension, as Montero clearly has his eye on expanding the lore of the series in future sequels. I really liked our main characters, Shadi and his protector Darjin, otherwise known as The Dagger, and in fact, I think Darjin's backstory might be the best part of the entire book. As the final act played out, I honestly wasn't sure where it was all heading and that made it all the better. And as we head towards a second book at some point, I'll be looking forward to re-reading The Crimson Fire with fresh eyes at that point.
I received an advanced reader copy from the author, but my opinions are my own.
July 29, 2025
The Crimson Fire is a character-driven epic fantasy full of divine politics, rebellion, and slow-burning tension. The story follows four different characters whose lives start to intertwine as stolen artifacts, secrets, and power struggles shake the foundations of their world.
It took me a little while to get into the story, but once it clicked, I was all in. The world is really unique, and the themes are deep without being too heavy.
My favorite part? Definitely Shadi—she’s such a compelling character, and I loved watching her grow and push back against the expectations placed on her.
Looking forward to seeing what happens in book 2!
It took me a little while to get into the story, but once it clicked, I was all in. The world is really unique, and the themes are deep without being too heavy.
My favorite part? Definitely Shadi—she’s such a compelling character, and I loved watching her grow and push back against the expectations placed on her.
Looking forward to seeing what happens in book 2!
April 18, 2025
Wow! What an awesome start to an epic series! The Crimson Fire by Abel Montero is the next epic fantasy you'll need to check out! This Multi-POV epic primarily focuses on two women, Shadi and her bodyguard Darjin. Shadi is torn between duty to her family and finding her own path. Darjin is fiercely loyal to Shadi and her family, but her loyalty is put to the test under the most difficult circumstances. I latched onto these two and do not plan to let them go anytime soon!
There is also a long game of cat and mouse between the Rebel Eshfen and Ensin Andik. The nefarious things Eshfen is up to in an attempt to disrupt the gods is being investigated by Andik. I enjoyed getting more information from their POV that built out the world more!
When you start The Crimson Fire, which you should be prepared for a more classic epic and trust the process. All the groundwork in the beginning will heighten the second half. I devoured this book, and that ending was *chef's kiss*. I have a burning fire (pun intended) to see where this goes next. I have a feeling, like in the Red Rising series, much more will unfold in the coming books! I'm in this world for the long-haul and will have fun being emotionally distraught 😆 5/5 Stars would recommend!
There is also a long game of cat and mouse between the Rebel Eshfen and Ensin Andik. The nefarious things Eshfen is up to in an attempt to disrupt the gods is being investigated by Andik. I enjoyed getting more information from their POV that built out the world more!
When you start The Crimson Fire, which you should be prepared for a more classic epic and trust the process. All the groundwork in the beginning will heighten the second half. I devoured this book, and that ending was *chef's kiss*. I have a burning fire (pun intended) to see where this goes next. I have a feeling, like in the Red Rising series, much more will unfold in the coming books! I'm in this world for the long-haul and will have fun being emotionally distraught 😆 5/5 Stars would recommend!
April 28, 2025
* I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review*
This is one of those books where it feels like this is only scratching the surface of the world.
This book expertly weaves the themes of loyalty and duty against your own desires into rich world-building and elegant prose, which leave you eagerly seeking more.
if you are a fan of Matthew Ward's rich world-building and prose, then you're in for a treat with this book.
This is one of those books where it feels like this is only scratching the surface of the world.
This book expertly weaves the themes of loyalty and duty against your own desires into rich world-building and elegant prose, which leave you eagerly seeking more.
if you are a fan of Matthew Ward's rich world-building and prose, then you're in for a treat with this book.
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February 28, 2025
Disclaimer: I received an ARC from the author in return for an unbiased review
An interesting first entry into what looks to be an intriguing new epic fantasy series.
The start is somewhat deceptive, with a high octane heist which is a bit out of sync with the rest of the book. The opening is with probably the most minor of the 4 POVs, Eshfen, who then disappears until we are halfway into the book. This cold open is probably the weakest and most confusing part of the book, which is a bit of a shame as once we get past it we open into a wonderful slow build epic fantasy. I can get the idea of wanting to give an exciting opening, but it just feels too detached from everything else.
Once we move past this we are introduced to the other 3 other main characters. Shadi and Darjin provide the main focus of the story and their relationship is a fascinating one that is really well drawn. Shadi's troubled relationship with her mother creates another fascinating dynamic and is really well worked into the story. This section is more typical epic fantasy and it benefits from the room this gives the characters to breathe. The world building is more natural and less forced and the characters feel less stilted. The final character is another more minor one investigating some deaths in society, giving an interesting mystery tint to the proceedings
The action ramps up at a steady rate to a nice spectacular end piece for this first book in the series where all the characters and plotlines combine that is both satisfying in its own right whilst leaving you intrigued for more. There is a nice exploration of a fairly classic trope in rebelling against the gods. Having the gods physically embodied in the world gives it a nice literal sense as well. The morality of the pantheon in question is left ambiguous in this story. It is hinted from the more rebellious POV of Eshfen that there is something nefarious, but from the other POVs that does not feel the case. The ambiguity leaves some intriguing questions going forward.
I enjoyed this. Whilst the start was slightly jarring it settled into a fun epic fantasy with engaging characters and some fascinating questions left to be answered
An interesting first entry into what looks to be an intriguing new epic fantasy series.
The start is somewhat deceptive, with a high octane heist which is a bit out of sync with the rest of the book. The opening is with probably the most minor of the 4 POVs, Eshfen, who then disappears until we are halfway into the book. This cold open is probably the weakest and most confusing part of the book, which is a bit of a shame as once we get past it we open into a wonderful slow build epic fantasy. I can get the idea of wanting to give an exciting opening, but it just feels too detached from everything else.
Once we move past this we are introduced to the other 3 other main characters. Shadi and Darjin provide the main focus of the story and their relationship is a fascinating one that is really well drawn. Shadi's troubled relationship with her mother creates another fascinating dynamic and is really well worked into the story. This section is more typical epic fantasy and it benefits from the room this gives the characters to breathe. The world building is more natural and less forced and the characters feel less stilted. The final character is another more minor one investigating some deaths in society, giving an interesting mystery tint to the proceedings
The action ramps up at a steady rate to a nice spectacular end piece for this first book in the series where all the characters and plotlines combine that is both satisfying in its own right whilst leaving you intrigued for more. There is a nice exploration of a fairly classic trope in rebelling against the gods. Having the gods physically embodied in the world gives it a nice literal sense as well. The morality of the pantheon in question is left ambiguous in this story. It is hinted from the more rebellious POV of Eshfen that there is something nefarious, but from the other POVs that does not feel the case. The ambiguity leaves some intriguing questions going forward.
I enjoyed this. Whilst the start was slightly jarring it settled into a fun epic fantasy with engaging characters and some fascinating questions left to be answered
February 26, 2025
Keen and immersive storytelling, with precisely the kind of innovative world-building that makes for pitch-perfect epic fantasy.
Abel Montero has a gift for plunging the reader into the world of his story so deeply that I felt at times I was right there with the characters.
The Crimson Fire's plot is (typically to this genre) told through the eyes of four point-of-view characters. And at first, I wondered how these strands would converge. Boy, did that convergence pay off.
At first I did also wonder if the Shadi story strand would devolve into some kind of fantasy-version of Bridgerton that I wouldn't enjoy. But any reader who is concerned about that need only wait a hundred pages for the gnarly stuff to kick in. Shadi is a great character...and is going to pass through worse trials than merely a mean mother and some irritating court politics, trust me.
Everything Montero does early in this book sets up some wonderful payoffs later. Nothing is wasted.
And this has to be one of the most original worlds that I've come across in 40 years of reading this genre--including its varying cultures and its magic-based technology.
Loved The Crimson Fire. Eagerly awaiting the sequel.
Abel Montero has a gift for plunging the reader into the world of his story so deeply that I felt at times I was right there with the characters.
The Crimson Fire's plot is (typically to this genre) told through the eyes of four point-of-view characters. And at first, I wondered how these strands would converge. Boy, did that convergence pay off.
At first I did also wonder if the Shadi story strand would devolve into some kind of fantasy-version of Bridgerton that I wouldn't enjoy. But any reader who is concerned about that need only wait a hundred pages for the gnarly stuff to kick in. Shadi is a great character...and is going to pass through worse trials than merely a mean mother and some irritating court politics, trust me.
Everything Montero does early in this book sets up some wonderful payoffs later. Nothing is wasted.
And this has to be one of the most original worlds that I've come across in 40 years of reading this genre--including its varying cultures and its magic-based technology.
Loved The Crimson Fire. Eagerly awaiting the sequel.
May 22, 2025
The Crimson Fire introduces us to the Memories of Kenjir series, then takes a well-deserved bow and milks the applause, before letting you know there is much more to come.
Montero throws you in at the deep end, with a heist that introduces us to some complex world-building and a POV we don’t get to see again until much later in the book. But that’s the crux, and a hint that this is not a conventional fantasy. For once this rip-roaring section is complete, we enter the world of Shadi and her Dagger, Darjin. From here we get a slow burn storyline that drip feeds you the world and society that Shadi has to navigate, based around the omnipresent Masters, and the upcoming Trials. It is the complexity of these two characters, and their relationship, that draws you in, and you find yourself turning the pages, desperate to know where their entwined loyalties lead. It is their emotional journey that erupts in the last third of the book, and everything becomes clear as Montero pulls the threads of the complex plot together into a dramatic and action-packed conclusion.
The Crimson Fire is one of those fantasy books that creeps up on you, insinuating itself into your thoughts, until you realise that you are fully invested in the people created by the author. People with real emotions, that act consistently and true to their character until circumstance and life turn them away from such a path. And for that, Montero must be congratulated.
There is so much to love here, and a layer of intricacy that leaves you ready for the next in the series. I must also say that though English is Montero’s second language, I am jealous of his turn of phrase and the beauty of some his description. I leave you with two thoughts ‒ firstly, that once you meet a Tamer and their sparrowhawk, you will be dreaming of the possibilities. And finally, that the Dagger has one of the most brutal origin stories conceived.
Montero throws you in at the deep end, with a heist that introduces us to some complex world-building and a POV we don’t get to see again until much later in the book. But that’s the crux, and a hint that this is not a conventional fantasy. For once this rip-roaring section is complete, we enter the world of Shadi and her Dagger, Darjin. From here we get a slow burn storyline that drip feeds you the world and society that Shadi has to navigate, based around the omnipresent Masters, and the upcoming Trials. It is the complexity of these two characters, and their relationship, that draws you in, and you find yourself turning the pages, desperate to know where their entwined loyalties lead. It is their emotional journey that erupts in the last third of the book, and everything becomes clear as Montero pulls the threads of the complex plot together into a dramatic and action-packed conclusion.
The Crimson Fire is one of those fantasy books that creeps up on you, insinuating itself into your thoughts, until you realise that you are fully invested in the people created by the author. People with real emotions, that act consistently and true to their character until circumstance and life turn them away from such a path. And for that, Montero must be congratulated.
There is so much to love here, and a layer of intricacy that leaves you ready for the next in the series. I must also say that though English is Montero’s second language, I am jealous of his turn of phrase and the beauty of some his description. I leave you with two thoughts ‒ firstly, that once you meet a Tamer and their sparrowhawk, you will be dreaming of the possibilities. And finally, that the Dagger has one of the most brutal origin stories conceived.
April 8, 2025
A great first entry into the series!
This book comes out swinging with action and world-building, setting up an ultimately fulfilling climax that asks a lot more questions than it answers, and opens up a much larger world.
There is clearly so much more happening behind the scenes in this series, and it's obvious that there are still a lot of mysteries to be uncovered, and that we've only just scratched the surface.
The first portion of the book is a little scatter-brained, as I personally struggled to latch onto a "main" POV, with quite a few being introduced. Once the main plot gets on track, however, things become a lot more streamlined, and the back half really tightens up leading to the third act.
I do wish a bit more was explained re: the magic system. This book clearly has a sense of ancient techno-magic, with the series likely trending towards more of an outright science-fantasy direction. Book 1 keeps it pretty low magic, the little bits trickling in making you want more.
There are absolutely going to be ASoIaF comparisons made in terms of scope and scale, but this book is certainly less Grimdark, sitting in an adult fantasy space, without being overly crude or gory. The overall vibe was reminiscent of the Zach Argyle's Threadlight series, finding a happy middle ground just above New Adult, while still dealing with adult subjects.
The core of the writing is solid, with some new-author clunkiness, but still extremely polished for an indie book. This one feels like a SPFBO must for 2025!
Disclaimer: I did receive an early access ARC for this book, but it does not impact the content of my review.
This book comes out swinging with action and world-building, setting up an ultimately fulfilling climax that asks a lot more questions than it answers, and opens up a much larger world.
There is clearly so much more happening behind the scenes in this series, and it's obvious that there are still a lot of mysteries to be uncovered, and that we've only just scratched the surface.
The first portion of the book is a little scatter-brained, as I personally struggled to latch onto a "main" POV, with quite a few being introduced. Once the main plot gets on track, however, things become a lot more streamlined, and the back half really tightens up leading to the third act.
I do wish a bit more was explained re: the magic system. This book clearly has a sense of ancient techno-magic, with the series likely trending towards more of an outright science-fantasy direction. Book 1 keeps it pretty low magic, the little bits trickling in making you want more.
There are absolutely going to be ASoIaF comparisons made in terms of scope and scale, but this book is certainly less Grimdark, sitting in an adult fantasy space, without being overly crude or gory. The overall vibe was reminiscent of the Zach Argyle's Threadlight series, finding a happy middle ground just above New Adult, while still dealing with adult subjects.
The core of the writing is solid, with some new-author clunkiness, but still extremely polished for an indie book. This one feels like a SPFBO must for 2025!
Disclaimer: I did receive an early access ARC for this book, but it does not impact the content of my review.
May 30, 2025
A shining (English) debut that sets the stage for a tale of epic proportions!
It took me a second to get into this book. The opening sequence felt like a lot going on right from the rip, all while I didn't understand the ramifications of any of it. With that said, I did come to better appreciate it later in the story. Shadi also took some getting used to for me. But I think that's more of a preferential thing, as I'm not much of a YA reader these days, and she starts off a little in that sphere. However, don't be fooled; while the story could classify as YA, this is also very much an adult-themed book.
Darjin was my favorite character. She shined from the get-go, and anytime her POV arose, I found myself glued to the page, rooting for her. Andik was a great character as well, although I did wish for a little more of him. And I did grow to enjoy Shadi. She is the star of this one, and by the end, I was fully invested.
The world-building was my favorite part. I am so intrigued by Kenjir and the gods and Masters dynamic. This book ended with an absolute bang, giving the reader a glimpse of the sprawling mythology and universe that is to come. I cannot wait for more of it.
And lastly, Abel's action scenes were well done. No punches were pulled, the scenes flowed well, and they were always integral to the plot. I'm an action guy, and this one didn't disappoint.
If you're looking for a mix of Assassin's Creed meets Game of Thrones, all with a bit of a Wheel of Time'ish vibe to the lore, I think you'll really enjoy this one. Check it out!
It took me a second to get into this book. The opening sequence felt like a lot going on right from the rip, all while I didn't understand the ramifications of any of it. With that said, I did come to better appreciate it later in the story. Shadi also took some getting used to for me. But I think that's more of a preferential thing, as I'm not much of a YA reader these days, and she starts off a little in that sphere. However, don't be fooled; while the story could classify as YA, this is also very much an adult-themed book.
Darjin was my favorite character. She shined from the get-go, and anytime her POV arose, I found myself glued to the page, rooting for her. Andik was a great character as well, although I did wish for a little more of him. And I did grow to enjoy Shadi. She is the star of this one, and by the end, I was fully invested.
The world-building was my favorite part. I am so intrigued by Kenjir and the gods and Masters dynamic. This book ended with an absolute bang, giving the reader a glimpse of the sprawling mythology and universe that is to come. I cannot wait for more of it.
And lastly, Abel's action scenes were well done. No punches were pulled, the scenes flowed well, and they were always integral to the plot. I'm an action guy, and this one didn't disappoint.
If you're looking for a mix of Assassin's Creed meets Game of Thrones, all with a bit of a Wheel of Time'ish vibe to the lore, I think you'll really enjoy this one. Check it out!
February 24, 2025
ARC Review of The Crimson Fire
This is Abel's story about Kenjir, and it's a wonderful one!
The way he has written the characters to captivate you from page 1 to the end is truly fantastic. If you love slow paced stories and highly crafted characters, this one is for you.
You follow 4 povs with Shadi and Darjin being the main focus and Eshfen and Andik being the smaller one. With Shadi and Darjin being my favorite I'm glad they was the main ones, but I would also have loved more of Eshfen's side of the story to as i found him have to little story time.
What's holding this back to being a 5 star read is the pacing of the book being on the slower side. But quick to get through with the writing style being easy flow and relaxing,
That said, the book is perfect written and i would not have changed anything about the story. Abel has made a fantastic world with even greater characters that will make you hungry for more if you are into a slower pace.
This is Abel's story about Kenjir, and it's a wonderful one!
The way he has written the characters to captivate you from page 1 to the end is truly fantastic. If you love slow paced stories and highly crafted characters, this one is for you.
You follow 4 povs with Shadi and Darjin being the main focus and Eshfen and Andik being the smaller one. With Shadi and Darjin being my favorite I'm glad they was the main ones, but I would also have loved more of Eshfen's side of the story to as i found him have to little story time.
What's holding this back to being a 5 star read is the pacing of the book being on the slower side. But quick to get through with the writing style being easy flow and relaxing,
That said, the book is perfect written and i would not have changed anything about the story. Abel has made a fantastic world with even greater characters that will make you hungry for more if you are into a slower pace.
April 22, 2025
The Crimson Fire is a high fantasy, multi-POV, intriguing story with a badass bodyguard woman, a conflicted teenage girl, a driven investigator/military man, and a sinister cultist/rebel guy.
I thought the world building is very intriguing! There are gods who walk among and directly lead the populace, and a rebel group that lurks in the shadows defying them.
There were a few small sections of this book where I thought the writing was somewhat unclear, but anything I was confused about was later explained.
I thought the last ~20% was super action-packed and had some plot twists as well. I am hoping for answers in book 2!
I thought the world building is very intriguing! There are gods who walk among and directly lead the populace, and a rebel group that lurks in the shadows defying them.
There were a few small sections of this book where I thought the writing was somewhat unclear, but anything I was confused about was later explained.
I thought the last ~20% was super action-packed and had some plot twists as well. I am hoping for answers in book 2!
March 6, 2025
Well what can I say? This amazing piece of writing, artwork and maps all were created by Abel, his genius goes beyond simple words this compelling story takes you to a new level, with darkness, secrets, sorrow, sadness, love between friends, and so much more than just words.
You’re be transported to a place where you feel you are actually part of the story and following it through like a shade, the family bonds, the strict matriarch and weaker patriarchal instincts show the story in different ways.
There is thievery and death, magic, and more, plus sadly the burning of a little library, and all give that emotional tug that makes you love every character.
Abel, thank you for this gift it’s worth more than 5-stars but I can’t rate it higher or I would, this is a true work of art, and more importantly everyone needs to read it and everything else you’ve written about, I’ll always remember this story and will always want to arc/beta for you just to get the vibes from each other book.
Thank you for sharing this with me, it’s worth 20-stars at least in my estimation
You’re be transported to a place where you feel you are actually part of the story and following it through like a shade, the family bonds, the strict matriarch and weaker patriarchal instincts show the story in different ways.
There is thievery and death, magic, and more, plus sadly the burning of a little library, and all give that emotional tug that makes you love every character.
Abel, thank you for this gift it’s worth more than 5-stars but I can’t rate it higher or I would, this is a true work of art, and more importantly everyone needs to read it and everything else you’ve written about, I’ll always remember this story and will always want to arc/beta for you just to get the vibes from each other book.
Thank you for sharing this with me, it’s worth 20-stars at least in my estimation
February 28, 2025
The Crimson Fire is an intelligent, absorbing and fascinating novel, with attention to the smallest details, from the story itself, where the research is evident, to the creation of a world with elegant and meticulous settings and descriptions.
The multiple points of view, which do not confuse less experienced readers, make for a dynamic and extremely enjoyable read.
The story is set in a distant past where you will encounter ancient civilisations, gods, Masters, fantastic and supernatural beings. Cunning politicians who will do anything to gain power and visibility, and in the middle of it all, a young woman, Shadi, takes her first steps. She always wants to do the right thing, and in this world full of dangers that seem to come from everywhere, she almost always has her Dagger by her side.
There is no shortage of the action, the political intrigues are there, as well as the superb descriptions and the perfect ending!
In short, there is no reason not to read it!
The multiple points of view, which do not confuse less experienced readers, make for a dynamic and extremely enjoyable read.
The story is set in a distant past where you will encounter ancient civilisations, gods, Masters, fantastic and supernatural beings. Cunning politicians who will do anything to gain power and visibility, and in the middle of it all, a young woman, Shadi, takes her first steps. She always wants to do the right thing, and in this world full of dangers that seem to come from everywhere, she almost always has her Dagger by her side.
There is no shortage of the action, the political intrigues are there, as well as the superb descriptions and the perfect ending!
In short, there is no reason not to read it!
July 17, 2025
I did receive an eARC of this book.
Wow! What a book. Seemingly a bit slow, but not in reality. There’s so much that happens, and you don’t realize it until you get to the end. An amazing grasp of description and immersion with a story that is drew me in from the first chapter right until the end. The characters I was rooting for changed often, and without my realizing it. With an explosive ending that is well warranted once it arrives. Maybe not my favorite book, but objectively one of the most well written I’ve read in a while, and constantly surprising me with how much I was enjoying it. I think somewhere around a 4.5*
Wow! What a book. Seemingly a bit slow, but not in reality. There’s so much that happens, and you don’t realize it until you get to the end. An amazing grasp of description and immersion with a story that is drew me in from the first chapter right until the end. The characters I was rooting for changed often, and without my realizing it. With an explosive ending that is well warranted once it arrives. Maybe not my favorite book, but objectively one of the most well written I’ve read in a while, and constantly surprising me with how much I was enjoying it. I think somewhere around a 4.5*
July 3, 2025
With a world deep in history and lore, it is very easy to get yourself lost in it. This book is an indulgence for those who enjoyed a unique setting and don't mind a slow burn plot line. Huge potential in this series given how intriguing the deep lore of the setting gets.
The characters: Shadi Jan Hura and Darjin both had motives which set themselves apart from most protagonists in Epic Fantasy. In the midst of the expansive world, these two helped ground the story and became one of the few things that kept me reading.
I wish I could appreciate this book as the author intended, I really do. There are a lot of very deep and intricate world building throughout this book which has a great potential to be an amazing playground for a wonderful story. But the book is poorly structured and written in an abstract way that makes it difficult to be immersed in the events happening throughout the story.
The book has a copious amount of descriptions (clothes and distant buildings) which drew me away from the POV of the main characters. Often I wondered how I got from point A to Point B because of these descriptions blurring the characters and plot. I struggled a lot reading the book because I just couldn’t grasp the plot line until I hit the 60% mark and that’s a huge bummer to my overall enjoyment.
There were moments towards the end where the story doesn’t drawl and actually becomes really fun to read. Moments where I felt that it could be a good payoff to something. But it’s very hard to appreciate a payoff if the promise isn’t clear to begin with.
The characters: Shadi Jan Hura and Darjin both had motives which set themselves apart from most protagonists in Epic Fantasy. In the midst of the expansive world, these two helped ground the story and became one of the few things that kept me reading.
I wish I could appreciate this book as the author intended, I really do. There are a lot of very deep and intricate world building throughout this book which has a great potential to be an amazing playground for a wonderful story. But the book is poorly structured and written in an abstract way that makes it difficult to be immersed in the events happening throughout the story.
The book has a copious amount of descriptions (clothes and distant buildings) which drew me away from the POV of the main characters. Often I wondered how I got from point A to Point B because of these descriptions blurring the characters and plot. I struggled a lot reading the book because I just couldn’t grasp the plot line until I hit the 60% mark and that’s a huge bummer to my overall enjoyment.
There were moments towards the end where the story doesn’t drawl and actually becomes really fun to read. Moments where I felt that it could be a good payoff to something. But it’s very hard to appreciate a payoff if the promise isn’t clear to begin with.
April 7, 2025
Epic fantasy is a genre that demands not only imaginative world-building but also characters that feel real enough to bleed, betray, and believe. In The Crimson Fire, Abel Montero delivers a solid and satisfying tale that balances political intrigue, divine conflict, and personal awakening — all wrapped in evocative prose that lingers long after the last page.
Set in a world on the brink of upheaval, The Crimson Fire follows three intertwining narratives: Ensin Andik, a loyal servant of the divine regime, begins to uncover cracks in the foundation of the world he once believed unshakable; Eshfen, a rebellious instigator with a sharp tongue and sharper mind, dances dangerously close to anarchy; and Shadi, a young noblewoman caught between duty and desire, whose personal journey is elevated by her devoted and fiercely capable bodyguard, Darjin.
Let’s talk about Darjin for a moment. While the cast is rich and compelling across the board, Darjin was the standout for me. Her strength, vulnerability, and quiet complexity made her chapters the most emotionally resonant. She’s not just a protector — she’s a woman shaped by fire, and every scene she’s in feels charged with tension and meaning.
One of Montero’s greatest strengths lies in his descriptions. From opulent palaces to dusty rebel hideouts, from sacred rituals to whispered treacheries in shadowed halls, every setting is painted with vivid, cinematic detail. What’s especially impressive is that English isn’t Montero’s first language. You’d never guess — the prose is fluid, precise, and often poetic without ever becoming purple. His command of tone and rhythm, especially in dialogue, is remarkable, and the conversations sparkle with both wit and weight.
The characters themselves are layered and believable, each wrestling with personal demons and impossible choices. The way their paths slowly converge is satisfying, and while none of the major twists are truly genre-breaking, they’re executed with care and an eye for emotional payoff.
If I had one critique, it’s that the pacing could use a touch more tightening. In some sections, particularly the middle third, the narrative meanders — not aimlessly, but enough to make the stakes feel diluted. A bit more urgency, a slightly firmer grip on momentum, and The Crimson Fire could have gone from a strong debut to a truly explosive one.
That said, this is a confident, accomplished entry in the epic fantasy tradition. It doesn’t reinvent the wheel, but it spins it beautifully — with passion, thoughtfulness, and clear respect for the genre’s roots. It also plants enough seeds for future installments that I’m genuinely excited to see where Montero takes the story next.
The Crimson Fire is a tale of rebellion, loyalty, and transformation. It’s about questioning the truths we’re raised to believe, and the cost of forging our own path. If you're looking for a new fantasy series to get lost in — one that values character as much as conflict — this is a journey worth taking.
Set in a world on the brink of upheaval, The Crimson Fire follows three intertwining narratives: Ensin Andik, a loyal servant of the divine regime, begins to uncover cracks in the foundation of the world he once believed unshakable; Eshfen, a rebellious instigator with a sharp tongue and sharper mind, dances dangerously close to anarchy; and Shadi, a young noblewoman caught between duty and desire, whose personal journey is elevated by her devoted and fiercely capable bodyguard, Darjin.
Let’s talk about Darjin for a moment. While the cast is rich and compelling across the board, Darjin was the standout for me. Her strength, vulnerability, and quiet complexity made her chapters the most emotionally resonant. She’s not just a protector — she’s a woman shaped by fire, and every scene she’s in feels charged with tension and meaning.
One of Montero’s greatest strengths lies in his descriptions. From opulent palaces to dusty rebel hideouts, from sacred rituals to whispered treacheries in shadowed halls, every setting is painted with vivid, cinematic detail. What’s especially impressive is that English isn’t Montero’s first language. You’d never guess — the prose is fluid, precise, and often poetic without ever becoming purple. His command of tone and rhythm, especially in dialogue, is remarkable, and the conversations sparkle with both wit and weight.
The characters themselves are layered and believable, each wrestling with personal demons and impossible choices. The way their paths slowly converge is satisfying, and while none of the major twists are truly genre-breaking, they’re executed with care and an eye for emotional payoff.
If I had one critique, it’s that the pacing could use a touch more tightening. In some sections, particularly the middle third, the narrative meanders — not aimlessly, but enough to make the stakes feel diluted. A bit more urgency, a slightly firmer grip on momentum, and The Crimson Fire could have gone from a strong debut to a truly explosive one.
That said, this is a confident, accomplished entry in the epic fantasy tradition. It doesn’t reinvent the wheel, but it spins it beautifully — with passion, thoughtfulness, and clear respect for the genre’s roots. It also plants enough seeds for future installments that I’m genuinely excited to see where Montero takes the story next.
The Crimson Fire is a tale of rebellion, loyalty, and transformation. It’s about questioning the truths we’re raised to believe, and the cost of forging our own path. If you're looking for a new fantasy series to get lost in — one that values character as much as conflict — this is a journey worth taking.
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