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The Rite of Fates
In a world where the divine bloodlines of ancient Gods still linger, the Fates have summoned the heirs of Olympus to face a brutal reckoning. Sickened by their decadence and failures, the Fates decree a tournament. A web of trials designed to strip away power and pretense. But these trials are not simply mere tests of strength.
The stakes are far greater than control over the mortal realm. With each trial, the heirs are unraveled exposing vulnerabilities they’ve long buried.
For romantasy fans who love Greek mythology, slow burn, trials, and high stakes, The Rite of Fates series is a story of growth, love, found family, and redemption.
The stakes are far greater than control over the mortal realm. With each trial, the heirs are unraveled exposing vulnerabilities they’ve long buried.
For romantasy fans who love Greek mythology, slow burn, trials, and high stakes, The Rite of Fates series is a story of growth, love, found family, and redemption.
- GenresFantasyGreek Mythology
456 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 1, 2025
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Atlas Avery
6 books159 followersI am an Afro-Latina author. I have a deep love for all things fantasy and romance. I find joy in getting lost in captivating stories and savoring hot chais—when my children give me the chance.
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March 4, 2025
⭐ 5/5 Stars ⭐
A brutal, breathtaking tale of fate, power, and a love that defies the gods themselves.
From the very first page, The Rite of Fates pulled me into a world where the divine heirs of Olympus are forced to prove their worth in deadly trials—where power is stripped, secrets are laid bare, and survival is anything but guaranteed.
This book is everything I love in a romantasy:
🔥 A possessive, protective hero (Aurelius stole my heart with his intensity!)
💀 High-stakes, cutthroat competition (The Fates don’t play fair.)
🏛 Greek mythology meets ruthless trials (The gods may rule, but the Fates decide.)
Aurelius and Bailey’s dynamic? Absolutely addicting. The tension, the devotion, the way he refuses to let fate take her away—I was hooked. The world-building was immersive, the stakes were high, and the emotional moments hit hard.
If you love powerful, unbreakable love stories wrapped in dark mythology and impossible choices, The Rite of Fates is an absolute must-read.
📖 Now excuse me while I scream about that ending. 👀🔥
A brutal, breathtaking tale of fate, power, and a love that defies the gods themselves.
From the very first page, The Rite of Fates pulled me into a world where the divine heirs of Olympus are forced to prove their worth in deadly trials—where power is stripped, secrets are laid bare, and survival is anything but guaranteed.
This book is everything I love in a romantasy:
🔥 A possessive, protective hero (Aurelius stole my heart with his intensity!)
💀 High-stakes, cutthroat competition (The Fates don’t play fair.)
🏛 Greek mythology meets ruthless trials (The gods may rule, but the Fates decide.)
Aurelius and Bailey’s dynamic? Absolutely addicting. The tension, the devotion, the way he refuses to let fate take her away—I was hooked. The world-building was immersive, the stakes were high, and the emotional moments hit hard.
If you love powerful, unbreakable love stories wrapped in dark mythology and impossible choices, The Rite of Fates is an absolute must-read.
📖 Now excuse me while I scream about that ending. 👀🔥
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 9, 2025
LOVED THIS BOOK!
This book had me hooked from the beginning. I had a really hard time putting it down and participating in real life and that’s how I know I loved it.
This book had me hooked from the beginning. I had a really hard time putting it down and participating in real life and that’s how I know I loved it.
April 21, 2025
Unfortunately had to DNF At about 70% 😭 the premise was so unique and I was so excited but it got repetitive….yes we know all the gods were vulnerable and struggling with their emotions and their mortals were so strong but did we have to read the same descriptions over and over, chapter by chapter? And there were literally no variations of the descriptions, I felt as if the author copied and pasted similar sentences and paragraphs over and over again. The book honestly lost me with the trial that took place at the dance club (because what even was that?) but I kept going to see if it would pick up.
Maybe this was just too slow for me but I did skip to the end and am glad I didn’t keep reading. Maybe it would have been better if we had different POV chapters instead of everything jumbled all together? All in all, 2 stars for the unique storyline idea though!
Maybe this was just too slow for me but I did skip to the end and am glad I didn’t keep reading. Maybe it would have been better if we had different POV chapters instead of everything jumbled all together? All in all, 2 stars for the unique storyline idea though!
April 13, 2026
The Rite of Fates is the first book in a romantasy trilogy based on Greek mythology. It has a classic games and trials plot, but I loved the fresh twist on it. Rather than the trials demanding that one heir and mortal pairing be specifically knocked out each round, the trials were more psychological, which I ate up. The trials were all about character development, about breaking down the arrogance and entitlement of the heirs. This worked incredibly well, because although I disliked most of the heirs at the start, the trials humanised some of them really effectively and I loved seeing how the trials and the mortals changed them for the better.
I listened to the audiobook which was fantastic. The single narrator, Veronica Thames, really performed all of the drama and emotion of the book, and it was still perfectly clear and audible at the higher speed that I listen at.
The POV switches between the Fates (which is like an omniscient/omnipresent POV that covers all of the heirs and mortals still in the trials) and some of the heirs and mortals who get their own specific POV chapters too. This worked really well, because you got to see everyone's thoughts and motivations in the Fates' chapters, as well as having specific chapters that focused on the individual characters who had naturally become my favourites in book 1. The author did a fantastic job of naturally steering me towards the three heirs who were more willing to change and grow, while also making their three paired mortals just as interesting as individuals. The friendship between Bailey, Callie and Ivy (apologies for any name misspellings - I listened to the audiobook so without seeing the names written down, I might have mispelled them!) was also a really important part of the story. This meant that it really felt like these 6 characters had distinct, realistic and supportive relationships with each other that allowed them to start evolving.
I can't wait to see how the next two books in the trilogy, The Rite of Ascension and The Rite of Redemption, continue the development of these six main characters because I am so invested in the relationships, not just the romantic ones but also in the platonic ones too.
If you love character-focused romantasy, definitely pick up this series! The Greek mythology influences and the plot are strong, but it tells a unique and original story with a real focus on the characters and it uses games and trials in a way that I genuinely haven't seen before.
Disclaimer: I received an Advance Listener Copy from the author but this is my voluntary and honest review.
I listened to the audiobook which was fantastic. The single narrator, Veronica Thames, really performed all of the drama and emotion of the book, and it was still perfectly clear and audible at the higher speed that I listen at.
The POV switches between the Fates (which is like an omniscient/omnipresent POV that covers all of the heirs and mortals still in the trials) and some of the heirs and mortals who get their own specific POV chapters too. This worked really well, because you got to see everyone's thoughts and motivations in the Fates' chapters, as well as having specific chapters that focused on the individual characters who had naturally become my favourites in book 1. The author did a fantastic job of naturally steering me towards the three heirs who were more willing to change and grow, while also making their three paired mortals just as interesting as individuals. The friendship between Bailey, Callie and Ivy (apologies for any name misspellings - I listened to the audiobook so without seeing the names written down, I might have mispelled them!) was also a really important part of the story. This meant that it really felt like these 6 characters had distinct, realistic and supportive relationships with each other that allowed them to start evolving.
I can't wait to see how the next two books in the trilogy, The Rite of Ascension and The Rite of Redemption, continue the development of these six main characters because I am so invested in the relationships, not just the romantic ones but also in the platonic ones too.
If you love character-focused romantasy, definitely pick up this series! The Greek mythology influences and the plot are strong, but it tells a unique and original story with a real focus on the characters and it uses games and trials in a way that I genuinely haven't seen before.
Disclaimer: I received an Advance Listener Copy from the author but this is my voluntary and honest review.
May 4, 2026
I absolutely devoured this. Not only do I love Greek Mythology but pair that with trials and a slow burn that will surely roll into books 2 and 3. This follows Demigods in trials set by the Fates to see who will come out the champion with that the winner will rule over the mortals; plot twist each Heir is paired with a human that they must keep alive. The trials had your heart racing but the found family vibes and the feelings they start to have ah chefs kiss. The thing that resonated most with me was the dynamic between the gods and the mortals they were meant to see that the mortal were their humanity; or their path to it. This didnt have a lot of spice but that made no difference the story flowed perfect and I kind of feel like it was better for it; onto book 2.
April 19, 2026
Wow I was wrapped up in this book!! Did not put it down until I was done! The book is done in a multiple POV, which I enjoyed. The manner in which each character developed through their trials was so well written. There was a touch of suspense in trying to figure what lesson the fates was trying to teach each participant.
If you enjoy..
Greek mythology
Trials and prophecies
God vs demigods
Banter
Found family, this book is for you!
I’m excited to jump into the next book in the series!!!
If you enjoy..
Greek mythology
Trials and prophecies
God vs demigods
Banter
Found family, this book is for you!
I’m excited to jump into the next book in the series!!!
March 3, 2025
I love this book!! The relationships are great and the build up is everything. Some of the gods really go through so much growth and others stay in their stubborn mindset. It really shows how some gods would be in their feelings about humans and ruling the world. The trials that they are all put through are crazy, and of course absolutely love the villainous Fates causing all this mayhem. The ending was just so perfect!! I can't wait to see what's coming next!
February 18, 2025
Wonderful!
The Rite of Fates by Atlas Avery was a wonderful read! I enjoyed the dynamic of the characters and the unlikely comradeship they had that helped them tackle the trials and challenges they faced. The concept of this book was very intriguing and refreshingly unique!
Includes:
🖤 Greek Mythology themes
🖤Mortals
🖤Greek Heirs/Descendants
🖤Trials
🖤Found Family
The Rite of Fates by Atlas Avery was a wonderful read! I enjoyed the dynamic of the characters and the unlikely comradeship they had that helped them tackle the trials and challenges they faced. The concept of this book was very intriguing and refreshingly unique!
Includes:
🖤 Greek Mythology themes
🖤Mortals
🖤Greek Heirs/Descendants
🖤Trials
🖤Found Family
April 5, 2026
This amazing book was my first Greek mythology fantasy book, and now I'm definitely looking forward to reading anything that Atlas Avery writes!!!!! This has a Game of Thrones type vibe, but with the Greek God twist. The character and world building is REALLY good!! The storyline will keep you engaged and not wanting to put the book down.
April 7, 2025
Couldn’t put this down! I had a great time reading it. Alexander, Aurelius, and Caius… my heart is yours🫠 I am really curious about what book two is gonna be about! I can’t wait!!
Also, the audiobook is really good!! Highly recommend
Also, the audiobook is really good!! Highly recommend
February 6, 2026
If you love games and trials, you’re going to love this book! It’s a journey of self discovery & reflection. It’s a very intriguing spin on Greek mythology. The character development was also so so good!
April 8, 2026
Loved it loved all about the gods and how they have to see it in the perspective of humans and then things start to happened highly recommend love it
February 8, 2026
This book is very psychology-forward and very feelings-forward, which I honestly loved. We’re following the heirs of the gods who get thrown into these brutal trials and each of them is paired with a mortal. The whole goal? The gods have to keep their mortal alive. That’s it. That’s the assignment. And the super stressful part is we don’t even know what happens to the mortals once the trials are over, which just hangs over everything like a dark cloud the entire time.
Also: I LOVED that we’re not stuck with just one couple. We follow three different pairings and thank the book gods for that because I am such a sucker for multiple POVs and multiple relationships. Each pairing feels different, and I got attached way too fast.
This isn’t just “fantasy trials.” It’s very emotional, very introspective, very much about fear, pressure, identity, and the absolute mental spiral these characters are going through. It’s one of those books where you’re not just watching stuff happen—you’re in their heads with them, stressing out, questioning everything, and occasionally wanting to scream at them (affectionately).
There are twists. Some of them genuinely caught me off guard. And the whole book has this heavy, kind of haunting vibe that just sits in your chest while you’re reading.
Since this is book one, you can tell it’s setting a lot up. The character development is starting especially with the two main MMCs and I’m already very invested in seeing how that growth (and emotional damage) continues in book two.
Long story short: I loved these characters, I loved the concept, I loved the emotional pain, and I am 100% continuing this series. If you like myth vibes, multiple POVs, and books that make you stare at the wall for a bit after—you should absolutely read this.
Also: I LOVED that we’re not stuck with just one couple. We follow three different pairings and thank the book gods for that because I am such a sucker for multiple POVs and multiple relationships. Each pairing feels different, and I got attached way too fast.
This isn’t just “fantasy trials.” It’s very emotional, very introspective, very much about fear, pressure, identity, and the absolute mental spiral these characters are going through. It’s one of those books where you’re not just watching stuff happen—you’re in their heads with them, stressing out, questioning everything, and occasionally wanting to scream at them (affectionately).
There are twists. Some of them genuinely caught me off guard. And the whole book has this heavy, kind of haunting vibe that just sits in your chest while you’re reading.
Since this is book one, you can tell it’s setting a lot up. The character development is starting especially with the two main MMCs and I’m already very invested in seeing how that growth (and emotional damage) continues in book two.
Long story short: I loved these characters, I loved the concept, I loved the emotional pain, and I am 100% continuing this series. If you like myth vibes, multiple POVs, and books that make you stare at the wall for a bit after—you should absolutely read this.
January 1, 2026
I was constantly finding myself trying to get in 5 minutes of listening whenever I could…whether it was whilst cooking, walking the dog or driving - this audiobook had me hooked.
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The Rite of Fates by Atlas Avery completely pulled me in, especially as an audiobook. The story is rich, emotional, and surprisingly thoughtful, with a fresh take on Greek mythology that focuses on character growth rather than just action.
The trials are intense and often psychological, and the heir–mortal pairings add so much heart to the story. Hearing those relationships develop through the audiobook made the emotions hit even harder — the tension, vulnerability, and quiet moments really stood out. I found myself genuinely invested in the characters and their choices. My favourite character was Bailey and I loved everything she stood for and how her character and pairing developed throughout the story.
While a few sections required extra focus (definitely a “don’t zone out” listen), the payoff was absolutely worth it. Overall, this was a gripping and immersive audiobook experience, and I’m very glad I listened.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Rite of Fates by Atlas Avery completely pulled me in, especially as an audiobook. The story is rich, emotional, and surprisingly thoughtful, with a fresh take on Greek mythology that focuses on character growth rather than just action.
The trials are intense and often psychological, and the heir–mortal pairings add so much heart to the story. Hearing those relationships develop through the audiobook made the emotions hit even harder — the tension, vulnerability, and quiet moments really stood out. I found myself genuinely invested in the characters and their choices. My favourite character was Bailey and I loved everything she stood for and how her character and pairing developed throughout the story.
While a few sections required extra focus (definitely a “don’t zone out” listen), the payoff was absolutely worth it. Overall, this was a gripping and immersive audiobook experience, and I’m very glad I listened.
April 9, 2026
kay so Greek mythology retelling with the Fates literally running a brutal tournament to humble a bunch of entitled god heirs? I was already sold before page one.
What hooked me immediately was how beautiful the writing is. These heirs are powerful, arrogant, and completely unprepared for what the Fates have designed for them and reading their growth trial by trial is everything. The trials aren't just physical challenges, they're deeply psychological, and that's where this book separates itself from others in the trope.
The character development is doing heavy lifting here. Some heirs grow beautifully, others dig their heels in and stay stubborn gods about everything which honestly felt so authentic to how these characters would actually be. The found family arc that slowly builds between people who started out barely tolerating each other? Chef's kiss.
Definitely a series I look forward to continuing and binging again!
What hooked me immediately was how beautiful the writing is. These heirs are powerful, arrogant, and completely unprepared for what the Fates have designed for them and reading their growth trial by trial is everything. The trials aren't just physical challenges, they're deeply psychological, and that's where this book separates itself from others in the trope.
The character development is doing heavy lifting here. Some heirs grow beautifully, others dig their heels in and stay stubborn gods about everything which honestly felt so authentic to how these characters would actually be. The found family arc that slowly builds between people who started out barely tolerating each other? Chef's kiss.
Definitely a series I look forward to continuing and binging again!
December 31, 2025
if you liked Lore or Blood of Hercules you will enjoy this. With heirs of the gods battling to save mortals in different trials, there are hints of mythology with divine heirs learning what it is to be human. The storyline flows well, my only issue is that there was little distinction between character voices, so I kept having to rewind to see who was talking, until I got used to it and could tell if Arelius and Bailey were talking etc. it was a really interesting book and I like the different elements thrown in. particularly enjoyed the part where mortality was the trial
February 27, 2026
Rites of Fates had me hooked with all the destiny drama and “are we choosing this or is it choosing us” vibes. The world was cool without being info-dumpy, and the tension?? So good.
It’s definitely a little darker and moodier, but in a way that makes everything feel intense and important. I had a couple “wait… WHAT?” moments and I love when a fantasy can still surprise me.
If you’re into fate, chaos, and characters making messy choices that actually matter, you’ll probably eat this up like I did.
It’s definitely a little darker and moodier, but in a way that makes everything feel intense and important. I had a couple “wait… WHAT?” moments and I love when a fantasy can still surprise me.
If you’re into fate, chaos, and characters making messy choices that actually matter, you’ll probably eat this up like I did.
March 25, 2026
Greek mythology retellings and games and trials? Sold.
Absolutely loved this story so much!! There was so much going on right from the beginning that I was instantly invested. I really loved that we got to follow the story from three different heir/mortal pairings for a full story with different thoughts and perspectives. I can’t wait for book two!
The narrator did a wonderful job giving every character life and personality. She truly got me wanting to listen to more right away.
Thank you so much to Atlas Avery for a gifted copy of this audiobook too 🖤
Absolutely loved this story so much!! There was so much going on right from the beginning that I was instantly invested. I really loved that we got to follow the story from three different heir/mortal pairings for a full story with different thoughts and perspectives. I can’t wait for book two!
The narrator did a wonderful job giving every character life and personality. She truly got me wanting to listen to more right away.
Thank you so much to Atlas Avery for a gifted copy of this audiobook too 🖤
April 13, 2026
Review:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ & 1/2
Book: The Rite of Fates
Author: @atlasaverywrites
I really enjoyed this story as well as doing a read/listen combo for it. I am a huge fan of all things Greek Mythology and the Gods/Goddesses so when I initially saw this story it definitely piqued my interest. I liked the twist that the story focuses on the Descendants of the gods throughout trials alongside mortals to see who will rule over the mortal realm.
Atlas Avery did a beautiful job of creating each individual charcater with unique personalities that still held attributes that complemented their Godly lineage. I really enjoyed the idea that the Demigods had to pair with a mortal throughout their trials. A pairing that seemed unlikely to lead to any success ended with some interesting twists and relationships formed amongst some pairings. I loved seeing the relationships that formed amongst some of the Demigods as well as with their mortal counterparts. There was a natural flow of development between many chosen pairs, although some more hesitant than others, which had me feeling invested in the outcome of multiple characters.
I enjoyed the fact that the trials the main charcaters faced were more than just a one of brute strength or powers and focused also on trust, bonds formed, mentality, mind strength, understanding, empathy, determination, and will power. I enjoyed the total development of the story as well as the characters and excited to see more in the continuation of this series.
The narration that was done by Veronica and I felt she did a fantastic job of bringing The Rite of Fates to life as well as pulling me into the story. I normally prefer a dual narration for male and female character or with multiple main characters but the narrator did a wonderful job of changing her voice inflections for the different scenes and charcters even with the men's voices.
This Book and Audiobook has become a major comfort read for me and my love for it has grown with each read. I love that with each reread I have found more things to love I possiblly missed the first go around.
Book: The Rite of Fates
Author: @atlasaverywrites
I really enjoyed this story as well as doing a read/listen combo for it. I am a huge fan of all things Greek Mythology and the Gods/Goddesses so when I initially saw this story it definitely piqued my interest. I liked the twist that the story focuses on the Descendants of the gods throughout trials alongside mortals to see who will rule over the mortal realm.
Atlas Avery did a beautiful job of creating each individual charcater with unique personalities that still held attributes that complemented their Godly lineage. I really enjoyed the idea that the Demigods had to pair with a mortal throughout their trials. A pairing that seemed unlikely to lead to any success ended with some interesting twists and relationships formed amongst some pairings. I loved seeing the relationships that formed amongst some of the Demigods as well as with their mortal counterparts. There was a natural flow of development between many chosen pairs, although some more hesitant than others, which had me feeling invested in the outcome of multiple characters.
I enjoyed the fact that the trials the main charcaters faced were more than just a one of brute strength or powers and focused also on trust, bonds formed, mentality, mind strength, understanding, empathy, determination, and will power. I enjoyed the total development of the story as well as the characters and excited to see more in the continuation of this series.
The narration that was done by Veronica and I felt she did a fantastic job of bringing The Rite of Fates to life as well as pulling me into the story. I normally prefer a dual narration for male and female character or with multiple main characters but the narrator did a wonderful job of changing her voice inflections for the different scenes and charcters even with the men's voices.
This Book and Audiobook has become a major comfort read for me and my love for it has grown with each read. I love that with each reread I have found more things to love I possiblly missed the first go around.
March 20, 2026
The Rite of Fates
was such a fun read for me. It had Greek mythology, divine heirs, brutal trials, betrayals, heartbreak, slow-burn romance, found family, and just the right amount of emotional chaos to keep things interesting from start to finish.
One of the things I enjoyed most was that this story didn’t just put all its weight on one central couple. Instead, we got to follow three couples, and that made the whole book feel much more dynamic. Every pairing brought something different to the table, so the story always felt like it was moving. On top of that, the friendship between Ivy, Bailey, and Cali was genuinely lovely. They really were there for each other, and when Cali says, “They hold the halves of my heart, and I will always keep them safe,” you could feel just how deep that bond ran. I always appreciate well-written female friendships, and this absolutely delivered.
The MMCs were all distinct in a way that made them memorable. Alexander, heir of Aphrodite, was probably the one who made me laugh the most, as his wit brought much-needed lightness to some really intense scenes. His energy was so unserious at times, and I loved that. Of course, he would answer, “Who I’d enjoy sleeping with the most” when asked how he’d have chosen partners, and the whole “You have homes, not benches?” scene had me creasing, especially followed by “I don’t think you’re sleeping with anyone tonight.” Then there’s him reacting to the very human inconvenience of hunger with complete horror: “This is awful.” Honestly, very relatable behaviour from a man who has clearly never suffered a day in his life!
Aurelius, heir of Poseidon, was the one who probably got me the most emotionally. There’s such a heaviness to him, and throughout the trials, you can feel that the weight of responsibility is always on his shoulders, except here, strength means nothing if he can’t even trust his own mind. That vulnerability made him far more compelling than if he’d just been written as stoic and powerful all the time. What I really liked, though, was how gentle he could be with Bailey. He didn’t just see her pain or her fragility; he saw her strength, too, and that softness in the way he viewed her made their connection feel really tender. Bailey brought out something quieter in him, and lines like “Everyone needs someone to be real with, to feel safe with. Even you, Aurelius,” made that emotional intimacy hit even harder. Bailey herself was such a strong character, and not in a performative way either. When Aurelius questions why her wall says king instead of queen, and she replies, “It says king because a queen has the luxury of having a king save her. I save myself,” I was just sitting there like YES. Exactly. That’s the energy. But she also had such emotional warmth to her, and I loved that balance. “Flawed and worthy of love” is such a simple line, but it says so much about her journey and honestly just hit me right in the chest.
And then there’s Caius, heir of Hades: the prince of darkness, the shadowy one, the emotionally repressed one, obviously my type, unfortunately... 🖤 He had that classic dark, detached exterior, but what made him work so well was watching that start to crack. Cali wasn’t just a pawn in the Fates’ games to him, and she wasn’t some sacrifice to be made for ambition. Seeing him slowly reach a point where, for the first time in his life, he chose someone over his own ambitions was one of the strongest parts of the book for me. He spent so long believing darkness was all he was, so watching him stand in the space between light and shadow with someone who believed he could be more? Oh, I ate that up. “She deserved affection as endless and brilliant as the stars, not the emptiness of an abyss,” was the kind of line that made me melt a bit, not going to lie.
I also really liked what the trials were doing beneath all the drama, stripping these heirs back and forcing them to confront things they’d buried. There’s one moment where Acacia says, “We are not supposed to be weak,” and Hargus responds, “but maybe that’s the point. We’re being forced to see what we’ve never wanted to see - that we need more than just strength.” That felt like such a key idea running through the entire story. These characters have spent their lives believing power is everything, only to be forced into situations where power can’t save them from fear, grief, trauma, or loneliness. That’s why I loved the realisation that the mortals had chosen them not for their godly strength, but for the balance they provided. They were meant to fill in each other’s gaps, to protect and support each other, and that gave the book much more emotional depth than if it had just been endless competition and cruelty. Even in the romance, that theme came through beautifully. Aurelius and Bailey being described as “like the sea and the shore” was such a gorgeous way of capturing that sense of balance and belonging.
There were some really emotional moments in this, too. Bailey’s grief hit hard, especially with “I wish you enough” and then later “And just like that, he’s a memory.” Oof. That hurt. Her conversation with Aurelius, where she mourns the father she lost while also mourning what he never had, was one of the most quietly heartbreaking scenes in the book.
My main issue, and the reason this ended up being a 4 star rather than a 5, was definitely the chapter length. They were LONG long. Since I had the audiobook, I felt that even more because some chapters were over an hour and twenty minutes, and that can make progress feel really slow, even when you’re enjoying the story. I do think splitting some of the chapters where the perspective changed would have helped the pacing a lot and made the reading experience feel less heavy.
But overall, I had such a good time with this. It was dramatic, emotional, funny in places, and full of characters I genuinely enjoyed spending time with. Alexander brought the chaos, Aurelius brought the ache, Caius brought the dark, broody energy, and the girls were the heart of it all. By the end, I was definitely invested enough that, “My wish is for this to be the beginning - not the end,” very much matched my own feelings because I’m absolutely intrigued enough to continue with The Rite of Ascension .
If you love Greek mythology, divine trials, slow-burn romance, multiple couples, found family, emotional healing, and powerful people being forced to reckon with their own humanity, this is such a fun one to pick up.
One of the things I enjoyed most was that this story didn’t just put all its weight on one central couple. Instead, we got to follow three couples, and that made the whole book feel much more dynamic. Every pairing brought something different to the table, so the story always felt like it was moving. On top of that, the friendship between Ivy, Bailey, and Cali was genuinely lovely. They really were there for each other, and when Cali says, “They hold the halves of my heart, and I will always keep them safe,” you could feel just how deep that bond ran. I always appreciate well-written female friendships, and this absolutely delivered.
The MMCs were all distinct in a way that made them memorable. Alexander, heir of Aphrodite, was probably the one who made me laugh the most, as his wit brought much-needed lightness to some really intense scenes. His energy was so unserious at times, and I loved that. Of course, he would answer, “Who I’d enjoy sleeping with the most” when asked how he’d have chosen partners, and the whole “You have homes, not benches?” scene had me creasing, especially followed by “I don’t think you’re sleeping with anyone tonight.” Then there’s him reacting to the very human inconvenience of hunger with complete horror: “This is awful.” Honestly, very relatable behaviour from a man who has clearly never suffered a day in his life!
Aurelius, heir of Poseidon, was the one who probably got me the most emotionally. There’s such a heaviness to him, and throughout the trials, you can feel that the weight of responsibility is always on his shoulders, except here, strength means nothing if he can’t even trust his own mind. That vulnerability made him far more compelling than if he’d just been written as stoic and powerful all the time. What I really liked, though, was how gentle he could be with Bailey. He didn’t just see her pain or her fragility; he saw her strength, too, and that softness in the way he viewed her made their connection feel really tender. Bailey brought out something quieter in him, and lines like “Everyone needs someone to be real with, to feel safe with. Even you, Aurelius,” made that emotional intimacy hit even harder. Bailey herself was such a strong character, and not in a performative way either. When Aurelius questions why her wall says king instead of queen, and she replies, “It says king because a queen has the luxury of having a king save her. I save myself,” I was just sitting there like YES. Exactly. That’s the energy. But she also had such emotional warmth to her, and I loved that balance. “Flawed and worthy of love” is such a simple line, but it says so much about her journey and honestly just hit me right in the chest.
And then there’s Caius, heir of Hades: the prince of darkness, the shadowy one, the emotionally repressed one, obviously my type, unfortunately... 🖤 He had that classic dark, detached exterior, but what made him work so well was watching that start to crack. Cali wasn’t just a pawn in the Fates’ games to him, and she wasn’t some sacrifice to be made for ambition. Seeing him slowly reach a point where, for the first time in his life, he chose someone over his own ambitions was one of the strongest parts of the book for me. He spent so long believing darkness was all he was, so watching him stand in the space between light and shadow with someone who believed he could be more? Oh, I ate that up. “She deserved affection as endless and brilliant as the stars, not the emptiness of an abyss,” was the kind of line that made me melt a bit, not going to lie.
I also really liked what the trials were doing beneath all the drama, stripping these heirs back and forcing them to confront things they’d buried. There’s one moment where Acacia says, “We are not supposed to be weak,” and Hargus responds, “but maybe that’s the point. We’re being forced to see what we’ve never wanted to see - that we need more than just strength.” That felt like such a key idea running through the entire story. These characters have spent their lives believing power is everything, only to be forced into situations where power can’t save them from fear, grief, trauma, or loneliness. That’s why I loved the realisation that the mortals had chosen them not for their godly strength, but for the balance they provided. They were meant to fill in each other’s gaps, to protect and support each other, and that gave the book much more emotional depth than if it had just been endless competition and cruelty. Even in the romance, that theme came through beautifully. Aurelius and Bailey being described as “like the sea and the shore” was such a gorgeous way of capturing that sense of balance and belonging.
There were some really emotional moments in this, too. Bailey’s grief hit hard, especially with “I wish you enough” and then later “And just like that, he’s a memory.” Oof. That hurt. Her conversation with Aurelius, where she mourns the father she lost while also mourning what he never had, was one of the most quietly heartbreaking scenes in the book.
My main issue, and the reason this ended up being a 4 star rather than a 5, was definitely the chapter length. They were LONG long. Since I had the audiobook, I felt that even more because some chapters were over an hour and twenty minutes, and that can make progress feel really slow, even when you’re enjoying the story. I do think splitting some of the chapters where the perspective changed would have helped the pacing a lot and made the reading experience feel less heavy.
But overall, I had such a good time with this. It was dramatic, emotional, funny in places, and full of characters I genuinely enjoyed spending time with. Alexander brought the chaos, Aurelius brought the ache, Caius brought the dark, broody energy, and the girls were the heart of it all. By the end, I was definitely invested enough that, “My wish is for this to be the beginning - not the end,” very much matched my own feelings because I’m absolutely intrigued enough to continue with The Rite of Ascension .
If you love Greek mythology, divine trials, slow-burn romance, multiple couples, found family, emotional healing, and powerful people being forced to reckon with their own humanity, this is such a fun one to pick up.
November 14, 2025
This was a really interesting story. As a total sucker for anything mythologically themed, I especially loved the twist on the usual trope...rather than humans competing for the gods’ favor, it’s the divine who must prove themselves in the trials. There’s still an element of humans seeking boons through their involvement, but the larger purpose centers on the divine striving to better themselves and protect humanity. I was a bit surprised that the pacing sometimes felt slow despite the high-stakes, action-driven plot. Still, the emotional growth the characters undergo during the trials is clearly the heart of the story. There are some unexpectedly heavy, poignant moments as well, and the slow burn romance was wonderfully executed. One challenge is the number of shifting points of view; the rapid switches can make it easy to lose track of what’s happening. Even so, this remains a unique and refreshing take on mythology and deadly trials, and I genuinely enjoyed the journey.
Favorite Quotes:
“ Strength isn’t always found in the grand gestures, but often in the everyday connections we nurture.”
“ I used to think the pinnacle of my life would be ascending, but it’s not. It’s you loving me.”
Favorite Quotes:
“ Strength isn’t always found in the grand gestures, but often in the everyday connections we nurture.”
“ I used to think the pinnacle of my life would be ascending, but it’s not. It’s you loving me.”
April 12, 2025
3.5⭐️ Rounded Up
This was a really interesting story. I definitely liked the take on how the divine were the ones proving themselves in the trials, rather than the usual humans competing for a favor from the gods. Granted, this did have that aspect to it, but the overlying purpose was for the divine to improve themselves and protect the humans. The humans were more willing participants looking to gain a boon through their assistance.
I was a little surprised that it managed to somehow feel a little bit slow paced, even though it was a fairly high stakes, high action kind of story. They definitely go through a lot of emotional growth in the trials though, and I think that is the main focus. There are some heavy, emotional moments as well and I wasn’t expecting it.
I think Veronica Thames does a very good job with the audiobook narration. There are a lot of POVs in this book and it sometimes switches back and forth quickly, yet Veronica does a very good job of making it easy to follow the shifts.
All in all, I think this was a very unique take on the mythology x deadly trials themes and I enjoyed following along.
Thank you to Atlas Avery for the gifted audiobook!
My thought & opinions are entirely my own.
This was a really interesting story. I definitely liked the take on how the divine were the ones proving themselves in the trials, rather than the usual humans competing for a favor from the gods. Granted, this did have that aspect to it, but the overlying purpose was for the divine to improve themselves and protect the humans. The humans were more willing participants looking to gain a boon through their assistance.
I was a little surprised that it managed to somehow feel a little bit slow paced, even though it was a fairly high stakes, high action kind of story. They definitely go through a lot of emotional growth in the trials though, and I think that is the main focus. There are some heavy, emotional moments as well and I wasn’t expecting it.
I think Veronica Thames does a very good job with the audiobook narration. There are a lot of POVs in this book and it sometimes switches back and forth quickly, yet Veronica does a very good job of making it easy to follow the shifts.
All in all, I think this was a very unique take on the mythology x deadly trials themes and I enjoyed following along.
Thank you to Atlas Avery for the gifted audiobook!
My thought & opinions are entirely my own.
September 2, 2025
Premise 3 stars, the rest for me is a little less.
I like the whole idea of Gods/half gods working with humans and going through trials to see who should be the one to rule over humankind. Introducing empathy to all powerful beings was interesting…
However :
This book was way too long for what it was. The descriptions were basically the same things regurgitated multiple times. For example - “eyes/focus shifted” is literally in the story so often I wanted to start to count them all only like 50 pages in. Sigh.
Also the whole “let out a breath they didn’t know they were holding” popped up at least twice. It just felt like I was reading the same thing over and over again.
That being said, I did like some of the characters. I just felt like because there are SO MANY characters it was a bit difficult to keep up with who was who until the end.
I didn’t DNF specifically because I was interested in seeing where the story went and although I wasn’t attached to any characters I loved seeing the way they all started changing bit by bit. The conclusion worked well for the story and was satisfying but unfortunately this book just was not for me.
Not sure what this is tagged with but I’d recommend as YA, Fantasy with a greek gods theme.
I like the whole idea of Gods/half gods working with humans and going through trials to see who should be the one to rule over humankind. Introducing empathy to all powerful beings was interesting…
However :
This book was way too long for what it was. The descriptions were basically the same things regurgitated multiple times. For example - “eyes/focus shifted” is literally in the story so often I wanted to start to count them all only like 50 pages in. Sigh.
Also the whole “let out a breath they didn’t know they were holding” popped up at least twice. It just felt like I was reading the same thing over and over again.
That being said, I did like some of the characters. I just felt like because there are SO MANY characters it was a bit difficult to keep up with who was who until the end.
I didn’t DNF specifically because I was interested in seeing where the story went and although I wasn’t attached to any characters I loved seeing the way they all started changing bit by bit. The conclusion worked well for the story and was satisfying but unfortunately this book just was not for me.
Not sure what this is tagged with but I’d recommend as YA, Fantasy with a greek gods theme.
September 3, 2025
Goodreads I am begging you to give me half stars. Work with me here?
I’d like to start by noting this is 3.5 stars 😮💨
I enjoyed watching the characters grow and change and have their beliefs and sense of self challenged. I enjoyed the trials and that we got right into it. I adored Caius and Cali and cannot wait to see more of them. Alexander was a wonderful addition as a side character and both Aurelius and Bailey were beautiful to watch grow as well. I truly loved how the heirs started out full of distain for each other but these 3 grew closer in a way that was enjoyable to witness. Ivy, Bailey and Cali were a beautiful trio and I hope we haven’t seen the last of their friendship.
I will say my biggest issue was I felt a little unsure of the why? There’s no real back story or build up to tell me why any of this is happening or how the world between the gods, their heirs and the mortals really works. It left me feeling a little confused by the point of everything. I do hope to get more of this in book 2 though so I’ll circle back after that.
Again a really interesting twist on the usual books based around Greek mythology and I cannot wait to see more of Caius and Cali 🥰
I’d like to start by noting this is 3.5 stars 😮💨
I enjoyed watching the characters grow and change and have their beliefs and sense of self challenged. I enjoyed the trials and that we got right into it. I adored Caius and Cali and cannot wait to see more of them. Alexander was a wonderful addition as a side character and both Aurelius and Bailey were beautiful to watch grow as well. I truly loved how the heirs started out full of distain for each other but these 3 grew closer in a way that was enjoyable to witness. Ivy, Bailey and Cali were a beautiful trio and I hope we haven’t seen the last of their friendship.
I will say my biggest issue was I felt a little unsure of the why? There’s no real back story or build up to tell me why any of this is happening or how the world between the gods, their heirs and the mortals really works. It left me feeling a little confused by the point of everything. I do hope to get more of this in book 2 though so I’ll circle back after that.
Again a really interesting twist on the usual books based around Greek mythology and I cannot wait to see more of Caius and Cali 🥰
September 19, 2025
This story follows the bloodlines of gods and let me tell you, these heirs are arrogant, reckless, and total failures when it comes to compassion or vulnerability. The Fates, sick of their antics, throw them into brutal trials alongside mortal partners. These trials aren’t just about strength, they push the heirs mentally, physically, and emotionally, forcing them to face their darkest truths and worst fears.
What I loved most was the contrast between the heirs and the mortals. The mortals bring the heart, humanity, and vulnerability that the godly bloodlines lack. The character development is chef’s kiss and had me hooked from start to finish. Aurelius, the broody Master of the Seas, and Caius, the equally broody Prince of the Underworld, completely stole my attention. But my absolute favorite character? Bailey. I can’t wait to see where her story goes in book two!
This book was even more special for me because it was my first ever audiobook. Huge thank you to Atlas Avery for the gifted copy, it made the experience unforgettable. I can’t wait to dive into book two!
What I loved most was the contrast between the heirs and the mortals. The mortals bring the heart, humanity, and vulnerability that the godly bloodlines lack. The character development is chef’s kiss and had me hooked from start to finish. Aurelius, the broody Master of the Seas, and Caius, the equally broody Prince of the Underworld, completely stole my attention. But my absolute favorite character? Bailey. I can’t wait to see where her story goes in book two!
This book was even more special for me because it was my first ever audiobook. Huge thank you to Atlas Avery for the gifted copy, it made the experience unforgettable. I can’t wait to dive into book two!
November 2, 2025
4.5⭐️ - I really enjoyed this book! I’m always a sucker for anything with Greek mythology, and I felt like this book and story brought a new twist to the typical Greek mythology trials we typically see.
The divine heirs of Olympus are forced into deadly trials by the Fates in order to prove they’re worthy of ruling over the human world. The added twist? They’re each paired up with a human of their own who they must keep alive.
As one might expect, chaos ensues from the start of the first trial. But not only that, true bonds are forged between some of the heirs and their human counterparts.
The world building was super immersive in this one, the stakes were high, and tensions were higher. The friendships and relationships between some of the humans were so heartwarming, but it was even better to see the friendships and relationships forming between the heirs themselves and the heirs and their humans.
I’m about 3/4 of the way through Book 2, and I’m loving that one even more. Definitely don’t miss out on this series by Atlas Avery! ✨
The divine heirs of Olympus are forced into deadly trials by the Fates in order to prove they’re worthy of ruling over the human world. The added twist? They’re each paired up with a human of their own who they must keep alive.
As one might expect, chaos ensues from the start of the first trial. But not only that, true bonds are forged between some of the heirs and their human counterparts.
The world building was super immersive in this one, the stakes were high, and tensions were higher. The friendships and relationships between some of the humans were so heartwarming, but it was even better to see the friendships and relationships forming between the heirs themselves and the heirs and their humans.
I’m about 3/4 of the way through Book 2, and I’m loving that one even more. Definitely don’t miss out on this series by Atlas Avery! ✨
March 12, 2025
The heirs were descendants of the gods not the gods themselves - the mortals chose the heir that they thought could help propel them the farthest in the challenges. The heirs main objective was to keep their mortal alive and by winning the whole event they became better gods themselves and learned something about the mortals.
I enjoy this authors writing. For me they are an automatic buy. They put all of their artistic and creative ideas into their writing. This is the first in this series. Just imagine the individual growth these characters will achieve.
And can I ask why everything has to have super spicy scenes to be considered good? I am in no way a prude but I kinda like not having a sex scene every other chapter. This had the right amount of spicy.
If you want more writing by this author check out the first book in her other series “The Sun & The Moon” but the whole series is fantastic!!!
I enjoy this authors writing. For me they are an automatic buy. They put all of their artistic and creative ideas into their writing. This is the first in this series. Just imagine the individual growth these characters will achieve.
And can I ask why everything has to have super spicy scenes to be considered good? I am in no way a prude but I kinda like not having a sex scene every other chapter. This had the right amount of spicy.
If you want more writing by this author check out the first book in her other series “The Sun & The Moon” but the whole series is fantastic!!!
October 8, 2025
sucker for mythology
I am a sucker for all things mythology especially any and all the include aspects of the greek gods. This book did not disappoint. I loved that the story was based on descendants of the Gods and these heirs learning how to be more human so to speak. I absolutely loved the 6 main-ish characters, their growth and bonds were so fun to read. I will say some of the growth and acknowledgment of certain feeling from their heirs became a little repetitious at times but nothing that pulled me away from fulling enjoying the story. I loved the trials they went through and the fun little twist with Cali. I am excited to see how book two plays out.
I am a sucker for all things mythology especially any and all the include aspects of the greek gods. This book did not disappoint. I loved that the story was based on descendants of the Gods and these heirs learning how to be more human so to speak. I absolutely loved the 6 main-ish characters, their growth and bonds were so fun to read. I will say some of the growth and acknowledgment of certain feeling from their heirs became a little repetitious at times but nothing that pulled me away from fulling enjoying the story. I loved the trials they went through and the fun little twist with Cali. I am excited to see how book two plays out.
May 25, 2025
Love love love the idea of the three fates the sisters like in the Hercules and all the other mythology being in control of the airs along with a human and the winner gets to rule mankind I am always rooting for Hades, for some reason that underdog gets me and the air of the Hades throne that underdog got me that’s who I rooted for the whole way through and I loved listening to it where the sisters would talk truly reminded me of some of my favorite parts of Hercules and the reason why I love mythology
April 5, 2025
I got this as an audiobook.
I love books related to myths and The Gods. This was an interesting twist on those stories with trials set forth by The Fates to 6 heirs of various Greek Gods. Set in a more modern world they are paired with humans to complete the challenges.
With some fun banter and a tiny bit of spice, it was a little slow paced for me. But the storyline was consistent and had some character development.
I love books related to myths and The Gods. This was an interesting twist on those stories with trials set forth by The Fates to 6 heirs of various Greek Gods. Set in a more modern world they are paired with humans to complete the challenges.
With some fun banter and a tiny bit of spice, it was a little slow paced for me. But the storyline was consistent and had some character development.
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