Several reviews complain of the insta love or insta just. Blake uses the fated mates trope to facilitate a speedy start to the relationship. So, there is no time spent on the lead characters getting to know each other, building respect, gradually finding that sense of attachment regardless of external factors. Rain says you're my mate. Trinity says, oh, okay. Personally, I'm not a fan of this trope, and we see it so much in sci-fi romance, I really think it's overused.
How fast does this fated mate relationship move? He says from night one, you sleep in my room, but no sex. I want your company. She says... okay. Oh dear, only 1 bed. The no sex thing lasts one day. It's a novella after all, lol, we don't have 500 pages here. I get it. But, where Ms. Blake loses me is the way the characters talk. If Raig had told Trinity he looked forward to their intimacy, to joining their bodies, to being skin to skin, feeling as if they shared a heartbeat, exploring each other and finding ecstasy... sigh.. ahh, be still my heart.
But, this is how it went.
" We want each other, Trinity.”
“Yeah, I can’t deny that.”
His scales shifted, darkening a shade, then rippling back to his usual color. “Then perhaps we shall become better acquainted when we are in more permanent accommodations.”
“That… would be fine.”
“Stryxians are forward and blunt by nature,” he said. “So I will be very clear with you regarding my intentions.” He flashed his teeth, showing those sharp incisors. His hands flexed. “My cock belongs inside your pussy. My tongue belongs in your cunt, lapping your juices until you come in my mouth.”
And, suddenly I wasn't enjoying this little novella any more. I skimmed. The actual story is decent. The weird thing is, I have read sex scenes that would melt the paint off the walls. They have included the C word, and much more. But, they had emotion and intensity and a very deep, almost profound eroticism. In comparison, this was more like rough porn.
Anyway, the writing is decent, there is actually a story going on. And overall it's not bad. But, it just felt disappointing. However, lots of people quite liked it. It's on Kindle Unlimited, so if you're a member at least it costs nothing (more) to see what you think.