Professor McGonagall didn’t know that Hogwarts had a Failsafe. The Spell she used to protect the students triggered the castle to protect itself. It’s been creating labyrinths. Some of the loved ones of the missing ventured in, never to be seen again. It’s like they never left. Draco Lucius Malfoy, the verdict alteration comes with a stipulation that you must return for the rehabilitation of Hogwarts.
This had so much potential and I was disappointed overall. I understood what she was trying to do with the story, but for me it just missed the mark everytime. Draco’s “reconciliation” with the Gryffindors doesn’t really seem like the epiphany it’s set up to be because they’ve already accepted and forgiven him so those chapters end up being more like “Draco has an honest conversation with someone for once while they navigate major peril” and wasn’t as compelling as it could be (that being said, his journey with Harry was heartbreaking). The Dramione is pretty weak overall and I dont buy a HEA after zero relationship development beyond admitting that they fell in love with each other after staring at each other for years? It felt rushed - I think part of the issue is the short length - has the potential to be something great (think On the Nature, S&M, Marked) but would love to see this reworked and lengthened.
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2.75⭐ Look, I was very like patient. Like I was okay with the romance being a sub-plot, but like there was literally nothing for me to grasp. Also what was that ending, and yes the author did say that the ending wasn't suppose to be like with marriage and baby's. Forget that, the ending didn't even have them two together have a moment😭. But overall I did like the plot and it was enjoyable, but it was missing some aspects.
I was apprehensive about this fic as normally the fics i read are entirely based on draco and hermione falling in love but wow this fic was so much more than that! It actually focused very little on them falling in love and instead was all about Draco and how the choices he makes affect him and everyone around him.
A great read with LOTS of twists and turns! it gets 4/5 stars because I would’ve like a little more Dramione.
Pues no me gustó, la historia en general es buena, tiene buenos momentos, pero la escritura es lo que me generó desesperación. Siento que la autora quizo sacar su R. Martin interno y comenzar a describir ABSOLUTAMENTE TODO lo que iba pasando de forma muy meticulosa.
I think this could have been really good… The premise was there but it really lacked the dramione aspect of it, i was grabbing onto ANYTHING dramione at some points. The plots were good but some of it was long winded and kept going on and on and i got bored. :(
Actually DNFing for now at approximately 30%. the writing just feels repetitive and non-linear. Almost like reading in a fever dream, but I have read it in segmented and separated sessions of spare time so I hope to give it more attention again later.