The story follows Pam and Casey, former college friends who might have had something more but were torn apart by Pam’s reluctance to form a real relationship. Casey, devastated, doesn’t know that Pam, although in love with her, faced enormous pressure from her father to marry a man and have the sort of life he would approve of.
The not-quite couple are thrust back together again when Casey’s mother is rescued from her abusive husband by legal advocate and women’s group member, Pam.
The story develops nicely, the relationships are solid, and the impact of domestic abuse on the wider family is thoroughly explored.
I really wanted to like this one but the writing was not good. There’s a lot of repetition within the dialogue, an overuse of the characters’ names throughout, and a lot of head-hopping and perspective changes, even within paragraphs. There are missing speech marks, sudden and unnecessary speech marks, there are some spelling errors (including a character’s name) and it was a bit of a slog to read.
“'There’s something not right about this guy. There is a crazed look in his eyes. It could be from drug use. He’s definitely on edge.’
Pam frowned, ‘Well, from what I know, it sounds like he’s been on the edge for a little while now.’
Officer Belk shook his head slowly. ‘In that case, he may be close to going over the edge...'"
Chapter Thirty-Two, Second Chances by M. E. Tudor
With apologies, this book needs an editor and proofreader. There is something good here but the writing needs help.