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Forbidden Alpha Kings #10
Rejected and Pregnant by my Fated Alpha
I met my fated alpha mate, and then he rejected me.
Now I'm carrying his secret pup in my belly.
When the Moon Goddess revealed me to be Alpha Damion’s mate...
I couldn't believe it.
He was the most powerful, wealthy alpha in our pack.
Then he rejected our bond, and it shattered me to a million pieces.
But my pain wasn’t enough for him. Now I’m being sold like cattle, a prize for the highest bidder.
And the worst part? I’m carrying his pup.
Everyone in the pack wants me to break--
But I’m done being the weak one.
Damion left me for dead.
But I’ll show him what it means to lose.
Soon, Damion will be the one who bows to me .
Rejected and pregnant by my Fated Alpha is a rejected mate romance with all of the angst and spice. Intended for Mature readers only!
Now I'm carrying his secret pup in my belly.
When the Moon Goddess revealed me to be Alpha Damion’s mate...
I couldn't believe it.
He was the most powerful, wealthy alpha in our pack.
Then he rejected our bond, and it shattered me to a million pieces.
But my pain wasn’t enough for him. Now I’m being sold like cattle, a prize for the highest bidder.
And the worst part? I’m carrying his pup.
Everyone in the pack wants me to break--
But I’m done being the weak one.
Damion left me for dead.
But I’ll show him what it means to lose.
Soon, Damion will be the one who bows to me .
Rejected and pregnant by my Fated Alpha is a rejected mate romance with all of the angst and spice. Intended for Mature readers only!
436 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 6, 2025
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March 4, 2025
Great Read!
This was awesome! I started reading and only pausing when I absolutely had to. I loved Seraphina and Damion.
It was engrossing, with the angst and drama. The romance and steam but also the fight between good and evil.
It takes a lot for me to read and finish a book over 300 pages! This book had it all
This was awesome! I started reading and only pausing when I absolutely had to. I loved Seraphina and Damion.
It was engrossing, with the angst and drama. The romance and steam but also the fight between good and evil.
It takes a lot for me to read and finish a book over 300 pages! This book had it all
June 1, 2025
I LOVED IT!
I absolutely loved this book. It's an emotional overload and my emotions were all over the place. When I finally finished it I took a deep breath and sighed in relief. The suspense was so intense at times and I couldn't read fast enough. I was consumed by this book. What Raine goes through had me really crying over her heartbreak. It was gutwrenching. Not only is she living a life of torture at home but then to go to someone you love for help and safety only to be scorned just broke my heart. After all the crying I did I now have a tension headache. Lol. There is so much to say about this book. It's exciting and keeps you guessing til the very end and I have to say I think the ending was perfect. I really felt Aiden was not ready for the responsibilities of being a King Alpha and even though he was a fated mate to Raine I thought if he was a true mate to her he would've let her explain everything and he would have believed her over that low life pos Daniel. Now Nyx I could've fallin in love with him myself. He's a big bada** alpha king and when he put his claim on Raine I wanted to throw my fist in the air and scream YES B*TCH!! Lol! The sex scenes are so off the charts smokin hot I had to get out my fan. I Highly Recommend This Book to Everyone
February 22, 2025
There’s a mean girl…
This was a good story, and the characters were pretty good too. I enjoyed the overall storyline, but the current cover… I don’t find him all that appealing.
Anyway, it’s the typical story where the mate turns out to be an omega, but the mean girl Lucinda drugs her and manages to get her exiled. Mainly because her mate doesn’t believe her when she says the accusations against her are false.
From the title alone you know that she’s expecting, so that’s no big surprise. The Alpha King position gets thrown into the mix on top of everything. There’s lots going on but there wasn’t anything terribly exciting.
KU read but not great. Okay for those of us who like rejection stories.
This was a good story, and the characters were pretty good too. I enjoyed the overall storyline, but the current cover… I don’t find him all that appealing.
Anyway, it’s the typical story where the mate turns out to be an omega, but the mean girl Lucinda drugs her and manages to get her exiled. Mainly because her mate doesn’t believe her when she says the accusations against her are false.
From the title alone you know that she’s expecting, so that’s no big surprise. The Alpha King position gets thrown into the mix on top of everything. There’s lots going on but there wasn’t anything terribly exciting.
KU read but not great. Okay for those of us who like rejection stories.
February 17, 2025
Cute
What a nice read. Loved this book. Read it in one sitting. Definitely not what I was expecting. Loved all the characters and mysteries. Really liked this book.
What a nice read. Loved this book. Read it in one sitting. Definitely not what I was expecting. Loved all the characters and mysteries. Really liked this book.
January 25, 2025
Intriguing.
It’s an intriguing book with serious character development throughout the chapters, but not my cup of tea. If you want a super self confident alpha male and a female lead who’s dainty and timid but grows into a self providing confident woman, go for it. I definitely don’t want to deter people from reading this book.
What I couldn’t get over was the male lead’s smugness and self righteousness that borders on narcissism. He hurt the female lead and was a leading factor in getting those she cared about hurt. And when he realized he was wrong, his thought process was “I want her back because she’s my fated mate, so I guess I need to get her forgiveness.” And not, “I need to earn her forgiveness because I hurt her.”
There were literal lines written where he was thinking he needed to up his intensity on being nice so he could take her back to his pack and live HIS dream life with her being his dream Luna, and not, “I accept I did something wrong and hurtful and need to show her I’m sorry in hopes she takes me back but knowing she has a right not to be with me.” This thought process only showed up in ONE line. In ONE chapter. And it was with the expectation that he was going to stick to her despite what she wanted.
Asking for forgiveness with the expectation of being forgiven is not genuine remorse for doing something wrong.
He’s was so confident as well that she was going to immediately accept him back and go along with him and was shocked when she didn’t. It was naive, bordering narcissistic, and had total alpha male vibes. But that’s just me.
In no way is this book poorly written besides a few missing words and misspells. The story plot flowed through the chapters and, as you may have noticed, the characters definitely evoked some sort of feeling. Please read if it’s your cup of tea.
It’s just not mine.
It’s an intriguing book with serious character development throughout the chapters, but not my cup of tea. If you want a super self confident alpha male and a female lead who’s dainty and timid but grows into a self providing confident woman, go for it. I definitely don’t want to deter people from reading this book.
What I couldn’t get over was the male lead’s smugness and self righteousness that borders on narcissism. He hurt the female lead and was a leading factor in getting those she cared about hurt. And when he realized he was wrong, his thought process was “I want her back because she’s my fated mate, so I guess I need to get her forgiveness.” And not, “I need to earn her forgiveness because I hurt her.”
There were literal lines written where he was thinking he needed to up his intensity on being nice so he could take her back to his pack and live HIS dream life with her being his dream Luna, and not, “I accept I did something wrong and hurtful and need to show her I’m sorry in hopes she takes me back but knowing she has a right not to be with me.” This thought process only showed up in ONE line. In ONE chapter. And it was with the expectation that he was going to stick to her despite what she wanted.
Asking for forgiveness with the expectation of being forgiven is not genuine remorse for doing something wrong.
He’s was so confident as well that she was going to immediately accept him back and go along with him and was shocked when she didn’t. It was naive, bordering narcissistic, and had total alpha male vibes. But that’s just me.
In no way is this book poorly written besides a few missing words and misspells. The story plot flowed through the chapters and, as you may have noticed, the characters definitely evoked some sort of feeling. Please read if it’s your cup of tea.
It’s just not mine.
July 21, 2025
This book is yet another example of why I shy away from shifter books. I have read some pretty good ones, but there are just so many more that fall way short of what I want from a romance book.
First, let's start with the editing/formatting issues. I came across multiple problems. At one point, the phrase less-than-Avery was used rather than less-than-savory. Did nobody proofread this? Or edit? There were issues of missing punctuations, as well, which throw things off.
Then, there are story issues. The writing in this reads very young. This feels like a high schooler deciding to write something. There is very little emotion felt in here. It is just told to us. There is very little world building. Background info is given just as it becomes an issue, rather than prior (for example, we only find out her youngest sister was adopted after we are told about the attack and her father's death). It is conveniently given, so we have no idea what's supposed to happen.
Both characters are just so immature through most of the book. There was no leadership quality displayed, and I'm having a very tough time figuring out why he was chosen as Alpha. He was a weak puppet for his parents. He did grow a bit at the end, but he still didn't show any leader qualities to lead over 10,000 people.
Seraphina also had the same issue. She was so naive and clueless to the world, and suddenly after about 11 months she is fit to lead all shifters and be queen? Nope, not buying it.
Weak characters, weak writing, and weak plot.
I will not read this again and I will not recommend it to others.
First, let's start with the editing/formatting issues. I came across multiple problems. At one point, the phrase less-than-Avery was used rather than less-than-savory. Did nobody proofread this? Or edit? There were issues of missing punctuations, as well, which throw things off.
Then, there are story issues. The writing in this reads very young. This feels like a high schooler deciding to write something. There is very little emotion felt in here. It is just told to us. There is very little world building. Background info is given just as it becomes an issue, rather than prior (for example, we only find out her youngest sister was adopted after we are told about the attack and her father's death). It is conveniently given, so we have no idea what's supposed to happen.
Both characters are just so immature through most of the book. There was no leadership quality displayed, and I'm having a very tough time figuring out why he was chosen as Alpha. He was a weak puppet for his parents. He did grow a bit at the end, but he still didn't show any leader qualities to lead over 10,000 people.
Seraphina also had the same issue. She was so naive and clueless to the world, and suddenly after about 11 months she is fit to lead all shifters and be queen? Nope, not buying it.
Weak characters, weak writing, and weak plot.
I will not read this again and I will not recommend it to others.
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January 25, 2025
Why this book has such high ratings? I dont know. Let me tell you how bad and all over the place this book was. I was 95 percent into the book when I DNF’d it. 95 PERCENT. I was just done with all the buffoonery.
60% of this book is just her refusing to go back with him and him plotting to take her back to his pack. 10 percent is them gettin freaky dispute her saying she was unsure if she wanted him back (we get it girl, you got urges) 20 percent of it was her keeping secrets from him and the last 10 percent was people going to court and dying/getting banned.
Both of them leave a bad taste in my mouth. Yikes. I loved a good rejected mate book, but this? I could find better shit on Wattpad. Sorry not sorry.
60% of this book is just her refusing to go back with him and him plotting to take her back to his pack. 10 percent is them gettin freaky dispute her saying she was unsure if she wanted him back (we get it girl, you got urges) 20 percent of it was her keeping secrets from him and the last 10 percent was people going to court and dying/getting banned.
Both of them leave a bad taste in my mouth. Yikes. I loved a good rejected mate book, but this? I could find better shit on Wattpad. Sorry not sorry.
January 24, 2025
DNF around 64%
Hmm, I think I read a different book. Can't understand the high rating.
The characters weren't very well fleshed out. The h was not very likeable and came across as childish rather than timid. The swearing/bad language, which I have no objection to, felt inappropriately placed.
The writing wasn't bad in itself, except for lacking maturity in areas. The sex scenes were lacking depth. Some of the dialogue and descriptions actually made me cringe. The storyline was fairly predicatable. Gotta admit to literally skimming through some chapters. So, I don't feel short-changed in finishing early.
Hmm, I think I read a different book. Can't understand the high rating.
The characters weren't very well fleshed out. The h was not very likeable and came across as childish rather than timid. The swearing/bad language, which I have no objection to, felt inappropriately placed.
The writing wasn't bad in itself, except for lacking maturity in areas. The sex scenes were lacking depth. Some of the dialogue and descriptions actually made me cringe. The storyline was fairly predicatable. Gotta admit to literally skimming through some chapters. So, I don't feel short-changed in finishing early.
January 28, 2025
a little cut and dry
This story was a tad too cut and dry, could use more development around the action and plot lines. It was like a stop-start-stop kind of thing, it just felt so blunt. Damion is a terrible alpha all around- touted words of being strong because he’s and alpha but honestly he was a gullible ninny. He feel for every trick played on him, every time. Sigh. But I love that she’s a Queen!!
This story was a tad too cut and dry, could use more development around the action and plot lines. It was like a stop-start-stop kind of thing, it just felt so blunt. Damion is a terrible alpha all around- touted words of being strong because he’s and alpha but honestly he was a gullible ninny. He feel for every trick played on him, every time. Sigh. But I love that she’s a Queen!!
February 15, 2025
The actual story did surprise me a couple times, so I’m giving it an extra star for some originality, but it is not well written and needs editing desperately. The characters are very mid, and I had a hard time picturing a lot of what was going on. It felt like modern people living in a medieval world. I don’t know who I would recommend it to, so I guess read it if you want, but you can definitely find better out there
March 7, 2025
I should have known from the title that this book would be…. Not good.
I found this book from a TikTok, but hey! What can I say? I love a good guilty pleasure read. ANYWAY. I was on board with this story line until the main incident happened.
I’m sorry- but in what world would Seraphina drug a man just to sleep with him when he had the man of her dreams as her mate? I’m so confused as to how gullible and stupid Damion was. I had to DNF after that.
I found this book from a TikTok, but hey! What can I say? I love a good guilty pleasure read. ANYWAY. I was on board with this story line until the main incident happened.
I’m sorry- but in what world would Seraphina drug a man just to sleep with him when he had the man of her dreams as her mate? I’m so confused as to how gullible and stupid Damion was. I had to DNF after that.
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February 1, 2025
Rejected
I liked this book probably better than the other books in the series. The FMC is as strong as they get and her growth from the beginning to the end was perfection. The MMC was very likable even though he did make a very bad decision he acted quickly to try to make it right and didn’t give up or become sullen when he didn’t get his way.
Their HEA was worth the journey.
I liked this book probably better than the other books in the series. The FMC is as strong as they get and her growth from the beginning to the end was perfection. The MMC was very likable even though he did make a very bad decision he acted quickly to try to make it right and didn’t give up or become sullen when he didn’t get his way.
Their HEA was worth the journey.
April 11, 2025
Exceptional read.
So a slum living girl, ends up
in a castle. But so much unexpected drama happens on the way . This was such a great read,a bit of spicy action, Werewolves, omegas, Alphas. Rich , and poor ;nice characters as well as toxic ones. I have read this in one bite good book.
So a slum living girl, ends up
in a castle. But so much unexpected drama happens on the way . This was such a great read,a bit of spicy action, Werewolves, omegas, Alphas. Rich , and poor ;nice characters as well as toxic ones. I have read this in one bite good book.
January 21, 2025
Rejected and Pregnant by my Fated Alpha
She's from the slums, he is the pack alpha and they are fated mates. They live through lies and corruption but they make it through a break up to finding out she is the Queen Alpha.
She's from the slums, he is the pack alpha and they are fated mates. They live through lies and corruption but they make it through a break up to finding out she is the Queen Alpha.
February 16, 2025
Rejected and Pregnant by my Fated Alpha
I was truly mind boggled at how naive Damion truly was. Never seen such mindlessness from someone who should be such a big, bad alpha. I'm glad for Seraphina, she deserved all she got and more.
I was truly mind boggled at how naive Damion truly was. Never seen such mindlessness from someone who should be such a big, bad alpha. I'm glad for Seraphina, she deserved all she got and more.
February 21, 2025
really badly written
I get this a fair while but I just found it to be nonsense. There was no build up with characters or scenario and then massive long descriptive paragraphs over nothing really. It all felt a bit immature
I get this a fair while but I just found it to be nonsense. There was no build up with characters or scenario and then massive long descriptive paragraphs over nothing really. It all felt a bit immature
February 27, 2025
fast read
It was a fast read, but it was good. I like how she grew and at times she was steadfast. I enjoyed how Damien realize what was going on fairly early and the pace of the book was steady no slow, boring or obnoxious reading.
It was a fast read, but it was good. I like how she grew and at times she was steadfast. I enjoyed how Damien realize what was going on fairly early and the pace of the book was steady no slow, boring or obnoxious reading.
March 3, 2025
Not only is Damion a gullible idiot, he manages to never apologize to the heroine and be a smug, oblivious, self-assured douche while doing it. For the last half of the book he legitimately has no redeeming qualities lmao.
March 7, 2025
Uhmm no?
Grossly and roundly no, it was gross, this is not a miscommunication trope, he was a super weak of an alpha and a man, she was an impressive female lead character, but him? I don't even remember his name nor do I want to, what a disappointing book
Grossly and roundly no, it was gross, this is not a miscommunication trope, he was a super weak of an alpha and a man, she was an impressive female lead character, but him? I don't even remember his name nor do I want to, what a disappointing book
May 21, 2025
Really enjoyed this book and the characters were interesting. I really liked that. The main female character became a very strong woman. Male main character came to his senses quickly and groveled well.
July 23, 2025
I greatly enjoyed the story of Seraphina and Damian.
I enjoyed all the twists and turns before the heroine & hero found their way back to each other. I laughed when our hero sentenced his dreadful parents to death; not that I’m blood thirsty much, Lol.
I enjoyed all the twists and turns before the heroine & hero found their way back to each other. I laughed when our hero sentenced his dreadful parents to death; not that I’m blood thirsty much, Lol.
February 8, 2025
Take a shot every time this MMC (the "Alpha") lets someone around him influence his thoughts and actions with just their words, even after they've already betrayed him before.
February 17, 2025
It was bad… the writing wasn’t good, things happened too fast and mmc was stupid. Fmc was too forgiving and it was cringey.
February 19, 2025
Excellent
I really loved this book. The author and the storyline is a well written book. Please give this book a read. Enjoy
I really loved this book. The author and the storyline is a well written book. Please give this book a read. Enjoy
February 24, 2025
Loved it
Such an enthralling story. Minor errors here and there that can easily be forgiven. Cannot wait to read more books from this writer pair.
Such an enthralling story. Minor errors here and there that can easily be forgiven. Cannot wait to read more books from this writer pair.
February 24, 2025
Cute Story
Writing was a little juvenile but it was a great story. I enjoyed the plot. Low spice level for anyone interested.
Writing was a little juvenile but it was a great story. I enjoyed the plot. Low spice level for anyone interested.
February 26, 2025
This book was really long for the amount of character and plot development it had. The story itself read more like a novella. Nothing too fabulous, but enjoyable enough to finish.
February 28, 2025
I love the fact that the main character is a female and it's more her story and not the male characters.
February 28, 2025
Notes for me:
-rejected mate but I like how OWD was handled
-rejected mate but I like how OWD was handled
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