James Patterson has several bestselling series, each carrying different levels of readership popularity. Detective Alex Cross is his coveted franchise and most successful series, followed by the Women’s Murder Club, Detective Michael Bennett, NYPD Red, and the Private novels.
The Detective Michael Bennett series is one of Patterson’s better feel-good characters. Bennett is a successful Detective working special crimes in New York City. His home life and (very large) family are really the center of his world and provide the primary reason for the readers to cheer him on. Bennett’s first wife, Maeve, died after fighting a losing battle with cancer, leaving him with their 10 adopted children to raise, along with his sour grandfather and catholic priest, Seamus. During most of the books, Bennett has moved on by falling in love and getting married - to his wonderful housekeeper and currently pregnant with their first child, Mary Catherine - in-between solving crimes and stopping serial killers along the way.
I cannot speak for other readers, but I can say for me that I enjoy getting to see what the Bennett clan are up to each year, watching Mike’s relationship with Mary Catherine grow into a strong committed partnership, and seeing how each of the children are developing as they grow older. The strong family focus is the secret sauce that drives this series and puts a nice smile on my face and keeps me coming back for more.
For example, in this one I excited to see how Mary Catherin’s pregnancy was going, as well as how Juliana’s potential relationship with Michael’s partner, Rob Trilling, was developing. A side bar incident involving Juliana helping Rob’s Pakistani refugee roommates defend themselves was pretty memorable and ironic. These family-based activities were some of the best parts, and to be honest, there wasn’t as much of them in this book as I was hoping for.
On the flip side, I have found the primary mysteries and villains in this series to be fairly hit and miss from book to book. Some have strong protagonists that have challenged and pushed Bennett to the extreme, like the Russian assassin from several books ago; while others have been serial killers, bombers, and other psychotic fueled baddies that were superficial, weak, and even a few that came across like cliches. Once in a while Patterson and Born will create a compelling mystery that maintains my interest, but needless to say the criminal storylines have not been a consistent strength of this series.
Unfortunately, they can tend to be almost formulaic, following a structure of having a primary A storyline (mystery, investigation, etc.) and a secondary storyline (another mystery or conflict that needs to be resolved) that run parallel throughout the novel.
In “Delusional” the primary A plot involved Bennett being called in to help investigate a series of bombings in New York City. One of the bombs took the life of a NYPD patrol Sargeant in Queens when it went off. Another bomb was detonated in the Office of Technology and Innovation building. Following their analysis, the bomb investigators let Bennett know that the bomber is learning and getting better with each bomb that goes off. Michael even gets an extra partner, Special ATF Agent Margaret Chin, to work with on the investigation.
The secondary B plot involved Bennett’s young partner, Rob Trilling, being called home to Montana by his older brother seeking his help. The Trilling’s own a car lot that has been in the family for generations and has been successful enough to provide for their means. But they’re in trouble. A California developer is buying up the land in their small, incorporated town outside of Bozeman and the Trilling’s are refusing to sell the land in which their family business is located on. The developer seems to have criminal connections and when threats don’t work, Rob finds himself facing physical attacks and acts of arson intending to change his family’s minds.
Michael Bennett, Rob Trilling, and both of their families are forced to deal with adversaries that appear to be downright delusional when it comes to the law…
For me, and this is just me, the personal family related storylines overshadowed the primary bombing investigation, which came with two impossible-to-ignore weaknesses. The first was that it felt like a typical and predictable Patterson formula that didn’t provide any tension or compelling interest for the reader. At least for me, it was rather predictable in how it unfolded. The second was that the bad guys and bad lady were really weak villains, providing no sense of conflict or challenge to Bennett and Chin. For me, they were some of the poorest and uninteresting villains I have ever seen in a Patterson novel; they couldn’t even act as a unified team in any way and spent all of their time fighting. Unfortunately, it was easy to see that they were going to fall apart on their own even before law enforcement found them. Rather disappointing.
Having shared my constructive feedback, that doesn’t mean that I am saying to avoid reading this one. A lot of readers love this series, and I want them to enjoy the book more than I did, so I conclude with the following thought.
The strength of this series has always been the balance between Bennett facing down the evilness of the world (serial killers, psycho and deranged killers, bad people seeking power, etc.) and the strength of his family. The love and support of his family is his heart. They provide him with the strength, drive, and perseverance that he needs to successfully hunt down and deal with evil killers and villains. It’s a sharp two-edged sword, but Michael does a good job of shuffling between both worlds, maintaining both his core identity and humanity.
As long as you are okay with trading off the strength of those personal family storylines for weaker, less engaging and less-entertaining police investigations that disappoint more than it delivers, you will probably be better prepared for the experience.
For me, this was 2.5 out of 5 stars rating (which is rounded up on Goodreads). And I am feeling like that is rather generous, so you can thank the strong family focus and uplifting ending for that rounding up to 3-stars.