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350 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 1, 2025
- Princess Bess: As narrator, her voice alternates between poetic reverence for ritual and abrupt emotional flatness. I struggled to root for her because her obsession with Harry isn’t convincingly built—one moment she’s pining, the next she’s sulking, and all I hear is “I love him” without seeing why. Her ambivalence toward her sister‑queen also lacks depth; it feels like bitterness for bitterness’s sake.
- Consort Harry: Nearly faceless in his own right. He drifts in and out of Bess’s monologues, more a symbol of forbidden longing than a fully formed person. I wanted to understand his motivations—why he chose to bind himself to a matriarchal throne, how he truly feels about the power struggles around him—but he remains a cipher until the final chapters.
- Queen Cecily: The masked ruler with a cold exterior and an unspoken past. Her relationship with Bess should be the novel’s emotional core, yet it never transcends superficial resentment. We catch glimpses of genuine sisterly love or political calculation, but Porter rarely allows either to develop fully.
- Supporting Nobles: A handful of ministers and rival House figures hint at deeper court conspiracies—some even drop hints of betrayal that could have fueled a richer political plot. Unfortunately, they flit in and out, leaving me wanting far more context on who they are and why their loyalty matters.