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Twilight Mages #3
The Traitor's Curse
Betrayed, beset on all sides, and possibly bewitched…
Since the sudden, suspicious, and unlamented death of his father, only one man stands between Lucian and the grudging acceptance of his subjects: Benedict, a powerful dusk mage, a military hero, the favorite of the ducal council…and Lucian’s stepbrother.
Not that Benedict wants a shackle disguised as a crown. He’d rather start a new, anonymous life a thousand miles away and leave that beautiful, icy, sneering little cretin Lucian to whatever grim fate awaits him.
But when Lucian comes to him in the middle of the night, terrified and desperate but still as infuriatingly arrogant as ever, Benedict agrees to keep Lucian alive and on the throne. On one condition: Lucian must give in to Benedict’s long-hidden desires and allow Benedict to use him, in every possible way, to sate his cursed magic’s demands.
Lucian detests Benedict. He despises what he becomes when Benedict touches him. And it might be the death of him, if his father’s murderer doesn’t kill him first…
Since the sudden, suspicious, and unlamented death of his father, only one man stands between Lucian and the grudging acceptance of his subjects: Benedict, a powerful dusk mage, a military hero, the favorite of the ducal council…and Lucian’s stepbrother.
Not that Benedict wants a shackle disguised as a crown. He’d rather start a new, anonymous life a thousand miles away and leave that beautiful, icy, sneering little cretin Lucian to whatever grim fate awaits him.
But when Lucian comes to him in the middle of the night, terrified and desperate but still as infuriatingly arrogant as ever, Benedict agrees to keep Lucian alive and on the throne. On one condition: Lucian must give in to Benedict’s long-hidden desires and allow Benedict to use him, in every possible way, to sate his cursed magic’s demands.
Lucian detests Benedict. He despises what he becomes when Benedict touches him. And it might be the death of him, if his father’s murderer doesn’t kill him first…
289 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 27, 2025
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Eliot Grayson
41 books1,380 followersEliot's a lifelong Southern California girl, right down to the flip-flops and backyard garden. When she's not writing her next book, you can find her reading, drinking tea, or (more likely) catering to the demands of her kids and ancient, cranky cat.
Steamy books with delicious tension, heart-wrenching pining, and a hefty dose of action and adventure have always been her jam as a reader. Guess what she writes?
You can catch up with her on Facebook in her reader group, Eliot Grayson's Escape from Reality, or sign up for her newsletter at eliotgrayson.com.
Steamy books with delicious tension, heart-wrenching pining, and a hefty dose of action and adventure have always been her jam as a reader. Guess what she writes?
You can catch up with her on Facebook in her reader group, Eliot Grayson's Escape from Reality, or sign up for her newsletter at eliotgrayson.com.
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March 7, 2025
How could I resist another “must have sex or dies” trope 😆 this was fun, thankfully Benedict didn’t shrivel up and die from lack of sex. I’d say this is the best of the series so far. They all work as standalones, set in the same world but no contact between characters. Lots of spice but a more developed plot than books 1 & 2, mild court intrigue and some decent character growth.
I loved how Lucian is such an unreliable narrator and the author shows that rather subtly, and we can see Benedict through Lucian’s eyes as well as from a more rational readers perspective.
This is not an epic fantasy - the extent of Benedict’s magic uses appear to be vanishing clothes, magical anal cleansing, applying lubricant from thin air and cleaning clothes post the act. But it’s a jolly good time nevertheless!
I loved how Lucian is such an unreliable narrator and the author shows that rather subtly, and we can see Benedict through Lucian’s eyes as well as from a more rational readers perspective.
This is not an epic fantasy - the extent of Benedict’s magic uses appear to be vanishing clothes, magical anal cleansing, applying lubricant from thin air and cleaning clothes post the act. But it’s a jolly good time nevertheless!
February 26, 2025
How did one go about telling one’s half-naked and much-despised stepbrother that a murder scene needed staging, and he was the lucky accomplice?
Lucian is the somewhat unpopular yet hard-working and plucky Duke of Calatria, crowned after his father dies mysteriously of suspected poisoning. His rival Benedict is not only the Lord General of Lucian's army, but his stepbrother and a Twilight mage. Benedict is taller, handsomer, and infinitely more popular, which irks Lucian to his core. He's the absolute last person Lucian wants to ask for help when the poisoner returns. But he's also Lucian's only option, regardless of their personal history. But when Benedict tells Lucian what he wants in return, Lucian has to decide if he can trust his stepbrother with his life, his body, and maybe even his heart.
You’re the perquisite, Lucian. You’re going to bend over, spread your legs, and so on, in any way and at any time of my choosing. You’ll take my cock and my spend and my magic’s curse as often as I tell you to.” He flashed me a feral grin, eyes wild, completely contradicting his assertion of sanity. “You’ll enjoy it, too. How long has it been since anyone turned you inside out the way you probably don’t deserve?”
Brilliant as always from Eliot! I love the Twilight Mages series and book 3 was so fun to read. The tropes are hot af (rivals to lovers, stepbros, must have sex or die magical stuff, duke turned sex puppet etc...) and the pacing and character development were lovely. Although the book is written from Lucian's POV, Eliot is able to convey that Lucian is not a reliable narrator in quite a few ways: he doesn't always see himself as others see him (overestimating his faults/ underestimating his strengths; dude has some imposter syndrome going on), and he often misunderstands Benedict's intentions in ways that make him hurt his own feelings. I knew what Benedict was thinking- through Lucian's eyes- while Lucian avoided the truth or misinterpreted Benedict's actions. It really adds another layer to the plot that I don't see often, and shows us Eliot's skill as a writer. The Traitor's Curse is funny, heartwarming and a blast to read. I highly recommend!
Rating: 5
Angst: 3/5
Steam: 4/5
I received an advance copy of this book and this is my honest review
February 27, 2025
5 stars
Yep, yep, YES. You can tell, that at this point, Grayson has really found her groove when it comes to fantasy writing. Always been great, but I think this just took it to the next level.
A plot nested in intrigue, high-stakes, and tension. I think Grayson also excels in extremely complicated, layered dynamics, and this one just about takes the cake. I was completely fascinated by the ways in which Benedict and Lucian found their way to each other, considering the plethora of obstacles that would keep them apart, from seeming-betrayal to miscommunication, past mistakes, etc, each page felt like another impossibility.
At times, they seemed to hate each other. And yes, the hate-fucking was hot.
One thing I will say is that sometimes in Grayson’s enemies-to-lovers, the acts of meanness from the male lead don’t seem to be covering a greater purpose, such as devotion or love, they just seem mean (if anyone knows what I’m talking about lol), but here this was really fixed. Every small way that Benedict was harsh later added up to reasonings that were very, very satisfying.
The ending was syrupy-sweet. Loved it.
The worst part about this book is that it ended!
Yep, yep, YES. You can tell, that at this point, Grayson has really found her groove when it comes to fantasy writing. Always been great, but I think this just took it to the next level.
A plot nested in intrigue, high-stakes, and tension. I think Grayson also excels in extremely complicated, layered dynamics, and this one just about takes the cake. I was completely fascinated by the ways in which Benedict and Lucian found their way to each other, considering the plethora of obstacles that would keep them apart, from seeming-betrayal to miscommunication, past mistakes, etc, each page felt like another impossibility.
At times, they seemed to hate each other. And yes, the hate-fucking was hot.
One thing I will say is that sometimes in Grayson’s enemies-to-lovers, the acts of meanness from the male lead don’t seem to be covering a greater purpose, such as devotion or love, they just seem mean (if anyone knows what I’m talking about lol), but here this was really fixed. Every small way that Benedict was harsh later added up to reasonings that were very, very satisfying.
The ending was syrupy-sweet. Loved it.
The worst part about this book is that it ended!
March 14, 2025
3.5*** stars
I was told this installment had a lot more to offer plot-wise than the previous two did and I believe it. The story itself was captivating. If it only wasn’t for the amount of inner monologue that slowed down the pace of the story considerably. I really do prefer to get to know the characters through dialogue. And in this one it even made the MC’s enemies-to-lovers dynamic rather boring.
So, basically, if a slow pace in storytelling wasn’t the bane of my reading existence I really could’ve loved it. But like this I struggled (and skimmed) my way through the pages but also couldn’t bring myself to dnf as I still wanted to know how Lucian’s and Benedict’s relationship progressed and also who was out there plotting.
So.
Was it worth it? Not sure, tbh.
Do I regret it? kinda?
Will I go for another one in the series? I guess not.
*************
Twilight Mages Series
Book 1 - The Royal Curse - 3.5 stars
Book 2 - The Captive’s Curse
Book 3 - The Traitor’s Curse - 3.5 stars
I was told this installment had a lot more to offer plot-wise than the previous two did and I believe it. The story itself was captivating. If it only wasn’t for the amount of inner monologue that slowed down the pace of the story considerably. I really do prefer to get to know the characters through dialogue. And in this one it even made the MC’s enemies-to-lovers dynamic rather boring.
So, basically, if a slow pace in storytelling wasn’t the bane of my reading existence I really could’ve loved it. But like this I struggled (and skimmed) my way through the pages but also couldn’t bring myself to dnf as I still wanted to know how Lucian’s and Benedict’s relationship progressed and also who was out there plotting.
So.
Was it worth it? Not sure, tbh.
Do I regret it? kinda?
Will I go for another one in the series? I guess not.
*************
Twilight Mages Series
Book 1 - The Royal Curse - 3.5 stars
Book 2 - The Captive’s Curse
Book 3 - The Traitor’s Curse - 3.5 stars
March 4, 2025
⭐️ 5 stars ⭐️
TROPES:
🌙 Fantasy
🌙 Hate to love
🌙 Stepbrothers
The Traitor’s Curse is hands down my favorite installment of the Twilight Mages series. It had a lot more going on plot wise, more beyond the fuck or die trope. The hate to love dynamic (and the secret pining) between the characters was absolutely delicious, the plot a great mix of political intrigue, romance and smut. And, ohmygod, the smut.
Loved the bit of role reversal, the stoic duke submitting to his stepbrother. Love that it also went a different way than in the other books, not only having it in a non-mage’s pov, but also the fact that Benedict was more an ‘alpha in rut’ than an ‘omega in heat’.
A fantastical read with a fun take on an omegaverse style romance and a sweet HEA.
I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.
CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Fuck or die
- Attempted murder & SA (not between MCs)
- Top/bottom
- Rimming
- Coming untouched
TROPES:
🌙 Fantasy
🌙 Hate to love
🌙 Stepbrothers
“You have the sweetest mouth when you’re not using it to talk”
The Traitor’s Curse is hands down my favorite installment of the Twilight Mages series. It had a lot more going on plot wise, more beyond the fuck or die trope. The hate to love dynamic (and the secret pining) between the characters was absolutely delicious, the plot a great mix of political intrigue, romance and smut. And, ohmygod, the smut.
“My fingers or my cock? I could fuck you for a while, get you loose, pull out and use my hand. See how you feel on the inside. And then fuck you again.” He punctuated his words with lashes of his tongue, going a little deeper into me each time. “Definitely fuck you again.”
Loved the bit of role reversal, the stoic duke submitting to his stepbrother. Love that it also went a different way than in the other books, not only having it in a non-mage’s pov, but also the fact that Benedict was more an ‘alpha in rut’ than an ‘omega in heat’.
“Shhh, Lucian. You can take me.” He kissed me again, lingering, and pressed forward, his cockhead embedded in me now. “You take me better than anyone ever has.”
A fantastical read with a fun take on an omegaverse style romance and a sweet HEA.
In his arms, in his kiss, I was steady in my place in the universe, and all the edges of my nerves smoothed away.
I received a copy of this book from Gay Romance Reviews, and this is my honest review.
CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Fuck or die
- Attempted murder & SA (not between MCs)
- Top/bottom
- Rimming
- Coming untouched
March 15, 2025
"You’re not fit to touch His Grace’s sandwiches!” Mattia shouted. Well, case in point. Great gods. At this point, I didn’t care if everyone, including the palace poisoners, had touched my fucking sandwiches. I simply needed them in my rumbling stomach! And my thrice-damned coffee!"
Oh my goodness, how much do I love love love this series?! The Traitor's Curse is another fabulous (and I think my fave so far) read in Eliot Grayson's Twilight Mages series. This is book 3 and it's Lucian and Benedict's story. Whilst it is within the same universe as the previous two books, The Traitor's Curse can definitely be read as standalone.
Again, the author provides some fabulous world-building, two hilarious (and hot!) MCs, sinister side-characters, top of the range snark, laugh out loud moments and off the chart steam all at the same time! The world of the Twilight Mages is definitely one I can recommend.
What to Expect:
🌶️MM fantasy romance
🌶️Opposites attract
🌶️Feuding royals
🌶️Step-brothers
🌶️Steamy action
🌶️Treachery
🌶️Forced proximity
🌶️Magic
🌶️HEA
Loved it!
4.5 stars rounded up
Oh my goodness, how much do I love love love this series?! The Traitor's Curse is another fabulous (and I think my fave so far) read in Eliot Grayson's Twilight Mages series. This is book 3 and it's Lucian and Benedict's story. Whilst it is within the same universe as the previous two books, The Traitor's Curse can definitely be read as standalone.
Again, the author provides some fabulous world-building, two hilarious (and hot!) MCs, sinister side-characters, top of the range snark, laugh out loud moments and off the chart steam all at the same time! The world of the Twilight Mages is definitely one I can recommend.
What to Expect:
🌶️MM fantasy romance
🌶️Opposites attract
🌶️Feuding royals
🌶️Step-brothers
🌶️Steamy action
🌶️Treachery
🌶️Forced proximity
🌶️Magic
🌶️HEA
Loved it!
4.5 stars rounded up
March 4, 2025
4.25
I really, really adored this third installment.
I think I might have preferred book two overall (Cyril and Enzo own my soul), but this was another very solid, highly enjoyable, absolutely freaking delicious gem from Eliot Grayson.
No surprises there: she's one of my favourite authors, and I already knew that only her writing could get my out of the horrific book hangover I had going on.
Lucian and Benedict's story had me on the edge of my seat, giggling and blushing right until the end. I adored them, and I adored the premise of their romance: "I-love-to-hate-you-but-I-secretly-want-to-jump-your-bones", kinda one-sided, rivals-to-lovers; a delicious, forbidden stepbrothers dynamic; a whole lot of pining and yearning plus a very, very, very juicy "I'll help you if you help me" (*winks*) pretend sex-hate (THEY SECRETLY ADORE EACH OTHER); and a whole lot of secrets, misunderstandings, political scheming and protectiveness/possessiveness. Everything I love in a romance, and then some more.
Lucian was a fabulous protagonist, a prickly, icy, competent mess of a man, and I adored being in his head. And Benedict was his perfect counterpart: an unrepentant flirt with a heart of gold, and so protective of Lucian you'll spend the whole novel swooning. Trust me, I did.
I loved their romance, and I adored the plot to absolute bits: it was fascinating and gripping, and I adored following it. The twists and discoveries kept on coming! I had guessed a couple of things, but others left shocked. So kudos for that!
I loved the side characters, and I'm really excited to see what comes next.
I keep hoping Eliot will give us Leander's story (from "The Captive's Curse") as a Surprise/Secret Dawn Mage, but I think the next one will be about a certain side character that appears here. I'm still excited, but Eliot, if you're reading this: I'd sell my soul for Leander's story okay?
The world-building is SO fascinating, and I never want to leave this universe: it scratches an itch that I rarely manage to, and I'm really, really looking forward to the next installment.
TWs/CWs: murder and murder attempts, violence, dub-con, attempted sexual assault/violence, kidnapping, abusive parent, death of a parent (past).
Many thanks to GRR for the ARC. This is my honest review.
I really, really adored this third installment.
I think I might have preferred book two overall (Cyril and Enzo own my soul), but this was another very solid, highly enjoyable, absolutely freaking delicious gem from Eliot Grayson.
No surprises there: she's one of my favourite authors, and I already knew that only her writing could get my out of the horrific book hangover I had going on.
Lucian and Benedict's story had me on the edge of my seat, giggling and blushing right until the end. I adored them, and I adored the premise of their romance: "I-love-to-hate-you-but-I-secretly-want-to-jump-your-bones", kinda one-sided, rivals-to-lovers; a delicious, forbidden stepbrothers dynamic; a whole lot of pining and yearning plus a very, very, very juicy "I'll help you if you help me" (*winks*) pretend sex-hate (THEY SECRETLY ADORE EACH OTHER); and a whole lot of secrets, misunderstandings, political scheming and protectiveness/possessiveness. Everything I love in a romance, and then some more.
Lucian was a fabulous protagonist, a prickly, icy, competent mess of a man, and I adored being in his head. And Benedict was his perfect counterpart: an unrepentant flirt with a heart of gold, and so protective of Lucian you'll spend the whole novel swooning. Trust me, I did.
I loved their romance, and I adored the plot to absolute bits: it was fascinating and gripping, and I adored following it. The twists and discoveries kept on coming! I had guessed a couple of things, but others left shocked. So kudos for that!
I loved the side characters, and I'm really excited to see what comes next.
I keep hoping Eliot will give us Leander's story (from "The Captive's Curse") as a Surprise/Secret Dawn Mage, but I think the next one will be about a certain side character that appears here. I'm still excited, but Eliot, if you're reading this: I'd sell my soul for Leander's story okay?
The world-building is SO fascinating, and I never want to leave this universe: it scratches an itch that I rarely manage to, and I'm really, really looking forward to the next installment.
TWs/CWs: murder and murder attempts, violence, dub-con, attempted sexual assault/violence, kidnapping, abusive parent, death of a parent (past).
Many thanks to GRR for the ARC. This is my honest review.
February 23, 2025
I have thoroughly enjoyed this series and this third book was no exception. It’s such a fun concept and I loved how we got the opposite cursed mage this time (a top instead of a bottom)! They don’t have to be read in order but the other two are just as amazing so highly recommend them!
This story is told from Lucian’s POV only. I would have loved to see some parts from Benedict’s POV (just cause I absolutely love dual POV) but it was totally ok without it. I loved the little hints we did get of Benedict’s true feelings along the way!
The story was a cool almost murder/mystery and I was very intrigued and interested in finding out what happened. There were some twists I wasn’t expecting and some action and a lot of spice which is to be expected with this series! I loved their HEA and absolutely recommend this story. Can’t wait to read more by this author in the future!
This story is told from Lucian’s POV only. I would have loved to see some parts from Benedict’s POV (just cause I absolutely love dual POV) but it was totally ok without it. I loved the little hints we did get of Benedict’s true feelings along the way!
The story was a cool almost murder/mystery and I was very intrigued and interested in finding out what happened. There were some twists I wasn’t expecting and some action and a lot of spice which is to be expected with this series! I loved their HEA and absolutely recommend this story. Can’t wait to read more by this author in the future!
September 14, 2025
Yes there is a lot of boinking (once they've started it's almost all they're up to) but minus the sexy times there is some plot? Character development? Maybe? I loved how stupidly oblivious Lucius was 😂
June 25, 2025
"𝚂𝚑𝚑𝚑, 𝙻𝚞𝚌𝚒𝚊𝚗. 𝚈𝚘𝚞 𝚌𝚊𝚗 𝚝𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚖𝚎.
𝚈𝚘𝚞 𝚝𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚎𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚗 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛 𝚑𝚊𝚜."
The Traitor's Curse is the 3rd book in the Twilight Mages series, and I have been thoroughly enjoying them all. I mean, who doesn't like spicy PNR!? Unlike the previous books, this one is written in the single POV of Lucian, the crown Duke who holds no magic of his own. As a narrator to his life, Lucian is completely unreliable. During the progression of the story, it became more and more clear how wrong Lucian was about a lot of things, especially when it came to his dusk mage stepbrother Benedict.
Alongside the romance was an intriguing plot, with a whodunit mystery. I went back and forth quite a bit over who I felt was the culprit or even just suspicious. I quickly learned that Lucian thought everyone was suspicious so that made things harder to figure out since it was his narrative we were in. These men had some major things to deal with before they could really settle down and get to the HEA. I have to say once the big mystery was revealed I thought Lucian had the perfect idea of what to do next.
"𝙿𝚕𝚎𝚊𝚜𝚎 𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚙𝚞𝚝 𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚊𝚌𝚔 𝚒𝚗 𝚋𝚎𝚍, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚏𝚎𝚎𝚍 𝚖𝚎 𝚊 𝚛𝚘𝚊𝚜𝚝 𝚋𝚎𝚎𝚏 𝚜𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚠𝚒𝚌𝚑, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚖𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚖𝚎. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚔𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚘 𝚝𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜 𝚝𝚘 𝚠𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚖𝚎 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠 𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝙸 𝚗𝚎𝚎𝚍 𝚝𝚘 𝚖𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚠𝚒𝚝𝚑 𝚉𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚎 𝚊𝚐𝚊𝚒𝚗."
I don't know if this is the last book in this series or not. There was no indication or teaser at the end for a 4th. Either way, I've always been a fan of Eliot Grayson's writing, and I will continue on with whatever series they write next!
𝚈𝚘𝚞 𝚝𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚎𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚗 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛 𝚑𝚊𝚜."
The Traitor's Curse is the 3rd book in the Twilight Mages series, and I have been thoroughly enjoying them all. I mean, who doesn't like spicy PNR!? Unlike the previous books, this one is written in the single POV of Lucian, the crown Duke who holds no magic of his own. As a narrator to his life, Lucian is completely unreliable. During the progression of the story, it became more and more clear how wrong Lucian was about a lot of things, especially when it came to his dusk mage stepbrother Benedict.
Alongside the romance was an intriguing plot, with a whodunit mystery. I went back and forth quite a bit over who I felt was the culprit or even just suspicious. I quickly learned that Lucian thought everyone was suspicious so that made things harder to figure out since it was his narrative we were in. These men had some major things to deal with before they could really settle down and get to the HEA. I have to say once the big mystery was revealed I thought Lucian had the perfect idea of what to do next.
"𝙿𝚕𝚎𝚊𝚜𝚎 𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚙𝚞𝚝 𝚖𝚎 𝚋𝚊𝚌𝚔 𝚒𝚗 𝚋𝚎𝚍, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚏𝚎𝚎𝚍 𝚖𝚎 𝚊 𝚛𝚘𝚊𝚜𝚝 𝚋𝚎𝚎𝚏 𝚜𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚠𝚒𝚌𝚑, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚎𝚕𝚕 𝚖𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚕𝚘𝚟𝚎 𝚖𝚎. 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚔𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚊𝚗𝚢𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚘 𝚝𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜 𝚝𝚘 𝚠𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚖𝚎 𝚞𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚕 𝚝𝚘𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚠 𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝙸 𝚗𝚎𝚎𝚍 𝚝𝚘 𝚖𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚠𝚒𝚝𝚑 𝚉𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚎 𝚊𝚐𝚊𝚒𝚗."
I don't know if this is the last book in this series or not. There was no indication or teaser at the end for a 4th. Either way, I've always been a fan of Eliot Grayson's writing, and I will continue on with whatever series they write next!
March 3, 2025
4.5 Stars
I enjoyed the plot of this so much. I love political intrigue and drama.
I truly just needed a bit more softness and romance between the mains to bump this up to five stars, but it was a great read. As usual Lucian and Benedict have a fuck ton of chemistry, and unlike book two I felt like they were both great characters who deserved each other.
I enjoyed the plot of this so much. I love political intrigue and drama.
I truly just needed a bit more softness and romance between the mains to bump this up to five stars, but it was a great read. As usual Lucian and Benedict have a fuck ton of chemistry, and unlike book two I felt like they were both great characters who deserved each other.
March 4, 2025
Tropes: paranormal, stepbrothers, Rivals to lovers, royalty, hurt/comfort
Feels: 3/5
Steam*: 3.5/5
Kinks: using magic during sex
Angst: low
HEA: yes
Pairing: MM
Triggers/potential icks/content warnings: dubcon, murder, attempted murder, violence, bad parents
Cheating between MCs: No
Any cheating: No
Other person drama: Lucian has been too busy and distrustful to hook up for the last 3 years. Benedict fucks people every couple days, has to because of his curse. He rubs his conquests in Lucian's face, which is a bit mean. They were never together though until their deal. Lucian is jealous of a particular ex-lover, and Benedict almost is magically entrapped into hooking up with the ex at one point.
4 stars
Lucian is 28. Benedict is 34. They have known each other since they were 20 and 26 respectively, they met when their parents got married. Lucian is the legitimate son and heir of his Duke father. The father gets murdered when Lucian is 25. All the townspeople hate Lucian, because he is cold and proper and they suspect he might have killed his father. The town's folk much prefer Benedict, who is a successful military man, respected, a Mage who charms and seduces everyone (Benedict actually is a dusk mage, who is cursed and needs to fuck someone every few days or else it'll kill him, this is widely known). Benedict has no interest in being Duke though. Not that long after the murder, Benedict leaves town. Benedict returns 2 years later.
I think the story takes place a couple months after Benedict's return to town. One night Lucian's butler drops dead after drinking wine intended for Lucian. Lucian wants to cover up the attempt on his life, make it look like Fabian died in an accidental fall, so that he can try to draw out whoever attacked him. He needs help though, so he goes to Benedict because he can trust Benedict to be discreet and he needs his strength. But Benedict won't do something for nothing, so he bargains that he will be Lucian's protector but only if Lucian agrees to sleep with him, to keep his curse satisfied for the duration of their arrangement. Lucian agrees, but he makes sure to make it seem like he's the one that's seduced Benedict and cavorts with him publicly, so that he doesn't seem inferior to benedict. Associating with Benedict actually has the effect of improving Lucian's reputation, humanizing him, and making people like him more.
The story is told entirely from Lucian's POV. I won't describe too much more of the plot because there's mystery arcs going on. But it's nice that Benedict is protective of Lucian, and we see hints of him caring, and Lucian has clearly had eyes for Benedict and not been able to look away from him. There's a very spicy yet emotional as well dynamic between them. They bond because they have an agreement and they trust each other to make that agreement work. And Benedict just blows past the lines that Lucian tries to draw. And it's nice that they have platonic moments as well as sexual moments together. Benedict insists on sleeping in his bed and holding him/touching him even when it's not just about sex.
It's a good story, but this isn't my favorite series by this author. Love so many books I've read by the author but I find this world a little unpleasant from a consent perspective, I'm not a huge fan of the Twilight and Dusk mages being forced to have sex, and take away their choice, making them a slave to the magic.
Some notable moments:
"Once I’d ferreted out the assassin I could end the arrangement with Benedict, and possibly also send him on a long, dangerous mission a thousand miles away. Something that would cover him (posthumously, if the gods smiled on me) in glory. Lost in a fantasy where I forced out one, or possibly two, tears while delivering Benedict’s eulogy, I wandered to the fireplace and turned around to warm my backside. And nearly leapt out of my skin as my eyes focused on my bed."
I love that tone. "Benedict turned from the sideboard and held out the goblet he’d filled. “Have some punch, Lord Tavius,” he said, in much the same tone he’d have used to say, “Go bugger yourself and die.”"
"“I’m not sure I have forgiven you, and perhaps you’re right that I can’t and won’t. For the way you lied to me, anyway. But I don’t care. I’m too tired. I have to be the Crown Duke with everyone else. Please just put me back in bed, and feed me a roast beef sandwich, and tell me that you love me. And then kill anyone who tries to wake me until tomorrow morning when I need to meet with Zettine again.”"
*FYI about steam: I rate steam based on a combination of quality & quantity. I note kink separate from steam because I don't want to underrate steamy reads that don't have much kink.
**Note about spoilers: I like to comment on the plot of a book in reviews, so I almost always mark my reviews as containing spoilers. But I try to avoid spoiling the big dramatic moments! As a reader, I personally like to know what I'm getting into before I read a book so I know more about the content and if it's to my taste/mood, so I try to give that information in my reviews for myself when I'm considering rereading and also for other readers.
Feels: 3/5
Steam*: 3.5/5
Kinks: using magic during sex
Angst: low
HEA: yes
Pairing: MM
Triggers/potential icks/content warnings: dubcon, murder, attempted murder, violence, bad parents
Cheating between MCs: No
Any cheating: No
Other person drama: Lucian has been too busy and distrustful to hook up for the last 3 years. Benedict fucks people every couple days, has to because of his curse. He rubs his conquests in Lucian's face, which is a bit mean. They were never together though until their deal. Lucian is jealous of a particular ex-lover, and Benedict almost is magically entrapped into hooking up with the ex at one point.
4 stars
Lucian is 28. Benedict is 34. They have known each other since they were 20 and 26 respectively, they met when their parents got married. Lucian is the legitimate son and heir of his Duke father. The father gets murdered when Lucian is 25. All the townspeople hate Lucian, because he is cold and proper and they suspect he might have killed his father. The town's folk much prefer Benedict, who is a successful military man, respected, a Mage who charms and seduces everyone (Benedict actually is a dusk mage, who is cursed and needs to fuck someone every few days or else it'll kill him, this is widely known). Benedict has no interest in being Duke though. Not that long after the murder, Benedict leaves town. Benedict returns 2 years later.
I think the story takes place a couple months after Benedict's return to town. One night Lucian's butler drops dead after drinking wine intended for Lucian. Lucian wants to cover up the attempt on his life, make it look like Fabian died in an accidental fall, so that he can try to draw out whoever attacked him. He needs help though, so he goes to Benedict because he can trust Benedict to be discreet and he needs his strength. But Benedict won't do something for nothing, so he bargains that he will be Lucian's protector but only if Lucian agrees to sleep with him, to keep his curse satisfied for the duration of their arrangement. Lucian agrees, but he makes sure to make it seem like he's the one that's seduced Benedict and cavorts with him publicly, so that he doesn't seem inferior to benedict. Associating with Benedict actually has the effect of improving Lucian's reputation, humanizing him, and making people like him more.
The story is told entirely from Lucian's POV. I won't describe too much more of the plot because there's mystery arcs going on. But it's nice that Benedict is protective of Lucian, and we see hints of him caring, and Lucian has clearly had eyes for Benedict and not been able to look away from him. There's a very spicy yet emotional as well dynamic between them. They bond because they have an agreement and they trust each other to make that agreement work. And Benedict just blows past the lines that Lucian tries to draw. And it's nice that they have platonic moments as well as sexual moments together. Benedict insists on sleeping in his bed and holding him/touching him even when it's not just about sex.
It's a good story, but this isn't my favorite series by this author. Love so many books I've read by the author but I find this world a little unpleasant from a consent perspective, I'm not a huge fan of the Twilight and Dusk mages being forced to have sex, and take away their choice, making them a slave to the magic.
Some notable moments:
"Once I’d ferreted out the assassin I could end the arrangement with Benedict, and possibly also send him on a long, dangerous mission a thousand miles away. Something that would cover him (posthumously, if the gods smiled on me) in glory. Lost in a fantasy where I forced out one, or possibly two, tears while delivering Benedict’s eulogy, I wandered to the fireplace and turned around to warm my backside. And nearly leapt out of my skin as my eyes focused on my bed."
I love that tone. "Benedict turned from the sideboard and held out the goblet he’d filled. “Have some punch, Lord Tavius,” he said, in much the same tone he’d have used to say, “Go bugger yourself and die.”"
"“I’m not sure I have forgiven you, and perhaps you’re right that I can’t and won’t. For the way you lied to me, anyway. But I don’t care. I’m too tired. I have to be the Crown Duke with everyone else. Please just put me back in bed, and feed me a roast beef sandwich, and tell me that you love me. And then kill anyone who tries to wake me until tomorrow morning when I need to meet with Zettine again.”"
*FYI about steam: I rate steam based on a combination of quality & quantity. I note kink separate from steam because I don't want to underrate steamy reads that don't have much kink.
**Note about spoilers: I like to comment on the plot of a book in reviews, so I almost always mark my reviews as containing spoilers. But I try to avoid spoiling the big dramatic moments! As a reader, I personally like to know what I'm getting into before I read a book so I know more about the content and if it's to my taste/mood, so I try to give that information in my reviews for myself when I'm considering rereading and also for other readers.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 21, 2025
4.5 stars for the narration, 4 for the story
This third book in the Twilight Mages series is unrelated to the first two, so can be listened to as a standalone. Unlike in the first two books, the mage in this story is not the PoV character, and is a Dusk rather than a Dawn mage, which means that his sex-or-die curse works *ahem* the other way around to the way it works for Niko and Cyril in the other books.
The land of Calatria is ruled over by its hardworking young duke, Lucian, who, despite the fact that he takes his responsibilities very seriously and works hard to improve the lives of his people, is not very popular and is actually suspected of having murdered his late father. Lucien knows this, but thinks that perhaps if his people see him working hard on their behalf, the rumours will eventually disappear – but they haven’t. Making things worse is that his taller, handsomer, charismatic step-brother, Benedict, is not only the Lord General of his army and a Twilight Mage, but is far more popular than Lucian, which infuriates him to the depths of his being.
Benedict is, then, the very last person in the world that Lucian would want to turn to for help, but when his valet is murdered – poisoned by wine meant for Lucian – he has no other option; it’s Benedict or no-one. Benedict agrees to help, but only on one condition – his curse needs sating regularly so Lucian will be sexually available to Benedict whenever he demands it. Lucian is outraged by the idea, but he really doesn’t have anywhere else to turn without risking even more unfounded rumours, and he supposes he can bring himself to let Benedict bed him. He doesn’t expect to enjoy it (after all, Benedict is used to consorting with whores and courtiers so probably doesn’t bother with their pleasure), so he’ll just make sure Benedict knows he’s doing it under duress and maybe he’ll quickly get fed up with an unenthusiastic bedmate.
There’s a bit more plot going on in this book compared with the previous two, and it delivers a good mix of intrigue, romance and steam. It’s clear from fairly early on that Benedict (despite his somewhat out-of-the-blue demand that Lucian should have sex with him) actually has Lucian’s best interests at heart, and that Lucian is not a reliable narrator; he sees himself in a fairly negative light, underestimating his strengths and overestimating his shortcomings, and frequently misunderstands Benedict’s motives and actions. Lucian has, for years, viewed Benedict as his enemy, as someone who is biding his time before getting rid of Lucian so he can rule in his stead, so it takes him a long time to believe Benedict’s protestations that he doesn’t and never has wanted that. The author does a good job of showing, through Lucian’s eyes, what Benedict is thinking and feeling, even as Lucien is completely oblivious to all of it, and that that Benedict sees Lucian far more clearly than Lucian himself does.
I enjoyed their gradual progress from enemies to lovers. Lucien is prickly and sharp-tongued, but dedicated and competent – although his lack of self-confidence means he has allowed himself to be intimidated by the members of his council, most of whom also served his father. He’s more than a little uptight, which is perfectly complemented by Benedict’s laid-back good humour; Benedict knows when Lucian is trying to push him away and is determined not to let him, while Lucian is equally determined not to fall for Benedict but is helpless not to do so in the face of Benedict’s unwavering support. I was pleased when that support helps Lucian to start seeing his own worth and to start becoming the leader he’s meant to be.
Much of the book is a two-hander as Lucian and Benedict strike sparks off each other and get very busy (like the others, this book is a bit sex-heavy, but I suppose that’s to be expected given the premise.) The identity of the villain of the piece is fairly obvious from the moment he appears, but I have to give the author credit for that final twist, because I didn’t see it coming at all.
Kirt Graves delivers another excellent, well-paced performance, with clearly distinguishable voices for both leads and secondary cast. His portrayal of Lucian is especially good and really captures the different facets of his character, from his waspish snarkiness to the underlying vulnerability and loneliness he hides behind that icy exterior. The deeper timbre he gives Benedict’s dialogue works well to depict him as a large and imposing man and the softer tones employed whenever he’s with Lucian convey his real feelings to the listener, even as Lucien continues in his obliviousness.
The Traitor’s Curse is another fun, sexy fantasy romp featuring likeable characters, an intriguing plotline and a nicely done enemies-to-lovers romance. Kirt Graves’ terrific performance makes a strong case for experiencing this one in audio format.
This third book in the Twilight Mages series is unrelated to the first two, so can be listened to as a standalone. Unlike in the first two books, the mage in this story is not the PoV character, and is a Dusk rather than a Dawn mage, which means that his sex-or-die curse works *ahem* the other way around to the way it works for Niko and Cyril in the other books.
The land of Calatria is ruled over by its hardworking young duke, Lucian, who, despite the fact that he takes his responsibilities very seriously and works hard to improve the lives of his people, is not very popular and is actually suspected of having murdered his late father. Lucien knows this, but thinks that perhaps if his people see him working hard on their behalf, the rumours will eventually disappear – but they haven’t. Making things worse is that his taller, handsomer, charismatic step-brother, Benedict, is not only the Lord General of his army and a Twilight Mage, but is far more popular than Lucian, which infuriates him to the depths of his being.
Benedict is, then, the very last person in the world that Lucian would want to turn to for help, but when his valet is murdered – poisoned by wine meant for Lucian – he has no other option; it’s Benedict or no-one. Benedict agrees to help, but only on one condition – his curse needs sating regularly so Lucian will be sexually available to Benedict whenever he demands it. Lucian is outraged by the idea, but he really doesn’t have anywhere else to turn without risking even more unfounded rumours, and he supposes he can bring himself to let Benedict bed him. He doesn’t expect to enjoy it (after all, Benedict is used to consorting with whores and courtiers so probably doesn’t bother with their pleasure), so he’ll just make sure Benedict knows he’s doing it under duress and maybe he’ll quickly get fed up with an unenthusiastic bedmate.
There’s a bit more plot going on in this book compared with the previous two, and it delivers a good mix of intrigue, romance and steam. It’s clear from fairly early on that Benedict (despite his somewhat out-of-the-blue demand that Lucian should have sex with him) actually has Lucian’s best interests at heart, and that Lucian is not a reliable narrator; he sees himself in a fairly negative light, underestimating his strengths and overestimating his shortcomings, and frequently misunderstands Benedict’s motives and actions. Lucian has, for years, viewed Benedict as his enemy, as someone who is biding his time before getting rid of Lucian so he can rule in his stead, so it takes him a long time to believe Benedict’s protestations that he doesn’t and never has wanted that. The author does a good job of showing, through Lucian’s eyes, what Benedict is thinking and feeling, even as Lucien is completely oblivious to all of it, and that that Benedict sees Lucian far more clearly than Lucian himself does.
I enjoyed their gradual progress from enemies to lovers. Lucien is prickly and sharp-tongued, but dedicated and competent – although his lack of self-confidence means he has allowed himself to be intimidated by the members of his council, most of whom also served his father. He’s more than a little uptight, which is perfectly complemented by Benedict’s laid-back good humour; Benedict knows when Lucian is trying to push him away and is determined not to let him, while Lucian is equally determined not to fall for Benedict but is helpless not to do so in the face of Benedict’s unwavering support. I was pleased when that support helps Lucian to start seeing his own worth and to start becoming the leader he’s meant to be.
Much of the book is a two-hander as Lucian and Benedict strike sparks off each other and get very busy (like the others, this book is a bit sex-heavy, but I suppose that’s to be expected given the premise.) The identity of the villain of the piece is fairly obvious from the moment he appears, but I have to give the author credit for that final twist, because I didn’t see it coming at all.
Kirt Graves delivers another excellent, well-paced performance, with clearly distinguishable voices for both leads and secondary cast. His portrayal of Lucian is especially good and really captures the different facets of his character, from his waspish snarkiness to the underlying vulnerability and loneliness he hides behind that icy exterior. The deeper timbre he gives Benedict’s dialogue works well to depict him as a large and imposing man and the softer tones employed whenever he’s with Lucian convey his real feelings to the listener, even as Lucien continues in his obliviousness.
The Traitor’s Curse is another fun, sexy fantasy romp featuring likeable characters, an intriguing plotline and a nicely done enemies-to-lovers romance. Kirt Graves’ terrific performance makes a strong case for experiencing this one in audio format.
March 4, 2025
This series has to be one of my favorite Fantasy Romance’s, and The Traitor’s Curse is no exception. This one was definitely more political, but I thoroughly enjoyed the mystery of it. Obviously I loved Benedict and Lucien - how could you not? So much pining and I’m here for it.
March 29, 2025
A good one sided rivals/enemies to lovers with step brothers. I really didn’t know where the plot was going with this so kudos to Eliot for keeping me on my toes.
March 9, 2025
A Joyfully Jay review.
4.5 stars
The Traitor’s Curse is the third book in Eliot Grayson’s Twilight Mages series, though it would stand alone well. I went back to the prior books and Lucian is mentioned briefly in passing as the son of the much hated former duke, and it’s clear that no one much likes Lucian either. But other than that, the world building is really the only thing tying these books together, unlike the first two that feel more directly connected with some overlapping story threads.
While there is an external plot regarding the threat to Lucian’s life and it does get quite thrilling at points, what I enjoyed most about this story is watching the slow progression between Lucian and Benedict from enemies to lovers. It is clear as readers from the start that they belong together, and I liked seeing them find their way together.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
4.5 stars
The Traitor’s Curse is the third book in Eliot Grayson’s Twilight Mages series, though it would stand alone well. I went back to the prior books and Lucian is mentioned briefly in passing as the son of the much hated former duke, and it’s clear that no one much likes Lucian either. But other than that, the world building is really the only thing tying these books together, unlike the first two that feel more directly connected with some overlapping story threads.
While there is an external plot regarding the threat to Lucian’s life and it does get quite thrilling at points, what I enjoyed most about this story is watching the slow progression between Lucian and Benedict from enemies to lovers. It is clear as readers from the start that they belong together, and I liked seeing them find their way together.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
June 24, 2025
The pining. SO MUCH DELICIOUS PINING. Inject it straight into my veins!!
May 11, 2025
A Family Affair.
Romance. Family liaisons. Misunderstandings. Cursed magic. A whodunnit within a fantasy world. The third Twilight Mages series book was entertaining and follows the same formula of the first two but in this one the magically cursed is a top. I prefer less sex in my books these days, it’s the only reason this is 4 stars instead of 5.
Blog Review-
Romance. Family liaisons. Misunderstandings. Cursed magic. A whodunnit within a fantasy world. The third Twilight Mages series book was entertaining and follows the same formula of the first two but in this one the magically cursed is a top. I prefer less sex in my books these days, it’s the only reason this is 4 stars instead of 5.
Blog Review-
September 20, 2025
I have loved every book in this series. The first two focused on the Dawn Mages (Submissives/Bottoms), but this was the first time the cursed one was a Dusk mage (Dominant/Tops), however the story was still told for the POV of the bottom, he just wasn't cursed.
It was an enemies to lovers but also kinda unrequited love to lovers. I don't know lol, but it was really good. The MC's are stepbrothers and the Mage with the curse becomes a type of body guard to his step brother the Duke and in exchange the Duke submits to him when his curse needs to be satisfied.
The blurb makes is sound a lot more nonconsented than it actually is, so don't let that through you off. It's more like mild reluctance at first
It was an enemies to lovers but also kinda unrequited love to lovers. I don't know lol, but it was really good. The MC's are stepbrothers and the Mage with the curse becomes a type of body guard to his step brother the Duke and in exchange the Duke submits to him when his curse needs to be satisfied.
The blurb makes is sound a lot more nonconsented than it actually is, so don't let that through you off. It's more like mild reluctance at first
March 2, 2025
This series is hit after hit! Mages who need to have sex or die - it sounds ridiculous but it works!!
Here we have stepbrothers at odds. Lucian thinks Benedict despises him and may be after his claim to the throne. Benedict is incredibly handsome, beloved by all and veeeeerry popular with the boys. Hes a twilight mage so he needs to fuck or he dies (lol). They end up coming to an agreement (sex) and turns out Benedict actually doesn’t despise Lucian *sigh* 💕 Verrry steamy, fun series
Here we have stepbrothers at odds. Lucian thinks Benedict despises him and may be after his claim to the throne. Benedict is incredibly handsome, beloved by all and veeeeerry popular with the boys. Hes a twilight mage so he needs to fuck or he dies (lol). They end up coming to an agreement (sex) and turns out Benedict actually doesn’t despise Lucian *sigh* 💕 Verrry steamy, fun series
April 24, 2025
My favourite in the series and I suspect a lot of that was to do with the switch up to a Dusk Mage rather than the omegaverse feel of the needy bottom trope that the Dawn Mages seemed to cruise a bit too close to.
There are still elements to this type of magic curse that I really do not like though, the almost lack of consent due to requiring sex I find skates close to dubcon on occasion and, imho anyways, I haven't felt any of the couples have really needed to have that being a driving factor in their relationship over the usual type of forced proximity or similar.
Having said that, I definitely connected a lot with the main storyline and how Lucien was utterly oblivious to what I'd gathered right from the start - that everything Benedict did was FOR him and to protect him!
I also guessed most of the plot, although the final twist had passed me by, but the main driver of who was behind everything was obvious the second a particular character arrived on page. It didn't stop the enjoyment of seeing the story play out however.
The sex is, like the first two, very much of the I don't want it/oh yes I do type which, as I've said from the start, feels better placed in an omegaverse world rather than one which is aping a high fantasy one, at least for me.
Overall though, this was another easy read and one I enjoyed.
There are still elements to this type of magic curse that I really do not like though, the almost lack of consent due to requiring sex I find skates close to dubcon on occasion and, imho anyways, I haven't felt any of the couples have really needed to have that being a driving factor in their relationship over the usual type of forced proximity or similar.
Having said that, I definitely connected a lot with the main storyline and how Lucien was utterly oblivious to what I'd gathered right from the start - that everything Benedict did was FOR him and to protect him!
I also guessed most of the plot, although the final twist had passed me by, but the main driver of who was behind everything was obvious the second a particular character arrived on page. It didn't stop the enjoyment of seeing the story play out however.
The sex is, like the first two, very much of the I don't want it/oh yes I do type which, as I've said from the start, feels better placed in an omegaverse world rather than one which is aping a high fantasy one, at least for me.
Overall though, this was another easy read and one I enjoyed.
July 24, 2025
“Gods, how would that look in the history books? Duke Lucian, reigned less than three years, killed by a sandwich. He is barely remembered for lowering taxes on shellfish. What an epitaph.”
i just love reading eliot grayson. there were so many fun things to appreciate about this book?? her and Tavia Lark, they seem to just write the best fun, unserious books?? and i say this as the most absolute compliment.
lucian was delightful and benedict was delectable, i kinda wanted a little bit more on the nature of their ~forbidden/taboo~ romance, bc that can be very fun to read, but they were still a lot of fun and damn sexy at times.
i just love reading eliot grayson. there were so many fun things to appreciate about this book?? her and Tavia Lark, they seem to just write the best fun, unserious books?? and i say this as the most absolute compliment.
lucian was delightful and benedict was delectable, i kinda wanted a little bit more on the nature of their ~forbidden/taboo~ romance, bc that can be very fun to read, but they were still a lot of fun and damn sexy at times.
March 5, 2025
This was so good. It's the first I've read in the series and I'm immediately going to download the rest.
I wasn't sure how I was going to feel about the curse but I loved how everything played out. The addition of e2l/stepbrothers on top of royal politics and a bit of murder and betrayal held my attention from the very beginning. I finished in less than 24 hours.
I wasn't sure how I was going to feel about the curse but I loved how everything played out. The addition of e2l/stepbrothers on top of royal politics and a bit of murder and betrayal held my attention from the very beginning. I finished in less than 24 hours.
May 14, 2025
Darn, another MC type I have no fondness for. However, by the midpoint I was fully invested, and I stayed up way too late reading, and now this one's my favorite. Although I can't make the title fit the characters or plot. But, whatever. Favorite!
July 4, 2025
this was entertaining, trashy fun. i pointedly ignored every single mention of "stepbrother", which thankfully didn't come up a lot, and otherwise just had a good time with these messy, obsessed little menaces!
March 26, 2025
2 Stars. This book read more like an enemies to acquaintances who fuck to me. It seemed like there was barely any romance or chemistry between the MCs.
April 1, 2025
3 stars for Lucian. Barely 1 star for all the rest. Bringing it up to a 2 because it actually isn't badly written, it's just (for this reader) not a good read.
My MM romance policy is to veer away from books with big brawny bodies on the cover. These books almost always lead to the following:
One MC is built like a brick wall and *cough* everything about their body is overly large 🙄
That same MC tends to be a) domineering and/or b) overly aggressive when it comes to sex
. . . neither of which I care to read about. Problem is, there are a number of books with these kinds of covers where the author actually presents a well-written relationship and does not lean on the two "qualities" mentioned above. Because there are so few historical fantasies to begin with, I have been known to bypass the feelings elicited by the cover if the description sounds interesting enough.
In this case, I probably should have listened to my instincts, but Lucian is a great enough character that I finished the whole thing. Did Lucian make it worth reading? The jury is out on that one, but Lucian is quite delicious and oh, how I wish he'd been paired with a character that was about more than their bodybuilder physique and alpha temperament.
The underlying premise of the "relationship" (which is a word I use hesitantly) is that the two MC's, despite having loathed each other for years, enter into a consensually 🙄 transactional sexual relationship. The rationale for this is that the bigger partner is imbued with magic that is so strong that some of it has to be 'offloaded' every 24 hours or so and, of course, the only way he can do that is by participating in a very particular type of sexual interaction, one that usually (and always should) involve things like preparation and the use of lubricants. Lucian - who is built like a miniature greyhound, mind you - is the lucky and (under the terms of their agreement) sole recipient of the offloading process.
Being a so-called romance 🙄, this reader would expect the dominant, larger partner to eventually soften up around the edges and at some point incorporate concepts like "tenderness", "concern for one's partner's physical disparity and what might feel painful/uncomfortable", and eventually, at some point, the L-word. Either that, or that the story would take a "BDSM is a good thing" route with the smaller partner (which, quite honestly, would have been less disturbing for me and I could have just gone for a DNF verdict.) Unfortunately, neither of these assumptions were correct. Instead, we get a book with waaaay too much sex (which gets a pass because of the set-up for Benedict's magical "curse"), almost all of which is of the "rough" variety. None of these scenes translated to the creation of a romantic relationship and some of them were downright disturbing as Lucian is clearly uncomfortable (as in choking/can't breath) if not in actual pain (too little prep and Benedict apparently only has one speed upon entry, which is in the jackhammer range). The scene in the throne room is particularly . . . brrrr, as is the one where Lucian saves Benedict by initiating the required type of sex even though there's only a smattering of prep beforehand and ends up being pummeled - again. For me, there are at least several instances in this book where Benedict's treatment of Lucian amounts to rape, especially as Lucian's overall "consent" is more like a begrudging acceptance of something distasteful in trade for Lucian being protected from a very dangerous political environment. For very specific instances of what I'm talking about, you can take a peek at my Kindle notes.
I can't recommend this book and I'm not sure even readers who enjoy BDSM would be OK with how the sex is presented.
My MM romance policy is to veer away from books with big brawny bodies on the cover. These books almost always lead to the following:
One MC is built like a brick wall and *cough* everything about their body is overly large 🙄
That same MC tends to be a) domineering and/or b) overly aggressive when it comes to sex
. . . neither of which I care to read about. Problem is, there are a number of books with these kinds of covers where the author actually presents a well-written relationship and does not lean on the two "qualities" mentioned above. Because there are so few historical fantasies to begin with, I have been known to bypass the feelings elicited by the cover if the description sounds interesting enough.
In this case, I probably should have listened to my instincts, but Lucian is a great enough character that I finished the whole thing. Did Lucian make it worth reading? The jury is out on that one, but Lucian is quite delicious and oh, how I wish he'd been paired with a character that was about more than their bodybuilder physique and alpha temperament.
The underlying premise of the "relationship" (which is a word I use hesitantly) is that the two MC's, despite having loathed each other for years, enter into a consensually 🙄 transactional sexual relationship. The rationale for this is that the bigger partner is imbued with magic that is so strong that some of it has to be 'offloaded' every 24 hours or so and, of course, the only way he can do that is by participating in a very particular type of sexual interaction, one that usually (and always should) involve things like preparation and the use of lubricants. Lucian - who is built like a miniature greyhound, mind you - is the lucky and (under the terms of their agreement) sole recipient of the offloading process.
Being a so-called romance 🙄, this reader would expect the dominant, larger partner to eventually soften up around the edges and at some point incorporate concepts like "tenderness", "concern for one's partner's physical disparity and what might feel painful/uncomfortable", and eventually, at some point, the L-word. Either that, or that the story would take a "BDSM is a good thing" route with the smaller partner (which, quite honestly, would have been less disturbing for me and I could have just gone for a DNF verdict.) Unfortunately, neither of these assumptions were correct. Instead, we get a book with waaaay too much sex (which gets a pass because of the set-up for Benedict's magical "curse"), almost all of which is of the "rough" variety. None of these scenes translated to the creation of a romantic relationship and some of them were downright disturbing as Lucian is clearly uncomfortable (as in choking/can't breath) if not in actual pain (too little prep and Benedict apparently only has one speed upon entry, which is in the jackhammer range). The scene in the throne room is particularly . . . brrrr, as is the one where Lucian saves Benedict by initiating the required type of sex even though there's only a smattering of prep beforehand and ends up being pummeled - again. For me, there are at least several instances in this book where Benedict's treatment of Lucian amounts to rape, especially as Lucian's overall "consent" is more like a begrudging acceptance of something distasteful in trade for Lucian being protected from a very dangerous political environment. For very specific instances of what I'm talking about, you can take a peek at my Kindle notes.
I can't recommend this book and I'm not sure even readers who enjoy BDSM would be OK with how the sex is presented.
March 1, 2025
Benedict’s mouth cut off any further words and any possibility of rational thought. Firm, and demanding, and both softer and rougher than I would’ve imagined. My lips parted for him as if he’d used his magic, and when he teased into me with his tongue I let out a helpless, humiliating moan at how perfect it felt, that intimate entry, the way he took me as if he had every right to anything I had to give.”
Each time I start a new book by this author I am shocked that it just gets better every time. And I admit to being exhausted from a long weak with burning eyes from reading this in one sitting leading me to be more sentimental than normal but it legit feels like the authors books speak directly to my soul.
As with the previous two, this book deals with a Twilight Mage, in this case Benedict who needs to sate his lust on the regular in order to control his magic and not die. Unlike the previous books Benedict doesn’t seem desperate to rid himself of this curse and leans into, sleeping with whomever he chooses while being a beloved General and favourite to the King.
In contrast, the Kings son Lucien doubts his every move, rarely experiencing any love from another human and suddenly thrust into Dukedom after his father’s murder. Alone and paranoid and often undervaluing his own worth. To say that I absolutely adore these two characters is an understatement.
This is for lovers of fantasy romance, enemies to lovers, betrayal, hidden desire and absolutely sizzling attraction. Ooo and did I forget to mention stepbrothers…
Each time I start a new book by this author I am shocked that it just gets better every time. And I admit to being exhausted from a long weak with burning eyes from reading this in one sitting leading me to be more sentimental than normal but it legit feels like the authors books speak directly to my soul.
As with the previous two, this book deals with a Twilight Mage, in this case Benedict who needs to sate his lust on the regular in order to control his magic and not die. Unlike the previous books Benedict doesn’t seem desperate to rid himself of this curse and leans into, sleeping with whomever he chooses while being a beloved General and favourite to the King.
In contrast, the Kings son Lucien doubts his every move, rarely experiencing any love from another human and suddenly thrust into Dukedom after his father’s murder. Alone and paranoid and often undervaluing his own worth. To say that I absolutely adore these two characters is an understatement.
This is for lovers of fantasy romance, enemies to lovers, betrayal, hidden desire and absolutely sizzling attraction. Ooo and did I forget to mention stepbrothers…
March 2, 2025
The Traitor’s Curse is book three in the Twilight Mages series. This MM fantasy romance story is about Lucian and Benedict. This is a single POV story told by Lucian, the Crown Duke of Calatria. The previous two books were about dawn mages, so I was excited to learn this story would focus on a dusk mage. And that dusk mage is Benedict, who is the commander of the Calatrian army, and also happens to be Lucian’s stepbrother.
Lucian couldn’t stand Benedict, who seemed to bring out the worst in him. It didn’t help that Benedict was more popular. People even had suspected Lucian murdered his own father to take the throne. But a couple years later when another murder occurs, Lucian finds himself begging for Benedict to protect him. Benedict does have one condition and that is for him to use Lucian to sate his cursed magic’s demands.
This story was very entertaining. It was full of mystery, suspense, action and twists. There were many spicy moments, but also some emotional ones too. My heart went out to Lucian and what he had to go through, especially the betrayal, loss, and fear. I didn’t want to put this book down because I needed to know who was behind the murders and how it was all going to play out. And I definitely wanted to see Lucian and Benedict get their HEA.
The Traitor’s Curse can be read as a standalone, but the previous books are amazing too so I definitely recommend you read them. This has been such a fantastic series and I hope we get more of it.
I received an advanced copy of this book, and this is my honest review.
Lucian couldn’t stand Benedict, who seemed to bring out the worst in him. It didn’t help that Benedict was more popular. People even had suspected Lucian murdered his own father to take the throne. But a couple years later when another murder occurs, Lucian finds himself begging for Benedict to protect him. Benedict does have one condition and that is for him to use Lucian to sate his cursed magic’s demands.
This story was very entertaining. It was full of mystery, suspense, action and twists. There were many spicy moments, but also some emotional ones too. My heart went out to Lucian and what he had to go through, especially the betrayal, loss, and fear. I didn’t want to put this book down because I needed to know who was behind the murders and how it was all going to play out. And I definitely wanted to see Lucian and Benedict get their HEA.
The Traitor’s Curse can be read as a standalone, but the previous books are amazing too so I definitely recommend you read them. This has been such a fantastic series and I hope we get more of it.
I received an advanced copy of this book, and this is my honest review.
March 12, 2025
If only we could all be gifted men as broad shouldered, self sacrificing, and gallant as the tops in this series. It's like a competition with them, who can be the most swoony. I liked this installment a lot, more than book 2 as there seemed to be a little less of the MCs not liking each other. Sure, a big part of the book is snark but it felt more harmonious overall than book 2 which I enjoyed.
We finally get a dusk mage!! I've been waiting. Benedict is certainly trying to win boyfriend of the year award. He works tirelessly for Lucian behind the scenes, helping to keep Lucian's kingdom running even though he gets zero appreciation for it since Lucian is unaware of his efforts. I also liked Lucian as well, his inner vulnerability combined with how hard he tries to be a good ruler was a touching combination and makes you want Benedict to sweep him off his feet and protect him. The two were a great pair
We finally get a dusk mage!! I've been waiting. Benedict is certainly trying to win boyfriend of the year award. He works tirelessly for Lucian behind the scenes, helping to keep Lucian's kingdom running even though he gets zero appreciation for it since Lucian is unaware of his efforts. I also liked Lucian as well, his inner vulnerability combined with how hard he tries to be a good ruler was a touching combination and makes you want Benedict to sweep him off his feet and protect him. The two were a great pair
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