okay, warning you now… this review contains spoilers.
this book was recommended to me and since dark romance is very hit or miss for me, i decided to give it a fair shot. i kept reading despite the bad writing because i genuinely believe every author starts somewhere. sometimes one book is shaky and the next is stronger. i wanted to extend that grace.
but i cannot sit here and pretend this worked for me. the writing was TERRIBLE. not just a little underdeveloped. not just in need of polishing. it was genuinely difficult to get through. the pacing felt chaotic, the dialogue felt awkward, and the emotional beats never landed the way they were clearly intended to
so olivia lives her entire life unaware of what her father is truly doing, only to suddenly discover at a gala that women are being auctioned off. that reveal alone could have been powerful and horrifying. instead, it just felt rushed and underexplored. then we have the male lead, who is instantly obsessed the second he sees her. the attraction is immediate, overwhelming, and cliché. it felt less like chemistry and more like a checklist of dark romance tropes being ticked off one by one.
and the logic? nonexistent. at one point, in an effort to “protect” her, he decides the best plan is to move her out of his house and place her in one of his clubs, surrounded by men, where men connected to her father also visits. they change her appearance as if that alone solves the problem. it was so dumb that i had to pause.
there’s also a contest where women dress up and perform on stage, and a committee votes on the best one. the winner gets a date with him. this is supposed to be the good guy. i understand this is dark romance, but there is a difference between morally gray and still actively objectifying women in a way that undermines your own narrative. it just felt contradictory and messy.
there’s even a scene where she dances on stage and casually mentions she practiced in front of her teddy bears. i not only cringed but i didn’t know what to do with that information.
the entire experience felt unhinged and chaotic, and not in a compelling way. it felt like shock value without depth, like tropes without a foundation, like smut first, story second. i kept asking myself what the author was thinking, because even within dark romance, you can still have strong writing, strong character development, and a decent plot.
this had NONE of that.
i wanted to give it two stars. i tried to find something to hold onto. usually even in books i dislike, there’s at least one scene, one character moment, one line that works for me. here, there was nothing. i did not like the characters. i did not like the romance. i did not like the plot. i did not like the writing.
therefore, i am giving this one star and that’s me being generous. i don’t know if the author has released more dark romance books after this one and i have no desire to find out and read, but i do hope the craft gets better from here. this just simply isn’t for me.