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256 pages, Paperback
First published September 23, 2025
I love the premise of the book, but this jumped all over the place and needed a lot more editing. I feel like this would have been sooooo much better as a short story.
We follow Mila Thomas who comes back home three years after her brother Jed disappears. Upon arrival, she finds her mother still deep in alcohol-infused grief, the reverend speaking scripture in her mother's ear, and her sister missing.
The parts that I loved: there is a scene where Mila finally gets the story from her Grandma Ruby about what happened to the bog. Reading that felt like this was the bit of the story the author spent the most time on. It feels like the whole idea behind why this novel exists: A young woman finds magic in the bog. She wants to share that magic with the man she loves, but he twists that magic for his own gain. In her heartbreak and rage, she curses him. Inadvertently, she curses his bloodline and, in a way, her own. I would have started Chapter 1 with this story and gone from there.
I find myself more interested in what Cecil had going on than Roe, the Reverend, and Simon. I wish we had more focus on Cecil and Ruby instead of what we got here.
What I didn't love: I received this as an eARC from Net Galley, so I won't be adding any spoilers, but there were parts of this that just felt a little out of place (e.g. the cemetery scene after Mila speaks to Grandma Ruby...why did that need to happen right then?!?! Girl, tell him what you just learned!). There's also a lot of repetitiveness in descriptions of how Roe smells, Mila wondering how to stop what's happening but refusing to use the gift that would help her, "I'm a liar", what happens when she touches Roe, "what remains but the broken bits", etc.
Also, Mila always feels like she's slow to catch on. It's taxing.
I'm not exactly sure where we lost the plot, but it may have been right about the time when the bog starts talking about amassing its army and waiting for its general early into the book...It starts to lean heavily into YA for some reason. We could've cut that and still talked about the curse, the jealousy, and the anger the bog experienced.
With all that being said, this gets 3 stars from me. I would totally revisit this story if it were shorter and more refined. There's a really good story here, the execution was just not up to par.