Low four stars. Huh.
Well, it’s been a while since I’ve rated a Warriors book anything above three stars. But I, for one, am very happy this book was so unexpectedly strong. The writing is still weird and smooth, but it felt less so in this book than the previous couple. Maybe I’m just finally getting used to it. It also probably helps that there are no fight scenes in this book- to be clear, I wish there were more fight scenes (this is WARRIOR cats, after all), but those moments are when the new writing style really feels disjointed and off to me, so their absence may explain why I took less of an issue with the writing in this book than the last ones.
This is definitely a filler book, but unlike most Warriors filler books it managed to make the filler mostly entertaining.
Tawnypelt’s plot was pretty grounded and slow; she only really actively did one thing: telling the Clans about the prophecy. I did really like that bit, but I actually quite enjoyed the changes in scenery through the book in her POV, too. Getting to see daily life in multiple clans from one character’s perspective was surprisingly really interesting, and a great switch-up from pretty much every other POV character in recent books. I will say though that this is the second book of Tawnypelt not doing much at all, so if book three continues on this route I will start getting annoyed again.
Moonpaw’s story was similarly slow, but in a slow build-up kind of way rather than a dragging way. I liked seeing her different methods of trying to keep her sister away, how she slowly learned more about Morningkit, and also little bits of nostalgic Warrior training that we haven’t really seen in a while. I was also very intrigued by the cliffhanger at the end of her story, with Morningkit actually hurting her. I’m excited to see what happens next book with her.
Starlingpaw was a surprise. The Erins made a great decision dropping Leafstar’s POV in this one; I actually think it made last book stronger just by the choice to abandon her perspective in this book. And Starlingpaw was surprisingly entertaining- like Tawnypelt, he had some moments of agency that made his chapters very likable. Though he’s easily misguided, he actively tries things and adapts his approach to figuring out the prophecy’s meaning. This keeps the plot interesting and lets the reader feel like the story is progressing even if the main plot is still stalled. The traveling portion of the story at the end was also surprisingly painless. I think it’s the most entertaining and interesting section of ‘cats walking’ we have gotten in Warrriors in a long time. A great improvement from StormClan’s Folly.
Character time!
Tawnypelt is still incredibly bland, but her decision to tell the Clans the prophecy (and not put up with Tigerstar’s plot-convenience reason for not saying anything) made her very likable. I also quite liked her sibling bonding with Bramblestar. We haven’t really gotten an interesting sibling dynamic in this series since Ivypool and Dovewing, so it was very sweet to see these two catch up and just hang out a bit. Aside from that, I don’t have much to say about Tawnypelt. I hope she gets more to do next book, and the prophecy starts proceeding a bit.
Moonpaw is also a bit stereotypical, but she still feels young, and to be fair to her it’s hard to have a super unique personality when you’re constantly trying to make the ghost of your dead sister stop haunting you. So her situation is unique enough to help her out a bit. I also really liked her last couple chapters. The scenes with her parents, how they grieved Morningkit, and why they didn’t tell Moonpaw, felt like a very realistic and grounded representation of grief, especially for someone who died far too young and you didn’t really know. It’s a much more real and heavy topic of grief than the Erins have covered in-depth in the past, and I really enjoyed it. My biggest hope for next book, though, is that Moonpaw is actually able to tell someone about Morningkit so her plot can start progressing. This felt like great buildup, but I do worry it’ll be dragged out.
Starlingpaw, as I said earlier, was a great surprise. A super likable protagonist, Starlingpaw is very naive but also driven, anxious, and guilty in very relatable ways. My only complaint is that his arc felt a little too wrapped up to me at the end of the book, with him making a list of everything he’s going to do better, and deciding to move on from his father’s death. Unless the authors are planning another POV switch next book, I hope they give his grief more time to heal instead of having him just decide to do better and immediately getting over it.
There were a decent amount of side characters who got some actual focus or personality, which was a really nice change. To be clear, four or five cats with some semblance of a personality does not excuse the 50-some per clan who don’t, but it is certainly a step in the right direction. Jayfeather has always been one of the most consistent cats in personality, so it comes as no surprise he continues being sharp and blunt in this book. But I appreciate that he got more focus and we got to see his more caring side. Squirrelstar got a couple good conversations with Tawnypelt, which was nice, and Fidgetflake got more focus than he’s ever had in Starlingpaw’s chapters. But the biggest surprise by far was Branbleclaw, who was not only in-character, but also entertaining and having some sort of emotional turmoil with his fears of the Dark Forest. I really hope the Erins don’t take the cheap way out and kill him before Moonpaw can actually talk with him next book. He can die eventually, I suppose, if he has to. But right now I’m far more interested in both him and Moonpaw as characters than plot drama for the sake of drama.
There aren’t really any antagonists in this book, let alone villains, but I do have one character I want to talk about.
Yup, you guessed it, it’s Tigerheartstar again. Ugh. I complained about him last book, and I’ll do it again here. I cannot believe we are still stuck with the same cat going through the same motions of being obnoxiously stubborn and unreasonable for literally no reason. If it was supposed to be an ‘arc’ the first time, it should have ended then. This cat literally serves as a pseudo-antagonist every arc (against SkyClan in AVoS, against Shadowsight to some degree in TBC, and against RiverClan in ASC), claims to learn his lesson afterward, then immediately regresses back to the same function next arc. He is serving entirely as a plot device, but a very annoying one, which makes his character extremely unlikable. I swear the Erins finished putting Branbleclaw through the same arc over and over again after Squirrelflight’s Hope and just decided they couldn’t live without a character repeating the same irrational logic every other book, so they decided to make Tigerstar the new Brambleclaw and make him the go-to character for overdramatic plot-stalling. I am so sick of it. Moving on.
I guess the Twolegs count as antagonists, but really they function solely as an obstacle for the cats to drive the plot. They also have little to no actual presence in this book, which makes it seem to me that Twolegs aren’t really antagonists in this book- they’re just a way for the authors to block off the Moonpool. That’s okay though; I don’t think we really need another ‘fight Twolegs’ arc just yet (though I do hope if that does come up it means the casts will finally be leaving the lake; that would be amazing).
Overall, this was surprisingly strong, though not without its issues. I’m cautiously optimistic for book three, now. Hopefully it doesn’t disappoint.
SERIES RATINGS:
The Elders’ Quest: ⭐️⭐️⭐️.75
Hidden Moon: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Chasing Shadows: ⭐️⭐️⭐️.75
Guiding Light: TBD
False Dawn: TBD