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To Ride a Rising Storm
A young Indigenous woman and her dragon fight for the independence of their homeland in this epic sequel to the bestselling and multi-award-winning To Shape a Dragon's Breath, "a remarkable novel that is bound to be a staple of fantasy shelves for years to come" (BuzzFeed).
Anequs has not only survived her first year at Kuiper's Academy but exceeded all of her professors' admittedly low expectations—and passed all her courses with honors. Now, she and her dragon, Kasaqua, are headed home for the summer, along with Theod, the only other Native student at the Academy.
But what should have been a relaxing break takes a darker turn. Thanks to Anequs's notoriety, there is an Anglish presence on Masquapaug for the first time a presence which Anequs hates. Anequs will always fight for what she believes in, however, and what she believes in is her people's right to self-govern and live as they have for generations, without the restrictive yoke of Anglish rules and social customs. And fight she will—even if it means lighting a spark which may flare into civil war.
Anequs has not only survived her first year at Kuiper's Academy but exceeded all of her professors' admittedly low expectations—and passed all her courses with honors. Now, she and her dragon, Kasaqua, are headed home for the summer, along with Theod, the only other Native student at the Academy.
But what should have been a relaxing break takes a darker turn. Thanks to Anequs's notoriety, there is an Anglish presence on Masquapaug for the first time a presence which Anequs hates. Anequs will always fight for what she believes in, however, and what she believes in is her people's right to self-govern and live as they have for generations, without the restrictive yoke of Anglish rules and social customs. And fight she will—even if it means lighting a spark which may flare into civil war.
464 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 27, 2026
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Moniquill Blackgoose
2 books1,042 followersMoniquill Blackgoose, an enrolled member of the Seaconck Wampanoag Tribe of Massachusetts and Rhode Island and descendand of Ousamequin Massasoit, writes fantasy and science fiction. To Shape a Dragon's Breath is her first novel.
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March 19, 2026
3,5 ⭐
This series continues to be one of the most unique historical fantasy I’ve seen around - it has dragons and Native lore, with the pace and the plot pretty quiet in their intensity. I very much appreciated that this second installment did a great job of efficiently summarizing the main plot points from book one to kickstart your memory if it has been a while.
The politics and the themes of colonialism and imperialism continue to be at the forefront of the story, which makes it worth the read, especially if you love history - I feel like the only truly fantasy spin is the presence of dragons.
And dear god, the arrogance and the sense of racial superiority is so hard to battle with because it can’t be reasoned with, it wants nothing to do with either logic or empathy, which is so incredibly frustrating. Yet still, it’s all the more rewarding to watch people stand up and fight against such bullshit relentlessly, and that’s why I’m having such a good time. I came for the dragons, but I’m staying to see all the elitist, racist, nationalistic pricks fall from their imaginary pedestal they put themselves on. (Because it certainly should happen in books at least. If I can’t watch that kind of content on the evening news, I want that outcome at least here...)
Anequs continues to be a strong voice throughout the story, even though her stubbornness is being seriously challenged. Her age (she’s sixteen now) comes through in her being quite closed off to other ways of thinking if it doesn’t align with her beliefs, and the way she gets easily frustrated when things don’t go her way immediately.
Marta is shaping up to be the most interesting character with an unsure future full of potential to develop either way. She’s a white girl from higher society, attending the Academy with Anequs as a fellow dragoneer, still trying to retain her skewed moral high ground and to cling to her views. I love how she’s continuously being smacked with uncomfortable reality. She refuses to see how her upbringing was full of prejudices yet, but there IS potential for change because she’s in no way malicious, just misguided.
In my humble opinion, this book still suffers from the dreaded second book syndrome - the pace is very slow, and when I arrived at the 80 percent mark, I was a bit shocked by how little actually happened by then. I didn’t mind because of how engrossed in the lore and politics I am, but it doesn’t change the fact that lots of readers could find this installment rightfully a bit boring.
Well, except for the last 5 percent because what the hell was that?? Where is book three?? 👀 The pace till then sure lulled me into a false sense of security, even with the atmosphere and the political climate clearly getting ready to boil over!
I continue to enjoy myself with The Nampeshiweisit series, but be sure to pick it up when you’re in the mood for your fantasy to not be overly adventurous or action-packed!
(I admit it took me a while to finish but that’s certainly not the book’s fault, just some stressful times in general - I’m sure you know and get that...)
Big thank you to Del Rey (Random House Worlds, Inklore) for this e-arc!
This series continues to be one of the most unique historical fantasy I’ve seen around - it has dragons and Native lore, with the pace and the plot pretty quiet in their intensity. I very much appreciated that this second installment did a great job of efficiently summarizing the main plot points from book one to kickstart your memory if it has been a while.
The politics and the themes of colonialism and imperialism continue to be at the forefront of the story, which makes it worth the read, especially if you love history - I feel like the only truly fantasy spin is the presence of dragons.
And dear god, the arrogance and the sense of racial superiority is so hard to battle with because it can’t be reasoned with, it wants nothing to do with either logic or empathy, which is so incredibly frustrating. Yet still, it’s all the more rewarding to watch people stand up and fight against such bullshit relentlessly, and that’s why I’m having such a good time. I came for the dragons, but I’m staying to see all the elitist, racist, nationalistic pricks fall from their imaginary pedestal they put themselves on. (Because it certainly should happen in books at least. If I can’t watch that kind of content on the evening news, I want that outcome at least here...)
Anequs continues to be a strong voice throughout the story, even though her stubbornness is being seriously challenged. Her age (she’s sixteen now) comes through in her being quite closed off to other ways of thinking if it doesn’t align with her beliefs, and the way she gets easily frustrated when things don’t go her way immediately.
Marta is shaping up to be the most interesting character with an unsure future full of potential to develop either way. She’s a white girl from higher society, attending the Academy with Anequs as a fellow dragoneer, still trying to retain her skewed moral high ground and to cling to her views. I love how she’s continuously being smacked with uncomfortable reality. She refuses to see how her upbringing was full of prejudices yet, but there IS potential for change because she’s in no way malicious, just misguided.
In my humble opinion, this book still suffers from the dreaded second book syndrome - the pace is very slow, and when I arrived at the 80 percent mark, I was a bit shocked by how little actually happened by then. I didn’t mind because of how engrossed in the lore and politics I am, but it doesn’t change the fact that lots of readers could find this installment rightfully a bit boring.
Well, except for the last 5 percent because what the hell was that?? Where is book three?? 👀 The pace till then sure lulled me into a false sense of security, even with the atmosphere and the political climate clearly getting ready to boil over!
I continue to enjoy myself with The Nampeshiweisit series, but be sure to pick it up when you’re in the mood for your fantasy to not be overly adventurous or action-packed!
(I admit it took me a while to finish but that’s certainly not the book’s fault, just some stressful times in general - I’m sure you know and get that...)
Big thank you to Del Rey (Random House Worlds, Inklore) for this e-arc!
November 8, 2025
Ever finish a book and go, well sh*t??
The ending was spectacular. And made me need book three.
This series has the most realistic depiction of coming of age in terms of finding your place and having meaningful conversations.
Yes, rejoice! They TALK. Proper, scary, real conversations so everyone understands each other or can learn more.
It is sometimes uncomfortable or hurtful, but it was a depiction of reality in a fantasy world.
There is also realistic character development from side characters who are learning new ways of life. Anequs is becoming more bold in not shying away from barbs and from her own island identity.
Anequs has not been denied a proper education. She simply received a very different one.
We also see other cultures in this one, so Anequs is also on the back foot, yet she goes in with an open and curious mind which sets her up for better friendships.
“Anequs, I love you. I will go on loving you, no matter who else you love.” He turned his gaze to Liberty and said, “Miss Braun, I do not consider you a rival, and bear you no ill will. I think that we’re both in love with a wildly reckless hero, and that we ought to be joining forces to make her see reason.”
We get more romance and conversations about what that means to different characters. We also see different practices of religion.
There is a lot of philosophy in this one. There is literally a society where a group of students (including Anqequs) gather to discuss the nature of humanity etc. It reminded me of prepping for university admissions - indulgent and as if the book is acting as a mouthpiece for the author’s internal debates.
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The ending was spectacular. And made me need book three.
This series has the most realistic depiction of coming of age in terms of finding your place and having meaningful conversations.
Yes, rejoice! They TALK. Proper, scary, real conversations so everyone understands each other or can learn more.
It is sometimes uncomfortable or hurtful, but it was a depiction of reality in a fantasy world.
There is also realistic character development from side characters who are learning new ways of life. Anequs is becoming more bold in not shying away from barbs and from her own island identity.
Anequs has not been denied a proper education. She simply received a very different one.
We also see other cultures in this one, so Anequs is also on the back foot, yet she goes in with an open and curious mind which sets her up for better friendships.
“Anequs, I love you. I will go on loving you, no matter who else you love.” He turned his gaze to Liberty and said, “Miss Braun, I do not consider you a rival, and bear you no ill will. I think that we’re both in love with a wildly reckless hero, and that we ought to be joining forces to make her see reason.”
We get more romance and conversations about what that means to different characters. We also see different practices of religion.
There is a lot of philosophy in this one. There is literally a society where a group of students (including Anqequs) gather to discuss the nature of humanity etc. It reminded me of prepping for university admissions - indulgent and as if the book is acting as a mouthpiece for the author’s internal debates.
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March 23, 2026⭐️ 4 ⭐️ Anequs, an Indigenous teen and her young dragon, Kasaqua continue to navigate life at the dragon-academy and fight rising fears of the Anglish supremacy groups who are determined to colonize Maquapaug and use violence to extract their agenda. She's such a strong character, it’s hard to not praise her efforts in fighting for what she believe in--that it is her people's right to live as they have for generations. The themes of colonialism and imperialism continue to dominate, but Anequs yet again proves that she is the voice of reason. The racial superiority, elitism, the 'whiteness' is deeply felt. To see someone as young as Anequs fighting to dismantle the cynicism and the sigma sends a good message to the young readers--rise above and stand your ground, don't accept to be ostracized.
This is an amazing Indigenous fantasy with all the right elements. It carries educational points, holds a big part of history and teaches us about consequences.
Many thanks to NetGalley & Del Ray, Random House Worlds & Inklore for sending me this eARC!
Publication date: January 27, 2026
This is an amazing Indigenous fantasy with all the right elements. It carries educational points, holds a big part of history and teaches us about consequences.
Many thanks to NetGalley & Del Ray, Random House Worlds & Inklore for sending me this eARC!
Publication date: January 27, 2026
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
I'm a HUGE fan of the first novel and I've been eagerly waiting for this second installment.
After the climax in the first book, I thought that this second novel would be elevated. As in, higher stakes and a sense of urgency and danger. And/or Anequs would be more involved in Anglish society (especially in the political or activist sphere) instead of just being a student.
But sadly, this was just an okay read.
I think I hyped myself up too much. Honestly, I probably would've rated this lower, but the last ~20% did A LOT of heavy lifting to bring this up to a 3-star read. No spoilers, but there was actual dragon action! (Having the students treat their dragons like a hybrid dog/horse was getting pretty old.)
Similar to the first novel, this was very slice of life, detailing every instance of Anequs's life and relationships at home and in the Academy. It was pretty much a rehash of book one, but Anequs now has experience under her belt when it comes to dragons, school, and relationships.
We get the usual plotlines: Anequs and Marta fight over Anglish customs and propriety. Theod learns more about his roots. We get more dragon chemistry lectures. Kasaqua isn't tiny and cute anymore, so sadly, there was less of that. Tensions grow and come to a head between theProud Boys Ravens and the rest of society.
Rinse and repeat.
Ngl, I didn't really care much for Anequs's poly relationship. Poor Theod felt like a third wheel (and dare I even say, a beard) while Anequs and Liberty were the main relationship.
It almost felt like I was watching him being bullied with the way that Anequs demanded that he define their relationship. I know some people are into assertive women, but goddamn, let the man breathe and ease into it. He also had to accept the relationship between Anequs and Liberty, and since he grew up strictly heteronormative and monogamous, you'd think that Anequs would try to be understanding. (Lbr, she has a huge problem putting herself in someone else's shoes.)
Anyway. I'm aromantic, so what do I know?
At least the climax and ending were full of nonstop action and had me (mostly) seated until the next book. I'm really hoping that I like it better than this one. Fingers crossed.
Thank you to Del Rey and NetGalley for this arc.
After the climax in the first book, I thought that this second novel would be elevated. As in, higher stakes and a sense of urgency and danger. And/or Anequs would be more involved in Anglish society (especially in the political or activist sphere) instead of just being a student.
But sadly, this was just an okay read.
I think I hyped myself up too much. Honestly, I probably would've rated this lower, but the last ~20% did A LOT of heavy lifting to bring this up to a 3-star read. No spoilers, but there was actual dragon action! (Having the students treat their dragons like a hybrid dog/horse was getting pretty old.)
Similar to the first novel, this was very slice of life, detailing every instance of Anequs's life and relationships at home and in the Academy. It was pretty much a rehash of book one, but Anequs now has experience under her belt when it comes to dragons, school, and relationships.
We get the usual plotlines: Anequs and Marta fight over Anglish customs and propriety. Theod learns more about his roots. We get more dragon chemistry lectures. Kasaqua isn't tiny and cute anymore, so sadly, there was less of that. Tensions grow and come to a head between the
Rinse and repeat.
Ngl, I didn't really care much for Anequs's poly relationship. Poor Theod felt like a third wheel (and dare I even say, a beard) while Anequs and Liberty were the main relationship.
It almost felt like I was watching him being bullied with the way that Anequs demanded that he define their relationship. I know some people are into assertive women, but goddamn, let the man breathe and ease into it. He also had to accept the relationship between Anequs and Liberty, and since he grew up strictly heteronormative and monogamous, you'd think that Anequs would try to be understanding. (Lbr, she has a huge problem putting herself in someone else's shoes.)
Anyway. I'm aromantic, so what do I know?
At least the climax and ending were full of nonstop action and had me (mostly) seated until the next book. I'm really hoping that I like it better than this one. Fingers crossed.
Thank you to Del Rey and NetGalley for this arc.
February 14, 2026
Yes yes, I finished this in no time, but what do you mean I have to wait for book three??? Don't do this to me!!!
I had some minor issues with this one when compared to To Shape a Dragon's Breath, and it's mainly due to the fact that it felt like a set up for the next one more than anything, but I love the story so much that I don't even mind.
The pacing is similar to the first book, so it's clear now that Nampeshiweisit will be a series that slowly builds up to something amazing, that ending just proved it.
Now, I want to comment on the romance (who would I be if I didn't?), I still love the idea of this being poly/whychoose, but I don't feel like Theod and Liberty are equals, if that makes sense.
And Anequs contributed to that by basically being like "get with the times Theod, poly relationships are normal" when he was clearly struggling with accepting it, needing to think about it etc, because he didn't grow up in a world where that's common, and he isn't given the time and grace to do so.
I didn't mention it in my review of the first one, but I'm not sensing much chemistry there. Platonic chemistry yes, but that's the extent of it.
Liberty is better in that regard, but we don't see her as often as we see Theod so I'm still more attached to him (and also because I feel like he's getting the short end of the stick) than I am to her. But either way, their relationship has my full support, go make all those snooty Anglish people quake in their boots!!
Generally, Anequs's behaviour throughout the book left a lot to be desired, but I'm sure there's a reason for that somewhere down the line. I can't expect a moody teenager to be perfect anyway, but more often than not, it's her way or the highway.
But yeah, I enjoyed it, and I'm so excited for book three (please come soon).
I had some minor issues with this one when compared to To Shape a Dragon's Breath, and it's mainly due to the fact that it felt like a set up for the next one more than anything, but I love the story so much that I don't even mind.
The pacing is similar to the first book, so it's clear now that Nampeshiweisit will be a series that slowly builds up to something amazing, that ending just proved it.
Now, I want to comment on the romance (who would I be if I didn't?), I still love the idea of this being poly/whychoose, but I don't feel like Theod and Liberty are equals, if that makes sense.
And Anequs contributed to that by basically being like "get with the times Theod, poly relationships are normal" when he was clearly struggling with accepting it, needing to think about it etc, because he didn't grow up in a world where that's common, and he isn't given the time and grace to do so.
I didn't mention it in my review of the first one, but I'm not sensing much chemistry there. Platonic chemistry yes, but that's the extent of it.
Liberty is better in that regard, but we don't see her as often as we see Theod so I'm still more attached to him (and also because I feel like he's getting the short end of the stick) than I am to her. But either way, their relationship has my full support, go make all those snooty Anglish people quake in their boots!!
Generally, Anequs's behaviour throughout the book left a lot to be desired, but I'm sure there's a reason for that somewhere down the line. I can't expect a moody teenager to be perfect anyway, but more often than not, it's her way or the highway.
But yeah, I enjoyed it, and I'm so excited for book three (please come soon).
March 12, 2026
Review: Absolutely fantastic continuation. That cliffhanger is criminal lol. I loved the evolution of Anequs and Kasaqua, as well as the other native woman who joins later in the story. I really hope we get to see that explored more in the next book.
Pre-read: Ahhhh so excited to see a listing for this. I really enjoyed the first book and have been checking every now and then to see if a sequel had been announced. Can’t wait to read this later in the year!
Pre-read: Ahhhh so excited to see a listing for this. I really enjoyed the first book and have been checking every now and then to see if a sequel had been announced. Can’t wait to read this later in the year!
September 19, 2025
To Shape a Dragon's Breath was one of my favorite reads of 2024 and to have an opportunity to read the sequel early and submit a review has truly been a dream come true.
Unfortunately, the pacing of this book is absolutely bonkers. The first 100 pages or so is interesting and does further the plot, yes, but we could have done that in like...30-40 pages I think. We also spend a lot of this book reading set up for the third book, which is fine. It seems like the third book is absolutely going to pop tf off but it felt like we weren't focused so much on the plot of this book as a result of all that future set up. The plot felt pretty slow paced overall compared to the previous book with any true action beginning at 80% into the book and a dragon battle and announcement of war at like 98%. Diabolical.
Something else I have to bring up is Anequs is kind of a dick to Theod. One of the side plots to this book is setting up the potential romance between Anequs, Theod, and Liberty. Anequs approaches Theod first with her intent to date both him and Liberty and does spend a significant amount her time annoyed with Theod for wanting time to think about if he wants to be in a throuple and thinks to herself why can't they just talk until the issue is resolved. Anequs, girl, because some people don't work like that. Some people need time to think about what they say before they say it. I also don't really catch a romantic vibe between Anequs and Theod like I do between Anequs and Liberty.
Another thing is at some point Anequs wants to kind of "test" Marta and decides to spring a hang out sesh on both her and Liberty and can you even believe it, it didn't work and everyone hated it. Now, Anequs isn't wrong for calling out the shit Marta said TO LIBERTY'S FACE and I think challenging Marta about her beliefs and privileges also isn't wrong. But then to get mad when Liberty gets upset about it is so bizarre and more importantly for Anequs not to realize how Marta could have jeopardized Liberty and destroyed her life if she'd had an absolute Karen moment was honestly really wild. I think Anequs is going to do a lot of character growth in the third book that we didn't see in this book regarding how Anglish customs directly affect the people she cares about around her, which will be important for her to learn and help to dismantle systemic oppression the smallfolk are experiencing. I think we're going to get there but also I do acknowledge Anequs is both 16 and never asked to be put in the situations she experiences. Another thing (sorry), is I thought the introduction of philosophy in this book was interesting but I personally find philosophy hard to get excited about so reading those bits about the DGT was kinda tough to get through.
Overall though I thought this was another really good installment to the series and I really appreciated the political and civil unrest simmering as a constant undertone beneath the plot before it all comes to an explosive head at the end. I also really liked the introduction of Sadsong to the story to teach Anequs the ways of how someone more from her culture would train, rear, and ride a Nampeshiwei. So all in all, not as good as the first book (in my opinion, if you loved it and have no notes, awesome!), but still a very solid entry in this series.
Thanks so much to NetGalley and the publisher for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
Unfortunately, the pacing of this book is absolutely bonkers. The first 100 pages or so is interesting and does further the plot, yes, but we could have done that in like...30-40 pages I think. We also spend a lot of this book reading set up for the third book, which is fine. It seems like the third book is absolutely going to pop tf off but it felt like we weren't focused so much on the plot of this book as a result of all that future set up. The plot felt pretty slow paced overall compared to the previous book with any true action beginning at 80% into the book and a dragon battle and announcement of war at like 98%. Diabolical.
Something else I have to bring up is Anequs is kind of a dick to Theod. One of the side plots to this book is setting up the potential romance between Anequs, Theod, and Liberty. Anequs approaches Theod first with her intent to date both him and Liberty and does spend a significant amount her time annoyed with Theod for wanting time to think about if he wants to be in a throuple and thinks to herself why can't they just talk until the issue is resolved. Anequs, girl, because some people don't work like that. Some people need time to think about what they say before they say it. I also don't really catch a romantic vibe between Anequs and Theod like I do between Anequs and Liberty.
Another thing is at some point Anequs wants to kind of "test" Marta and decides to spring a hang out sesh on both her and Liberty and can you even believe it, it didn't work and everyone hated it. Now, Anequs isn't wrong for calling out the shit Marta said TO LIBERTY'S FACE and I think challenging Marta about her beliefs and privileges also isn't wrong. But then to get mad when Liberty gets upset about it is so bizarre and more importantly for Anequs not to realize how Marta could have jeopardized Liberty and destroyed her life if she'd had an absolute Karen moment was honestly really wild. I think Anequs is going to do a lot of character growth in the third book that we didn't see in this book regarding how Anglish customs directly affect the people she cares about around her, which will be important for her to learn and help to dismantle systemic oppression the smallfolk are experiencing. I think we're going to get there but also I do acknowledge Anequs is both 16 and never asked to be put in the situations she experiences. Another thing (sorry), is I thought the introduction of philosophy in this book was interesting but I personally find philosophy hard to get excited about so reading those bits about the DGT was kinda tough to get through.
Overall though I thought this was another really good installment to the series and I really appreciated the political and civil unrest simmering as a constant undertone beneath the plot before it all comes to an explosive head at the end. I also really liked the introduction of Sadsong to the story to teach Anequs the ways of how someone more from her culture would train, rear, and ride a Nampeshiwei. So all in all, not as good as the first book (in my opinion, if you loved it and have no notes, awesome!), but still a very solid entry in this series.
Thanks so much to NetGalley and the publisher for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
January 30, 2026
First 80% of book: “Anequs, being kind of a dick, has conversations.”
Last 20%: 🤯💥‼️
Last 20%: 🤯💥‼️
March 10, 2026
literally the biggest question marks ???? what was this book for ???? this is the sequel to the book i said was my favorite book of 2026 ????
i hate to write this, but this sequel really didn't do it for me. we spend almost 40% being reexplained to us what happened in book 1 (i was there i know what happened!!). overall nothing happens until the last 2%, for a book that's been highly anticipated for 3 years, this is disappointing.
Anequs becomes really arrogant concerning her culture being the paragon of how people should live. she is incapable of putting herself in other shoes, something she faults Marta, her English friend, for doing. Her incapability in understanding other cultures and rules makes her sound so dumb, immature, and unlikable when i know she isn't! in book 1 she was such a smart and kind soul i don't understand what happened there.
i also really disliked how she pressured Theod into a poly relationship, not understanding he needed time to process, getting mad at him, and having her brother basically say to him "eheheh you'll get two girls why are you complaining?" it was so disgusting.
hopefully this is a part of her character arc and i'm just being impatient.
i hate to write this, but this sequel really didn't do it for me. we spend almost 40% being reexplained to us what happened in book 1 (i was there i know what happened!!). overall nothing happens until the last 2%, for a book that's been highly anticipated for 3 years, this is disappointing.
Anequs becomes really arrogant concerning her culture being the paragon of how people should live. she is incapable of putting herself in other shoes, something she faults Marta, her English friend, for doing. Her incapability in understanding other cultures and rules makes her sound so dumb, immature, and unlikable when i know she isn't! in book 1 she was such a smart and kind soul i don't understand what happened there.
i also really disliked how she pressured Theod into a poly relationship, not understanding he needed time to process, getting mad at him, and having her brother basically say to him "eheheh you'll get two girls why are you complaining?" it was so disgusting.
hopefully this is a part of her character arc and i'm just being impatient.
March 4, 2026
Audiobook (18 hours)0 narrated by Charley Flyte.
The narration and audio are great.
I don't have a lot of time to review right now. I made some notes that hold true.
I really enjoyed the book, but this was all character creation and evolution with a bit of world building. The writing is great, but there isn't really a lot going on. I'm sure that it will all tie in. I had no boredom or slogging. But if this book isn't for you and you liked the first one, I feel pretty confident that you could skim through and still read the third book, which should have a lot of conflict and action, if I am understanding the setup correctly.
The narration and audio are great.
I don't have a lot of time to review right now. I made some notes that hold true.
I really enjoyed the book, but this was all character creation and evolution with a bit of world building. The writing is great, but there isn't really a lot going on. I'm sure that it will all tie in. I had no boredom or slogging. But if this book isn't for you and you liked the first one, I feel pretty confident that you could skim through and still read the third book, which should have a lot of conflict and action, if I am understanding the setup correctly.
July 22, 2025
ahhh this is one of my MOST-anticipated books and I was soo excited to get an ARC! I love the added worldbuilding! I love Anequs my blunt polyamorous queen!!
I can't believe this doesn't even come out for another 6 months so then how much longer am I going to have to wait for book #3???? oh well I'm sure it'll be worth the wait!
I can't believe this doesn't even come out for another 6 months so then how much longer am I going to have to wait for book #3???? oh well I'm sure it'll be worth the wait!
March 12, 2026
Anequs returns to the dragon academy for year two. The big issue in the second book is the rising tensions between the extremist white colonizers and the indigenous people, the moderates, and the black people of the mainland of an alternate New England. At first, these rabble rousers just give hateful speeches but then it boils over into terrorist acts like burning down buildings and attacking innocent people. The students continue to study and attend their balls but the threats wear them down. The author does a good job of bringing on the cloud of aggression while still allowing the young people to enjoy their discoveries and crushes. Even though Anequs likes both Liberty and Theod, I appreciate that the book’s focus is more on the action and what happens next in the hostilities. The ending is a wowzer but also begins the actual war. I hope Book 3 is not too far out. Charley Flyte continues to be a wonderful narrator.
4.5 stars
4.5 stars
January 2, 2026
Thank you to Del Rey and NetGalley for the free e-ARC in exchange for an honest review
To Shape a Dragon's Breath was one of my most unexpectedly delightful fantasy finds of 2024, and I have been on tenterhooks for Book 2’s announcement. Is TRARS worth the wait?
In TRARS, Anequs enters her second year of academy in a different state than she’d started her first year. She’s now semi-famous, following the events of the end of Book 1, and as such, has different people wanting to be her friends this year, including an oddball “secret society” at school. But the downside of her newfound notoriety is also that she’s become a sort of lightning rod for the conservative faction of Anglish politics, who not only don’t like what she did in Book 1, but also everything that she represents.
I think one of the main reasons I enjoy this series is because it takes a lot of fantasy elements that I’ve long adored–magic schools, dragons–and does it in a way that’s, well, less problematic than the blockbuster series. The characters of TRARS are diverse; furthermore, the book addresses their differences in direct ways that hold a mirror up to the way in which these dynamics play out in our world.
Anequs has always stubbornly spoken her mind, but in TRARS, we see her struggle more between wanting to say whatever she thinks and being more diplomatic in order to diffuse a social situation or build necessary connections. I like this because in Book 1 she came across as being too perfect in her forthrightness. There’s also more exploration–though not with much forward movement–of her romances, and while I wish those could have been further developed, instead of just, well, talked about, I was still happy with the book’s stubborn insistence on having queer/non-monogamous relationships.
Writing-wise, if you didn’t like the way the story was laid out in Book 1, you shouldn’t read on. TRARS proceeds in much the same way. A title summarizing what happens begins each chapter; for the most part, the book takes us through the minutiae of Anequs’ school life, including who she talks to, what classes she has, what she’s thinking, etc. The tension of the story doesn’t so much as build as rolls along at a steady pace that may be too infuriatingly slow for some. I’m a bit irked that there’s not really a climax to Book 2; rather, a bombshell is dropped in the final paragraph that sets the stakes up for Book 3, but the lack of payoff may be frustrating to some readers.
Speaking of stakes, the main conflict that gets set up here is the widening fracture between the more tolerant and liberal political faction that is currently in power, and the loud-mouthed conservative faction that screams about their human rights being taken away by tolerance of Natives, blackfolks, women, etc. You know the type. Blackgoose, like many speculative fiction writers nowadays, has obviously been inspired by current sociopolitical events, and I couldn’t help but feel a bit… let down that key events in Book 2 adhere so closely to real events, although I’m still curious how she’ll make them play out later.
Although TRARS didn’t go in the way I had imagined, I was still satisfied, still adore this series, and would still recommend this. The accessibility of the prose makes it a worthwhile recommendation for both teen and older fantasy readers. I’m ready for more, Moniquill Blackgoose!
[Pre-review]
AHHHHHH it's happening, it's finally happening!! I've been eagerly awaiting news since finishing To Shape a Dragon's Breath and we now have a title and a GORGEOUS cover and a pub date!!!
To Shape a Dragon's Breath was one of my most unexpectedly delightful fantasy finds of 2024, and I have been on tenterhooks for Book 2’s announcement. Is TRARS worth the wait?
In TRARS, Anequs enters her second year of academy in a different state than she’d started her first year. She’s now semi-famous, following the events of the end of Book 1, and as such, has different people wanting to be her friends this year, including an oddball “secret society” at school. But the downside of her newfound notoriety is also that she’s become a sort of lightning rod for the conservative faction of Anglish politics, who not only don’t like what she did in Book 1, but also everything that she represents.
I think one of the main reasons I enjoy this series is because it takes a lot of fantasy elements that I’ve long adored–magic schools, dragons–and does it in a way that’s, well, less problematic than the blockbuster series. The characters of TRARS are diverse; furthermore, the book addresses their differences in direct ways that hold a mirror up to the way in which these dynamics play out in our world.
Anequs has always stubbornly spoken her mind, but in TRARS, we see her struggle more between wanting to say whatever she thinks and being more diplomatic in order to diffuse a social situation or build necessary connections. I like this because in Book 1 she came across as being too perfect in her forthrightness. There’s also more exploration–though not with much forward movement–of her romances, and while I wish those could have been further developed, instead of just, well, talked about, I was still happy with the book’s stubborn insistence on having queer/non-monogamous relationships.
Writing-wise, if you didn’t like the way the story was laid out in Book 1, you shouldn’t read on. TRARS proceeds in much the same way. A title summarizing what happens begins each chapter; for the most part, the book takes us through the minutiae of Anequs’ school life, including who she talks to, what classes she has, what she’s thinking, etc. The tension of the story doesn’t so much as build as rolls along at a steady pace that may be too infuriatingly slow for some. I’m a bit irked that there’s not really a climax to Book 2; rather, a bombshell is dropped in the final paragraph that sets the stakes up for Book 3, but the lack of payoff may be frustrating to some readers.
Speaking of stakes, the main conflict that gets set up here is the widening fracture between the more tolerant and liberal political faction that is currently in power, and the loud-mouthed conservative faction that screams about their human rights being taken away by tolerance of Natives, blackfolks, women, etc. You know the type. Blackgoose, like many speculative fiction writers nowadays, has obviously been inspired by current sociopolitical events, and I couldn’t help but feel a bit… let down that key events in Book 2 adhere so closely to real events, although I’m still curious how she’ll make them play out later.
Although TRARS didn’t go in the way I had imagined, I was still satisfied, still adore this series, and would still recommend this. The accessibility of the prose makes it a worthwhile recommendation for both teen and older fantasy readers. I’m ready for more, Moniquill Blackgoose!
[Pre-review]
AHHHHHH it's happening, it's finally happening!! I've been eagerly awaiting news since finishing To Shape a Dragon's Breath and we now have a title and a GORGEOUS cover and a pub date!!!
February 12, 2026
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for access to this eARC! All opinions are my own.
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I was debating between a three and four star for this one, but I realised that I just really love this series and giving it a four (though less so than the first book) feels correct. Though I went into this sequel expecting it to be more of an action based book where the first was setting up a lot of character and conflict and themes, I still enjoyed the slower paced, character driven story we got. It did feel a little bit second book curse-y because while it did develop the story and plot, it was in smaller, thematic ways rather than big blow out action pieces.
The themes and politics of it all were a slam dunk like in the first book, and VERY reminiscent of the real world, which makes them even more important. I would get angry at some of the injustices going on and then realise that we need to be angry about the very real injustices going on in our world too. Crucial politics and attitudes towards marginalised groups.
The characters are still great here, and mostly get good development on from the first book. I still don’t care for Theod in the slightest, and I don’t see any chemistry with him and Anequs unfortunately.
Big fan of the sapphicness going on (could’ve done with even more).
Can’t wait for the third book!
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I was debating between a three and four star for this one, but I realised that I just really love this series and giving it a four (though less so than the first book) feels correct. Though I went into this sequel expecting it to be more of an action based book where the first was setting up a lot of character and conflict and themes, I still enjoyed the slower paced, character driven story we got. It did feel a little bit second book curse-y because while it did develop the story and plot, it was in smaller, thematic ways rather than big blow out action pieces.
The themes and politics of it all were a slam dunk like in the first book, and VERY reminiscent of the real world, which makes them even more important. I would get angry at some of the injustices going on and then realise that we need to be angry about the very real injustices going on in our world too. Crucial politics and attitudes towards marginalised groups.
The characters are still great here, and mostly get good development on from the first book. I still don’t care for Theod in the slightest, and I don’t see any chemistry with him and Anequs unfortunately.
Big fan of the sapphicness going on (could’ve done with even more).
Can’t wait for the third book!
December 8, 2025
To Ride a Rising Storm by Moniquill Blackgoose is the sequel to her award‑winning debut, To Shape a Dragon's Breath. The protagonist, Anequs, and her dragon companion Kasaqua return home for the summer after a year at Kuiper’s Academy, accompanied by another Indigenous student. What should have been a peaceful break turns tense: because of Anequs’s growing notoriety, a foreign (Anglish) presence begins to encroach on her homeland, and the story sets up conflict over autonomy, culture, and resistance, with danger looming and the possibility of civil war.
I'm looking forward to the release!
I'm looking forward to the release!
January 25, 2026
I HAVE SUCH CONFLICTING FEELINGS ABOUT THIS BOOK.
1. I will definitely continue the series and it’s SO fascinating still to me with the stories woven in and the treatment of dragons. LOVE.
2. The pacing is really off for me and that really impacts my enjoyment. Not enough happens throughout like 85% of the book, and while the relationships are interesting to me, the description of them isn’t enough for the plot. Especially when so much is still left in flux.
3. The ending??? SO GOOD?
So…yeah
1. I will definitely continue the series and it’s SO fascinating still to me with the stories woven in and the treatment of dragons. LOVE.
2. The pacing is really off for me and that really impacts my enjoyment. Not enough happens throughout like 85% of the book, and while the relationships are interesting to me, the description of them isn’t enough for the plot. Especially when so much is still left in flux.
3. The ending??? SO GOOD?
So…yeah
February 4, 2026
Another super solid entry in the series - idk how many books later - that last chapter is crazy. What a series! Full review might come later. Still shellshocked.
January 28, 2026
This book!!! This series!!! To Shape a Dragon's Breath was my favorite book of 2023, full stop, and the sequel was worth the wait. I love how the characters and the world kept developing and I love how this book raised/complicated the already-high stakes. If you might like to read "dragons and the badass teenagers who care for them versus white supremacists" in these times, this is the book for you. An incredible audiobook too - Charley Flyte is a phenomenal narrator.
Please, my coworkers, read this both because it's so fucking good and because I need to yell about the ending!!!
Please, my coworkers, read this both because it's so fucking good and because I need to yell about the ending!!!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Thank you to Del Rey, Random House Worlds, Inklore, and NetGalley for this ARC in return for my honest review.
This book is 4.5 stars rounded up to 5.
Listen… To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, book 1 of the Nampeshiweisit series, grabbed a hold of me in a way that is still imprinted on my brain. I LOVED that book. It was one of the best I have EVER read. Ever. Hands down, no question. So even being granted this arc was a dream! But I have to be honest and say that this book did not go at all as I thought it would. In reality, it came close to being a DNF a few times. However, my love for Anequs and this author kept me trying, and whew… am I glad I did!
Let me explain.
Book 1 has a straightforward plot. (BTW, you must read it before even looking at book 2.) You start at point A; then, this thing happens, and because of that, we have consequences, and then bigger consequences and an enthralling story that follows Anequs’ life.
Book 2, as I have now unfurled, has a more indirect plot. The first half of book 2 reminds me of building one of those gigantic puzzles. You know when you are putting pieces together up in one corner, then maybe a bit in the middle, and then some off to the side? You cannot see how it all comes together initially; you are just getting pieces that work here and there. That is how the first 50% of To Ride a Rising Storm felt to me. We got a lot of lore from new countries and peoples. Then there was some romance that builds from book 1. And in between there was the rise of incendiary politics playing in the background. So there were pieces that made you feel a bit lost, and which slowed the pace of the book right down.
After that 50% mark though, this book started to flow and things came together like lightning! All of those little lore stories (which I individually loved, even though I could not grasp the why of them) fit perfectly together and were a foundation for an explosive last 20% of the book.
Book 1 was all about the expectations placed on Anequs. This book was about Anequs deciding she was going to change the world and her realising that she may have to learn how to do that with more diplomacy than force of will. She has some direct confrontations that unveil uncomfortable truths about her peers and friends. Truths that she has to wrestle with and understand if she wants to maintain those relationships.
And amidst that heavy emotional conflict came a deadly turn that changed everything. It was rough!
As I said before though, I am ecstatic that I kept reading To Ride a Rising Storm. The author took me on a complicated journey, which was very much worth it in the end. She tricked me with the simplicity of To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, then swirled me around in To Ride a Rising Storm, only to leave me breathless with anticipation for the third book of this amazing series. She reminded me that reading is not always a clear-cut path, and going off track makes the book plot path a much more interesting one.
I am eternally grateful for the lesson.
This book is 4.5 stars rounded up to 5.
Listen… To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, book 1 of the Nampeshiweisit series, grabbed a hold of me in a way that is still imprinted on my brain. I LOVED that book. It was one of the best I have EVER read. Ever. Hands down, no question. So even being granted this arc was a dream! But I have to be honest and say that this book did not go at all as I thought it would. In reality, it came close to being a DNF a few times. However, my love for Anequs and this author kept me trying, and whew… am I glad I did!
Let me explain.
Book 1 has a straightforward plot. (BTW, you must read it before even looking at book 2.) You start at point A; then, this thing happens, and because of that, we have consequences, and then bigger consequences and an enthralling story that follows Anequs’ life.
Book 2, as I have now unfurled, has a more indirect plot. The first half of book 2 reminds me of building one of those gigantic puzzles. You know when you are putting pieces together up in one corner, then maybe a bit in the middle, and then some off to the side? You cannot see how it all comes together initially; you are just getting pieces that work here and there. That is how the first 50% of To Ride a Rising Storm felt to me. We got a lot of lore from new countries and peoples. Then there was some romance that builds from book 1. And in between there was the rise of incendiary politics playing in the background. So there were pieces that made you feel a bit lost, and which slowed the pace of the book right down.
After that 50% mark though, this book started to flow and things came together like lightning! All of those little lore stories (which I individually loved, even though I could not grasp the why of them) fit perfectly together and were a foundation for an explosive last 20% of the book.
Book 1 was all about the expectations placed on Anequs. This book was about Anequs deciding she was going to change the world and her realising that she may have to learn how to do that with more diplomacy than force of will. She has some direct confrontations that unveil uncomfortable truths about her peers and friends. Truths that she has to wrestle with and understand if she wants to maintain those relationships.
And amidst that heavy emotional conflict came a deadly turn that changed everything. It was rough!
As I said before though, I am ecstatic that I kept reading To Ride a Rising Storm. The author took me on a complicated journey, which was very much worth it in the end. She tricked me with the simplicity of To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, then swirled me around in To Ride a Rising Storm, only to leave me breathless with anticipation for the third book of this amazing series. She reminded me that reading is not always a clear-cut path, and going off track makes the book plot path a much more interesting one.
I am eternally grateful for the lesson.
February 6, 2026
To Ride a Rising Storm didn’t work for me as well as To Shape a Dragon’s Breath, which was an easy five-star read. This sequel felt much slower and, unfortunately, lacked the authenticity and spark that made the first book so compelling.
A large portion of the early book focuses on the dynamics of a newly forming poly relationship, but I found it dull and emotionally flat. Despite the time spent on it, the chemistry never quite clicked for me, and there was very little sense of fire or yearning. Overall, the story often felt more like a rehash than a natural continuation, and the magic of the first book was mostly missing here.
That said, the final 20% was genuinely strong and did a good job setting things up going forward. I do plan to continue the series, just with more tempered expectations. Sadly, this installment didn’t resonate with me nearly as much as the first.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
A large portion of the early book focuses on the dynamics of a newly forming poly relationship, but I found it dull and emotionally flat. Despite the time spent on it, the chemistry never quite clicked for me, and there was very little sense of fire or yearning. Overall, the story often felt more like a rehash than a natural continuation, and the magic of the first book was mostly missing here.
That said, the final 20% was genuinely strong and did a good job setting things up going forward. I do plan to continue the series, just with more tempered expectations. Sadly, this installment didn’t resonate with me nearly as much as the first.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an advance copy in exchange for an honest review.
January 31, 2026
4.25
I very much enjoyed the second installment in the Nampeshiweisit series! This series is very much a character driven and world building forward novel, and so readers looking for explosive action will be disappointed. To Ride a Rising Storm feels very similarly to book 1, To Shape a Dragon's Breath, in pacing and tone. It's been a few years since I read book 1 so some of the world building, while so incredibly cool and well done (obsessed with the way Norse/Icelandic and English and now Jewish mythology is woven in), was a bit challenging to get back into. We spend a majority of this book with Anequs in the first months of year two of her dragon riding school experiencing life through her eyes. In a lot of ways, it is very monotonous and yes, a lot of page time is spent breaking down the effects of racism and colonialism with Anequs' white classmates. The thematic work here was excellent and really drives home all of the ways that colonialism deeply affects both Anequs' and our world. It is easy to get frustrated with Anequs' headstrong but sometimes naive idealism from time to time, but I really enjoyed her moments of character growth when needed, and overall really admire her refreshing courage and honesty, especially at the age of 16.
I think this a great YA book for fans of slow political fantasy with lots of character development. (Think Babel and Assassin's Apprentice)
I think there are some pacing issues, and the introduction of a character late in the book felt a bit chaotic and a means to add more world building, but ultimately I think this series is just going to keep getting better and better, and I can't wait for book 3 to resolve the explosive cliff-hanger ending!
Thank you to NetGalley and DelRey books for a copy of the eARC in exchange for an honest review, all opinions are my own.
I very much enjoyed the second installment in the Nampeshiweisit series! This series is very much a character driven and world building forward novel, and so readers looking for explosive action will be disappointed. To Ride a Rising Storm feels very similarly to book 1, To Shape a Dragon's Breath, in pacing and tone. It's been a few years since I read book 1 so some of the world building, while so incredibly cool and well done (obsessed with the way Norse/Icelandic and English and now Jewish mythology is woven in), was a bit challenging to get back into. We spend a majority of this book with Anequs in the first months of year two of her dragon riding school experiencing life through her eyes. In a lot of ways, it is very monotonous and yes, a lot of page time is spent breaking down the effects of racism and colonialism with Anequs' white classmates. The thematic work here was excellent and really drives home all of the ways that colonialism deeply affects both Anequs' and our world. It is easy to get frustrated with Anequs' headstrong but sometimes naive idealism from time to time, but I really enjoyed her moments of character growth when needed, and overall really admire her refreshing courage and honesty, especially at the age of 16.
I think this a great YA book for fans of slow political fantasy with lots of character development. (Think Babel and Assassin's Apprentice)
I think there are some pacing issues, and the introduction of a character late in the book felt a bit chaotic and a means to add more world building, but ultimately I think this series is just going to keep getting better and better, and I can't wait for book 3 to resolve the explosive cliff-hanger ending!
Thank you to NetGalley and DelRey books for a copy of the eARC in exchange for an honest review, all opinions are my own.
January 30, 2026
Overall, this book left me with very mixed feelings. On one hand, the worldbuilding and the treatment of dragons are still fascinating. I loved the academic setting, especially the classes and dragon riding, and I enjoyed meeting more dragons. The final stretch finally delivered real dragon action, and the nonstop climax and ending did a lot of heavy lifting, pulling the book up to a solid three-star read and making me interested enough to continue the series.
On the other hand, the pacing really hurt my enjoyment. For roughly 85–90% of the book, not much actually happens, and it often feels like the story is circling the same conflicts without meaningful progression. Tension keeps building but doesn’t truly pay off until the very end, which made large portions of the book hard to stay engaged with. The familiar plot threads repeat, and while the relationships between Anequs, Theod, and Liberty are meant to be interesting, they often feel underdeveloped compared to how much space they take up. The poly relationship, in particular, felt unbalanced, with Theod frequently coming across as sidelined while Anequs and Liberty felt like the primary pairing, and Anequs’s assertiveness sometimes crossed into discomfort rather than growth.
In the end, this was fine, maybe even good in places, but it struggled to live up to what came before. Strong ideas, enjoyable classroom scenes, and an exciting finale couldn’t fully make up for the slow pacing and uneven emotional execution. Still, it was compelling enough that I’ll keep reading and hope the next book finds a better balance.
On the other hand, the pacing really hurt my enjoyment. For roughly 85–90% of the book, not much actually happens, and it often feels like the story is circling the same conflicts without meaningful progression. Tension keeps building but doesn’t truly pay off until the very end, which made large portions of the book hard to stay engaged with. The familiar plot threads repeat, and while the relationships between Anequs, Theod, and Liberty are meant to be interesting, they often feel underdeveloped compared to how much space they take up. The poly relationship, in particular, felt unbalanced, with Theod frequently coming across as sidelined while Anequs and Liberty felt like the primary pairing, and Anequs’s assertiveness sometimes crossed into discomfort rather than growth.
In the end, this was fine, maybe even good in places, but it struggled to live up to what came before. Strong ideas, enjoyable classroom scenes, and an exciting finale couldn’t fully make up for the slow pacing and uneven emotional execution. Still, it was compelling enough that I’ll keep reading and hope the next book finds a better balance.
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February 26, 2026I’ll start my review by saying I’ve been VERY excited to read this sequel! After having To Shape a Dragons Breath be one of my favorite reads of 2024, I was looking forward to delving back into Anequs’s story. While I did thoroughly enjoy my time with it, it unfortunately didn’t quite hit the same peak as the first.
Much of this book (and I’m talking a good 80%) felt quite like reading a personal journal of daily events. While many of the same tensions from the first book remained, joined with the introduction of new cultures and political entities, this book lacked any true action or movement from our characters until very late into its 464 pages. Once we get to the action it is dense and dramatic, though despite this, I still felt that most of what was occurring was happening TO our characters instead of seeing them be active participants in the plot. I would have loved to see more opportunities for our characters to influence the structures that built towards the novel’s peak, and not only that, but to have more evenly paced action throughout the length of the book. Unfortunately I think this book was a prime example of “second book syndrome”, focusing too much energy on setting up future plans, and not enough on the current tale.
While I certainly noted these pacing issues, I did still enjoy my time in the characters world. The strength of their established personalities carried over well, making me happy to follow their daily lives through classes, daily routine, and discussions of political upheaval, both within and beyond the academy’s walls. I certainly look forward to seeing where Anequs’s story is building to in future installments.
Thank you to Netgalley and Del Rey for this eARC
Much of this book (and I’m talking a good 80%) felt quite like reading a personal journal of daily events. While many of the same tensions from the first book remained, joined with the introduction of new cultures and political entities, this book lacked any true action or movement from our characters until very late into its 464 pages. Once we get to the action it is dense and dramatic, though despite this, I still felt that most of what was occurring was happening TO our characters instead of seeing them be active participants in the plot. I would have loved to see more opportunities for our characters to influence the structures that built towards the novel’s peak, and not only that, but to have more evenly paced action throughout the length of the book. Unfortunately I think this book was a prime example of “second book syndrome”, focusing too much energy on setting up future plans, and not enough on the current tale.
While I certainly noted these pacing issues, I did still enjoy my time in the characters world. The strength of their established personalities carried over well, making me happy to follow their daily lives through classes, daily routine, and discussions of political upheaval, both within and beyond the academy’s walls. I certainly look forward to seeing where Anequs’s story is building to in future installments.
Thank you to Netgalley and Del Rey for this eARC
October 29, 2025
Fantastic continuation of the series! Everything that To Shape a Dragon's Breath did well, this one carries forward beautifully.
For anyone just seeing this for the first time, this is the second in a trilogy about Anequs, a young indigenous woman who bonds a dragon to become Nampeshiweisit. She is required to join a dragon rider's school to be educated in the "proper" Anglish way. That goes about how you might expect.
We've got colonialism, we've got racism, we've got classism, we've got sexism. All the -isms are explored in this series, set in an alternate New England where dragons exist, cultures collide, and politics simmer under the surface. The characters feel very solid and well fleshed out, and I'm emotionally invested the entire time.
That said, there's a bit of the middle-book slowdown. The plot begins to lag a bit in the middle, and I felt like we didn't really get many of the school/class scenes, which I kinda like in my academia stories. Still, the action picks up in a big way towards the end, and I can tell it's really ramping up for that third book to pop off.
Anequs is a great main character, not perfect, very flawed, at times she treats some of the other characters really unfairly in this book. But she's learning and growing and you can see the character growth. (Also, I really enjoy the non-traditional relationship dynamic they're building here. Love it. And slow burn romance is always better in my mind.)
And there's more dragon time in this one! Slow spots aside, I was deeply satisfied with this book and eager for the next one. Thank you NetGalley and Del Rey for the opportunity to read this ARC and give a review!
For anyone just seeing this for the first time, this is the second in a trilogy about Anequs, a young indigenous woman who bonds a dragon to become Nampeshiweisit. She is required to join a dragon rider's school to be educated in the "proper" Anglish way. That goes about how you might expect.
We've got colonialism, we've got racism, we've got classism, we've got sexism. All the -isms are explored in this series, set in an alternate New England where dragons exist, cultures collide, and politics simmer under the surface. The characters feel very solid and well fleshed out, and I'm emotionally invested the entire time.
That said, there's a bit of the middle-book slowdown. The plot begins to lag a bit in the middle, and I felt like we didn't really get many of the school/class scenes, which I kinda like in my academia stories. Still, the action picks up in a big way towards the end, and I can tell it's really ramping up for that third book to pop off.
Anequs is a great main character, not perfect, very flawed, at times she treats some of the other characters really unfairly in this book. But she's learning and growing and you can see the character growth. (Also, I really enjoy the non-traditional relationship dynamic they're building here. Love it. And slow burn romance is always better in my mind.)
And there's more dragon time in this one! Slow spots aside, I was deeply satisfied with this book and eager for the next one. Thank you NetGalley and Del Rey for the opportunity to read this ARC and give a review!
October 23, 2025
In this sequel, Anequs returns to school with a mind to learn as much from this Anglish education to bring back to her people, as well as with romantic intent with Theod and Liberty. I loved the openness of the way Anequs and her family saw the world in its dynamics and relationships, and how she attempted to translate that into her current world. Her dragon, Kasaqua, grows in size and intelligence and it’s been lovely to see Anequs’ relationship with her grow, especially as it differs from the other dragons at school— there’s so much respect and mutual understanding.
There are underlying themes of privilege, classism, racism, and how to maneuver in a restrictive world not meant for you— and I think it’s very smartly done. Story-wise, I found this book a bit long and dry to read. The action was minimal, and I wish there was more depth to see in our characters.
Thank you NetGalley for this ARC
There are underlying themes of privilege, classism, racism, and how to maneuver in a restrictive world not meant for you— and I think it’s very smartly done. Story-wise, I found this book a bit long and dry to read. The action was minimal, and I wish there was more depth to see in our characters.
Thank you NetGalley for this ARC
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June 26, 2025Update: THE BOOK GODS HAVE SMILED DOWN UPON ME AND I HAVE BEEN GRACED WITH AN ARC! This is literally the most exciting ARC I have ever been granted
I need this IMMEDIATELY
I need this IMMEDIATELY
March 15, 2026
To Ride a Rising Storm by Moniquill Blackgoose
The second installment in the Nampeshiweisit series picks up where To Shape a Dragon's Breath left off, and if you loved the first book, you'll find a lot to enjoy here, while also noticing some shifts in what the story is doing.
One thing worth noting for non-German readers: the Anglish culture in this series leans heavily on German language and naming conventions. Frau as a form of address, dragons named Gerhard, skiltakraft working with Salzsäure and Essigsäure. For English readers this presumably adds an exotic flavour that underlines the colonial western influence the story is built on, and it fits the world very well. As a German reader, that particular exotic effect didn't land for me personally, but I genuinely appreciate that the German used is accurate and often deliberately archaic, which is far from a given.
The story has more action than book one, with tensions rising sharply as the conservative imperialist forces push harder to keep indigenous people exactly where they want them: downtrodden, with fewer rights, and firmly reminded of their place in an Anglish-shaped world. There is bloodshed. The clash between characters who can and cannot see past their own position in society adds real depth, and it does so on two levels: characters shape the world, and the world shapes the characters right back, making both feel richer and more layered than before.
A highlight for me was the introduction of another dragon who doesn't fit Anglish standards, and her rider, who comes from a cultural background much closer to that of Anequs and her people. What makes this thread especially intriguing is that she doesn't seem as forced into the Anglish mould, and is far more in step with her original culture than Anequs and her people manage, living as they do under the Anglish thumb. I want to learn so much more about her and where this goes.
The inclusive cast remains one of the series' greatest strengths. Different cultures, LGBTQIA+, neurodiversity, a functionally mute character with a writing board, all handled with the same matter-of-fact naturalness as in book one. Particularly well done is how Anequs's romantic interests, both a young man and a young woman, are handled. There's no agonised "I can't choose" drama. For her, the question is simply why not pursue both? The way each person responds to that, one shaped by a strict Anglish upbringing, one far more open, feels organic rather than forced. Adjusting to a genuinely new idea doesn't happen in a flash, and the book respects that.
Anequs herself is still extremely capable and morally well-calibrated, even if she occasionally misjudges others. She's still an absolute joy to spend time with, and if anything, a few more genuine mistakes would just make her even better.
Pacing-wise, the book spends a satisfying three quarters on character and world-building rather than action, which works well. Then the final stretch speeds up, and the big conflict at the end felt a touch rushed. It closes on a cliffhanger: one conflict is over, but its repercussions are clearly waiting in book three. I can't wait.
To Ride a Rising Storm is a worthy continuation of a series I recommend without hesitation. Dragons, colonialism, and resistance, with a cast that reflects the full spectrum of humanity and a world that keeps getting richer, Blackgoose is building something special here.
The second installment in the Nampeshiweisit series picks up where To Shape a Dragon's Breath left off, and if you loved the first book, you'll find a lot to enjoy here, while also noticing some shifts in what the story is doing.
One thing worth noting for non-German readers: the Anglish culture in this series leans heavily on German language and naming conventions. Frau as a form of address, dragons named Gerhard, skiltakraft working with Salzsäure and Essigsäure. For English readers this presumably adds an exotic flavour that underlines the colonial western influence the story is built on, and it fits the world very well. As a German reader, that particular exotic effect didn't land for me personally, but I genuinely appreciate that the German used is accurate and often deliberately archaic, which is far from a given.
The story has more action than book one, with tensions rising sharply as the conservative imperialist forces push harder to keep indigenous people exactly where they want them: downtrodden, with fewer rights, and firmly reminded of their place in an Anglish-shaped world. There is bloodshed. The clash between characters who can and cannot see past their own position in society adds real depth, and it does so on two levels: characters shape the world, and the world shapes the characters right back, making both feel richer and more layered than before.
A highlight for me was the introduction of another dragon who doesn't fit Anglish standards, and her rider, who comes from a cultural background much closer to that of Anequs and her people. What makes this thread especially intriguing is that she doesn't seem as forced into the Anglish mould, and is far more in step with her original culture than Anequs and her people manage, living as they do under the Anglish thumb. I want to learn so much more about her and where this goes.
The inclusive cast remains one of the series' greatest strengths. Different cultures, LGBTQIA+, neurodiversity, a functionally mute character with a writing board, all handled with the same matter-of-fact naturalness as in book one. Particularly well done is how Anequs's romantic interests, both a young man and a young woman, are handled. There's no agonised "I can't choose" drama. For her, the question is simply why not pursue both? The way each person responds to that, one shaped by a strict Anglish upbringing, one far more open, feels organic rather than forced. Adjusting to a genuinely new idea doesn't happen in a flash, and the book respects that.
Anequs herself is still extremely capable and morally well-calibrated, even if she occasionally misjudges others. She's still an absolute joy to spend time with, and if anything, a few more genuine mistakes would just make her even better.
Pacing-wise, the book spends a satisfying three quarters on character and world-building rather than action, which works well. Then the final stretch speeds up, and the big conflict at the end felt a touch rushed. It closes on a cliffhanger: one conflict is over, but its repercussions are clearly waiting in book three. I can't wait.
To Ride a Rising Storm is a worthy continuation of a series I recommend without hesitation. Dragons, colonialism, and resistance, with a cast that reflects the full spectrum of humanity and a world that keeps getting richer, Blackgoose is building something special here.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
3.5 rounded up.
After absolutely loving To Shape A Dragon's Breath, this book became a highly anticipated read. What brought down the rating was the first 80% of the book felt very slow and dialogue-heavy to me without much action. There were a lot of moments when I wished I knew more about what was happening outside of Anequs' POV, given the rising political tensions that were developed at the end of book one and continue into this book. The last 20% of the book redeemed the entirety of the novel for me, and set up the next book really well.
Regarding characters, I liked that this book introduced new characters-- specifically two other adult dragoneers who do not fit the same mold as the dragoneer academy professors-- so that Anequs can interact with other dragoneering perspectives and see how not everyone wholeheartedly buys into the "proper" way of things. Anequs also has a new roommate, Jadi, and she's a fun new character as well. Now that Anequs is more well-known after the events of book one, she's interacting with more people in the school and we see how the politics of the outside world influence the students even more.
When it comes to relationships, I was a bit disappointed. While I greatly appreciate Anequs' headstrong and practical personality and refusal to compromise her ways and zero hesitancy to call out the Anglish nonsense, it became frustrating when she just assumes her friends/love interests would agree 1000% with her time and time again. This bogs down the plot quite a bit throughout the book because a repetitive pattern emerges: Anequs decides on principle someone else should have a conversation about something that she feels strongly about and the conversation goes poorly because that person doesn't share her perspective completely, and then she has to have another conversation about said thing all over again about why that went poorly.
The book does a great job at expanding the various Anglish political spheres and I liked how this book set up for the next one. I also loved seeing the dragons we knew from book one grow up more and become more of their own. I'm definitely looking forward to book 3! A huge thank you to the publisher for the eARC in exchange for my honest thoughts and Colleen for buddy reading this with me :)
After absolutely loving To Shape A Dragon's Breath, this book became a highly anticipated read. What brought down the rating was the first 80% of the book felt very slow and dialogue-heavy to me without much action. There were a lot of moments when I wished I knew more about what was happening outside of Anequs' POV, given the rising political tensions that were developed at the end of book one and continue into this book. The last 20% of the book redeemed the entirety of the novel for me, and set up the next book really well.
Regarding characters, I liked that this book introduced new characters-- specifically two other adult dragoneers who do not fit the same mold as the dragoneer academy professors-- so that Anequs can interact with other dragoneering perspectives and see how not everyone wholeheartedly buys into the "proper" way of things. Anequs also has a new roommate, Jadi, and she's a fun new character as well. Now that Anequs is more well-known after the events of book one, she's interacting with more people in the school and we see how the politics of the outside world influence the students even more.
When it comes to relationships, I was a bit disappointed. While I greatly appreciate Anequs' headstrong and practical personality and refusal to compromise her ways and zero hesitancy to call out the Anglish nonsense, it became frustrating when she just assumes her friends/love interests would agree 1000% with her time and time again. This bogs down the plot quite a bit throughout the book because a repetitive pattern emerges: Anequs decides on principle someone else should have a conversation about something that she feels strongly about and the conversation goes poorly because that person doesn't share her perspective completely, and then she has to have another conversation about said thing all over again about why that went poorly.
The book does a great job at expanding the various Anglish political spheres and I liked how this book set up for the next one. I also loved seeing the dragons we knew from book one grow up more and become more of their own. I'm definitely looking forward to book 3! A huge thank you to the publisher for the eARC in exchange for my honest thoughts and Colleen for buddy reading this with me :)
February 3, 2026
Mayhaps you have seen me complain in the past about “lazy” world building. I may have said something vitriolic about authors who slightly change the names of country’s, keep its history, and do nothing else with it beyond the bare minimum. Is it Ernest? Is it satire? Does anyone care?
Yes! I do! Nothing irks me more than wasted potential. But I am getting away from my point. ANYWAY! If I said those things—and I did—then you may conclude I’ve abandoned those beliefs given this book’s 5 star rating. You would be wrong! Those books still deserve to be dragged to hell. However I will leave that task in the capable hands—pages?— of this book and its brilliant author.
They both deserve the victory lap for the wit, attention, and care that burst out of the page. It’s like every introduction to a new concept is laced with tongue in cheek nuances that will seem obvious to those in the know. EVERYTHING from the playwright who was Not William Shakespeare™ to the study that definitely was not chemistry was presented with a wink. The fact that this world’s Japan is the name Japanese people call their own country in our world was delicious. No detail of this world is left unturned and I love it!
What’s even better is that no reader is left out. The more the topic is discussed, the clearer its real life counterpart becomes. There were several instances where I knew I should know what they were talking about but remained confused. And I was never left hanging. Eventually, an associated word or cognate would pop up to familiarize me in this tilted replica world. This new world if you will.
Bad puns aside. I stand by my initial assessment of lazy writers and present this book as my proof! I can’t wait for more.
Yes! I do! Nothing irks me more than wasted potential. But I am getting away from my point. ANYWAY! If I said those things—and I did—then you may conclude I’ve abandoned those beliefs given this book’s 5 star rating. You would be wrong! Those books still deserve to be dragged to hell. However I will leave that task in the capable hands—pages?— of this book and its brilliant author.
They both deserve the victory lap for the wit, attention, and care that burst out of the page. It’s like every introduction to a new concept is laced with tongue in cheek nuances that will seem obvious to those in the know. EVERYTHING from the playwright who was Not William Shakespeare™ to the study that definitely was not chemistry was presented with a wink. The fact that this world’s Japan is the name Japanese people call their own country in our world was delicious. No detail of this world is left unturned and I love it!
What’s even better is that no reader is left out. The more the topic is discussed, the clearer its real life counterpart becomes. There were several instances where I knew I should know what they were talking about but remained confused. And I was never left hanging. Eventually, an associated word or cognate would pop up to familiarize me in this tilted replica world. This new world if you will.
Bad puns aside. I stand by my initial assessment of lazy writers and present this book as my proof! I can’t wait for more.
February 17, 2026
thank you to netgalley and del rey publishing for an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.
when i saw that to ride a rising storm was on netgalley, i jumped at the chance to read the sequel of to shape a dragon’s breath early. it was one of those books that, the more i though back on it, the more my love for the story grew. so by the time the sequel was close to publication i was absolutely itching to pick this up and be back in anequs’ world.
the first book did an incredible job discussing the impact of colonization and imperialism on native communities. it did not shy away from discussing the lasting impacts for these communities. and the sequel continued this discussion perfectly. now that anequs has settled into this academic institution, we were really able to see how that impact was apparent, to not only her, but also to theod. i really appreciated how we had more of an insight to how him growing up in this anglish society had stripped him from his culture, especially with how he perceived relationships. anequs was very open and willing to talk to theod regarding polyamorous relationships, something that is commonplace in their community. while i do feel she pressured him a bit too much in the beginning, she eventually learned how (and why) he may be feeling differently about it and let him process on his own timing. so, it was really beautiful to see how they were eventually able to have these conversations and move forward, theod and liberty both aware of their respective relationships with anqeus.
and not only for that, but we were able to learn more about other native communities within the books, how their mythology was similar (or not) and how they all had these similar foundations that weren’t as visible in the anglish society, mostly with their practices dragoneering. i’m blanking on her name, but anequs being introduced to the dragon rider from the other tribe allowed for so much needed world and character building growth, which i really loved seeing.
i think, unfortunately, there was so much slow progress for the first half of the book. it felt almost as if not much had happened for anequs and theod during their “independent studies”. i personally love the academy setting the most, seeing how they learn to become dragon riders and how the political tensions continue to grow. but they were so removed from any of those concerns for the first half of the book that i personally found it a little bit difficult to stay intrigued with the story progression. i was essentially dragging my feet for a large portion of the book. but once the action really picked up in the last quarter of the book, i was once again extremely hooked. so in the end, i liked this a little less than i did to shape a dragon’s breath. but i will still be very excited to read the third book, especially given the high point we’re left off at.
when i saw that to ride a rising storm was on netgalley, i jumped at the chance to read the sequel of to shape a dragon’s breath early. it was one of those books that, the more i though back on it, the more my love for the story grew. so by the time the sequel was close to publication i was absolutely itching to pick this up and be back in anequs’ world.
the first book did an incredible job discussing the impact of colonization and imperialism on native communities. it did not shy away from discussing the lasting impacts for these communities. and the sequel continued this discussion perfectly. now that anequs has settled into this academic institution, we were really able to see how that impact was apparent, to not only her, but also to theod. i really appreciated how we had more of an insight to how him growing up in this anglish society had stripped him from his culture, especially with how he perceived relationships. anequs was very open and willing to talk to theod regarding polyamorous relationships, something that is commonplace in their community. while i do feel she pressured him a bit too much in the beginning, she eventually learned how (and why) he may be feeling differently about it and let him process on his own timing. so, it was really beautiful to see how they were eventually able to have these conversations and move forward, theod and liberty both aware of their respective relationships with anqeus.
and not only for that, but we were able to learn more about other native communities within the books, how their mythology was similar (or not) and how they all had these similar foundations that weren’t as visible in the anglish society, mostly with their practices dragoneering. i’m blanking on her name, but anequs being introduced to the dragon rider from the other tribe allowed for so much needed world and character building growth, which i really loved seeing.
i think, unfortunately, there was so much slow progress for the first half of the book. it felt almost as if not much had happened for anequs and theod during their “independent studies”. i personally love the academy setting the most, seeing how they learn to become dragon riders and how the political tensions continue to grow. but they were so removed from any of those concerns for the first half of the book that i personally found it a little bit difficult to stay intrigued with the story progression. i was essentially dragging my feet for a large portion of the book. but once the action really picked up in the last quarter of the book, i was once again extremely hooked. so in the end, i liked this a little less than i did to shape a dragon’s breath. but i will still be very excited to read the third book, especially given the high point we’re left off at.
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