3*
While I didn’t enjoy this novel quite as much as the first book, this was still a solid sequel to the series. It took some unexpected turns on our journey to the dwarven city, which were fun and engaging overall.
However, I am concerned with the search of the artifacts that are needed to close the portal. Malek only had a lead for 2 artifacts (one they’ve already acquired – the cup) and one that the dwarves may have. But there are so many more artifacts to find, and they seem to quickly be running out of time to find them. This is the main overarching premise of the entire series. Find the artifacts, re-seal the portal, save the world. And yet, I’m worried about how the plotline with the artifacts is playing out. By the end of this book, Malek and Sabine can add finding artifact #2 to their cache (the pearl). However, this seems like a really convenient plot device. I hated that this was the goddess’ “condition” to helping the tree/saving the Fae city. Despite their quest (which the merpeople were aware of), I couldn’t see the mer ever willingly offering up the pearl to Sabine and Malek on their own. In fact, I expected the group to add another cohort from the merpeople to their group to act as a delegate (like perhaps Pearl herself). I didn’t expect them to hand it over so easily, and I think that the fact that they did so solely because Sabine helped some merpeople that they didn’t even know and hadn’t been aware of just seemed too easy.
Plus, there are only 3 more books to the series, so only gaining 1 artifact per novel isn’t really an option. The timeline of the artifacts needs to be sped up a little bit if they do, in fact, hope to save the world (keeping in mind that they only have a lead for 1 more of them to begin with).
To go along with this theme, I’m still not completely thrilled with how side-tracked our characters became within this story. To save their friends, they made a deal with the mer to find Pearl (the lover of one of their leaders). Even though this was apparently a good thing in the end, it seemed to cause Sabine and Malek to go on a winding goose chase that only happened to all work out in the end. While it didn’t feel like a waste of time, exactly, it felt like the author was getting a bit off track with her plot and I wanted to snap her back into staying focused.
One of the reasons this seemed to be a choice for the author was to help Sabine and Malek get some alone time along their journey. I can’t say I hated this completely, but honestly, with how much more they had going on and the interruptions from Blossom anyway, it was a bit anti-climatic in a sense. Yes, Sabine and Malek finally take a plunge, but it felt rushed, cut short, and immediately afterwards, their problems get brought back up without either of them hardly having time to take a breath.
I’m also concerned by how much Sabine keeps changing her bond with Malek. At the end of this novel, we find out exactly how dangerous this could end up being and how steep the consequences may turn out to be. It’s also frustrating that everyone else around them seems more aware of the fact that a serious “blood bond” (i.e. mate bond?) has been established between the pair, than either of them understand. If Sabine didn’t know she was making Malek her “mate,” then that’s a pretty huge issue – especially when it affects her magic and there’s something wrong with it now. If she didn’t know exactly what she was doing, she shouldn’t have done it, and the situation that caused this entire thing just didn’t seem severe enough to warrant it.
I continue to like Sabine, but I think that this is a good example of her self-sacrificing nature that will come back to bite her. For someone who’s also lived a life where sure, she’s made connections (and possibly even helped an orphan or two along the way), Sabine has kept herself pretty isolated from forming deep attachments to others. While I love that Malek was an exception to that rule and he’s somehow weaseled his way into her affections, I’m getting annoyed with how many others Sabine is pledging her loyalty to after such a quick introduction. It’s like she has a hero complex and needs to save everyone. This may be admirable in theory, but Sabine (who’s kind of on the run and in hiding from her family and will be hunted down by the Wild Hunt again soon), isn’t in a practical position to make this offer to every Tom, Dick, and Harry she meets. This isn’t stopping her within this story, but it makes the novel seem a little less credible at the end of the day.
Malek is almost glaringly perfect. This makes him one of the easiest people to fall in love with, but there were times when he/his relationship with Sabine (and their communication with one another) seem to be skirting the edges of too perfect. While I love that the conflict happening in the book is focused more on outside forces vs an internal conflict between the couple, I think that just a little conflict or frustration with one another is a bit necessary to make this seem realistic. Malek is a dragon and Sabine is a fae. They come from totally different worlds and cultures with different customs and magic. You’re seriously telling me there’s never any accidental miscommunication or lack of understanding between the two? As you’re “in” the story, this point falls away, but every time their differences are brought up – and the unpromising future between them – I get reminded of this once again. I read one review that said that without the drama and chaos surrounding the two of them, they’d be the most boring couple imaginable, and I kind of see their point. Even though this makes them sweet and lovable, and you can’t help but root for them, the flawlessness doesn’t seem real.
Still, their relationship is endearing and I’m happy with the progression it’s made throughout this story.
This book had non-stop action. It was pretty easy to get caught up in all of the twists this book was taking and I’m glad that Sabine and Malek are headed toward the dwarven city once more.