If you pick up All Havocs Eve looking for spice, you will not be disappointed. This short story is an absolute inferno, earning a solid 5/5 on the spice scale - I genuinely didn't realize so much sex could be packed into such a short page count! The author delivers non-stop, intense heat right from the start.
However, for me, the overwhelming focus on the spicy scenes came at the expense of the narrative structure and development. I would have loved to see the story focus more sharply on Havoc's birthday night and the events surrounding it, rather than the relentless sexual escapades. The story felt a bit disjointed because it jumped around between the different characters and scenarios so frequently. It needed a little less time between the sheets and a lot more glue holding the plot together.
Bottom line: If you prioritize extreme, immediate spice above all else and don't mind a fragmented plot, this is your quick, hot read.