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Fetish & Fantasy #1
Watching Sin
After fifteen years as a bland housewife, Alana is ready to shake up her life by fulfilling her darkest fantasy. She wants to be watched. Her exhibitionist streak is ready to break free, and she knows exactly whom she wants for her voyeur.
Doug would give his wife, Alana, the moon if she asked, so he’s more than willing to participate in a public threesome at a fetish party if it makes her kinky wishes come true. His business partner and best friend, Killian is the wild card in their plan.
A businessman first, and a trained Dominant second, Killian never gets tied down to one submissive. He’s a lover with commitment issues, but he doesn’t hesitate to help fulfill Doug and Alana’s fantasies. Once the fantasy is set in motion, the three players must decide if watching sin is enough…
Warning: Adult Themes-For Mature Audiences. Contains language and actions some may deem offensive. Sexually explicit content. M/M/F, graphic language, consensual BDSM, public sex, HFN. Short story Approx. 14,500 words
Doug would give his wife, Alana, the moon if she asked, so he’s more than willing to participate in a public threesome at a fetish party if it makes her kinky wishes come true. His business partner and best friend, Killian is the wild card in their plan.
A businessman first, and a trained Dominant second, Killian never gets tied down to one submissive. He’s a lover with commitment issues, but he doesn’t hesitate to help fulfill Doug and Alana’s fantasies. Once the fantasy is set in motion, the three players must decide if watching sin is enough…
Warning: Adult Themes-For Mature Audiences. Contains language and actions some may deem offensive. Sexually explicit content. M/M/F, graphic language, consensual BDSM, public sex, HFN. Short story Approx. 14,500 words
48 pages, ebook
First published June 12, 2014
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About the author
Lori King
75 books719 followersBest-selling author, Lori King, is also a full-time wife and mother of three boys. Although she rarely has time to just enjoy feminine pursuits; at heart she is a hopeless romantic. She spends her days dreaming up Alpha men, and her nights telling their stories. An admitted TV and book junkie, she can be found relaxing with a steamy story, or binging in an entire season of some show online. She gives her parents all the credit for her unique sense of humor and acceptance of all forms of love. There are no two loves alike, but you can love more than one with your whole heart.
With the motto: Live, Laugh, and Love like today is your only chance, she will continue to write as long as you continue to read. Thank you for taking the time to indulge in a good Happily Ever After with her. Find out more about her current projects at http://lorikingbooks.com, or look her up on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/LoriKingBooks or Twitter: https://twitter.com/LoriKingBooks.
With the motto: Live, Laugh, and Love like today is your only chance, she will continue to write as long as you continue to read. Thank you for taking the time to indulge in a good Happily Ever After with her. Find out more about her current projects at http://lorikingbooks.com, or look her up on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/LoriKingBooks or Twitter: https://twitter.com/LoriKingBooks.
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February 28, 2016
3.5 kinky stars!
A quick hot dirty read... ;)
M/M/F & public sex...
A quick hot dirty read... ;)
M/M/F & public sex...
June 16, 2014
Amazing for a short read, I read it in a few hours loved it all. It was fun and interesting and kept its pace. I adored all 3 characters, being married for so long Alana never really thought nothing was wrong in her relationship, Doug loved his wife but wanted spice up their life...as a couple they started going to “kinky parties” not to participate but to watch. Doug always hoped that Alana would changer her mind and want to join in the fun. Killian a Dom that goes both ways even though Doug is his partner and best friend, Killigan would love to collar both Doug and Alana.
Besides being to short, Id have loved to see all of them actually together for a pages, other than that I loved it. Its one of few shorts I actually rated 5 stars. Ms King wrote in a way you could feel the apprehension, the need … the lust and passion. Killian literally oozed with the need to possess.. not only Alana but Doug as well. The long time married couple really had no big issue in letting Killian control the scenes. There was some BDSM elements, more control but yes you could tell who the Dom was and who the submissive was. For now this seems to be a stand alone, but I will be watching to see what else Ms. King does. This was a new author to me, but I wont have a problem spreading the word of her talent. Id recommend this book as well.... Enjoy
Besides being to short, Id have loved to see all of them actually together for a pages, other than that I loved it. Its one of few shorts I actually rated 5 stars. Ms King wrote in a way you could feel the apprehension, the need … the lust and passion. Killian literally oozed with the need to possess.. not only Alana but Doug as well. The long time married couple really had no big issue in letting Killian control the scenes. There was some BDSM elements, more control but yes you could tell who the Dom was and who the submissive was. For now this seems to be a stand alone, but I will be watching to see what else Ms. King does. This was a new author to me, but I wont have a problem spreading the word of her talent. Id recommend this book as well.... Enjoy
August 15, 2014
So Hot
So Hot
the negative first . . . much much too short. the possibilities for their future are unlimited. now for the positives, so fun to see a Dom become warm, loving, compassionate and owning up to his own needs. it doesn't come out how human dom's really are very often. this made him all the more loveable.
So Hot
the negative first . . . much much too short. the possibilities for their future are unlimited. now for the positives, so fun to see a Dom become warm, loving, compassionate and owning up to his own needs. it doesn't come out how human dom's really are very often. this made him all the more loveable.
November 6, 2014
Loved this love story
a married couple attend his business partner/best friends lust party. when the couple decide to have him join them. first to watch and then later to explore. but true love comes through and shows us that you can love more than one person. Kristy dean
a married couple attend his business partner/best friends lust party. when the couple decide to have him join them. first to watch and then later to explore. but true love comes through and shows us that you can love more than one person. Kristy dean
June 14, 2014
Lori you should write more MMF story's "Fanning over here"
This was a very HOT read. Loved it.
This was a very HOT read. Loved it.
June 17, 2014
Incredibly hot!!!! This is a must read for erotic romance readers, it does not disappoint. Lori King proves yet once again what an amazing author she is.
June 26, 2014
Great short story about a happily married couple who decides to include the husbands business partner in exploring their kinky side. Lots of boundaries are pushed with a happy ending.
July 19, 2014
Very, very hot! Loved it!
August 2, 2014
Brilliant short story. Oh so HOT!! Really enjoyed the love story behind it. Can't wait to read book 2.
September 10, 2014
Wow, just wow. A very hot short story.
August 26, 2019
Stepping out of your comfort zone
This book goes from zero to hot in less than the first page. The author has really outdone herself with this book. The story is short and sweet and perfect for someone not looking for the prestory before getting right to the heat. It may be a little unorthodox, but the author did a fantastic job of bringing these three characters exactly where they were meant to be. I can’t wait for her next book.
This book goes from zero to hot in less than the first page. The author has really outdone herself with this book. The story is short and sweet and perfect for someone not looking for the prestory before getting right to the heat. It may be a little unorthodox, but the author did a fantastic job of bringing these three characters exactly where they were meant to be. I can’t wait for her next book.
June 14, 2014
Lori King has written another wonderful story! I love this one. A nice glimpse into another side of marriage and desires.
Alana and Doug have been married for awhile and are starting to explore and spice up their marriage, or at least their sex life. The start attending a sex club and watching others have sex. Not ready to do more they come back and watch a few times. That is when Killian enters the picture. He is Doug's business partner and Alana finds him attractive. After Killian makes a move on her at dinner and her husband can tell she would like to include him, they ask him to join in. Alana knows that Doug is also intrigued by being with Killian after talking during a dream and calling out his name. Carefully they begin, but when Killian talks about being a Dom and wanting them both to submit to him, can they?
Well worth the read. Different from Lori King's other books and series (although also ménage), but wonderfully written. I love being able to glimpse into each of the characters heads and see what is going on and their thoughts. Sometimes when authors write this way it can be confusing, but Mrs. King pulls it off beautifully! Cannot wait to see more like this from her!
Alana and Doug have been married for awhile and are starting to explore and spice up their marriage, or at least their sex life. The start attending a sex club and watching others have sex. Not ready to do more they come back and watch a few times. That is when Killian enters the picture. He is Doug's business partner and Alana finds him attractive. After Killian makes a move on her at dinner and her husband can tell she would like to include him, they ask him to join in. Alana knows that Doug is also intrigued by being with Killian after talking during a dream and calling out his name. Carefully they begin, but when Killian talks about being a Dom and wanting them both to submit to him, can they?
Well worth the read. Different from Lori King's other books and series (although also ménage), but wonderfully written. I love being able to glimpse into each of the characters heads and see what is going on and their thoughts. Sometimes when authors write this way it can be confusing, but Mrs. King pulls it off beautifully! Cannot wait to see more like this from her!
August 6, 2014
Holly Hell! Hot. This is an extremely short story so every single page sizzles.
I love the whole fantasy world of the fetish party and the committed monogamous couple tip toeing into the deep end of the pool. Loved this line.
“One of these days he would have to write a thank you letter to the publishers for keeping his cock in working form, for tonight, he had other things to focus on.”
I suspect will be a few owed thank you notes out there for this one as well. There is one thing to fantasize about it, but to follow through is a whole other story. This is that story.
Loved the varied POV. Seeing the situation from all three characters really made the story steamy. The story is so short I really don’t want to give anything away so you can enjoy the whole thing yourself.
What I will say is this. Sometimes you don’t know what you like or need until you try it.
Loved and will most definitely look for more from this author in the future.
I love the whole fantasy world of the fetish party and the committed monogamous couple tip toeing into the deep end of the pool. Loved this line.
“One of these days he would have to write a thank you letter to the publishers for keeping his cock in working form, for tonight, he had other things to focus on.”
I suspect will be a few owed thank you notes out there for this one as well. There is one thing to fantasize about it, but to follow through is a whole other story. This is that story.
Loved the varied POV. Seeing the situation from all three characters really made the story steamy. The story is so short I really don’t want to give anything away so you can enjoy the whole thing yourself.
What I will say is this. Sometimes you don’t know what you like or need until you try it.
Loved and will most definitely look for more from this author in the future.
August 8, 2014
I am going to call this book, YUMMO! Because it truly was yummy. A very spicy read.
This book is about a couple Doug and Alana, married 15 years that love each other to pieces , deciding to spice up their marriage. Doug's business partner Killian is a Dom , that has wanted both his partner and his partners wife on their knees, on their back, every way a man can. For months Doug and Alana would go to these 'sex events' and just watch, until one night Alana wants to be watched as her and Doug have sex, but wants Killian too watch them. This is the night Killian has been waiting for. He helps guide them threw the voyuerism at the event, at which they all become so hot they take it home, oh man those were hot scenes at home!
I really loved this yummo book! The story was cute and the characters were each well written . I loved that this book gives all three of their points of view as well. If you like steam, this is your book!
This book is about a couple Doug and Alana, married 15 years that love each other to pieces , deciding to spice up their marriage. Doug's business partner Killian is a Dom , that has wanted both his partner and his partners wife on their knees, on their back, every way a man can. For months Doug and Alana would go to these 'sex events' and just watch, until one night Alana wants to be watched as her and Doug have sex, but wants Killian too watch them. This is the night Killian has been waiting for. He helps guide them threw the voyuerism at the event, at which they all become so hot they take it home, oh man those were hot scenes at home!
I really loved this yummo book! The story was cute and the characters were each well written . I loved that this book gives all three of their points of view as well. If you like steam, this is your book!
July 18, 2015
Watching Sin: (Fetish & Fantasy #1)
By: Lori King
4/5 stars
Doug & Alana have been married for 15 years and have begun to attend “kink parties/events” to stoke some of their forbidden fantasies and desires. They haven’t ever engaged in public sex or sexual acts. But their desires are becoming stronger.
The night where everything comes to a head, is when Killian is present. He is business partners with Doug, and is a Dominant, where both Doug & Alana are submissive. Killian has had his eye on both of them and wants both of them in his bed. Alana has long been attracted to Killian and has noticed that Doug is also secretly attracted to Killian although it’s something he hasn’t ever admitted.
This is a short, hot erotic story that includes public sex, MFM & MMF. The story includes an HFN, but the other short stories in this series aren’t a continuation from this one. So I’m not sure if this is the end of Killian, Doug & Alan or not. But either way, they are hot!
By: Lori King
4/5 stars
Doug & Alana have been married for 15 years and have begun to attend “kink parties/events” to stoke some of their forbidden fantasies and desires. They haven’t ever engaged in public sex or sexual acts. But their desires are becoming stronger.
The night where everything comes to a head, is when Killian is present. He is business partners with Doug, and is a Dominant, where both Doug & Alana are submissive. Killian has had his eye on both of them and wants both of them in his bed. Alana has long been attracted to Killian and has noticed that Doug is also secretly attracted to Killian although it’s something he hasn’t ever admitted.
This is a short, hot erotic story that includes public sex, MFM & MMF. The story includes an HFN, but the other short stories in this series aren’t a continuation from this one. So I’m not sure if this is the end of Killian, Doug & Alan or not. But either way, they are hot!
June 16, 2014
Doug and Alana have been married for 15 yrs and very much in love. They both want to add something so Alana has decided that she wants to have a sexual encounter in public. Doug will deny her nothing and they begin their journey to letting out their kinky side. Neither really expected that Doug's business partner Killian would find the public scene such a turn on or want to join them for one night only. However, after one night they will all discover something about themselves and each other. They will all have to decide was one night together enough?
This is short story one where dreams come true and fantasies are fulfilled. A very well written story one that will have you wanting more!
This is short story one where dreams come true and fantasies are fulfilled. A very well written story one that will have you wanting more!
January 23, 2015
Doug and Alana are married for 15 years and have been voyeurs at fetish parties for the last four months. Killian, Doug’s friend and business partner (also party host) is a Dom, who has been anticipating the day he will dominate them. Doug wants to please Alana and on this night consents to her exhibitionist fantasy, which leads to MMF with Killian.
Although, many men dream of having two women only a few would be willing to share their wives with another man. The MM part was a little surprising.
The story is told from the view of all three characters which I like. I was right there with them experiencing it all.
Delightfully wicked!
Although, many men dream of having two women only a few would be willing to share their wives with another man. The MM part was a little surprising.
The story is told from the view of all three characters which I like. I was right there with them experiencing it all.
Delightfully wicked!
June 14, 2014
Batteries Not Included
From the first page of this sizzling book I was entranced. The chemistry was so explosive I knew there should have been a warning label. Doug and Alana are both infatuated with their business partner Killian and vice versa. Killian is a Alpha Male with vulnerabilities that you glimpse throughout this sexy read. I wanted to stay submerged in this wonderful erotic novella world for as long as possible, but as they say all good things come to an end. I just hope we get more of this scorching hot trio!!!!
From the first page of this sizzling book I was entranced. The chemistry was so explosive I knew there should have been a warning label. Doug and Alana are both infatuated with their business partner Killian and vice versa. Killian is a Alpha Male with vulnerabilities that you glimpse throughout this sexy read. I wanted to stay submerged in this wonderful erotic novella world for as long as possible, but as they say all good things come to an end. I just hope we get more of this scorching hot trio!!!!
May 28, 2015
Watching Sin is a quick read introducing readers to Killian's fetish parties.
Killian's business partner Doug and his wife Alana attend the parties to watch an then head home. Until one night Alana decides it's time to push herself a bit and Doug is all for it, so is Killian once his participation is requested.
A Dominant with commitment issues, his best friend and business partner and his wife have to decide if this can be a one time thing or if there's more between them that's worth exploring.
For such a short story it packs a punch. There's plenty to keep you turning the pages!
Killian's business partner Doug and his wife Alana attend the parties to watch an then head home. Until one night Alana decides it's time to push herself a bit and Doug is all for it, so is Killian once his participation is requested.
A Dominant with commitment issues, his best friend and business partner and his wife have to decide if this can be a one time thing or if there's more between them that's worth exploring.
For such a short story it packs a punch. There's plenty to keep you turning the pages!
May 30, 2015
What a HOT short read! Lori has definitely brought to life this story.
Killian has been a dominant for a long time and has envied his best friend's marriage and connection to his wife for a long time. He doesn't want commitment from anyone.
Doug and Alana have been coming to Killian's parties for the past few months and now what to go further. They ask Kiliian to be a part of this.
After this night, all three of them won't be the same.
I was given a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review - Naughty Book Eden
Killian has been a dominant for a long time and has envied his best friend's marriage and connection to his wife for a long time. He doesn't want commitment from anyone.
Doug and Alana have been coming to Killian's parties for the past few months and now what to go further. They ask Kiliian to be a part of this.
After this night, all three of them won't be the same.
I was given a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review - Naughty Book Eden
June 17, 2014
In Watching Sin by Lori King, Alana and Doug attend fetish parties hosted by Doug's business partner Killian. Alana has finally worked up enough nerve to participate with her husband and Killian. Hmmm...this is a hard one to review because as a novella with the plot focusing on one night, I don't want to reveal too much because it might spoil the story for someone. I will just say the story is hot, hot, hot with a interesting twist for Doug & Killian. Highly recommend.
March 2, 2015
Loved this. Loved the plot which was totally different from anything else I have read recently. The characters are strong and well rounded. The fact that we have a married couple who are willing to explore their sexual fantasies, and even more so that it is with the husband's best friend and business partner, of whom both have a "crush" on, is truly exciting and HOT! Well written, easy to follow and keeps your attention throughout. A great short, erotic story
May 7, 2015
I just finished Watching Sin and this was a hot read. Alana and Doug have been married for 15 years and she is looking to spice up their relationship. They have been going to a club and getting used to watching other couples when she finally decides it time for them. She will only step across that line with Killian, Doug best friend and business partner. You just have to read and see what happens. Trust me it's a quick yet sexy story that will keep you entertained.
Story 5
Sex 5
Overall 5
Story 5
Sex 5
Overall 5
June 13, 2014
A short interesting read about one couples venture in exhibitionism. The characters are well defined in this intense read. One night, a married couple and a friend, leads to much more then was expected. Very exciting story that I enjoyed and look forward to more from this author,
Received copy for review.
Received copy for review.
July 3, 2014
Red hot little tale of fantasy fulfilment. Be warned, you'll need a fan! This wasn't just about sex though. Lori did a great job of making me care about the characters. Not a mean feat in a book this size.
Great read :-)
Great read :-)
September 2, 2014
super short story that definitely leaves you wanting more!
September 2, 2014
This was an incredible story! I loved all of the characters it was quick but still got me emotionally invested.
July 16, 2015
Really...
Enjoyed this story. The characters are realistic and gave me hope that a merger of three is possible. I'm going to get more by this author.
Enjoyed this story. The characters are realistic and gave me hope that a merger of three is possible. I'm going to get more by this author.
May 17, 2015
a sizzling tale. loved the story but wish it would have been longer, sad to see it end.
May 27, 2015
This was my first Lori King book, but OMG.....it will not be the last!! Sexy, erotic and emotionally deep, this story was short but by no means lacking.
Ms King definitely has a new fan!!!
Ms King definitely has a new fan!!!
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