Unfortunately I had to DNF around page 146. The story feels aimless, like I’ve been reading and going nowhere for the past couple of chapters. Doesn’t have a clear plot, story doesn’t go along with the title or synopsis. Events are meaningless to the plot, inconsistent or doesn’t deliver any real impact or development. Characters’ personalities(all of them), the storyline, syntaxis are completely inconsistent, feels like there is no clear idea how to portray the characters’ personas and feelings, and they act one way in a page, and completely opposite on the other. Found a couple of hiccups in logistics (introducing the same character twice, characters being in two places at once, few grammatical errors, characters acting completely different at how they’re being described or presented) it just made it impossible to follow along :(