It is difficult to create a good romance comic. Well, the genre is limited, isn’t it? Either the couple finds love or they fall apart. They are not going to fall apart very often, so there really is only one place for the story to go, making the endings predictable.
Story wise, then, it is a matter of how the couple gets there, the obstacles they overcome to find love. The great gift to romance fiction from Shakespeare in his comedies and Jane Austin in her novels was to make the obstacle something in the character of the lovers. The stories in this collection go this route far more often than not. One problem, though, is that the characters are comic book one dimensional, more bad habits with hearts of gold than real people. The style is overwrought and overwritten. An example from the last story is, “There was only one word for Mike’s Poolroom! - - UNCLEAN! The smoke-filled air, the malcontents who breathed it and the obscene language erupting harshly in the coiling murk were the visual expressions of the word.” There is a lot of bad writing in these stories.
The non-super hero work of Simon and Kirby is always interesting to study, until you read too much of it, and I give the first few stories a break for that, and it is nice to see some artists best known for other work take a crack at romance stories. I especially enjoyed the work of Mort Meskin, Bruno Premiani, and the great Leonard Starr. This collection ought to exist as a showcase for these odd stories, but on balance, it must be acknowledged that these stories are not very good.