On Riddleston Road each house reaches three storeys high, with smart gabled roofs and neat garden paths unfurling from pastel coloured front doors. Wide, sash windows stare outwards from the brick facades, revealing a glimpse of beautiful interiors. And concealing dark secrets.
Today a new family has moved into number twenty-three. A family who shouldn't be there.
As Iris stacks boxes in the hallway, she knows she has made a mistake in coming here. This house will mean her son will get the future he deserves. That will make everything she's done worth it.
But someone knows Iris's secret and what she did to get her dream home... Would she kill to keep it?
This is the story of Iris, a wife and mother who is completely devoted to her husband and teenage son. She’s especially devoted to her son because he suffers from allergies, which can have serious consequences. Since he was born, she made it her goal to protect him from everything that could harm him. Now he’s fifteen years old, and she wonders why he is not so close with her anymore. Her husband is often away for work, and so Iris has time on her hands to work and socialise. Except that’s not what she does. All she does is worry about her son and the state of her home. She doesn't like to meet new people; having someone over unexpectedly is absolute horror, and going out with friends is too much of a nuisance.
You get it. Iris is not a very likeable character. Still, she has one good friend by the name of Laura. Laura and her husband have good jobs, lots of money, a wonderful son, and a beautiful home. Luckily the boys are good friends too, but this is all about to change when Laura and her husband buy a home in a much better neighbourhood so their son can attend a very good school. Iris wants that too. And she gets what she wants in this story, although not everything is as she hoped it would be.
From the moment Iris and her family move into the house on No. 23, we can see things spiralling out of control. Iris is a mess most of the time; her son doesn’t do so well at his new school, and her husband is always angry. Even the friendship between Iris and Laura is deteriorating because Iris is terribly afraid her secret as to why she suddenly can afford the house will be discovered, and Laura is in fact not such a good friend after all but uses Iris mainly to brag about her own good luck. There is tension, drama, and some unexpected twists. It was a quick read, but it lacked a bit of depth and characterisation.
Thanks to Hodder & Stoughton and Netgalley for this review copy.
Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC and opportunity to honestly review this book.
I have to admit that I wasn’t overly impressed. It’s a short read but highly predictable. Both FMC are not likeable and just annoying. The MMC’s are also obnoxious and hard to like.
The storyline was okay…had a bit of a twist but really just a bunch of jealousy and drama.
This one just wasn’t what I had hoped it would be.
Arc review - Meet Iris — a middle-aged mum with a teenage son, Ben. When her bestie Laura moves into an exclusive area so her son can attend the top school 🏫, Iris wants the same future for Ben… and she’ll stop at nothing to make it happen 👀.
💡 Sharman does such an amazing job building the story & characters — I was hooked! The plot kept me turning the pages 📖 and those twists?! 🤯 Absolutely incredible.
2.5 bought this book because it was praised how good the "plotwists" are...but sorry what "plotwist"? well written but the story kept me only interested in the beginning
ARC received from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
I requested this one because I love a psychological thriller, and from the start, it delivered. By 21%, I was completely hooked. The characters had me fully invested, the house itself felt like a character, and I already had a list of theories forming. The character development is brilliant, and let’s be honest, we’ve all met an Iris or a Laura. I picked it up after work and didn’t want to put it down.
By 66%, I still couldn’t. I stayed up late to finish it, which says a lot. I was gripped right to the end. I’d been hoping for a few more twists, so I’m knocking off half a star, but overall this is a great domestic thriller. It might have been even better with a darker edge, but I really enjoyed it.
Thank you Netgalley for the ARC of The Family at No. 23. The book starts with Laura (and husband Ivo) and Iris (and husband Steve), who seem to be good friends. Although Laura is a bit materialistic, while Iris doesn't feel like she needs all of that. Their teenage sons are friends as well, but don't attend the same school due to where they both live. Iris meets a woman who needs some help one day and helps her get home to Riddleston Road (a very fancy neighborhood). This lady, Rosemary, tells her she doesn't have any family and few friends. After talking with her for awhile, she's grown silent. Iris realized she passed away. She then sweeps her day under the rug like nothing happened. Her family eventually moves into the home (that she says they are renting). Laura comes over one day to see the house and seems a little suspicious about the situation. Iris goes about her daily life until strange things start happening. She gets frazzled and ends up quitting her job and stressing about everything going on. While all of this is going on, she has noticed changes in Laura, who admits that she is pregnant. As Laura's suspicion grows, she realizes she is being followed. The man following her finally introduces himself and tells her a wild story that helps put some pieces together about her friend. While this story unfolds, Iris's life seems to be falling apart. Eventually the truth is revealed, but only Iris knows the actual truth..which reveals itself in the very end!
This book was a wild ride with good twists and turns, but seemed to drag on a little more than I would have liked it too. Overall I'd give it a 3.5 ⭐️.
My god, when it comes to fantastic debuts, 2025 just keeps on giving. The Family at No 23 is a masterpiece; it weaves a narrative that has made me wince, gasp, laugh and cry. Beautifully written and loaded with emotion and tension, I could not put this down once I'd started.
This is the story of Iris, a 40-something married mum to teenager Ben. She's clearly unhappy; her marriage isn't great, her son has always been sickly and now he's growing up he seems to be growing apart from her. All she has is her best friend Laura, whose life seems perfect in comparison. And when she moves, allowing her own son to go to a posh grammar school, leaving Iris and Ben behind, Iris knows she must do something. But just how far will a mother go to make sure her son has the best in life?
To call The Family at No 23 a thriller would be a misnomer. 'Domestic suspense' is a better description, but even though it might be a slow burn, I've been on the edge of my seat throughout. Few books have made me as nervous as this, in the best way possible. The characters - from Iris to Laura, their husbands and even their sons - are hard to like; 'morally grey' doesn't quite cut it. And yet they are fascinating, compelling, written with such depth and realism. I hated Iris at the beginning but I found myself caring and empathising with her as I read on. It's one of the best depictions of a broken woman I've read. A cautionary tale of when life gets too much.
Kathryn, you should be so proud of what you've created here. It's an incredible debut, and I'm so excited for whatever you have planned next.
This book had me interested from start to finish. Never a dull moment. I liked that the characters had personalities and were very different from each other. I loved the author included an epilogue explaining where each character was six months later. If you forget about reality it’s a very enjoyable story. I was left with a few unanswered questions and would have liked more details (which I can’t specify without spoilers). I would love for there to be a sequel fast forwarding into the future.
Quick fun read! The plot is interesting and engaging. I loved the dry humor of it all. Plenty of suspense to keep the reader engaged. Interesting look into the lengths a mother would go to for her child.
Check in out in August! Thank you to Netgalley, the publisher and author for the advance copy.
THE FAMILY AT NO 23 BY KATHRYN SHARMON. Release date set for the 28th of August 2025. From around the 25% mark I was so hooked and flew through this book. Great character development. Gripping storyline. Very easy fast read for me.
What a brilliant debut! This one had such an unhinged FMC and some very twisted friendships. It felt like an episode of desperate housewives set in the UK. I’d absolutely recommend, especially if you are a fan of Claire Douglas or Andrea Mara.
Thank you to NetGalley and Hodder & Stoughton for the opportunity to read this e-ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I wish I had better things to say about this book. From the jump, the writing was a little clunky - Laura and Iris were not easily discernible from one another. I was intrigued by the sudden turn of events that allowed Iris’s family to move into house No. 23 but the story that followed was unoriginal and the plot lines weren’t fully developed, leaving the reader unsatisfied.
Iris and Laura have been friends and neighbours for a very long time, and their children were friends and attended the same school. When Laura moves to a better neighbourhood so her son Freddie can attend a better school, Iris is devastated. She knows the area where she still lives is quite run-down, that the school is nowhere near as good as Toppington, where Freddie will be going and that she and her husband could never afford a house there. She is envious of Laura’s wealth, her perfect job and perfect family, and she wants all that too. Remember, be careful what you wish for.
One day, she stumbles on an old lady who has just had a fall outside the shopping centre. Iris escorts her home and is astounded to see that she lives close to where Laura has just moved to. The woman, Rosemary, tells Iris she lives alone and has no family still alive. The house is beautiful, but it is old and in need of repair. Iris is making Rosemary a cup of tea, and as she brings it into her in the lounge, she notices the old woman is dead.
The next decision Iris makes changes her life forever, and she believes what she has done was all for the good of her son's future. But these decisions have catastrophic effects on her mental health and her relationship with her family and friends. She is now a prisoner in her own home, living in fear of someone finding out the terrible things she has done for her family to have a better life. Then she gets a blackmail note, and the fear turns to terror at losing her home.
This was such an unputdownable thriller, and I was on edge the whole time someone knocked at Iris’s door. She was a miserable character and stressed me out with all the bad decisions she made. Her husband, Stephen, was a tyrant, a liar and a cheat, but the story wouldn’t be half as interesting without them. Laura and her husband were daft, but they could afford to be. Laura was a good friend to Iris, even after hearing of what her friend had been up to, she still tried to help her. This was a dramatic and intense narrative with a few twists thrown in that I thoroughly enjoyed. I will be looking out for more by this author.
This book will be in bookshops from August 28th
Thank you to @Netgalley, Hodder Stoughton and @hodderfiction for an ARC of this book in return for an honest review.
What Amazon promises the reader: A Totally Gripping Psychological Thriller with a Jaw-Dropping Twist
'An absolute rollercoaster! So many twists and turns... When I thought I'd figured it all out... BOOM! There came the ending. I'm speechless!' Reader review ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
'This story is wild!! Actual mind-blowing psychological fiction that has you simultaneously shouting at the characters to stop their crazy antics, while turning pages at a rate of knots to find out what will happen next!! This is the most original book I have read in YEARS!' Reader review ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
A completely addictive psychological thriller with twists you just won't see coming. Perfect for fans of Freida McFadden, Louise Candlish and Lisa Jewell. ****
What THIS reader got: (imho) A Book that is a Slog to get Through. Where are those twists and turns? Everything is pretty predictable. What shouldn't I have seen coming? The way it all falls down around Iris, the father of Laura's baby (I knew the moment she called him on the phone), the 'mystery' around the cat hairs, the fact the marriage breaks down, the fact that there is still some of Rosemary's family, the fact that the caretaker would play a further role ...?
There were moments I wanted to DNF, but then again ... I was waiting for the Jaw-Dropping Twist.
It felt too domestic at times, too 'loony bin' unrealistic at others, but always too predictable. The jaw dropping twist at the end? Yes, it was a tad unexpected. But I don't like deus ex machina ending. Suddenly changing from a reliable to an unreliable narrator is NOT a jaw dropping twist, it's an artifice to save an otherwise mediocre book.
Well, it's my own fault, I should have read the reviews to the end and as soon as FmcF was mentioned I should have put the book on the DO NOT BUY list, because (unpopular opinion, I know) I do not like her books either.
As it is apparently a debut novel, I gave an extra ⭐.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Iris lives with her family in a rental home at the wrong side of a nice town. Her long time mum-friend, Laura, has just moved to the right side of town in time to get her son into the best high school, unlike Iris' son Ben who will be stuck going to the other, mediocre school. One day Iris happens across an old lady who has fallen in the street and helps her home to the exclusive street of Riddleston Road. The house is a wreck and the lady lives alone. But while Iris is making her a cuppa, the lady passes away suddenly and in flash of inspiration she decides that rather than report the death, hiding the body and moving her family in would get Ben into the school he deserves.
Almost every character in the book is intolerable and they're completely meant to be. Iris is completely unhinged and she digs a deeper and deeper hole for herself as the book goes on. Her best friend, Laura, doesn't care about anybody but herself really and absolutely does not understand how lucky she is. Iris' husband Steve seems ok at first but his true colours really come out later. The only person who is relatively normal is Laura's long suffering husband, Ivo, who is a posh man-child at best. But at the heart of it, Iris is just trying to keep up with the wealth and privilege that she is surrounded by in order to give her child, who was ill for most of his younger years, a better life than she had. Of course she goes about it in completely the wrong way and as the lies stack up she becomes increasingly paranoid that someone will find out what she has done until it all pulls to a dramatic conclusion. I loved the little twist in the tale at the end.
Kathryn Sharman has clearly pulled some inspiration from where she lives as I recognised some of the descriptions as places in Harrogate, and quite a lot of the obliviousness to privilege that quite a few parents at school gates are definitely guilty of. Let's hope none of them are hiding actual bodies though!
Thank you to NetGalley for giving me the opportunity to read this ARC read. If you are a fan of Frieda McFadden this is a must read. This book was hard to put down. Many twists and turns to keep you interested.
Iris was your typical loving and devoted mother and wife. She worshiped the ground her son Ben walked on. She catered to her husband Steve's and Ben every need. She loved making them happy and keeping Ben safe from harm.
Iris is envious of her best friend Laura's life. Laura has money, the perfect house, the perfect husband and son in the perfect neighborhood. Living the life that she can only dream of until one day Iris comes across a women named Rosemary. As Iris was on her way home after meeting up for coffee with Laura she sees an elderly women Rosemary take a fall. The woman had hitbher head and was bleeding. Iris insisted on doing the only honorable thing, to help Rosemary make it home safely. Once they made it to Rosemary's home Iris couldn't help but admire the home. It definitely was a home that had been neglected but Rosemary was no spring chicken so she understood. Iris imagined what a person could do to bring this home back to life. It not only had great potential but the home was in the perfect neighborhood close to the best school for Ben to attend. All the things she wanted for her family. Rosemary decided the best thing to do was to rest in her front room while Iris made her some tea. While getting the tea ready the ladies shared conversation between the rooms. Iris inquired as to whom she can call to help Rosemary the women explaned she had no one. Iris brought the tea to Rosemary but only to find her unresponsive and not breathing. She had passed on and had no one to miss her.
Iris was toying with two options to leave and get help or take the opportunity to give her family everything she has wanted. A beautiful home, in the perfect neighborhood, with the perfect school. What will Iris choose the right and moral choice or to sieze a life she has always wanted.
The Family at No. 23 by Kathryn Sharman is pitched as a fast-paced domestic thriller, but for me it read more like a slow domestic drama.
On Riddleston Road, behind its pastel-coloured doors and perfectly kept gardens, secrets lurk. When Iris and her family move into number 23, she believes she’s giving her son the future he deserves—no matter the questionable choices it took to get there. But someone knows her secret, and soon cracks begin to show in her picture-perfect new life.
I was intrigued by the premise and the sudden turn of events that allowed Iris to move into No. 23, but the execution left me unsatisfied. The plotlines felt unoriginal and underdeveloped, and what could have been a sharp thriller became repetitive and predictable. Characters behaved in ways that stretched believability—Steve never signing any paperwork for a rental, Iris’ inappropriate behaviour at the school, Freddie’s unexplained outbursts—and I found it hard to suspend my disbelief.
The relationship between the two central women was meant to drive the tension, but it quickly devolved into jealousy and self-obsession, before fizzling out altogether. I thought Ben’s illness might develop into a darker angle, perhaps even a Munchausen’s thread, but that was abandoned. By the end, so many unlikeable characters—who had acted terribly throughout—were neatly rewarded with their happy-ever-afters, which left me frustrated.
Ultimately, this wasn’t the gripping thriller I had hoped for. It dragged in places, the twists were telegraphed far in advance, and the lack of character development made it hard to connect. If you enjoy domestic drama with unlikeable characters, you may find something here, but I was left wanting more originality, sharper writing, and higher stakes.
Thank you to Kathryn Sharman, Hodder & Stoughton, and NetGalley for the ARC.
Iris and Laura might be friends, but their lives couldn’t be more different. Iris is stuck in the wrong postcode, struggling to make ends meet and constantly feeling like she’s getting everything wrong—especially when it comes to her son’s future. Laura, on the other hand, seems to have it all: the right house, the right school, and a life Iris quietly envies.
When Iris crosses paths with elderly Rosemary after a fall, she's struck by the beauty—and emptiness—of Rosemary’s home. It’s everything Iris dreams of. So when Rosemary suddenly passes away, Iris is faced with a huge decision: seize an opportunity to finally live the life she’s always wanted… or walk away. But secrets have a way of catching up, and soon Iris finds herself entangled in consequences she never saw coming.
This book had me hooked with its intriguing premise and moral dilemmas. It’s a thought-provoking look at envy, friendship, and the lengths some will go to for a better life. That said, it does require a bit of suspended disbelief. Some plot points, like the lack of questions around Rosemary’s disappearance and the ease of Iris taking over her home, stretch credibility.
I also found Iris a challenging character to connect with—her behaviour toward others can be cold and erratic, particularly when defending her son. Her friendship with Laura felt a little unlikely at times, though Laura's support toward the end offered a nice touch of warmth. There's also a subplot involving Iris’ son that hints at something more dramatic but ultimately resolves in a surprisingly simple way, leaving it feeling slightly under-developed.
The ending ties things up, but perhaps a bit too neatly. It’s not the most realistic conclusion, but if you're willing to go along for the ride, it’s an engaging story.
This is the story of Iris, a wife and mother wholly devoted to her husband and teenage son. Her protectiveness toward her son stems from his severe allergies, which she has feared since his birth could have dangerous consequences. For fifteen years, she has made it her mission to shield him from harm. Now that he’s older, Iris finds herself wondering why he has grown distant.
With her husband frequently away for work, Iris has time to pursue a career or social life—but she doesn’t. Instead, she focuses obsessively on her son and the state of her home. She avoids meeting new people, dreads unexpected visitors, and finds socialising more of a nuisance than a pleasure.
Although Iris is not the most likeable character, she has one close friend, Laura. Laura and her husband enjoy comfortable lives: good jobs, wealth, a wonderful son, and a beautiful home. Their boys are good friends too. Things shift when Laura’s family moves to a better neighbourhood so her son can attend an excellent school—a dream Iris shares. Soon, Iris and her family also move, but not everything turns out as she imagined.
From the moment they settle into No. 23, Iris’s life begins to unravel. Her home is often in disarray, her son struggles at his new school, and her husband’s temper worsens. Meanwhile, her friendship with Laura begins to fray. Iris harbours a secret about how she could suddenly afford the move, terrified it will be exposed, while Laura turns out to be less of a true friend and more of a braggart.
The story offers tension, drama, and a few unexpected twists. While it’s a quick and engaging read, it does feel a little lacking in depth and character development.
Thank you to NetGalley, the author and publishers for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Iris and Laura have been friends for a long time and their boys, Ben and Freddie were best friends through primary school, now Laura and her husband Ivo have moved to the other side of town so they are in the right catchment area to enrol Frddie in the best high school, something that only Iris can dream of for Ben, then one day something happens while Iris is out which means that dream can become a reality and pretty soon Iris, Steve and Ben are moving into 23 Riddleston Road, just round the corner from Laura, which means Ben's name can go on the list for the better school, however Iris's secret is eating away at her, she keeps telling herself she would do anything for Ben, but just how far is she prepared to go? Then Iris receives a note from someone saying they know what she's done and her whole world begins to spiral out of control.
The Family at No. 23 is the new thriller by this author which hits the ground running, it had me hooked from the start and I couldn't put it down, finishing it in less than 24 hours. It's an intriguing read with a great premise, authentic characters, mostly not very nice at all, which made them more believable, and every one of them had a secret that would ruin them, if exposed. This debut thriller has it all, a domestic drama that is full of suspense, lies and betrayal, morals didn't figure at all in any of the main characters personalities and that's what made this such a compelling, edge of your seat read. It's a fast paced tale, with some great twists along the way but that final one, that hit the spot just perfectly!
I'd like to thank Hodder & Stoughton and Netgalley for the approval, I will post my review on Goodreads now and Amazon on publication day.
The Family at No.23 by Kathryn Sharman is a domestic thriller that deals with secrets, lies, tenuous friendships, and social climbing.
The story is told from the POV of two friends, Iris and Laura. When Laura's family moves to the posh part of town and enrols their son in the local prestigious school, Iris feels pressure to keep up even though, financially, her and her husband are in no position to compete. However, wanting the same opportunities for her own son, she takes drastic measures to move into number 23 Riddleston Road - a road with status, where the well-to-do live, where those who can afford to send their children to private schools live. A house that holds secrets that will struggle to stay buried.
This was a quick read (less than 300 pages) and had some potential, but unfortunately, it wasn't for me. I found the story to be very basic, and it felt more like domestic drama between two families rather than a psychological thriller. I found the characters very unlikeable (although that possibly was deliberate) and one dimensional. I couldn't sympathise or root for any of them, and the plot twists were easily guessed.
On the plus side, it did keep me engaged enough to finish it, and I think the premise was there. It just wasn't executed quite right for me. I believe this is Sharman's debut novel, and I do feel there is potential, so I would definitely read another in the future.
Thank you to Kathryn Sharman, Hodder & Stoughton, and NetGalley for the advance copy.
I absolutely loved this book! I couldn’t put it down because I had to know what was going to happen. Obviously no spoilers from me but the ending had my jaw on the floor.
At the heart of the story are Iris and Laura – two friends whose similar lives start to drift apart as Laura moves up a tax bracket and the social ladder. Iris feels like life has passed her by. Everything is a struggle – her job, her home, her relationships. Laura, meanwhile, seems to have it all. She's privileged, polished and seemingly perfect... but scratch the surface and her insecurities start to show.
When Iris sees an opportunity to have a bit of what Laura’s experiencing she jumps at it, but at what cost?
The way Kathryn Sharman writes these women is so sharp and clever. They’re both flawed, both sympathetic in different ways, and both slowly unravel as the tension builds. I found myself relating to Iris in particular – that feeling of watching other people glide through life while you’re stuck treading water felt very relatable.
I also loved how Iris’s house becomes almost like a character in its own right – a modern day Manderley, full of secrets, obsession and dread. But what will Iris have to do to stay there?
Brilliantly written, totally gripping and packed with psychological insight, Kathryn Sharman is definitely one to watch!
I really enjoyed this one. This book had a very interesting premise that drew me in and I was happy that the story itself got even more interesting as I kept reading. I'm usually not one for family drama / domestic thriller type of books, but I love them under the right circumstances, which this book definitely had.
The characters were all kind of crazy, which worked for the story. And it was fun unraveling all their secrets as I read. I loved the pacing - it was just fast enough to keep me hooked, but not so fast that I wished I could stay in the scenes longer. It was just right for me. I also liked the distinctive British "feel" to the book, which I don't get to read very often here in the US.
One thing that I wasn't a fan of was that a couple of the characters were very different later on in the book than how they started off. It was like they had switched places with completely different people, and it threw me off a bit. I also didn't like how the cat was being treated so a bit of a trigger warning for that.
Overall, I had fun reading this book and highly recommend it for anyone who enjoys a good domestic psychological thriller.
A big thank you to Hodder & Stoughton and NetGalley for an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I received an ARC of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review of The Family at No. 23. Many thanks to Netgalley and the publisher, Hodder & Stoughton, for this opportunity.
Kathryn Sharman’s newest psychological thriller expertly weaves the lives of two couples into an intricate web of secrets, ambition, and deception. The Family at No. 23. thrives on the suspense of not knowing who can truly be trusted, as shifting alliances and well-placed twists keep readers on edge.
At its core, the story explores themes of jealousy and the desperate lengths Iris will go to in order to match the luxurious life of her friend Laura. Iris’ struggle for status leads to a series of decisions that escalate tension, creating a gripping and immersive experience. Unbeknownst to Iris, Laura is also guarding a lie that cannot stay hidden for long. As their deceptions deepen, Laura and Iris increasingly struggle to uphold the carefully crafted illusions they present to the world.
The Family at No. 23. is an engaging read, offering an engrossing mix of psychological tension and unpredictable turns. Fans of character-driven mysteries will appreciate its layered narrative and morally complex cast.
This was a quick read that I did enjoy but I do have to say the plot seemed to be one of those over-the-top situations that the author has then based a decent book around. When I read a domestic thriller, I am usually drawn in by the inner workings of the plot but with this story it was the characterization which made it a successful book.
The differences between Iris and her friend Laura were interesting as apart from their sons they do not have a lot in common and lead very different lives. This shows us what friendship can be based on; we do not always have to be the same type of people to be drawn to each other and then be there for each other when times are hard.
Laura is portrayed as a bit of a superficial person, interested mainly in her looks and her wealth but there really was a lot more to her and she was my favourite character in the book. The situation that results from Iris’s actions is where Laura then shines, being there for her friend even though she has her own issues which are significant. I had not read a book from this author before, but I will look out for others in the future.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
A book about two friends who end up on opposite sides of the invisible privilege barrier, and how that has affected their lives. Iris is a really unstable and anxious mother, whose financial issues combined with her son’s sickness have driven her to do the unthinkable, making her an unlikeable main character from the beginning. Despite this, the author kind of manages to call on the empathetic side of the readers.
On the other hand, Laura is a privileged woman living with a loving husband and an apparently perfect son. She is seemingly sweet and it’s easier to like her after reading Iris’ POVs, but sooner than later we get to see just how careless and tone-deaf her societal and financial status has made her.
As for the plot, it gets twisted and twisted until you get a bit confused by what you’re reading about, and I feel like some things are unnecessary and don’t add to the plot but take from it, if that makes sense. There are also a few loose ends and plot holes I kept waiting for the writer to explain, but I guess they’re minor details.
All in all it’s an okay book, but it could use some polishing.
[Thanks to NetGalley, Hodder and Stoughton, and the author for providing me with a free ARC of this book in exchange for an honest opinion!]
I really liked this overall and flew through it. The story kept my attention and the twist worked for me, but I also kept thinking about what more I would’ve liked to see.
I wish we’d gotten Steve’s and Ivo’s points of view at some point, especially after the affair came out. I think being inside Steve’s head while he starts watching and following Laura would’ve made those parts way more intense. Same with Ivo; finding out Laura is pregnant is a huge moment, and I would’ve liked to know his thoughts or what he was thinking.
I also kept thinking how interesting it would’ve been to have little flashbacks or bits of the letters between June and Rosemary mixed in throughout the book. Even short pieces would’ve added a lot and made their story feel more real.
The ending felt a little rushed to me. Everything gets wrapped up pretty fast, and I wanted more detail around how things actually affected the characters, especially Ben. It felt like some important stuff was glossed over when I would’ve liked some additional information and details (what happened in the basement)?
All that said, I still enjoyed it and thought it was a good, quick read. I’d give it 3.5 stars — good story, good twist, just left me wanting a little more.
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The plot points were obvious and there was no true character development, which I could look over for the sake of the drama if either the writing, the stakes, or the twists had been particularly great. Bearing in mind my knowledge is limited to the first page of google results in a different country, the potential consequences for what the main character has done are...minimal. Even dismissing that as potentially faulty research, none of the actions of these characters make sense: the entire relationship between the two FMC is estranged and all we see of it is how jealously obsessed they are with one another until it gets to a point they're so fixated on themselves they seem to forget the other exists. The alternating POV allows for reprieve from one by immersing in the other until she also becomes unbearable. These characters are wholly reactive, making decisions before having any information and then responding in ways that prove their guilt. There are ultimately no consequences for any of their actions, and ultimately there was no development--the story could have ended the sentence after it began