Verrry Simplistic.
Written in statements. Like "I this, he that " ugh. Very little background and teenagerish... So that's not an actual word, but should be. If you take out the sex, it would be appropriate for a teenager. Just No. I stopped at page 35 when the mmc responded to the fmc 's question of why he'd ignored her texts for weeks with a feeble, " If I thought about you I couldn't concentrate on what I was doing" Wow, the stupidest excuse and she was thrilled...UGG, see Teenager. Delete, Delete. 15 anyone?