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He Who Serves
Gaius has been chosen for marriage. By a goddess. The ordinary foot soldier is thrown into the unknown as he navigates his relationship to the terrifyingly alluring Iren. As their relationship blossoms, a growing force of opposition challenges Iren's rule, both inside and outside of her queendom, threatening their happiness.
Iren will change the world. Gaius is determined to make sure it's for the better in this steamy fantasy romance between a goddess and her good-natured human lover.
Iren will change the world. Gaius is determined to make sure it's for the better in this steamy fantasy romance between a goddess and her good-natured human lover.
292 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 28, 2025
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March 25, 2025I enjoyed much of this book and I am glad someone is out there writing female led relationships and exploring gender roles, power dynamics, and topics like misogyny and religion. The conversations between the characters are nuanced and emotional. I appreciated much of what they offered. The added layer of the woman being an old god/goddess was a twist that added even more complexity.
But there is a lot of room for improvement in the actual nuts and bolts of writing. The world building and the character work of the those that lay outside the main pairing was pretty weak. It literally begins with absolutely no subtlety or nuance, just a ‘here reader, this is the plot.’ There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors throughout. The characters outside the main relationship are thinly drawn and only tangential to the story. I wish for a more rich world for the characters to inhabit. The plot is paint by numbers and doesn’t add much to the relationship between the romantic leads. The ‘villain’ was a cardboard cut out.
I am glad the author is writing these books! But they do need some work to really shine.
This is also not heavy femdom as another reviewer mentioned. It’s fairly gentle on most counts. Most of it having to do with the MMC needing to wait or not being allowed to orgasm without permission. I don’t generally conceive of that as being ‘heavy.’ Do be aware there is much pregnancy and conception talk. Which is not my favorite but I was willing to overlook.
But there is a lot of room for improvement in the actual nuts and bolts of writing. The world building and the character work of the those that lay outside the main pairing was pretty weak. It literally begins with absolutely no subtlety or nuance, just a ‘here reader, this is the plot.’ There are a lot of grammar and spelling errors throughout. The characters outside the main relationship are thinly drawn and only tangential to the story. I wish for a more rich world for the characters to inhabit. The plot is paint by numbers and doesn’t add much to the relationship between the romantic leads. The ‘villain’ was a cardboard cut out.
I am glad the author is writing these books! But they do need some work to really shine.
This is also not heavy femdom as another reviewer mentioned. It’s fairly gentle on most counts. Most of it having to do with the MMC needing to wait or not being allowed to orgasm without permission. I don’t generally conceive of that as being ‘heavy.’ Do be aware there is much pregnancy and conception talk. Which is not my favorite but I was willing to overlook.
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January 10, 2026Before reading:
I've had this book in my TBR for some time now and I'm finally going to read it. It first piqued my interest because it's different and unique. I hope this is one of those gems hidden among pebbles. Let's go!
I've had this book in my TBR for some time now and I'm finally going to read it. It first piqued my interest because it's different and unique. I hope this is one of those gems hidden among pebbles. Let's go!
March 24, 2025
I'm writing this review for two reasons. The more boring of which is that I'm simply trying to leave more reviews in general.
The more important however, is that I don't think this book is getting the recognition it deserves. It has one other review which simply reads "good but heavy femdom" - and with that, I don't agree.
I'm not going to get into too many plot specifics of the story, but it is a great read about watching two people not only learn whether or not they love each other, but HOW to love one another. For our mortal man, he must grapple with the differences between loving a goddess and loving a woman, and how his lover manages to encapsulate both at the same time. For our goddess, she must grapple with both what it means, and how to even achieve, getting close to someone who cannot even comprehend the oceans of power within her.
The book is not only very sweet and well written, but touches on the topics of love vs loyalty, self respect, and misogyny.
Lastly, when it comes to "heavy femdom" I simply cannot agree. There certainly IS femdom, but only in the most basic sense; By all accounts that's femdom, but in an incredibly basic sense, and nothing I would call heavy.
All in all, I enjoyed this book so much so that I immediately went and read the other two books published by Miko Sage - The Flower of Hades and Witch of Chaos. I come out of those two books still thinking this is the best one, even after enjoying them. It is without a doubt going to finish the year in my top 5 books of 2025 list, and I'll without a doubt revisit it again in the future.
The more important however, is that I don't think this book is getting the recognition it deserves. It has one other review which simply reads "good but heavy femdom" - and with that, I don't agree.
I'm not going to get into too many plot specifics of the story, but it is a great read about watching two people not only learn whether or not they love each other, but HOW to love one another. For our mortal man, he must grapple with the differences between loving a goddess and loving a woman, and how his lover manages to encapsulate both at the same time. For our goddess, she must grapple with both what it means, and how to even achieve, getting close to someone who cannot even comprehend the oceans of power within her.
The book is not only very sweet and well written, but touches on the topics of love vs loyalty, self respect, and misogyny.
Lastly, when it comes to "heavy femdom" I simply cannot agree. There certainly IS femdom, but only in the most basic sense; By all accounts that's femdom, but in an incredibly basic sense, and nothing I would call heavy.
All in all, I enjoyed this book so much so that I immediately went and read the other two books published by Miko Sage - The Flower of Hades and Witch of Chaos. I come out of those two books still thinking this is the best one, even after enjoying them. It is without a doubt going to finish the year in my top 5 books of 2025 list, and I'll without a doubt revisit it again in the future.
December 10, 2025
Good story
I found this one very enjoyable overall. I think I liked madame Medusa more but still would rate both highly. I think the ending isnt as well... defined happily ever after as I would like but I suppose its open to interpretation.
I found this one very enjoyable overall. I think I liked madame Medusa more but still would rate both highly. I think the ending isnt as well... defined happily ever after as I would like but I suppose its open to interpretation.
February 14, 2025
Good but heavy femdom.
June 11, 2025
A wonderful emotional love story.
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