3.5 🌟
As much as I loved Book 1, I thought I was gonna love this one more but instead it left me with a need for more.
Grumpy MMC ✔️
Secret baby ✔️
Adorable toddler ✔️
Celibate MCs (for 5 years) ✔️✔️✔️
It had all the factors to be superb but the author thought it was smart to skip important parts.
☝️ Their first meet after 5 years starts with a shock, continues with awkwardness but has no ending because the author after their initial encounter skipped to the next chapter. 🤷♀️
I wanted glares, I wanted disbelief, I wanted resentment, I wanted banter, I wanted my blood to boil but it just simmered for a sec and that was that.
✌️ The moment he realises what his mom did to both of them, keeping the news of his daughter to herself, pushing the MFC away and then him acknowledging that was also a bit underwhelming.
The scene should have been explosive. He should have felt anger, frustration, guilt, saddness, rage, relief, hope ..... instead he's in disbelief, he cries and that was that.
3️⃣ We don't witness the moment his daughter calls him "Daddy" for the first time. Why?!!! Why would you keep his euphoric touching reaction from us?!
4️⃣ They've known each other since they were teenagers. They loved and love each other to the extent that after their breakup they couldn't date other people and remained celibate. Yet it's 3 years and 6 months later until he asks her to marry him! That should have been wayyyyy sooner.
Instead of taking advantage of all the angst, emotional rollercoaster, joy, guilt, rage and relief, the author offered us surface level traumas.
Also, I think the author has beef with her own mom because Lilly's mom in Book 1 and Greyson's mom in Book 2 are the villains LOL
Proof of grumpiness 👇
"Holy shit." Dean gasps and stops directly in front
of me. "Your face is broken."
I raise an eyebrow at him. "Pretty sure my face is
perfectly fine.'"
"Can't be." He shakes his head. "It's never done.
whatever that is before."
He gestures vaguely at my face before reaching out
to poke my cheek. I swat his hand away and scowl
up at him.
"Pretty sure that's called a smile, Squirrel," Dom
tells him.
"Exactly!" Dean throws his hands up as if that only
proves his point.
"What are you yelling about now?" Landon asks,
sitting on the bench beside me.
"Grey's been abducted and replaced with an alien
clone!" Dean says and 1 roll my eyes.
Proof of eternal Love
My cheeks flush as I slip in the vague question. I
have no issues telling him that I haven't slept with
anyone else, and I wouldn't hold it against him if
he's been with others.
Greyson tucks a finger under my chin, forcing me
to look directly at him.
"There's nothing to be worried about. The last
woman I was with is currently in my arms."
I try, and probably fail, to contain my shock.
"You mean you haven't been with anyone else in
five years?"
"Even if I wanted to, I don't think I could have.
None of them would have been you." He adjusts
his hand to cup my cheek. "It's only ever been you,
Stella.'"
"For me too."' I feel the tear slide down my cheek.
Note to self:
Possible future MCs in the series,
Dean and Ari (Landon's sister) - (can't wait for these two)
Landon and Evalyn?! (Works with Paige and Garrett and in a bar next door) Or Cal?! (Works at the bakery/cafe)
📝 ticking another Bingo square
50) "Secret baby/child"
Squares Count: 56
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