Nothing to set it apart
There’s nothing in this book to set it apart from any of the other generic slice of life harem stories.
Well. Maybe one tiny thing.
As usual, the main character is notoriously dull. He’s good looking,(but like; in a surprising way!) super muscular and ripped with a large rooster. Cool.
But where this spectacular piece of deeply discounted beef spectacularly stupends is not with his lack lustre sex skills (they are amazing! But the sex scenes are easily skipped, boring, short, and apparently women are just good to be holes) but in his planning skills.
He dropped out of college at age 20 to make his fortune. With what?
An app! He decided. So he went and made an app. Didn’t know what it was for or who his audience was going to be. It wasn’t until years later in his 7 year journey to wealth and leisure that he decided what market he was going to go towards.
Probably should have finished the last 2 years of college, maybe they would have covered brainstorming or something.
The pages where he describes his path to riches are 2 pages of stupid douchey tech bro. Painful to read, but hey, he got his money!
Overall? I’d pass on this. Needs to be rewritten 2-3 more times with a good editor.
Also, Kilgore should maybe interact with a few women at some point.