“Coincidence? Uncle Sherlock claimed that was impossible, but for once I wasn’t certain."
Second book in the Stoker & Holmes series, an urban fantasy time travel vampire mystery steampunk series. Yeah, that’s really how I would describe. But hey, it’s fun. Messy, but certainly fun.
A month after their first adventure together and the encounter with the mysterious Ankh, Mina Holmes and Evaline Stoker are once again summoned by Irene Adler, to assist in the case of young Willa Ashton, an associate of Princess Alexandra. After the death of her mother and disappearance of her younger brother, Willa seeks help from a medium to contract her mother’s spirits and believes that her brother is still alive and needs her help. The Princess and Willa’s family are worried for her well-being and so it is on Mina and Evaline to find out if the spirits are real or if poor Willa is the victim of a terrible fraud. While logical Mina immediately believes that someone is messing with Willa’s mind, Evaline considers supernatural beings are involved. Her suspicion thickens when after years of absence vampires return to London and someone ends up murdered.
Like the first book, this one is a light-hearted fun, a quick read and just overall entertaining. Don’t expect a literary masterpiece or anything, it is pretty much just fun and nothing with a lot of depth. But sometimes that is all one needs.
The writing is fine enough and the changing perspectives between Mina and Evaline work well. Their voices are distinctive enough and you easily know in which mind you are.
The main mystery of the book is entertaining enough, even if it is easier to figure out than the first one.
In general I think that the first book was a tad stronger. To say the story is messy is probably way too nice. There are so many elements thrown into this book that it is actually impressive it isn’t even more of a mess.
Gleason really took everything that sounds ‘cool’, threw it into a mixer and somehow turned it into a decent book smoothie.
That being said, this book is not without its issues. Funnily enough I almost had the same issues I had with the first one. Not sure if that is a good thing or not, I guess at least I don’t have a bunch of new ones.
Let’s talk characters first. While reading the first book I preferred Mina’s point of view. What can I say? I’m more of a Holmes fan than of vampires. It kind of changed during this book. Not the Holmes/Vampire thing that still holds up, but my view or rather tolerance for the characters. Both Evaline and Mina have their good and bad moments, but Evaline was clearly the more enjoyable point of view this time around.
Ironically I still believe Mina had mostly the more interesting story parts, but oh my God was she whiney. If there is one thing that puts me off a character it’s constant whining about something. Mina took the crown in this novel. She is supposed to be logical one, the Holmes archetype and she constantly sees herself as such, expect for when she is not. For someone who claims not to care about what other people think or society expects, she cares an awful lot about her appearance. There is not one chapter from Mina’s point of view where she doesn’t whine about her looks or her lack of social skills. Honey, make up your mind about what you want. Do you want to be like your Uncle Sherlock? Fine, then stop stressing about what other people think and just be yourself. You decide you don’t want to be such a Holmes after all? Also fine, than do something about your situation and find out who you truly are. Just stop with the complaining. Evaline has her annoying moments as well, but at least she knows who she is and actually has some development throughout the novel.
Except for Evaline and Mina, the other characters don’t have that much to do. Encounters with Holmes and Watson are fun, Dylan actually gets a few nice moments and Pix well, he is frustrating. I get that this is a series and if Goodreads is to be believed it will at least have five books, so I understand not every mystery can be solved yet, but whatever Pix’ deal is there needs to be some clarification. It is not a fun mystery anymore to figure him out, it is seriously frustrating because he can’t answer one question straightly. The strong cockney accent is also incredible exhausting to read.
Speaking of mystery, I missed some connection to the previous book. The mystery is clearly not as solved as people think and though Mina had her suspicions that the Ankh might be still involved, it is just briefly mentioned and then dropped.
The return of the vampires allows for some fun action sequences, but I’m still a little bit iffy about it. While premise of the first book already guaranteed that vampires would be an important plot point sooner or later I’m not exactly sure if I like that. I did give Evaline some interesting character development, but so far I’m just don’t care that much.
But really let’s talk about the Marty McFly in the room, because I think that is something that needs to be discussed.
Ahh time travel, you sweet trope that barely ever works out. Sometimes I believe people are not aware how complicated it is to use time travel in a story, there is just too much you have to think about to avoid plot holes or big question marks over your reader’s heads.
The time travel in this story is basically treated as a c-subplot so far and I guess will be an arc that will slowly develop throughout the whole series. I get that and it’s fine. If you plan to write at least five books, you need at least some plot points to connect your story. The problem here however is that the time travel doesn’t feel like an overarching storyline but rather like something thrown into the mix just because. I at least get the impression that there is no actual plan for Dylan as a character and that his arc, as well as the rules of time travel in this universe are just made up along the way.
While making stuff up as you go sometimes can work, time travel is really way too complicated to jump into it without a clear structure or set of rules.
Dylan does bring up the Back To The Future concept of time travelling and tries to explain his unexpected journey with the string theory, but it is all very half-baked.
There is the question if Dylan will mess up the future in case he changes the past, but in the end he does it anyways. He first saves Queen Victoria’s life (in such an over the top, ridiculous scene, it’s awesome) and then basically goes on and invents blood transfusions. Yeah, no biggie I bet that has no consequences at all.
As Hiro Nakamura would say: "We must try not to step on butterflies."
Inventing stuff before it should be invented and walking around Victorian London with a smartphone, that guy doesn’t step on butterflies, he steps on Mothra.
There’s of course also the thought that Dylan was always supposed to come to the past and save the Queen and that it’s all a cycle with fixed points. See? That’s why you need to think this through, to avoid confusion like that.
Adding to the general wibbly wobbly timey wimey stuff Dylan also hints that he might even be in an alternate Victorian London, because Mina’s and Evaline’s London, with vampire and you know, a real Sherlock Holmes is not exactly what Dylan learned from his history books.
Time travel to an alternate universe as a c-subplot…why not? If you hear a groan right now, I just needed to let that out.
I genuinely hope that the next book will dive deeper into the time travel story and at least establishes some kind of rules or explanations.
Before wrapping this up a brief look at the relationships.
Mina and Evaline are two very different young women and more or less reluctant partners. They do respect each other, but at the same time I wouldn’t exactly call them friends. They work together better than the last time, but still clash over almost every decision. While that makes for a lot of fun most of the time, I did wish for some more bonding. Unfortunately not many books, especially the YA kind, present strong, healthy female friendships and here the opportunity is a given. Mina and Evaline seem almost cold and robotic around each other except for the occasional snark and while I don’t expect them to become best friends out of the blue, I think they need some genuine moments that have nothing to do with the current mystery they are working on. Hopefully the final twist, which was very well executed and surprising, will not only be a sequel hook but also the much needed shift in the girl’s relationship.
On the romance front there is thankfully not much to say. Romance takes a backseat in these books and it is a welcome change to other books of similar genres. Evaline and Pix have their little something going on and while I don’t care all that much, it doesn’t bother me either. I could even get behind it if Pix would finally stop being over the top secretive.
Mina is caught in somewhat of a love triangle or more of an impending love triangle. At least I can see it happening. She has a crush on Dylan, one he obviously reciprocates and most of their moments are actually cute and a sweet mix between awkward and exciting. Then there is this weird, kind of even sexual tension Mina shares with Inspector Grayling. I’m not quite sure what to think about that. There is definitely something happening, but like some other plot points I’m not really sure if there is a plan yet or if their relationship will just spontaneously develop. All I know is that I really don’t want yet another love triangle.
The ending was nice, even if not as action packed as the first one. The twist was well done and the overall storyline and characters at least keep my interest.
Conclusion: Light-hearted, enjoyable fun with some flaws but overall an entertaining ride.
Recommendation: People who enjoyed the first book will most likely enjoy this one as well.