A star hockey player and his biggest critic must reexamine their assumptions about each other when forced to work together at an after-school job in this feel-good young adult rom-com debut about breaking the ice—featuring stenciled sprayed edges!
Luke Dawson and Harper Braedon could have been friends. They trade shifts at the same diner, share classes at school, and are driven by their greatest passions: hockey for Dawson and jewelry-making for Harper. But some things aren't meant to be. Dawson thinks Harper is stuck-up, too good for anything resembling school spirit. Harper thinks Dawson is a self-centered jock, a perfect fit for a hockey team that seems to absorb all the budget away from the arts departments.
When his beloved hockey coach gets fired for misallocation of funds, Dawson is terrified that all his plans for impressing scouts are vanishing before his eyes. A rumor goes around that Harper was the one who got him fired, and suddenly she’s public enemy number one.
But even with their mutual dislike at an all-time high, Harper and Dawson can’t escape splitting shifts forever. Can forced proximity help them find some common ground, or will long-held grudges finally succeed in bringing them both down?
𐙚⋆°。⋆♡ ── pre-read im SOOOO excited for this one!!! ya hockey romance remains my fav like the tension 🤭 yes pls !!! the author is sooo sweet & sent me a physical arc so im very excited to get into this one!!! the cover is stunning and the overall plot/synopsis sounds right up my alley!
Nothing irritates Harper more than seeing the entire school drool all over the hockey team, especially when they’d rather spend most of their funding on the team rather than a program for young entrepreneurs like herself. Harper is known for being the hockey team’s biggest critic, so when the head coach is fired, all fingers point to her. Not only will people not take her small business seriously, but now they think she’s the one who screwed their hockey team over. What makes matters worse is that she has to work alongside Dawson at the diner, a player on the team who believes the lie. Fine. They can believe what they want, even though it isn’t true. If only she would stop feeling attracted to Dawson and his kind gestures that seem to prove her theories wrong about jocks and their ego…
Dawson wants nothing more than to get a hockey scholarship so he can get out of town and stop working at his parents’ diner, maybe even play pro someday. He’s one of the best players on the team, and if things keep looking up, then his dreams might just come true. But when their coach is fired, all his dreams vanish into thin air, and he turns his anger toward the one girl who annoys him and has made it clear she hates their guts: Harper. It’s petty since she denies the allegation, but Dawson feels like he doesn’t have a chance of making his dreams come true. But as he spends more time around Harper, he not only admires her hard work ethic, but he also finds her very attractive and fun to be around. If only she didn’t hate him so much…
This was fun! 🤩 The more and more I read hockey romances, the more and more I realize I need them in my life. 🏒🥅
I’m not a big sports fan, so I agreed with Harper that worshipping the ground the team walked on was ridiculous, but I’m not an idiot, and I know that sports boost team spirit, unite communities, and can even help raise money…for…stuff. See what I mean? I know nothing. 😂 But! I’ve always enjoyed watching games with my family, so I eventually grew tired of Harper hating on the hockey team because, clearly, she was judging a group of guys she didn’t know to fuel her anger. Like, relax, girl. It’s just a game, and they're literally teenage boys. They’ll learn eventually that there’s more to life than sports. Let them do what they love.
As always, I loved the friendship between Dawson and his teammates, especially when he’s around Ryan and Alex. 😂 Those three are so funny, and I couldn’t stop smiling whenever they were together. I love it when guys pick on each other (probably because they remind me of me and my siblings when we pick on each other), so that was fun.
And then there’s the character development/romance between Harper and Dawson. I’m glad they both realized that they were being judgmental, proud, and low-key kinda dumb for harboring this resentment and anger towards each other without knowing who the other person was. And that’s a valuable lesson: “Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes.” It’s easy to be angry at someone we don’t even know for who they are, where they come from, or what they do, but when you get to know that person, you realize that they’re human like you and me with fears, desires, and dreams for a better, happier life. “Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle.” ❤
Harper was pretty cool; Dawson was sweet. That’s a pretty good estimation of what the two main characters are like in this book, if you want a quick overview. 😉👍🏼
All in all, if you want to read a sweet hockey, rivals-to-lovers(?) romance, then I definitely recommend it. 🫶🏼
Thank you to Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing and NetGalley for providing the arc in exchange for an honest review! All opinions and statements are my own.
genuinely one of the best debuts i’ve ever read. i was drawn to this book in an instant after reading the blurb and i’m so happy it delivered 🥹 the tension between harper and luke, and that push and pull of will they or won’t they? god i loved it so much. the whole party scene lives rent free in my mind. emily charlotte is such a promising new author and her writing brings so much life to the story and characters. soo excited for this to come out into the world <3
ⓘ thank you to netgalley + simon & schuster for the arc!
i’m so disappointed and dissatisfied with this book. it pains me to rate a debut novel this low, but i really did not enjoy it. and since i try to be as honest with you guys, this was just not it for me unfortunately.
heart check is perfect for fans of lynn painter, naley from one tree hill & ann liang.
this book follows Harper, a seventeen year old jewellery small business owner who has a huge hatred for the schools local hockey team. in comes in Luke, the golden boy of the school and also, the star of the hockey team. he’s everything she hates, arrogant, rude, sarcastic, but when forced to work together in such close proximity, will they be able to hold their grudge against each other?
⊹ my thoughts
i was surprised by how much they were enemies at the start- normally, in a YA romance book, the main characters usually “hate each other” (but secretly they’ve been in love with one another for years and the only reason they are “enemies” is because of a silly misunderstanding) - in this book they ACTUALLY hated each other. harper DESPISED luke, it was empowering. everything he did, she would judge and call him annoying. and for a good reason!
list of reasons why harper got mad at luke (in the first 100 pages) - being annoying - being entitled - having a shitty coach - having shitty friends - making everyone indirectly bully her - sabotaging her bracelet business - making the school give the hockey team all the funds
jesus! i would be FUMING TOO [ especially as an avid sports hater- crazy thing to admit since i basically only read sports romances] basically, the enemies was ENEMEING.
this book was horribly slow though, i would say i wasn’t fully invested until the 10-15% mark the pacing was definitely not the best especially at the start. as i mentioned, i didn’t really care about the characters and the plot until 1/4s in, since there was quite a lot of info dumping and i was slightly confused and unfocused with the whole book at first. it didn’t really grasp my attention. so if you want a book that immediately pulls you in, this would, unfortunately, not be it for you. the middle also, slowed down, i didn’t have the urge to pick it up the way i did at the start and at the end- and i found myself to even be bored at some parts. the whole tension and drama kind of died down, and i wasn’t gravitating towards it or thinking about it.
since heart check is a young adult romance, it is made for a younger audience- and i felt it at times. there were some passages that were said that made me cringe, and the things that the main characters did slightly came off as “corny.” the jokes were also hit or miss for me, they would either make me cackle or just make me internally wince. if you do love references to pop culture in books, i would recommend picking this up!!
˖ ⁺ ౿ 💍┆ harper one of the only saving points of this book to be honest 😭 she was such a fun character to read about & i really enjoyed being in her mind! she was strong and fierce and spoke her mind, everything i love in a female main character. she was really disciplined in everything she did, and i really enjoyed reading about the small business aspect of her life. whenever someone was rude to her she would immediately clap back, and actually had a backbone for once.
˖ ⁺ ౿ 🏒 ┆luke i REALLY did not like luke in this book, for many different reasons. he felt childish, rude & impulsive: and i did not like the way he treated harper + (the way he let everyone else treat her.) he was also slightly un memorable in my opinion.
in conclusion, i would not go out of my way to recommend this book- but i also think it wasn’t completely bad either. if you like lynn painter i really recommend you pick this up, the vibes were very similar & the characters as well.
── pre-read ໒꒱ ‧₊˚ a few of my mutuals on instagram have been raving about this, claiming its one of the best young adult romances they have read. intriguing. the cover is absolutely adorable and im a sucker for cute ya romances....
Luke and Harper work together at a diner, go to the same school, and share some classes. Harper hates all hockey players, including Luke, and he also once turned down her friend. When the hockey team’s coach gets fired, Harper is blamed for it, and suddenly everyone starts hating her.
It’s a cute and sweet story, but I do have a few notes. I don’t understand why everyone is mad at Harper for the coach being fired when he’s the one actually guilty of misusing school funds. Also, Harper suddenly stops hating Luke, and I didn’t even understand why that happened.
I liked that the characters are so driven, but the ending felt a bit rushed. Overall, I think the target audience will enjoy this book more than I did—they probably won’t be as picky.
Thank you to NetGalley and Simon and Schuster Children's Publishing (Margaret K. McElderry Books) for the ARC in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
"I want him to get everything he dreams of. And I want to be by his side when he does."
⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ I don't know how two 17-year-olds had me out here giggling and kicking my feet at the ripe old age of 25, but Harper and Luke did somehow! I think a lot of people are going to love Harper and Luke's story not only for their romance, but for their backstories and the larger topics and storyline that occur throughout as well. This isn't just a cutesy, heartwarming hockey romance between a hockey player and his biggest hater.This is also a story about pushing through adversity, standing up for what's right, fighting for what you believe in, and realizing that love doesn't work on a schedule; it comes up in the most unexpected of ways in the most unexpected people.
I know that all probably sounds like it could be themes that show up in a regular adult romance–and they do!–but I think Heart Check was a mature YA romance book that was able to touch on those themes in a way that was made accessible to a YA audience who is still relatively young and may not have had to deal with a lot of crazy life-changing experiences yet, while still having enough life experiences that they could relate to Harper and Luke's stories. I don't think I'd recommend this to a SUPER young YA audience (I'd say around 12-14, MAYBE 15 at most but that's pushing it), given that there is a good amount of swearing in here and a scene that could've turned into a fade-to-black/closed-door situation if it escalated any further, but I think a lot of YA romance readers will absolutely love this! I know if I were still a teenager, I'd absolutely love this.
✎𓂃Full review to come soon! ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆❆˚。₊⊹❅⋆ ⋆˙⟡ 𝒫𝓇𝑒-𝓇𝑒𝒶𝒹: As some of you may know, YA contemporary/YA romance isn't my thing these days- I simply grew out of the genre as a 25-year-old. However, I saw this debut on NetGalley and I couldn't pass it up; it sounded cute, so I knew I had to request it!🏒💙♥️ With the NHL season in full swing now, I figured I'd dive into a YA hockey romance for a change to give the genre a chance. I'll be heading into this story with a different perspective since this is for a YA readers, so my rating by the time I finish this will be based on whether or not I think a YA audience would enjoy this!
Thank you to NetGalley, Emily Charlotte, and Simon & Schuster/Margaret K. McElderry Books for this eARC in exchange for an honest review. Heart Check will be officially published on November 18th, 2025!
⌯⌲ Genre: YA romance ⌯⌲ POV: dual first person, present tense ⌯⌲ Tropes: hockey, forced proximity, enemies to lovers, miscommunication
✽ ♡ ✽ What I liked ✽ ♡ ✽ ⤷ how the fmc had jewelry making as her hobby!! ⤷ I love love loved how the fmc had her own small business, I feel like this part of the story could be really inspirational to future entrepreneurs! ⤷ the character growth ⤷ is was a quick and easy read
✽ ♡ ✽ What I didn’t like ✽ ♡ ✽ ⤷ sometimes I got confused as to who was narrating because Luke and Harper’s narration styles are the SAME ⤷ all rom, no com 😔 ⤷ the narration! (the main characters got really annoying and their inner thoughts seemed very unrealistic to me) ⤷ most of the characters are either one-dimensional, stereotypical, or both ⤷ the characters felt a bit too immature for their age (note: despite the characters being in 11th grade, I’d recommend this book to those in 7th to 10th grade)
✽ ♡ ✽ Plot ✽ ♡ ✽ ⤷ plot? What plot? To me it just seemed like a bunch of random events thrown together to make a story
✽ ♡ ✽ Setting ✽ ♡ ✽ ⤷ most of the story takes place at school or at the restaurant where the main characters work, just a really basic setting, nothing special. There was this one scene that I really enjoyed that took place at a holiday market; I wish there were more fun wintry things like that in the story
✽ ♡ ✽ Characters ✽ ♡ ✽ ⤷ Harper: I was very annoyed with her throughout most of the book, but I really appreciated her character growth at the end ⤷ Luke “Dawson”: just the stereotypical cocky sports guy who, you guessed it, has a soft side. Also, the way he idolized his coach was sooo annoying ⤷ Marissa: ugh, I really didn’t like her to be honest. She felt like a bad best friend and was just a very one-dimensional character in general ⤷ Sabrina: as far as side characters go, I really liked her! She was that cheerful and motivational friend that I think all of us need in our lives
⌯⌲ Age Rating: 13+
✽ ♡ ✽ Content breakdown ✽ ♡ ✽
➔ Violence: a fight breaks out on the ice between two characters
➔ Spice: none
➔ Romance: 1 descriptive kiss, 3 semi-descriptive kisses, the main characters fall asleep on a couch together after a party (nothing romantic happens and they’re just friends at the point in the story)
➔ Drinking/drugs/smoking: partying; a main character gets drunk off of hard seltzer at said party and is hungover the next day
➔ Language: 21 f**k, 3 b*llsh*t, 23 sh*t, 1 d*ck, 3 pr*ck, 1 b*tch, 5 a**hole, 9 a**, 5 hell, 9 damn, some uses of the Lord’s name in vain
➔ LGBTQ+: gay side characters that are in a relationship with each other; a main character’s older sister is lesbian
➔ Religious Content: a side character is very superstitious and does things for good luck (such as wearing an evil eye bracelet)
➔ Magic: none
➔ Trigger Warnings: none
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⌯⌲ Publish date: 18 November 2025 Thank you to NetGalley and Simon and Schuster Children’s Publishing for providing an e-arc of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The premise of this book sounded interesting, but the author’s writing style really killed the book for me. If we removed the swearing, it read more like a middle grade book than a young adult book. I don’t think I was the target audience and it was hard to enjoy the story because of that.
*** I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review ***
dawson having troy bolton level anxiety crashouts versus harper crashing out over a crush because he signaled before turning (a green flag). that’s a couple fr
This was so cute🥹 a really good debut novel. I wasn’t sure about halfway through but it was adorable. I also really liked it because it had a good amount of hockey scenes, I love when sports romances actually have quite a few of the sports scenes. I adored that this was a YA romance. I get so tired of spice some times. I loved the character dynamics and growth. Enemies to lovers😩. Love Dawson so much. However, I wis they would actually call him Luke. Like I know sports people usually go by last name but I swear no one ever called him Luke. I kept forgetting his name was actually Luke. I am falling in love with hockey romances. I can’t wait to read more of this authors books as well!
This was just SO much fun!!!!! I love a hockey romance and this was my first YA one and I loved it so so much!!!! I read it in less than 24 hours I could not put it down!!! The enemies to lovers was so good, the hockey scenes were so good — since going to a couple hockey games I feel like I understand the game way more so it’s so fun to read! I was on the edge of my seat when they were playing!! The romance 🥲🥲🥲 it was so tender and sweet! so high school by Taylor Swift coded! There’s nothing like first love <3
this does not have spice but there is a good bit of language!
Thank you to edelweiss and Simon teen for the arc 🫶🏼
This was just OK. I did enjoy the ending especially, but I think it contains a lot of the issues I’m seeing in romance books that are currently being published. RTC
Thank you NetGalley and Simon and Schuster for this arc in exchange for an honest review!
This was a quick, cute read that was just to Young on the Young Adult scale for me.
I think this is a perfect read for younger readers who want to dip into sports romances. But if you're more into the Adult side of Young Adult, this one is a little too juvenile.
There was a large number of annoying/semi-annoying characters, and even the main characters I had issues with throughout, and most of these characters are juniors, so REALLY young.
And I think this book really shows the difference in how certain authors write the Young Adult genre. Lynn Painter just came out with Fake Skating that is also Young Adult, but they're seniors, and they level of writing and the maturity is just levels about this one.
But again, I'm much more drawn to adult stories so my YA days are starting to dwindle unless it has a proven maturity level. Either way, this is a good debut book for YA.
Thank you @simonteen for the advance copy to review!
I had such a blast with this book. Harper and Luke work together at the same diner big there is a lot of animosity between them. Harper’s stems from a grudge after his friend was mistreated by Luke and Luke’s us due to suspecting Harper it getting his coach fired during his pivotal season of hockey.
When everyone accused Harper of getting the coach fired, I was upset for her. Wanting to have funds spread throughout programs is not a wild take, and it’s a real problem. I also felt for her with her business and she was really ambitious! I don’t recall having that much drive in high school, lol.
Luke’s focus on his future was intense too. His dad certainly didn’t help with the pressure. I loved seeing the Michigan vibes here though (go blue!). I liked that Harper helped him relax and unwind.
These two had crackling chemistry and it was so fun watching them dance around it. I loved how their friendship grew and how they slowly started to trust each other. Also - the party at Ryan’s was so cuteeeee oh my gosh. Then! Their first kiss! And date! And second kiss! And misunderstanding! Ahhh!!
The third act was really good and I found myself grinning at the resolution. Side note - Noah had it coming. And I LOVED Alex and Ryan and also Alex’s being casually queer. 🥹
I truly could not put this book down! I was fully invested in the characters and their (potential!) romance from the beginning, when they clashed over diner shifts and that shady hockey coach’s antics. I don’t always love a dual POV because often one character is well developed while the other’s POV just doesn’t quite hit — but this was the rare occasion where both POVs were essential and kept me hooked. I’d read Harper’s POV and think, “ok, Luke Dawson, now what do YOU have to say for yourself huh??” and vice versa. I felt like I understood each of their stresses and struggles and the ways they would need to grow in order to get each other. (And, honestly, I just love a YA romance that respects that teens have complex inner worlds just as adults do, and that romance is often the most prominent mirror for one’s inner struggles… I want a good romance book to be lighthearted while also respecting that dynamic. Emily Charlotte gets it!)
Overall, this book does slow burn enemies-to-lovers right, in that you get to see why the burning in question needs to be slow, and the de-enemy-ifying (for sure a real word) is a result of the characters’ individual growth so it’s actually satisfying. Also, it is just so cute. Real “kicking my feet” reading experience for me!! I now want an update about how Harper and Dawson are doing in 3-5 business years please.
I highly recommend this one for fellow romance-loving readers and/or anyone who just wants to have a good time reading a beautifully written little slice of joy! It’s particularly great if you want some cozy fall/winter vibes. Also, I didn’t go into this book a sports fan but apparently I like hockey now.
Thank you Simon Teen for the eARC in exchange for my honest review!
• My Reading Experience: So cute! Really liked!! • Book Spice: None - kissing
• Content Thoughts:
This was such a cutesy YA romance, and I’m always a sucker for a good bicker-to-love story (especially when the banter really delivers). This book had all of that, and it made the relationship feel fun and playful.
One of my favorite elements was the Interludes. The sections written entirely in text messages between the main characters added a unique touch and broke up the story in a way that felt fresh. I can’t wait to see how those look in the physical book—hopefully in actual text bubble format, because that would make it even more fun.
The setting felt believable and grounded, and I enjoyed following each character as they worked toward their individual goals. That said, there were times the story felt a little rushed. Some moments of higher emotional impact wrapped up quickly, which kept the pacing light and fast but also left me wanting more tension and depth.
The romance itself was sweet and well-paced at first, with small, meaningful moments that made the build-up satisfying. But as things moved along, the connection between the main characters started to feel a bit surface level since those deeper moments weren’t fully explored.
I will say, the assumption I had (trying to be a little detective and whatnot) was wrong. I like that!! 🤣
Even with the minor disappointments I mentioned, this was still a very cute and enjoyable read overall—perfect if you’re looking for a light, fun YA romance with great banter.
4⭐️ loveddd the cover it was absolutely adorable. the romance was great honestly it wasn’t super special to me but i still loved it. harper was honestly so inspiring to me with her jewelry business and her and dawson were so cuteee
Thank you Simon and Schuster for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I am newer to the YA romance genre, I typically read adult romance novels, but I’ve wanted to expand my reading horizons a bit and honestly Emily Charlotte is the place to start because WOW this is such a heartwarming, cozy, and engaging debut.
I absolutely LOVED everything these two characters put out. The enemies to lovers was full force and it had me enthralled from start to finish. He is the star hockey player, and she’s the entrepreneur with her own jewelry business. Going to a school where most of the funding, and all of the attention, goes into sports leaves Harper feeling bitter about the lack of opportunities her, and other students, have due to the clear priority of sports. Her resentment trickles into her and Luke’s dynamic not only as schoolmates, but coworkers (FORCED PROXIMITY🤌!)
From the opening page of Heart Check, I knew we were in for a treat. Harper is the perfect example of a determined, willful, and dedicated individual. She leads with fierce heart but a thorough sense of her known purpose which I adored. She loves hard, but is so very protective of who she shows that too.
Luke is the golden boy who everyone knows and loves (except Harper🤭). He is a passionate, observant, and driven person. A natural born leader, who needs just a bit of reassurance to showcase those qualities. He deep down knows what he aspires, but is learning to trust his instincts a bit more.
When I tell you these two are the sweetest thing!! Watching their trust for each other grow, the protectiveness kick in, and the pre conceived ideas they had about each other disappear was a whirlwind in the best way. Luke and Harper had such soft moments that made you feel so fuzzy and warm. The small town feel made this book turn into a nice snug hug…perfect for the late fall time when this debut book enters the world.
Prepare yourselves for Heart Check because you will need this book in your hands imminently!
for a debut, i’m so impressed. heart check is a young adult hockey rom com that follows harper braedon and luke dawson in their junior year of high school. because of the hockey team and their expansive new facility at hamilton lakes, funds for other groups (such as harper’s beloved young entrepreneurs program) are severely low. this injustice plus dawson’s cocky jock persona spark harper’s vendetta against the hamilton lakes hawks and all their players. although when the hawks stellar coach gets fired for withholding funds for the hockey team, all eyes point to harper since it’s no secret she has her issues with the hawks. as soon as this rumor reaches students, no one wants to support harper’s bracelet making business. not only that, but her website suddenly gets flooded with poor reviews. suffice it to say, this dilemma turns harper and dawson’s rocky relationship even weaker.
this premise sets up for such a fun story and even though it has its faults, i really enjoyed reading this. the writing was wonderful and i noticed a ton of descriptions that were fairly uncommon, which are always fun to read. despite the fact that heart check has a very typical and predictable plot, the writing didn’t feel as formulaic as other rom coms, which i appreciated greatly especially because i find it rare to come by in YA novels. the pacing and flow of things was probably my biggest peeve in this book. personally, i thought that harper and dawson’s relationship progressed from rivals to romance too quickly. although the rapid progression makes sense for a 300 page book, i’d loved to have seen a couple more chapters where harper and dawson started to question their feelings for each other before jumping straight into infatuation. along with that, i also feel the ending was a bit rushed. another chapter at the end to tie things together would have been nice, or perhaps even a well thought out prologue would have served well.
moving on to the characters, i’ll start with harper braedon! listen, one thing about me is that i’ll always eat up the quiet, bitter girl trope, and i found that charlotte executed that really well! harper was disagreeable and sharp-toned when she needed to be, but never boarded into unlikeable territories. i also thought it was so interesting to read about a character whose main interest is jewelry making because i’ve never seen that done in a book before. i admired the fact that her passion didn’t feel childish or immature, but instead it felt authentic, which seems like a hard line to toe for any author. something that could’ve been explored or talked about a little more was her family. this is a very small complaint because it didn’t take me out of the book and i don’t think it would’ve made a huge difference, but i could see how others might find her home life a little flat as a result. harper was fun though, and i was thoroughly entertained while reading her POV.
the second main character is luke dawson and while i liked him, i don’t have much to say about his character. dawson is your typical misunderstood hockey player who has a soft heart and a need to flourish in his sport. he’s cute for sure, but adding a competitive strive felt like a lazy attempt at adding depth to his character. maybe with some more pages his personality could have been embellished a little more, however not having that simply makes him a monotonous character, not a bad one. in addition to that, his words in chapter twenty felt a little odd and implausible for him, like a flimsy attempt at adding a third-act breakup solely for the purpose of adding a third-act breakup. i don’t mind having a conflict like this in a romance book but if it’s there, it should feel true to the characters and not sloppy or out of the blue.
harper and dawson’s relationship was honestly super cute. i loved their spites in class and the fact that they worked alongside each other at dawson’s family restaurant. also, the walk-in fridge scene + the car scene were to die for!!
the side characters in this book surprised me in the best way. they had personality but didn’t steal the spotlight from harper and braedon, which is an impressive thing to write correctly. alex, ryan, marrisa, and sabrina all made for very amusing supporting characters and i would KILL for emily to write a book on either ryan and marrisa, or sabrina and her future love-interest.
even if my review sounds harsh, don’t let that fool you from how much giggling and feet-kicking occurred while reading this. all of my minor issues with this novel feel very overlookable to me, not just because this is a debut, but more importantly because i had so much fun reading this. it was silly and enjoyable, and sometimes that’s all a rom com really needs to be. if you’re a fan of lynn painter or alexene farol follmuth, you’ll probably love this. overall, i’m really excited to see what emily charlotte puts out next because if it’s anything like heart check, i’ll definitely be reading it!!
as always, huge thanks to netgalley for this arc! <33
pre-read | i know this comes out very soon, but i got the arc a bit ago!! SOOO excited for this one omg 🤍🏒
♡ˎˊ˗ ''The first time we kissed, it was impulsive and lifechanging. The second time, I knew it would be impossible to get him out of my system.'' - Valid debut, cute hockey romanceˎˊ˗
i could NOT STOP giggling and the amount of times ive slapped my bed because this was such a cute and wholesome read 😩 i am a SUCKER for YA romance + sports and this book made me so so happy. the slow burn??? the enemies to lovers???? FORCED PROXIMITY???? chefs kiss for every trope i love to read 👨🏻🍳 i genuinely had the best time reading this book and i fell in love with every single character (SABRINA IS MY FAVE 🤭) and i cant believe i got the chance to read this early and LOVED EVERY MOMENT I SPENT WITH IT (i miss hamilton lakes sigh)
biggest thanks to NetGalley and Simon & Schuster (Australia) for the e-ARC 🫶🏻🫶🏻
Spoiler Free Review » So High School « 0:58 ─〇───── 3:16 ⇄ ◃◃ ⅠⅠ ▹▹ ↻
Age Rating: - 12+ 3.5 stars ★ 1.5 spice 🌶 જ⁀➴ Tropes: hockey bf, forced proximity, rivals to lovers, miscommunication Swearing: a lot of it, including the f-word, d-word, and more. TWs: none
"I feel so high school every time I look at you"
The story follows two high schoolers: Luke Dawson, the town's golden boy and star hockey player, and Harper Braedon, a driven entrepreneur. They're two rivals, but because they both work at his family's restaurant and go to school together, it's impossible to avoid each other. They have to learn to look beyond stereotypes and self-made assumptions about the other and bond, even though they're very different.
"I wanna find you in a crowd just to hide from you"
The romance in this book was very cute and simple, and I appreciated how it was written. These days, YA romance can include pages of smut, but this one kept it simple while still hitting as hard emotionally. A lot of the scenes were actually incredibly cute and made me go like "AAAAAA" at my book in joy. I also am one to despise the miscommunication trope, but although this book had its fair share, I enjoyed it. It definitely was screaming adorable couple vibes! I read some chapters while sitting with my friends, and they were laughing so much because any time anything good happened, I stood up and squealed while running.
"No one's ever had me, not like you"
My only feedback about the book is the execution of the other aspects, like pacing, adding other plot, and making more complex characters. For a debut novel, though, this is actually considerably good! I hope that we also get more on Luke's best friend, Alex, since I liked his character a lot.
"You knew what you wanted and, boy, you got her"
To end off, this book was a cute, fluffy read, and I enjoyed it a lot! I'll definitely be on the lookout for more books by Emily Charlotte! This book is definitely a good choice for lovers of romance, YA, and especially sports romance.
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Plot or Character Driven: Character Strong character development: Yes Loveable characters: Yes Diverse cast of characters: Yes Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
Thank you so much to Simon Teen for sending me an eARC! I literally stayed up all night reading this book and could not put it down.
It was the perfect YA romance! There was humor! There was romance! There was hockey! And it was all tied into a perfect story bow.
I think fans of early 2000's rom coms like She's All That, Never Been Kissed and 10 Things I Hate About You are going to absolutely devour Heart Check. Our FMC, Harper, is so confident, hard working and determined. She is so incredibly loyal to her friends and business. She is everything a young woman wants to relate to. Luke is charming and strong. He has so much passion for hockey but I loved seeing more than just the jock side to him. Teens and adults will love this story and I can't wait for the rest of the series!
I saw this all over my Instagram, and as a bookstagrammer myself I knew I had to get an ARC of this!! I absolutely love hockey romances and this did not disappoint!! As a YA reader it's so hard to find YA hockey romances that are true YA, so when I saw this I immediately put it on my tbr and I am so happy I did! If you're a fan of Lynn Painter, YA romcoms, Hockey romances and/or enemies to lovers you will love this book! Harper, the female main character, reminded myself so much of me. She was so realistic and relatable and I loved her small business! And (Luke) Dawson was just ugh so dreamy, he was a great MMC and his character growth throughout the books was incredible! If you loved Fake Skating by Lynn Painter you will love Heart Check!! Heart Check is out November 18th in book stores!
» 。° .• {💎} ༄ I've read one YA hockey romance, and it wasn't my favorite. I don't understand hockey as much as I do football, but my lack of knowledge didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story. There were some parts in Dawson's point of view that explained to me how hockey worked, because they were playing the game, so it didn't feel so confusing. I knew that Heart Check was the first installment of a series, but I wasn't expecting it to be this good! Usually, first installments aren't everyone's favorite, but I expect Heart Check to have a lot of five-star reviews. It deserves it. First, the characters were wonderful, and I understood all of their motivations.
༄ {⚫} .• ° 。« Sports teams in schools do get a lot of funding, more than the arts. It doesn't mean they aren't valued but it's just not as much as sports. I appreciated how Emily Charlotte explored the different sides of sports team because at the end of the day it's not the players fault where the money goes. They are trying their best because of the pressure from fans and family, and it does get to them to the point where they have an internal crisis. So needless to say, let's be nice to sports players because they are trying their best.
.。༅:*゚𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 ꒱
{❤️} ·˚ 𝗗𝗮𝘄𝘀𝗼𝗻 ˊˎ ༻————↠ Dawson is the example of what happens when there's too much pressure to play well. You have to make your life your sport or else you won't be considered dedicated enough or good enough. I felt bad for Dawson and wanted him to be able to just enjoy hockey without being pressures, because he does really enjoy it. He has a great team, great best friends, and a good new coach. Hopefully in the next books we see him being happy, silly, and goofy with his best buddies.
{❤️} ·˚ 𝗛𝗮𝗿𝗽𝗲𝗿ˊˎ ༺————↞ I've never seen a character as dedicated to her craft as Harper. I've also never read about a character who made jewelry and made it a small business. I understand her hatred towards the hockey team, because she deserves some recognition too for what she does. All of the arts programs do. But I'm glad that Harper got some good character development and saw how hardworking the hockey players are. Dawson and Harper both work really hard to leave Hamilton Lakes and have good lives, and it was so sweet and wholesome to see them both fall in love with one another.
↠━ {💎} 𝐎𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐓𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐬 ━↞ Overall, I really enjoyed this story! I loved the characters, the plot, the sports, and the side characters. I already have a guess of who the main characters will be for the next book, and I can't wait to read it. The only reason this isn't a five star is because it took me so long to read because I'm in a book slump. If I wasn't, I would have flown through this book in two days. I really hope we don't have to wait long for the next Varsity book to be released, because I am on the edge of my seat.
Thank you to Netgalley for providing me with an arc copy!
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» 。° .• 𝐩𝐫𝐞-𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝 ༄ ༻————↠ This is my second hockey romance, and I wanted to give the genre another try! I love the cover and how I can see what the characters look like. Hopefully, this can help me get out of my reading slump!
The MCs are sooo mean to one another. I’m not feeling any love between them AT ALL (other than them staring at the curve of one another’s bottom lips all the time…? Odd fixation, but okay). Also who on EARTH would ever think a 16 year old girl would be responsible for a hockey coach being fired for embezzlement? What kind of power do the other teens in town think she has?! An infuriatingly unrealistic plot. Nah.