DNF at 15%
Welp, I'm not sure if I'm the issue or what, but this book isn't clicking with me. There's something about the writing style and characters' lines that just feels a bit cringey. Also, I’ve noticed a few grammatical errors, and English isn’t even my first language!
So, Charlee, the FMC, just got out of a bad relationship. Well, actually, she called her best friend to help her escape since her ex (future?) was at an away game. After that, she's going to stay with Milo, the MMC, who just so happens to be a friend of her best friend's partner.
Anyway, this has insta-lust/insta-attraction from the get-go, and I just can't get on board with it.
In the two days she has been staying with him, they have already pretty much objectified each other mentally. Umm, I'm not sure how people normally deal with coming out of an abusive relationship, but I don't think this is the right way to go about it. For Pete’s sake they just met two days ago. 🫣
Also, she's way too comfortable moving around his apartment. I mean, he did say she could, but I feel like she should still be a bit hesitant at first, you know?
She was so at ease that on just the second day of her stay, when Milo came home, he found her wrapped in a little towel right after her shower. Tbf, she had no idea he was on his way. Still, I thought she might be a little shocked or something when she got caught like that. But no, she just didn't care. Instead of heading back to her room to change quickly, she did a few other things first and even had small talk with him while still in that tiny towel! 😬
I guess some people might not think there's anything off about this, and maybe it's just me overthinking it. But then again, she just got out of an abusive relationship and had "sworn off" men. But that all went right out the window the moment she laid eyes on him because, you know, he's just so "hot." 🤷♀️
Anyway, the MC's insta-something and writing style just aren't grabbing my attention, so I'm going to have to DNF this. It’s just not for me.