Lacks character development and depth. At best an average Astra Militarum novel lost count of the number of times the words; blood, viscera and intestines in various ways were used unnecessarily. Spending a whole chapter to describe a fight involving two Scions that could have effectively been done in three pages is a good example.
Decent characterization, but the novel runs from battle to battle with very little downtime. I suppose that is accurate to the idea of Tempestus Scions and their hypno conditioning, but it takes away from my enjoyment without any downtime scenes.
Prepare for battle as R. S. Wilt presents his debut novel, Final Deployment, a captivating read that perfectly highlights bloody war in the grimdark future of the Warhammer 40,000 universe.
In the far future, the Imperium of Man battles for survival on thousands of planet-spanning battlefields, with untold numbers of human soldiers fighting and dying every day against monsters, xenos and heretics. Of these soldiers, none are more deadly or skilled than the Tempestus Scions. Moulded into unquestionable killing machines from a young age with relentless training and mental manipulation, the Tempestus Scions serve as an elite force with the soldiers of mankind, taking on the missions that no other soldier could complete.
Amongst these Tempestus Scions are the fighters of First Eradicant squad of the Xian Tigers. Led by Tempestor Traxel and "inspired" by Commissar Fennech, First Eradicant are an unusual regiment made up of several misfit Scions damaged by the battles they have seen. Deployed to the planet of Rilis, a formerly loyal world now fighting a brutal civil war, First Eradicant is tasked with destroying the rebelling regiments and bringing order to the planet. Utilising their superior training and equipment, First Eradicant quickly turn the tide against the enemy and being to lead the loyalist forces on Rilis to victory. However, their success leads them discover the full strength of the traitors, as well as their dark allegiances.
After a disastrous battle that sees their loyalist allies massacred, First Eradicant find themselves facing monstrous opponents even more lethal than they are; three Chaos Space Marines from the Iron Warriors legion. Determined to slay the ancient, genetically enhanced traitors, First Eradicant take the fight to the Iron Warriors across the planet. However, with their leader traumatised by past battles and Commissar Fennech playing his own sinister games, can even the best human soldiers in the galaxy defeat the evolved might of the Chaos Space Marines?
R. S. Wilt starts his professional writing career off in explosive fashion with this amazing and compelling debut. Final Deployment was a deeply exciting character-driven Warhammer 40,000 story that followed several highly damaged characters as they attempted to survive the horrors of war. Intense, action-packed and deeply addictive, Final Deployment was an outstanding read that I had an incredible time getting through.
I'm torn on this book. I felt the descriptions of both environments, characters, and fight scenes (which are many, easily the majority of the book) were highly evocative.
However it suffers from everything about the protagonist squad being played straight to the point of cliche. The loyalist and traitor militia officers and Iron Warrior antagonists are all far more compelling characters and this story would have been much more interesting told from their perspectives instead.
I find myself hoping for prequels of the Iron Warriors more than a sequel of the Xian Tigers' exploits.
A really cool and interesting look into the Scions! I feel like it would be easy to make them slightly smaller Space Marines, but I felt that this book really gave them their own niche. Something truly separate from guardsmen and Space Marines which I really enjoyed!