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608 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 31, 2025
"You don't have magic in the human world, I forget that. Magic is everywhere here. It's just another form of energy. The human world has no magic, and we can't use magic in the human world except if we bind it to objects. But here, everything is held together by magic".
A Dark and Twisting Fantasy Debut That Leaves You Craving More
Kingdom of the Two Moons, Alexandra Thomashoff's debut novel and the first installment in her Fallen Angels series, is an immersive, dark fantasy ride that pulled me in from the very first chapter. I received a review copy via NetGalley and am happy to say this book has left a deep impression on me, despite a few minor issues that kept it from being a full five-star read.

Kingdom of the Two Moons ♦ Alexandra Thomashoff - A Review
Told through three distinct points of view—Melody, Blair, and Riven—Kingdom of the Two Moons weaves a complex story of trust, betrayal, power, and longing. Thomashoff handles multiple perspectives with a deft hand. Each character’s voice feels authentic and layered, and their relationships are fascinating to follow, especially given that none of them fully trust one another. This ever-present undercurrent of suspicion adds a satisfying tension throughout the novel.
Melody, a young half-human, half-Fae woman, starts off as a strong and resilient character despite her trauma. However, as the story progresses, I found her becoming a bit too compliant, especially considering the fierceness hinted at in her internal monologue. I would have loved to see her push back more often instead of only thinking about it. Still, her growth arc remains compelling, and I’m curious to see how she evolves in the next installment.
Blair, the witch, steals many scenes with her femme fatale persona. She's a strong, independent woman, but what makes her truly shine are her vulnerabilities and self-doubt, which Thomashoff handles beautifully. Blair’s flashbacks, while briefly pulling the reader out of the current timeline, deepen her character and shed necessary light on Caryan, the mysterious fallen angel who feels more morally gray antagonist than outright villain.
Speaking of Caryan, he is a standout character precisely because of his enigmatic nature. His true motivations remain clouded, keeping both the characters and readers guessing. Riven, the High Fae Lord and classic bad boy with a soft heart, rounds out the main trio nicely. His inner struggle between loyalty, survival, and longing for connection is both touching and believable.
One of my few critiques is the inconsistency in narrative style. While Melody’s perspective is told in the first person, Blair and Riven’s are in third person. This discrepancy created a slight disconnect for me, especially when intimate knowledge of Blair's or Riven’s inner thoughts were presented alongside Melody's very personal narration. It gave the impression that Melody was telling their parts. But how could she possibly know these details? This occasionally pulled me out of the story.
Additionally, at over 600 pages, there were sections that felt overly detailed. While the rich world-building is undoubtedly one of Thomashoff’s strengths—the vivid imagery of the Court of the Two Moons is breathtaking—some descriptions bordered on excessive, slowing down the pace unnecessarily in places. A bit tighter editing could have kept the tension even higher.
That said, the mystery at the heart of the novel is exceptionally well executed. Just when you think you understand the characters’ motivations, another layer peels back to reveal deeper secrets. The ending leaves enough threads tantalizingly unresolved that I am already eager for the sequel.
Overall, Kingdom of the Two Moons is a dark, atmospheric, and emotionally charged fantasy debut with flawed but fascinating characters and a richly imagined world. Alexandra Thomashoff shows enormous potential, and I’m excited to see where the Fallen Angels series will go next.
Highly recommended for fans of morally gray characters, slow-burn tension, and intricate fantasy worlds!