2.5
*****SPOILERS*****
The second I picked this book up, I was wary about reading it. The series had already started to feel like it was just endlessly dragging on in "Closer", so I had hoped that this would be the last book in the series to wrap it all up. The last time I had read a book in the series was about a year and a half ago, but I can still clearly remember what these books were supposed to be about. And "Spiral" did not include any of it. This book was sooo different than the others books in the series and not at all what I was expecting. If I had wanted a book with man-eating bugs and characters who were dying to save the whole world, I would have read something else. I expected this book to be crazy chalk-full of nonstop adventure, surprises and new developments. I wanted to learn more and uncover new things. But this book didn't have that. Not the sort of stuff I wanted. Sure you learn that the Styx are bugs, but that puts a whole different spin on the series. I honestly thought the authors could have come up with something much better and more exciting. The series leads you to think of great things, unimaginable and new things, then this book blows it all. Bug-humans seem oh-so typical. It's nothing new! I like to discover things in books. But there was nothing to feed my imagination which I always crave in books of this sort, when I think I know what I'm going for. The four books before this one had much more of a dystopic spin on them, and it suited them that way. And really whoever calls this an adventure book must have lost some marbles. What adventure is there? Adventure's are going to new places, discovering things, learning more, not knowing what to expect. Not planning every more, every attack, and knowing exactly where you are going to go and what you are going to do. This book was more like a mission. Some crazy characters and a couple new people follow plans to save the world. Now it's not the saving the world part that I have a problem with, it's how it was done. And what this book was turned into in the process. I just expected much more from the author. Something more unbelievable. AND to top it all off... THERE'S STILL ANOTHER BOOK TO COME! The series is really too long now and they need to just end it. Honestly, they can't fix what they've done. They ruined the direction this series was taking and from here it can only get worse.
I tried to keep an open mind and look for things I liked too. But even the characters got on my nerves. All the groveling and moaning and complaining. And the romance part was awful. It was a half attempt, in my opinion. If you're gonna add romance to a book, you can't do it halfway. It's like it was a side thought and maybe they should give it a try, then it's not working out so it kinda just fades away. It was really dumb. Maybe the last bit with Will and Elliot holds some promise for what will hopefully be the final book in the series. Stephanie must have been my favourite character. She was all girly and preppy and stupid seeming, yet she had another tougher, trickier side to her as well. Most of the other characters just annoyed me the whole time.
I still enjoyed the writing style and I liked the ending, how they were finally back underground again. The first half of the book (literally, the entire first half) was sooooo slow I wanted to put it down. Every excruitiating detail was clearly set out. Then the second half of the book sped by with little to no details at all, and that was the better, more interesting part of the book. So it really was a trainwreck.
The author obviously did not plan how this book was going to turn out. OBVIOUSLY! He even admits it in the back of the book, in the acknowledgments section. And you can tell as soon as it hits the part about the Styx!! The first four books lead you to think every single thing about the Styx is human, that they're just some extremely intense and more alert version or species of humans, such as homo sapiens are of the homo neanderthals. Then he goes and totally blows it by saying that they're bugs. Now, some authors would be able to do this in a way that builds up mystery and finally shocks with you uncomprehendable truth and awes you with its amazingness. But no. Not this guy. He managed to make it all choppy and cheesy. He had practically solidified all thoughts about who the Styx were, and then just as the series is about to end, he goes and turns over everything that the readers thought about them and starts all over. It just doesn't work. It feels so out of place and like it doesn't fit. There was nothing smooth about it. That's pretty much the reason I started hating on this book. Also the fact that for part of it they are in the Complex which is eerily similar to the Compound that Eli is trapped in by his dad in the book The Compound. And I really didn't like that book either. Plus since when is it like Will and Friends to be stuck in some place not moving and doing nothing for weeks? It's not!! Everything was just so changed and off about this book.
Despite all the bad talk and complaining, if I look at this book as an individual and forgot all my expectations and the previous four books, I can appreciate it and even like it, which explains my rating of 2.5. I did think it was all smart and the missions were cool to destroy the Styx's plans. The action was really good, even if I prefer adventure. I liked the different POVs and it was very clear what every character was thinking and feeling, which made it easier to understand the book and get into it to feel like you were living their lives. I enjoyed all the new characters, like Sweeney, Stephanie and Danforth. It was also neat how pretty much all the characters that were still alive after everything were back together again. There were so many of them though, I was used to having just the four or five of them, so that also changed the feeling of the book. I wish there had been more time spent underground in the very inner world, but the end of the book was pretty good. I did not like how Bartleby was killed, since he had been the main pet from the very beginning. And I liked to dislike Danforth's character, but it was predictable what he was doing and that he'd betray them. I liked the dark lighting stuff and all the experiments. I liked how Drake was still the same, even if he was the only one. I wish Elliot had been more herself, or even got put in the spotlight more. I think her character is important and plays a big role, so it should be focused on more often. The developments were interesting to follow and I really was curious to know what happened next, but don't get the impression that there was suspense, because there wasn't much of it. It was more for my amusement that I continued reading, not because I had to know what happened next. And of course because my rule is I finish what I start. So obviously I will have to read the next book, too.
I really don't understand now whether the Rebeccas are human or not. I know they're Styx too, but are they gonna be bug women? I didn't really understand if all the Styx women were bugs. Actually I just didn't understand at all who were bugs and who was human and what the Styx had to do with it. Are they a bunch of bugs called the Styx and they just look like humans? But if the Rebeccas are bugs, it's strange because we had their POV for so long and they sounded so much like humans and their thoughts were so normal... I don't understand how bugs can have human abilities. Even though it's fiction. Still. Not enough of it was planned and it wasn't explained well either. And the bugs eating the people and impregnating them... it was soooo wierd and gross and gory and disgusting. Also, on page 431, it becomes very unclear if Drake lives or dies. I will be FURIOUS if he was just killed off. Despite the fact that it's a book and the author can do anything he wants, you truly just cannot kill off one of the main, important characters.
Anyway, I was disappointed with this book and I can't even say I hope for it to improve in the next book, because 1) I wish there wasn't a next book and 2) I don't think it can get any better from here.
I liked some stuff but I had to totally change my perspective and thoughts on the series to get there. It makes reading the other books in the series completely pointless, just because of this one.