Warning: unpopular opinion (but my opinion nonetheless, which is the whole point of Goodreads) mixed with rant and spoilers.
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Yes, this story had a bunch of twists and turns, I cant deny that, but sorry, even those were so easy to foresee: the mean rich parents, the ass of a father, the return of the sister, the in love best friend gone stalker crazy. I guessed them all, and It still made no sense whatsoever.
It was like a long soap opera that has been on TV for so long that the writers just repeat the same plot over and over again, with over the top unbelievable villians and a H so useless, the h had to do everything on her own.
Im all up for women empowering, but I really dont want to go through a book where the so called "alpha male" always folds to other people's threats instead of fighting for what he wants. It annoyed me to no end. He only put his big boy pants until practically the last moments!
And there's no real character development! The writer could've done so much to deepen the plot instead of wasting a whole installment in angsty "nothing ever happens" in Hawaii...
The growth of the kids, the strenghtning of the h, ANYTHING but a waste of words that could've been covered in two chapters, and thats a stretch. Even the romance itself felt rushed!
Ok, yeah, Im prissy and rambling.
The only reason I finished it was because I thought some of the good reviews had to rub off on me and I was going to end up changing my mind, but nope. Not at all. I just didnt like it.
Its gonna take me quite a while to go back to this author, if ever.
And also, a waste of two of my favorites narrators.
So promising. So sad 😢