Initial reaction: I haven't decided on a final rating for this yet, but it's likely to be either a strong 4 star read or 4.5 stars. I enjoyed getting to know Neon and his relationship with Aria. This is told in an interesting, reverse order way that allows you to have glimpses of the relationship between the main two, their families and friends, and ultimately Neon and Aria coming together before they...um...do the thing. Neon has to navigate awkward conversations from each person in his life - parents, older sister, grandmother - about what to do when they get ready, and you get a glimpse into Aria's family as well as their friend group. I think there may be some reluctant teen readers who find the reverse order a little difficult to navigate, but it makes sense with not just the vibe of the narrative, but also you get to know the characters and they're fun to watch. The scenes in each section/chapter are strong on their own and give a complete picture by the end.
Poor Neon having that conversation with his Mama in the restaurant though, lol. That was the worst (best?) I've seen in terms of having that talk. (I'll explain in the full review.)
Full review:
Jason Reynolds' latest book "Twenty-Four Seconds from Now..." is a much needed perspective in the measure of coming of age stories about first times. I think this is one of the more widely noted narratives that tackles the subject of a first time experience for a Black boy in a way that was funny, sweet, and approachable. I absolutely loved this book for what it offers and the unique way it tells its story. Although I think my biggest critique may be that there may be some readers who love this reverse order stream of consciousness narrative and others who may struggle a little bit with it. Matter of preference and/or making sure the reader get themselves oriented with the timeline if they happen to put it down and have to reorient. But let me make the case for why I think it still sticks the landing with that piece of it and everything else the story has to offer.
Neon is a great character to get to know, strong voice from the jump even when you realize he's seconds away from the big moment of doing "it" with his girlfriend of two years. He starts the novel understandably nervous, in the bathroom before a picture of an ugly dog named Denzel Jeremy Washington. (How I eventually learned the dog got his name had me rolling with laughter.) You can tell early on how much Neon cares for Aria, how they met, what their relationship dynamic is like and how they're getting ready for the next big step. One reason I think the reverse order works is not just for the theme it follows - 24 seconds, minutes, hours, days, weeks, etc. It's also because it gives you brief glimpses - snapshots of these interactions that are pivotal to Neon and Aria's relationship. Snapshots into their families, preferences, friend groups, high school activities (Neon's in Yearbook with Aria working on a project, also helps his dad with a bingo job) - things that are part of their everyday and history. And you also see the honest, sometimes very blunt conversations where Neon gets advice leading up to the moment from his mother, father, sister, grandmother and friends. (And of course the dog's there.) The narrative is a short one, so the snapshot and sequencing theme work for it, but I do think there may be some readers who may have to reorient if they put the narrative back down, pick it back up, and figure where they are on the timeline per the chapters.
It leans well into a POV from a Black boy who really is trying his hardest to get things right before the big moment. The narrative's strength is its portrayal of the vulnerability, awkwardness, and empathy that Neon has. Neon's voice pops off the page with authenticity - Reynolds consistently does a great job with this in his narratives. The moments between Aria and Neon between are sweet and sincere. But there are also moments, like in the convo Neon has with his mama in the restaurant, where you feel for him in the middle of a really, REALLY awkward public situation. His mother finds one of her bras in Neon's room, and poor Neon has to explain he was trying to figure out how to properly unhook a bra. (Neon's sister Nat has the best answer for it, if I'm being honest. Y'all can find that out for yourself and it's really obvious once Neon hears it.) But the scene is awkward 'cause his mama actually brings the bra she found in his room, puts it on the table in the public restaurant. The poor server has to handle this awkward too. If that isn't gold standard Black rom-com coded, I don't know what to tell you. I felt bad for Neon, but I was also snort-laughing.
The ending is sweet and the pay off to the big moment is well earned, if a little quick to conclude. But I really liked "Twenty Four Seconds from Now: A Love Story" and think it sits well among Reynold's work for a YA audience, and anyone who enjoys teen rom-coms with memorable characters.
Overall score: 4/5 stars.
Note: I received this as an ARC from NetGalley, from the publisher.