Usually a one-star review means I didn't finish a book, but for some reason I did trudge through to the end of this one. I think I was drawn by the potential, even though I knew early on that because of the rigid HEA structure of a romance novel, that potential could never be fulfilled. Not that I don't appreciate a good HEA, but there are some stories that can't be told that way, and this was one of them.
It was utterly unbelievable, even if you forgive it for using the trite combination of convenient amnesia and identical twins.
The rest of this review contains spoilers, although since I don't recommend reading the book, you may as well finish. :=)
****Spoiler warning***
So here's the setup: Man gets married in a passionate rush and woman seemingly drowns when pirates attack their riverboat. Three years later, he still misses her. Then one night, he gets into a carriage accident with a woman who looks just like his wife -- who he becomes convinced IS his wife. Yes, she has a twin sister, but he'd know her anywhere. This couldn't possibly be her twin.
Of course, she wakes up with amnesia so she doesn't know who she is. No help there.
He seduces her despite the fact that she doesn't even know her own identity. Of course, she is "drawn" to him. At every point he is utterly confident that this is his wife and doesn't even entertain the possibility that his loneliness might be making him want something that isn't so.
Which, IMO, would have been the satisfying ending. I knew it wasn't going to turn out to be the ending, but not because of the way it was written. Every single clue was meant to mislead us into thinking that he had the wrong twin, but there was that gosh darn HEA hanging over our head, so we knew it was the right one. We knew it was his wife, even if that answer defied all logic and common sense and even though it might have even been a better love story if he had come to know and fall in love with the sister in her own right, and not because she was her twin.
But I'm getting ahead of myself. We have yet another unbelievable twist -- a man comes forward, says this is her wife, and that she is not she but her twin. She gets tricked into going with him when he threatens to challenge the man she loves to a duel.
After that, the eye rolling got a bit severe. This man who claims he's her husband, who is a rapist and murderer, doesn't touch our heroine in a remotely intimate way. Why? Not because it makes any sense, but because you can't do that in an HEA romance.
Then when her hero parks his riverboat near their home in an attempt to win her back, this raping, murdering, fake husband of hers does not kill him. Oh, he makes one rather feeble attempt toward the end, but it was pathetic.
So then comes the big reveal at the end. She didn't drown on the riverboat, one of the pirates saved her and told her that her husband was dead. Some time later, he convinces her to marry him but she catches him committing a murder and runs away on their wedding night (conveniently before they had sex because, of course, they can't do that in an HEA romance).
Then her father and sister show up just in time to confirm that she is who she's supposed to be. Conveniently, they were gone during this whole convoluted story.
Ack! Why do I finish books like this?