This is a book that is trying to be too many things and so ends up waffling and purposeless, muddled and with no sense of direction. There are at least three completely separate plot lines within the book, none of which seem at all linked to the other so you flit from a fathers death and researching The Others, ghosts from beyond that come in someone’s final hours or days, to a high speed action mystery with people being killed left, right and centre and a stalking agency with insanely high tech, to a psychological thriller with a guy hiding a kidnapped girl in his basement. The author should have picked one and run with it instead of making it so chaotic, particularly when you follow different plots from different perspectives as well.
The writing style wasn’t great and there were errors that could have been picked up by a careful proof read. There didn’t seem to be any emotion behind the writing though, and the writer falls into the trap of telling you what characters are like rather than letting the characters actions depict their personality. Finally related to writing style at least, there was a lot of pointless dialogue or description of movement that could have been cut as it served no purpose except to bulk the word count.
My main critique however is the ending. When I read a book - even a series - I expect the book to actually end. This doesn’t. It stops in the middle without any actual attempt to finish any of the narratives. This is explained by saying that it continues seamlessly in the next novel but that isn’t good enough. If it’s one novel then you need to organise your word count and ideas into one narrative arc. If it’s two novels then you need two narrative arcs rather than two waffling books filling one.
A shame, because the ideas of the Others is interesting, but it clearly tries to be too much and therefore ends up being busy and muddled. A strong editor should have picked up on all the weaknesses here and guided the author into a well rounded novel, but this clearly hasn’t happened.